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the_butcher Since: Jul, 2012
Dec 14th 2016 at 1:50:40 AM •••

It's down. I have a Rar of the whole thing, anyone knows what I should do with it? https://www.dropbox.com/s/vs49v6vz01co9g4/KBDH.rar?dl=0

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Amalia Since: Sep, 2011
Feb 9th 2013 at 9:56:20 AM •••

Excuse me, but how many episodes of Haruhi Suzumiya need a new reader need to watch before starting to read this fanfiction? Also, Higurashi, apparently?

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Cestus Since: Sep, 2013
Jan 18th 2014 at 3:59:03 AM •••

Bad News. According to the forum where he normally posts new material, Brian Randall, who is the author of Kyon: Big Damn Hero, died yesterday, 1/17/2014 after committing suicide due to depression.

MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Jan 18th 2014 at 7:17:17 PM •••

Thanks for the heads-up, even if I had already known via the forum thread. RIP, Brian.

PS: You should've gone to the bottom of the page and clicked the Add New Topic button.

Edited by 2.89.125.180 Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.
the_butcher Since: Jul, 2012
Oct 30th 2016 at 3:53:05 PM •••

All of Haruhi up to and including the Movie. It contains MAJOR spoilers for Higurashi, but if you know what Higurashi is like you don't need to watch any of it.

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer (Before Recorded History)
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
Jan 18th 2014 at 7:19:41 PM •••

A couple of links to the previous discussion pages, back when the article was made during the Ptitle system days: [1] [2]

Figured someone might want to check up old discussions.

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer (Before Recorded History)
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
Aug 23rd 2010 at 11:25:37 AM •••

Um, can someone please cancel the Cut-List request? I'm afraid I'm the one who got confused a little. I was under the impression that namespaces were case-sensitive. I'll be putting a redirect right now.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Jan 18th 2014 at 7:19:47 PM •••

A couple of links to the previous discussion pages, back when the article was made during the Ptitle system days: [1] [2]

Figured someone might want to check up old discussions.

Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.
Xavon Just some fanfic writer Since: Jan, 2001
Just some fanfic writer
Nov 17th 2012 at 6:44:28 PM •••

Is the author getting ready to end this? The name of the new arc, the name of the new chapter, and the events there-in seem to imply it.

AbyssmalKismet Since: Oct, 2011
Mar 28th 2012 at 1:07:33 PM •••

Not really sure if this belongs here or somewhere else, but am I the only one having problems getting onto the author's site? Is it a problem with the site, or is it just me?

Edit: I figured out the problem. He changed the site name, so the URL I was trying to use was incorrect.

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SgtHydra Since: Apr, 2009
Dec 24th 2011 at 10:41:37 AM •••

Can we get a character page?

Seems like this fic has gotten long enough (and popular enough) to need one.

Eamil Since: Feb, 2010
Dec 20th 2011 at 9:12:48 PM •••

Since the fanfiction.net version is more or less defunct, does anyone else think it would be appropriate to edit the chapter title format to match the format used on the author's personal site? (i.e. "Chapter 30," not "Thwarted Lull chapter 2" or "Thwarted Lull Arc 2") Referring to overall chapter number seems like it would be less confusing.

OneMore Since: Oct, 2010
Aug 25th 2011 at 2:33:39 AM •••

Somewhy, I cannot find any reviews for the fic in the "reviews" link. There are none, or is it a bug?

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 25th 2011 at 11:44:06 AM •••

There are none. If you want something that approaches it you can see these posts in the K:BDH forum thread. Beware of spoilers though.

Edited by Filraen Kyon: Big Damn Hero: timeline & trailer
Filraen ThatOneBoss Since: May, 2009
ThatOneBoss
Aug 24th 2011 at 1:21:19 PM •••

Pulled these as I don't think they are right:

  • An Aesop: During the 'Heroic Antics Begin' arc, the possibility that Kyon's example will lead to a society where everyone depends on their own strength after he goes on a violent rampage through the school helping Tsuruya break up an illicit photography ring that was taking pictures of girls changing in the locker room Kyons parents bring up the dangers of these actions as well. The Aesop seems to be that unless your in an incredibly unique set of circumstances, you should probably leave the investigative work to the authorities.

  • Author Tract: A debatable example; several times during the "Heroic Antics Begin" arc, when Kyon's 'delinquent' behavior is under review by either his parents or the student council they have a topic shift to the wider societal consequences of Kyon's Vigilantism particularly the Rule of Law. While an interesting and somewhat philosophical question to be sure, it all came out of left field and seemed to be shoehorned in just to muse on the idea and remind the reader that they should probably not try this in real life

And how the parents taking care of their children is shoehorning that idea? They don't have the perspective of us readers. (in general this is applicable to both previous tropes)

  • Dead Fic: At least as far a fanfiction.net is concerned, Durandal has decided to retire from the site with the following on his recent release
    "Apologies for the distruption; if you wish to continue following this (or any other) of my stories, I will be continuing them on my personal website.
    Not quitting ... just leaving.
    Best regards to all."
    • The link to the fanfic has been changed at the top of the page to K:BDH's section on the authors website as a result.

As long as there are still updates on Durandall's site this isn't a Dead Fic.

  • Department of Redundancy Department: Although it may have actually been an accident on the author's part, chapter 47 features a line from Tsuruya's perspective as such:
    ... hadn't Haruhi labeled her the director of ninkyou dantai operations within the brigade, hadn't she?

I don't see the redundancy of words there.

Discussion open.

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Filraen ThatOneBoss Since: May, 2009
ThatOneBoss
Oct 29th 2010 at 5:39:02 AM •••

No-Sell: Why Koiumi using ESP outside closed space an instance of this trope? It has been explicitly said Koizumi's powers have changed. In that case it isn't that his ESP ignoring the limitation, but removing the limiter from his power.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Oct 29th 2010 at 7:59:06 AM •••

It's not Koizumi himself doing the No-Sell, it's Haruhi using her Reality Warper powers to No-Sell the "natural law" that prevents Espers from using their powers outside Closed Space. No-Sell is an integral aspect of canon!Haruhi's powers, BTW; see the character sheet.

Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.
Filraen Since: May, 2009
Oct 29th 2010 at 11:17:26 AM •••

I understand you are talking about Haruhi supposedly using No-Sell.

But there isn't a natural law to prevent using ESP outside closed space. For example, the ESP used to see and connect with the IDSE works outside closed space (if you get crazy for using it isn't falut of the power itself).

Specifically on Koizumi, outside closed space he still has his other powers: awareness of Haruhi's mood (originally), knowledge when and where closed space has been created, enter closed space himself and grant access to others. Koizumi's "red ball" ESP was designed to fight Celestials so it works only on closed space, where Celestials appear.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Oct 30th 2010 at 5:50:34 AM •••

So we agree on "red Energy Being mode is limited to Closed Space" was a natural law of Haruhi's universe before she No Selled it as part of her Memory Gambit?

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Oct 30th 2010 at 12:21:41 PM •••

That's the point, I disagree on "red Energy Being mode is limited to Closed Space" was ever a natural law instead of Haruhi's restriction on the power so they can be used only to fight Celestials.

No law, thus can't be No Selled.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Oct 31st 2010 at 4:43:06 AM •••

The way I see it, a restriction placed by a Reality Warper on how a class of superpowered beings use their superpowers (which they recieved from her) within a universe that either is under her power's complete control or has been created from scratch 3-4 years ago in The Incident essentially equates to her imposing a natural law of her own within that universe to that effect.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Nov 10th 2010 at 12:00:24 PM •••

World under her complete control? Haruhi has been powerless to it isn't correct.

World created a few years ago? Yuki confirmed the world existed before The Incident.

Finally, if Haruhi actually changed a "natural law" (whatever it is, needs definition) all of Haruhi-empowered Energy Beings espers would be able to use their ESP outside Closed Space, not only Koizumi.

As such, I stand by theory of removal of a Power Limiter instead of a No-Sell.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Nov 10th 2010 at 2:15:08 PM •••

By "world created a few years ago", I meant "she used to live in Universe A, then her baseball match-induced Revelation happened, and she subconsciously either recreated Universe A to have 'aliens, espers, time-travellers, and sliders', or created a new Universe B that allows the aforementioned and transported the Earth's human population to it".

And given your reminder that Koizumi is the only one who can use Energy Being mode outside Closed Space, the situation becomes "Haruhi No Selled the 'natural law' that imposes a Power Limiter on Espers from applying to Koizumi".

PS: "Natural law" is the most accurate term that I can think of to describe the nature of the restriction on Esper powers in the Haruhi Suzumiya universe. It's analogous to the laws of physics, which govern all forms of "physical" entites (i.e. anything that possesses mass and/or energy).

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Nov 10th 2010 at 4:01:13 PM •••

There's one point that doesn't go with your idea. If Haruhi really changed reality so Koizumi could use his powers then it's the universe who changes and not Koizumi. In that case Koizumi's ESP shouldn't have been changed, as the altered reality should accommodate to him using his powers. However, Yuki said his powers were modified.

(This thread really looks like the Organization vs. Time Travelers opinion on Haruhi's powers, right?)

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Nov 11th 2010 at 2:59:14 PM •••

Yeah, maybe. But notice how the light novels say (paraphrasing Haruhi's No-Sell entry on the canon series character sheet) that if you want to surpass the speed of light, just put Haruhi in your spaceship and she'll ignore the laws of physics that prevent physical objects from reaching light speed. She doesn't have to change the laws; she'll just stop them from applying to whatever that she wants; and of course, that includes changing whatever she wants so that whatever law that she doesn't like to apply to them won't apply to them ever again.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Nov 11th 2010 at 5:46:24 PM •••

I know Haruhi can No-Sell when she has her power unrestrained.

I call Occam's Razor. Either change the whole universe so one specific character can use his abilities outside closed space (No-Sell) or change the powers this one single character have, unlocking them for use outside close space (removal of Power Limiter). Which explanation is simpler?

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Nov 12th 2010 at 5:25:22 AM •••

For a virtually unlimited Reality Warper who has been proven to be capable of destroying the universe without meaning to? Both would take the same amount of effort.

And I believe the light novel reference that I mentioned was talking in context of Haruhi while oblivious to The Masquerade, i.e. not actively aware or in control of her powers.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Nov 15th 2010 at 6:47:05 PM •••

My question remains unanswered. I called Occam's Razor. Either change the whole universe so one specific character can use his abilities outside closed space (No Sell) or change the powers this one single character have, unlocking them for use outside close space (removal of Power Limiter). Which explanation is simpler? (not easier, simpler)

By the way, I'd like to know if there's a counter-argument on my theory and your answer on Koizumi's change of powers as I mentioned earlier.  copy/paste from earlier post

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Nov 16th 2010 at 10:55:48 AM •••

  1. The latter would be theoretically simpler (although in practice, both are equal in compelixity/simplicity to a Reality Warper of Haruhi's caliber...), and in hindsight, it would be more of an indirect No-Sell - as in, she changed Koizumi's powers to become immune to the Power Limiter rule.

  2. See second part of the above.

PS: Here's the full quote from the character sheet.

... If you want to achieve faster-than-light travel, let Haruhi on your spaceship. She'll just simply ignore the theory of relativity for you.
When I mentioned this to Nagato, the reticent pseudo-alien responded with the following.
"Your belief is most likely correct."

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GreatLimmick Since: Jan, 2001
Jun 10th 2011 at 9:19:30 PM •••

Do we know the other espers can't use their powers outside closed space? I don't remember reading anything that says one way or the other.

Either way, I don't think it would fall under No-Sell. It's not like anyone's being attacked by the laws of physics. A better example would be right after Koizumi activates his powers and he ignores a laser the robot fires harmlessly straight through him.

(EDIT) Or when he ignores the Sumiyoshi-Rengo thugs firing their pistols through him, or when he's more inconvenienced than anything else by Fujiwara's fireball gun.

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GreatLimmick Since: Jan, 2001
Jun 6th 2011 at 12:38:14 AM •••

Pulled this:

  • Cardboard Prison: The SOS Brigade needs to store Achakura somewhere. Kyon considered placing her in a shoebox and weighing it down, but that wouldn't stop someone like her. In the end, Yuki gave him a modified cardboard box to store Achakura.

Although the prison is literally composed principally of cardboard, it's actually secure so far and thus not an example of the trope.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Jun 6th 2011 at 7:01:02 AM •••

Pulled this trope too, for the same reason (taking the trope name literally, not being really an example of the trope)

  • The Chessmaster: A literal example with Kyon, bonus points because he's probably unaware of this. Case in point: In Storm Begins Chapter 4, Kyon played chess against his PDA waiting for the right moment to snipe Asakura and complete the prologue's Stable Time Loop, unknown to him Achakura took control of the opposite side of the board and after three hours of playing her best result was a single stalemate. Quite an achievement, considering he was playing against an IDSE interface.

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R.G. Since: Jan, 2001
May 6th 2011 at 9:10:29 AM •••

How long before we get to KYONKO: BIG DAMN HEROINE?

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Straylight Since: Nov, 2010
May 10th 2011 at 2:11:42 AM •••

I'm sensing Achakura as responsible for this. That or Kuyou is going to commit a rounding error somewhere in her antics.

If brevity is the soul of wit, does that make me soulless?
Straylight Gravity Not Included Since: Nov, 2010
Gravity Not Included
Mar 24th 2011 at 9:46:54 AM •••

What's with the Rumiko Takahashi reference on the Shout Outs page? How is this a shout out? Takahashi isn't an uncommon surname.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Mar 24th 2011 at 4:29:02 PM •••

I'll add the "noise" from The World Ends With You. In the section the term was introduced they were talking about other "musical" terms (chorus, song, etc.)

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RainyDaze Eheheh... Since: Jul, 2010
Eheheh...
Aug 25th 2010 at 11:24:18 AM •••

Neighbourhood-Friendly Gangsters... not listed, unless it's been added since I last checked, but I'm curious as to whether anyone thinks it applies. Whilst we haven't seen what the yakuza in this do, there might be some hints that I've missed. However, I'm not sure.

And to take the trope name literally, Tsuruya probably counts as very friendly.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 25th 2010 at 3:34:24 PM •••

From the Real Life section of Neighbourhood-Friendly Gangsters' own article:

As stated, real life gangs, Mafia, Yakuza and Cartels try to keep up public relations at home ground.

The Tsuruya-affiliated yakuza definitely count, especially Daddy Tsuruya and his Yakuza Princess Ojou daughter Haruka.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 26th 2010 at 7:08:40 AM •••

From what I've seen, it's the Tsuruya family who has been shown public relations. And it isn't even not so public if you consider the whole relationship of Tsuruya's father with Kyon's parents (only one isolated family): he deliberately doesn't mention the family yakuza.

Can you give an specific example about the Tsuruya family Yakuza trying to keep up good public relations at their home ground?

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192.60.115.67 Since: Dec, 1969
Sep 7th 2010 at 5:43:47 AM •••

Kyon mentions that the Yamaguchi-gumi are the ones responsible for most of the relief and aid efforts after the Kobe earthquake, shortly after Tsuruya tells him that her family are ninkyo dantai.

MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Sep 7th 2010 at 10:34:02 AM •••

And then there's the matter of Tsuruya's investigation into the illegal voyeurist pornography ring as part of her yakuza "initiation ceremony".

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GreatLimmick Since: Jan, 2001
Feb 25th 2011 at 2:33:32 AM •••

That investigation was officially self-serving, since it involved a rival organization selling naked pictures of the heir of the Tsuruya branch. Yes, it helped a lot of other girls too, but that was technically just a side benefit.

NineballBreaker Since: Feb, 2011
Feb 13th 2011 at 9:13:37 PM •••

Kyon's (future) children can time travel. Behold these pictures from the end of Dissapearance! Yuki even has the decency to look embarrassed about something.

Augustine My King Since: Sep, 2010
UncloudedTJ Since: Oct, 2010
Nov 5th 2010 at 6:22:45 PM •••

It was posted on the forum thread here by Eserchie. Not sure if they drew them or just collected them though.

Unclouded TJ: Taking Bunny-Ears Lawyer too literally.
MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Oct 29th 2010 at 4:55:39 AM •••

Not to be rude, but that's old news, and the main article has already been updated accordingly.

Besides, such an announcement belongs in the forum thread, not here.

Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.
ChainsawEnthusiast Since: Aug, 2010
Oct 19th 2010 at 10:29:39 AM •••

I really think that this fanfic needs a Just Bugs Me page. Could someone add that? I dont know how to.

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Oct 19th 2010 at 10:40:53 AM •••

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/JustBugsMe/ptitle0028gzjm

Copy and paste that link then click edit and bam you have a Just Bugs Me page. I don't have any bugs so I won't create it, but give me a heads up so I can index it properly.

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RainyDaze Eheheh... Since: Jul, 2010
Eheheh...
Sep 14th 2010 at 9:50:42 AM •••

I really think the description needs to be rewritten from its current state of my original + whatever seemed like a good idea to be added at the time. Admittedly, two parts of that are probably my fault.

Anyway...

I know I posted it on the thread but I'm not sure where something like this is meant to go, so it's here as well.

Now collecting White-Haired Pretty Girls.
MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer (Before Recorded History)
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
Sep 13th 2010 at 2:52:58 PM •••

Okay, that's two chapters since the last time we talked about making a dedicated forum thread for this fic. (See the old discussion page.)

Now, before any of us go to create the thread, we have two issues to resolve beforehand:

  1. Where to put it: It's an anime-manga fanfic, yes, but it's still a fanfic. Do we have a precedent for threads on specific Fanfics?
  2. Spoiler statute: The tradition was first codified by wanderlustwarrior in the One Piece thread, and eventually spread to the Bleach, Naruto and Mahou Sensei Negima ones. Now, here's my version of it for use in the K:BDH thread...
  • Whenever there's a new chapter on a trusted site (FanFiction.Net, Durandall's FF.Net account, or his own site), first poster who sees it posts it immediately.
  • NEVER post statements about the chapter in the post that you link to it in.
  • Spoiler tag for the first five posts after the link to the chapter (so that we don't see the spoilers before seeing the link itself). If the page rolls over into a new one before the five-post limit is exceeded, reset the count.
  • No need to spoiler tag after 5 posts.

How's it looking?

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Sep 13th 2010 at 6:19:17 PM •••

Probably best to put it in the New Media section. As that's where the Harry Potter fanfic threads tend to pop up. Also standing spoiler statute sounds good and should be generous assuming it gets to be a big thread.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Sep 13th 2010 at 10:11:14 PM •••

But the only fics covered by New Media in TV Tropes' terminology are online collaborative ones, like Orion's Arm.

Maybe we should ask Fast Eddie about it.

EDIT: Okay, I put the question on New Media's discussion page. In the meantime, I'll just create the thread on the New Media sub-forum, since I now notice that even Team 8 has a thread there.

EDIT#2: Thread up!

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Dorkus Since: Aug, 2009
Sep 3rd 2010 at 11:15:28 PM •••

Chekov Beam, it's gotta have some sort of trope, right?

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Sep 3rd 2010 at 11:37:58 PM •••

Probably a reference to Chekhov's Skill but other than that it's too vague to really place.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Sep 4th 2010 at 8:21:15 AM •••

No, I believe it's a reference to the Chekov's Gun, which is a Ray Gun.

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Sep 4th 2010 at 9:35:01 AM •••

Possibly but then it depends on how the beam is fired. Dragon Ball style or from a gun. Either way it's a reference to that series of tropes.

Unclouded TJ: Taking Bunny-Ears Lawyer too literally.
MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Sep 4th 2010 at 11:56:43 AM •••

Wait, was the in-story spelling "Chekov" or "Chekhov"?

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Dorkus Since: Aug, 2009
Sep 4th 2010 at 12:46:24 PM •••

Guess I should of been more specific. It can be construed as a reference to the Mikuru Beam right (since it's Trope-tan's attack)? So having it in here is sorta like a meta shout out or something?

Or I could be completely off my rocker, but that's normal :P

Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Sep 4th 2010 at 12:56:37 PM •••

It's Chekhov Beam. Chapter 15. I'm going to assume it's a reference to Chekhov's Skill or Chekhov's Gun as despite the missing h in Chekov's Gun the two are opposite in meaning.

Also Show Within a Show or Plot Parallel are about the closest I can think of to referencing the Mikuru Beam. However it's probably just a Shout-Out.

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Filraen ThatOneBoss Since: May, 2009
ThatOneBoss
Sep 3rd 2010 at 12:23:11 AM •••

Oblivious to Love: Maybe it needs some rewrite (I can't think well how to put it into words). While he may be oblivious of his delinquent/domestic mode effect on other girls (first section of the entry) the whole "special hell" Running Gag is based on him acknowledging some sort of attraction from the girls (if the kisses weren't so blatant)

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Sep 3rd 2010 at 3:39:27 AM •••

Well, I'd like to note that he seems to be really Oblivious to Love unless it is slammed directly into his face; when did he realize that Kanae had a crush on him again? I think it's in Thwarted Lull Arc 2, when the two went to that remote area of the beach, but I could be wrong.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Sep 3rd 2010 at 4:06:47 AM •••

Point taken for Kanae.

Still, he still feared a possible confession from Miyoko in Filler arc 3 (Please, he asked any god listening to his prayers, don't let it be a confession!).

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dragonKhorse Since: Feb, 2010
Sep 4th 2010 at 4:35:22 AM •••

He's completely oblivious to girls staring at him and stuff, but he's perfectly fine with knowing that he enjoys girls throwing themselves at him. I'd put it as a Zig-Zagged Trope. As for Kanae, she did mention somewhere in the later chapters that her favorite universe was the one where she dated Kyon.

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer (Before Recorded History)
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
Aug 25th 2010 at 3:56:56 PM •••

Can someone handle converting at least part of the Main/KyonBigDamnHero potholes? Here's the current list. I'm currently trying to add some trope entries that while are listed on fic's main article, are not on the relevant trope pages.

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Aug 25th 2010 at 11:16:18 PM •••

Do we want to change them all into "Fanfic/Ptitle0028gzjm"? I'll do it no problem I just want to make sure we're supposed to first.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 26th 2010 at 6:57:36 AM •••

Yeah, that would be preferable. And then there's also the bigger problem of the "punctuated references" (see the format in the markup help; it refuses to show up correctly here), since they do not show up on the "related to..." list at all. Not even as a redirect. I fixed a few of them, but the counters didn't change, meaning they're not considered wicks for the page.

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Aug 26th 2010 at 10:38:23 AM •••

Ok, They're all down. Thanks for starting from the bottom.

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer (Before Recorded History)
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
Aug 23rd 2010 at 10:34:10 AM •••

Should we cutlist Main/Ptitle0028gzjm? Or is there another way to remove that "Main" button at the top of the page?

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 23rd 2010 at 10:37:37 AM •••

There's going to be more than a dozen redlinks if it's cut, and that's at the least.

The button sends you straight back to the new link anyway, it's not doing any harm.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 23rd 2010 at 11:20:51 AM •••

Fixed about one-third of those links (they were 31 in all). Gonna go about the others later; you may take care of some of them if you like.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 23rd 2010 at 11:49:41 AM •••

I would if I knew what the links were. Going through the trope list looking for something was bad enough when there were only 100 links and I was just adding examples to both pages. Searching for a link to a particular page? Not good...

Unless I'm missing a feature somewhere.

Why are removing them again?

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Aug 23rd 2010 at 12:31:51 PM •••

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/relatedsearch.php?term=Main/KyonBigDamnHero

That's the list of the links that take it to the old location. I'm going to try fixing some of them now but for future reference.

Edit: Got it down to 90 taking a break for a while.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 23rd 2010 at 12:58:45 PM •••

Those links don't, the redirect for that page has been pointed to here. I think it's best to leave them as they are, since it's the quickest way to create a link.

The main page, though...

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 23rd 2010 at 1:18:34 PM •••

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/relatedsearch.php?term=Main/ptitle0028gzjm

That one, which is the original and is only going to be linked to if you're deliberately trying. It also provides the redundant Main button.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 23rd 2010 at 2:41:24 PM •••

Good work, guys. Mission accomplished. Uh, and I have to apologize for accidentally requesting the page to be cut-listed before I realized that namespaces aren't really case-sensitive beyond the first letter. ^^; I already made a request to cancel the cut-list.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 23rd 2010 at 3:43:50 PM •••

What's case sensitive got to do with it? I'm confused.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 23rd 2010 at 5:35:46 PM •••

I thought that the system considered "FanFic/" to be different from "Fanfic/", and since I saw the former first in the URL bar when I first visited the relocated page...

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 24th 2010 at 4:24:59 AM •••

What has the Fanfic/ namespace got to do with deleting the Main/ article?

As for capitalisation, as far as URLs are concerned it's irrelevant (I think).

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 24th 2010 at 7:20:33 AM •••

Uh, that's because when I originally went to the Main/ article, I found that you've mistyped the redirect link and... somehow (I don't quite remember now) I was redirected to Fanfic/KyonBigDamnHero. I assumed that last one was a byproduct of that mistake during the original article's creation, and then cut-listed it... before I realized via my watchlist that Fanfic/ and FanFic/ are treated exactly the same by the site's system.

Yeah, pretty convoluted, ain't it?

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 24th 2010 at 1:59:31 PM •••

Wait, you were cutlisting a completely different page? Fanfic/KyonBigDamnHero?

I give up on trying to understand that paragraph and advocate just leaving the pages as they are.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 24th 2010 at 2:42:49 PM •••

As I said, it's pretty convoluted, and even I don't remember how it happened now. >_<

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Aug 24th 2010 at 3:20:15 PM •••

Final answer: Leave it as it is unless a moderator comes by and yells at us.

Unclouded TJ: Taking Bunny-Ears Lawyer too literally.
MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 24th 2010 at 3:22:07 PM •••

Too late. They've already cut listed it. I've put the redirect back with an apology for the blunder. Let's hope that the mods/admin would let it slide by this once.

Damn, I feel stuuupiiiid. XD

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer (Before Recorded History)
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
Aug 22nd 2010 at 4:03:30 PM •••

I can't believe I didn't notice this before... Shouldn't the main article be in the "FanFic/" namespace, as with all other Fan Fics?

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Aug 22nd 2010 at 5:07:54 PM •••

It's actually optional if you want do it that way. Some of the other fanfics that have pages aren't listed that way. It might be correct but not entirely necessary.

Unclouded TJ: Taking Bunny-Ears Lawyer too literally.
MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 22nd 2010 at 8:08:13 PM •••

So I can do it without reprecussions? I've done a few namespace switches before without trouble (and left redirects behind just in case), so this should a piece of cake.

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Aug 22nd 2010 at 10:36:46 PM •••

If you want to sure go ahead. I'm just saying it's not really necessary as it's mostly a superficial thing.

Unclouded TJ: Taking Bunny-Ears Lawyer too literally.
RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 23rd 2010 at 4:41:42 AM •••

I can't really see the point in switching the namespace. It might declare it to be a fanfic, but what's the need in that? It's in the fanfic index, listed with fanfics in the trope pages... is it really going to do anything other than have even more redirects?

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 23rd 2010 at 6:46:12 AM •••

You're acting like it has five redirects instead of just one.

In any case, the Fan Fic namespace is there for a reason, and it looks... discordant... to deviate from the rule just because it's highly unlikely that an official work will come up that uses the very same name. You don't see Shinji And Warhammer 40 K in the Main/ namespace, do you?

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 23rd 2010 at 9:08:14 AM •••

The entire reason it's in the Main/ namespace is because I made a mistake somewhere when creating the page...

Putting it in the correct namespace does make sense, though. I originally intended to do that, but didn't work out where the hell I went wrong until making the WMG page.

Hmm... don't we only need to copy and paste the contents of one page, change one redirect, add two redirects, and change one link?

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 23rd 2010 at 9:55:40 AM •••

I'm wondering where the WMG/Laconic page will link to after that, however.

Well, you can get to them from there. It also has a link back to the Main page.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 23rd 2010 at 10:26:58 AM •••

I thought that was obvious. What's ironic is that in some cases, the different namespace are too indiscriminate; observe the example of The Order and The Order, which are in no way related to each other besides coincidentally sharing the same name.

BTW, should we cutlist the "Main/" article? Or is there another way to remove that "Main" button at the top of the page?

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 23rd 2010 at 10:36:26 AM •••

If we do that there's going to be fifteen redlinks at the least..

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 23rd 2010 at 10:52:30 AM •••

If we move it "Main/" will have to be a redirect to "FanFic/".

My opinion is that it shouldn't be moved. I don't believe there will be a name conflict.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 23rd 2010 at 5:37:06 PM •••

I just want hte Main button to go. And we should continue this on the new discussion page.

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RainyDaze Eheheh... Since: Jul, 2010
Eheheh...
Aug 23rd 2010 at 10:15:49 AM •••

Changed the namespace, as suggested in a topic in the previous discussion.

The entire point of stating this is so that this discussion page has a button on the series' page.

Also: the main page is a redirect here, so is the previous redirect, and so is Fanfic/KyonBigDamnHero

https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/remarks.php?trope=Main.Ptitle0028gzjm <- the URL for the previous discussion page.

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Filraen ThatOneBoss Since: May, 2009
ThatOneBoss
Aug 17th 2010 at 7:56:49 AM •••

Is there a trope about the changes of addressing people as a way to show a relationship upgrade? The trope with that name won't work here as this isn't romantic.

Kyon calling Tsuruya: Tsuruya-san  *

-> Tsuruya-sempai -> Tsuruya-kun (and she admitted she could let Kyon go for more).

Mikuru calling Yuki: Nagato-san -> Yuki-chan

Haruhi, Mikuru calling Tsuruya: Tsuruya-san -> Tsu-chan

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 17th 2010 at 10:29:43 AM •••

First-Name Basis?

'The sudden switch in nickname or honorific when referring to a character, usually from their family name to their given name, is frequently used to demonstrate a significant change in the relationship between two characters, the desire for one by one party, or that they are Not Themselves. Never using any formal indicators and just calling a character by their exact name is about as common to show the same thing.'

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 18th 2010 at 10:32:17 PM •••

But for Kyon and Tsuruya, he's still on a Last-Name Basis; the difference is just in the Japanese Honorifics.

Wait, what does Canon!Kyon usually use to refer to Tsuruya? I think that should be worth noting in the above progression.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 19th 2010 at 4:19:32 AM •••

The trope name's a bit misleading, but the trope itself still applies. Specifically note this part: 'sudden switch in nickname or honorific when referring to a character'.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 19th 2010 at 3:08:30 PM •••

Canon!Kyon refers her as Tsuruya-san (as seen in the movie epilogue)

Now I had time to read the Trope... but RD got first here to comment.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 21st 2010 at 12:53:38 PM •••

With the latest chapter there's Asahina-san -> Mikuru-chan. Any other name changes before we actually add this trope?

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 21st 2010 at 11:18:50 PM •••

@Filraen: Only in the movie epilogue, or also in the visual novels?

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 22nd 2010 at 4:33:43 AM •••

Light novels, not visual novels. Anyway, I checked a table I picked up somewhere on the internet at one point (it says how the majority of characters refer to/address each other in canon) and everyone originally called Tsuruya 'Tsuruya-san'.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 22nd 2010 at 12:23:30 PM •••

Sorry, my mistake.

Oh, and Filraen, you've made a slight mistake: Unless I'm misunderstanding something, even from Tsuruya's POV, Kyon still called her "Tsuruya-san" before switching to "Tsuruya-sempai" after they start working together in the investigation.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 22nd 2010 at 3:34:30 PM •••

'Kyon calling Tsuruya: Tsuruya-san * -> Tsuruya-sempai -> Tsuruya-kun (and she admitted she could let Kyon go for more).'

No they didn't.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 22nd 2010 at 3:51:59 PM •••

I'm referring to the hottip: 'First, from her perspective; in the fight against the 12 Yakuza'

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer (Before Recorded History)
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
Aug 21st 2010 at 11:21:59 PM •••

I think this Fan Fic deserves a dedicated forum thread, but I'd like everyone else's thoughts on this instead of unilateral action.

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Aug 22nd 2010 at 12:43:09 AM •••

I'd say wait a chapter to let the remaining hostility over this chapter die, but otherwise I'd be up for it.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 22nd 2010 at 4:30:12 AM •••

I've never intentionally ended up on the forums, so I'm not that concerned. I say yes, though.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 22nd 2010 at 12:26:09 PM •••

Okay, I'll give it two chapters to ensure that everything dies down; I've got a hunch that some of the more stubborn "complainers" will blow their tops when the next chapter turns out to be even "more of a Moral Event Horizon" than Chapter 29. Really now, I'd wish they'd grow up and suck it. Don't like, don't read.

In the meantime, I'd like to work up a good "spoiler statute", similar to the ones used in some anime and manga threads. A "five-post" limit seems a bit too little considering how, generally speaking, it's easier to open/download and read an online Fan Fic chapter in comparison to obtaining a manga scanlation or a fansubbed episode.

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer (Before Recorded History)
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
Aug 11th 2010 at 3:38:31 PM •••

How is Kyon a Chivalrous Pervert? Wouldn't he be more of a Covert Pervert? Chivalrous Pervert is defined by having both an active interest and desire for sex and being genuinely considerate of his Love Interest's feelings and opinions. Kyon, while naturally fulfillig the second part, fails halfway in the first, as while he definitely has a sexual drive, he makes a point of keeping his dirty thoughts to himself.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 13th 2010 at 1:25:52 AM •••

'Uncharacteristically suggestive comments and thoughts from a character usually considered pure and innocent. Sometimes this is played straight and shows that a character is mature or smart enough to notice subtle themes their friends don't. Most of the time it's a trait given to a shy character to show they're not quite as mousy and meek as we think. Usually cued by fantasy segues becoming more and more lewd.'

How would anyone consider Kyon pure and innocent?

I think the question is more along the lines of 'is Kyon a pervert at all?'

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 13th 2010 at 6:54:52 AM •••

Argument in favor of Chivalrous Pervert: he has kissed many times. However, he was asked (Yuki, Tsuruya) or forced into it (Haruhi, Mikuru(big)), with the only exception of the last Mikuru(big) kiss.

Argument in favor of Covert Pervert: He actually doesn't initiate romantic movements. Even when he took a bath with Tsuruya and Yuki the former noticed Kyon not trying to peek them. And it's easy to forget in the source material he may not say everything he thinks.

Between the two, I think Kyon is more of a Chivalrous Pervert. However, RainyDaze's question is valid. As for that, I'm not sure.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 15th 2010 at 9:57:22 PM •••

Correction: He's closer to a Chivalrous Pervert, but still fails to be one. The "active interest in sex" is a core element of the trope; it's not just "someone who has dirty thoughts/impulses about his compatriots most/all the time yet refrains from acting on said thoughts/impulses". He has to actually pursue the affections of his Love Interest(s) and/or flirt with them a lot.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 16th 2010 at 2:16:39 AM •••

He isn't the other merely because he doesn't fit one of them, however.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 16th 2010 at 6:35:22 AM •••

Nobody is refuting that RD, actually Marq and my posts agree with that.

Let's remove the Chivalrous Pervert entry. Nothing to do in the Covert Pervert entry since Kyon isn't listed as example.

Edited by Filraen Kyon: Big Damn Hero: timeline & trailer
MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 16th 2010 at 11:27:38 AM •••

Agreed. On that subject, AFAIK Kanae is the only true Covert Pervert in the cast (getting blushes while [day]dreaming about "Sempai", anyone? How about being a Yaoi Fangirl?). Haruhi is canonically a Good Bad Girl / Ethical Slut (Distaff Counterpart of Chivalrous Pervert), and she hasn't changed; and while Hanyuu could qualify as Covert Pervert due to her monologue before meeting Yuki face to face, both girls following Kyon into the bath doesn't qualify them for the trope, let alone getting an eyeful of him. The latter is closer to Accidental Pervert.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 16th 2010 at 5:04:37 PM •••

Yuki explaining Kyon she was "enjoying the view" while in Hinamizawa puts her as Covert Pervert for me.

Note that in her conversation with Kyon about her time in Hinamizawa (Gearing Up-1) Yuki's talking about Hanyuu as her friend, something that happened as an aftermath of the bath incident.

Edited by Filraen Kyon: Big Damn Hero: timeline & trailer
RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 17th 2010 at 6:43:07 AM •••

Hanyuu, Yuki, and Kanae definitely qualify for Covert Pervert, in my opinion.

Especially Kanae.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 18th 2010 at 10:35:11 PM •••

I concur. So I suppose we all agree that Haruhi does not belong under Covert Pervert, and that what she did was more along the lines of an indoor version of Outdoor Bath Peeping?

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 19th 2010 at 7:20:02 AM •••

I forgot Haruhi was even listed. I suppose that works, since no-one can expect Haruhi of all people to not be perverted.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
24.4.217.176 Since: Dec, 1969
Aug 19th 2010 at 5:16:19 PM •••

"New (possibly unintentional) trope popped up in latest chapter." for Moral Event Horizon. Yeeeeah ... this, uh, seems to be overkill. Kyon admitting his feelings from the novel to Mikuru, and that he thinks she's cute is comparable to genocide and murder?

Granted, I can see that this may cause some sort of dissonance as it's the most proactive and forward that Kyon has been so far.... But isn't that more than just a little bit much?

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 19th 2010 at 5:52:42 PM •••

I'm not sure if Moral Event Horizon applies or not. First my opinion: I definitely didn't like disliked that part.

If I say no, I'm letting this scene pass without second thinking.

If I say yes, I'm saying that Kyon is beyond any hope of redemption.

Edit: [thinking] It may not like it, but he doesn't do anything wrong even if he may believe it... it should not go.

Edit2: [looks down] O.O

Edited by Filraen Kyon: Big Damn Hero: timeline & trailer
24.4.217.176 Since: Dec, 1969
Aug 19th 2010 at 5:55:27 PM •••

And given now that the story has been revised specifically because the author was offended that a 'vocal minority' considered the MEH to be valid...?

[Edit] From cache, this is the original paragraph that was changed:

  • "I know you said we shouldn't, but I've wanted to do that for _so_ long," he confessed, slightly short of breath, looking simultaneously pleased and guilty, his eyes almost glowing in the dim evening light. "I'm sorry ... Mikuru-chan. I know we shouldn't, but you're so cute...."

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Aug 19th 2010 at 9:25:08 PM •••

I saw nothing that he even remotely came close to crossing a Moral Event Horizon because of the spoilers. It may be uncomfortable to some but keep in mind this story is heavily leaning towards Tenchi Solution ending. It's inevitable that he's going to express (or realize) his feelings towards most of the girls in this story. Crossing a Moral Event Horizon is definitely overkill for anything Kyon has done in this story.

[Edit] Upon seeing the unrevised dialogue I still only see a teenager overcome by a date and enjoying himself. Yes it may be considered cheating but again perspectives can be different.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 19th 2010 at 9:43:31 PM •••

Agreed. I've just sent a PM to the author as a sort of sympathy letter  *

... You know, to let him know that there are other readers who think that that vocal minority are being stupid. May I suggest that each off us do something similar, as a gesture of fandom solidarity?

Oh, and thanks for getting the original passage here... Whoever you are, since you obviously weren't logged in when you posted.

... Wait, isn't the author a troper here too?

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Aug 19th 2010 at 9:55:36 PM •••

Most likely but I can't find the author's handle. Probably would like to remain relatively anonymous on the site.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 19th 2010 at 10:11:54 PM •••

Yeah... And that also gave me an epiphany:

When I saw the "rant" at the end of Chapter 29, I immediately went to the FF.Net version to check on the reviews for that chapter... And lo and behold, nothing. I found not a single review that complained about "Kyon bypassing the Moral Event Horizon", etc etc. Now, at the time I chucked that to said complainers resorting to the Private Messaging system to avoid having others see their complaints and giving them flak for it.

However! After I checked the fic article's history, and reading your comment, I realized that there could've been something else that actually tipped the author off on the complaints: It's not unlikely that whoever added Moral Event Horizon to the list is one of the complainers, especially since the edit has no handle associated with it, meaning it was done anonymously.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 20th 2010 at 5:41:40 AM •••

I've managed to forget what the original was. How... irksome.

A kiss being a Moral Event Horizon, though? So joining the Yakuza, hanging someone out of a window, and generally getting in a light of fights because of friendship isn't a Moral Event Horizon but kissing someone when he's already kissed Yuki, Tsuruya, and Haruhi is a Moral Event Horizon?

I didn't know we had so much Fan Dumb.

Oh, right, someone copied the original ending.

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Aug 20th 2010 at 10:10:36 AM •••

The best part is due to Timey-Wimey Ball he's already kissed Mikuru, too. Plus he knows he's had a relationship with her because of her future self so he might also be worried about causing a paradox there.

Unclouded TJ: Taking Bunny-Ears Lawyer too literally.
RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 20th 2010 at 11:54:11 AM •••

After thinking about it, Kyon's admitting that he wanted to kiss Mikuru (and possibly kissing her again, I've forgotten) seems to be the problem. So... Kyon's character development as stated by Haruhi in one chapter  *

- becoming less aloof and more companionable towards... well, everyone - is apparently a bad thing because he's become more inclined to say anything about himself.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 20th 2010 at 1:38:32 PM •••

Which is exactly why I think those "critics"' complaints are ridiculous. If Kyon's attraction to Mikuru was completely physical and he decided to fake having actual romantic feelings for her, that could be considered a Moral Event Horizon - although it would still be a long stretch to do so.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 20th 2010 at 6:49:54 PM •••

Good news: The author, Durandall, has cooled off, and... well, he decided not to let the irrational complaining get to him. It's also evident that he does frequent this page  *

, because some of our opinions have actually pointed out a couple of problems in Ch. 29's original epilogue (not related to the aforementioned complaining, mind you) that were completely unintentional on his part.

Oh, and Chapter 29's going to re-updated relatively soon.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer (Before Recorded History)
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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 19th 2010 at 11:03:48 PM •••

I just tried to edit and had no trouble. Maybe other person was editing it at the time?

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 20th 2010 at 8:10:51 AM •••

It's not that it was locked, it's that none of my recent edits are being saved.

EDIT: Nevermind; problem resolved itself.

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Filraen ThatOneBoss Since: May, 2009
ThatOneBoss
Jul 11th 2010 at 7:52:16 AM •••

Why should be Badass Bookworm and Verbal Tic on this? They are characteristics of the novels/anime so it isn't something proper of the fic.

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dragonKhorse Since: Feb, 2010
Aug 19th 2010 at 9:58:17 PM •••

Badass Bookworm is gone. Verbal Tic stays because Tsuruya's father also has it, and they lose it when they get stressed.

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Shouri Since: Aug, 2012
Aug 19th 2010 at 7:40:59 PM •••

I'm pretty sure this is slightly inaccurate... no?

"Holding Back The Phlebotinum: A very practical example. Haruhi puts a leash on her powers by requiring that her wishes be approved by Yuki and Kyon. "

Coulda sworn it went like so: Haruhi didn't choose to need permission from the both of them in order to use her powers. She did later on though restrain her powers in general. So the entry seems half right half wrong. Anyone with a bit better knowledge of the story care to clear this up?

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Aug 19th 2010 at 9:40:32 PM •••

It was more a trial basis from her point of view. Kyon warned her that her power was dangerous and she was going in effectively blind on what exactly her power was. She accepted his judgment because he was the only one of the group that was honest to her. It would be more accurate to say Haruhi agreed to put a leash on her powers.

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RainyDaze Eheheh... Since: Jul, 2010
Eheheh...
Aug 9th 2010 at 10:28:12 AM •••

Surely it would be Inspector Zenigata, not Inspector Javert? Kyon is legitimately part of the Yakuza, after all, and whatever-her-name-is has hints (and possibly direct evidence) to indicate that. After all, Kyon may be a good person but he's still broken the law quite badly.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 9th 2010 at 11:35:37 AM •••

She should be closer to Inspector Zenigata, even if she doesn't know everything yet.

When I read the tropes earlier I couldn't decide for which one to use so I opted for Hero Antagonist. Maybe I can't bring myself to see Kyon as a Lovable Rogue (and he definitely isn't a Villain Protagonist), nor I can see Akasaka Momoko being played for laughs, as the trope says it's usually used. Or maybe, at least for now, she isn't trying to arrest Kyon, just trying to get the full truth.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 9th 2010 at 12:02:24 PM •••

And as soon as she gets the full truth, the amount of people Kyon has either threatened or injured is going to become quite obvious...

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 9th 2010 at 12:20:33 PM •••

That leaves us with two options: change the entry to Inspector Zenigata now or delete it and wait a few more chapters and add Inspector Zenigata then.

I suppose you'd take the former. Although I'd prefer the latter.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 9th 2010 at 12:58:36 PM •••

I'd rather wait and it at the correct time. This was not selected to randomly contradict you.

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Unclouded_TJ Since: Jun, 2009
Aug 9th 2010 at 1:07:19 PM •••

I'd say remove the Inspector Javert trope and wait and see what trope she ends up falling into. Right now it could be either Inspector or be neither trope when it comes down to what will happen. Currently she's only being set up as a Hero Antagonist.

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RainyDaze Eheheh... Since: Jul, 2010
Eheheh...
Aug 7th 2010 at 3:44:25 PM •••

'Contrived Coincidence: The IDSE created tools for theoretical interactions with Alternate Universes, with a dimensional anchor being between those items. The last one created dates from millions of years. It was found in Tsuruya's backyard.'

I thought that it was the thing found in... Book 7? Rereading chapter 26, that's confirmed by Kyon's wording of the request.

Now, is it still a Contrived Coincidence? I think it might be, since the fact it's a dimensional anchor was certainly fortuitous.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 7th 2010 at 9:17:30 PM •••

The fact that a strange item was found at Tsuruya's can't go as Contrived Coincidence here. If it is, it belongs to the Haruhi page.

The fact that the item found at Tsuruya's was the/a dimensional anchor created millions of years ago is a Contrived Coincidence that can go in this page (that anchor could have been destroyed, broken or located anywhere else in the universe). Maybe the entry should be reworded.

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RainyDaze Eheheh... Since: Jul, 2010
Eheheh...
Aug 4th 2010 at 3:32:05 PM •••

Phrase Catcher: Yes, people say that phrase often, but not to a single person, instead a series of pictures. Running Gag, yes, Phrase Catcher? I don't think so.

Badass Boast: Somehow, that doesn't quite come across as Badass enough. Or much of a boast. 'May' does not fit into a boast, does it?

Series Mascot: What has that explanation got to do with mascots?

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 4th 2010 at 6:16:46 PM •••

Phrase Catcher: I didn't realize it was about saying the phrase to a single person.  read as

Badass Boast: I was going to add it a long time ago but now with the Initial Conflict arc it may not sound Badass enough.

Series Mascot: I forgot to delete it earlier. That really doesn't have anything to do with the trope.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 5th 2010 at 4:15:39 AM •••

'It's common enough for a character to have a catchphrase but not everyone can spend all day spouting it themselves. A Phrase Catcher usually has that certain string of words in the air whenever they're around, but they'll be hearing it and someone else will be saying it.'

Something that's said to one person all the time. By the trope's criteria, it doesn't fit.

Where in the chapter?

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 5th 2010 at 5:56:19 AM •••

Maybe I put it wrongly, but I was agreeing with you. Phrase Catcher doesn't go.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 5th 2010 at 8:56:30 AM •••

Oh, right.

Still, what to do about the Badass Boast? One of the definitions in the dictionary on my desk for boast is 'Speak too proudly of one's achievements'. The others are pretty much the same.

Admittedly you can boast about what you're going to do, but Kyon hardly seems to be boasting... I think that would require a slightly more definitive stateme-

Someone removed it whilst I was typing this? o.o

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 5th 2010 at 1:55:10 PM •••

I did, there's no point in trying to shoehorn a trope that may or not be right. We have plenty of them that are correct.

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RainyDaze Eheheh... Since: Jul, 2010
Eheheh...
Aug 3rd 2010 at 1:51:48 PM •••

Err... where the hell would Shout-Out entries on here fit into that page? I haven't a clue where to look.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 4th 2010 at 8:49:46 AM •••

Since I don't believe listing the whole list there is a good idea, a Fan Works folder in the main page should be enough.

[checks page]

Then again, I saw Web Original had the entries for Shinji And Warhammer 40 K, Stray, Forward and Tiberium Wars, all of them in Fan Fics, just like K:BDH. I still like a Fanworks part though.

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Filraen ThatOneBoss Since: May, 2009
ThatOneBoss
Aug 1st 2010 at 1:56:53 PM •••

Before getting into an editing war, I don't agree with the addition of some tropes. Can anyone give me a good explanation about these?

Kuudere: I can't find Kanae's "cool-by-default" side that defines one: she's prone to daydream, blush and Freudian Slip.

Ninja Maid: defined as Meido + Action Girl. The Tsuruya family maids had shown be silent-working, "almost as a Ninja". But they hadn't shown the Action Girl part so it can't be a straight example. (Discussed? Parodied? Conversational Monologual(sp?) Troping?)

Overshadowed by Awesome: Again, defined as a charater who doesn't have a chance to be badass even if it should be. Even if Haruhi and Yuki are more powerful than him Kyon has Badass moments constantly: use his trump card, all the battles in Tsuruya's trials, convincing the Yakuza boss not escalating the fight to a battle to the death, stopping the van that was going to hit Haruhi. I don't believe Kyon goes here.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 1st 2010 at 2:41:26 PM •••

The depressing part about Ninja Maid being Meido + Action Girl is that ninja weren't exactly fighters, they were assassins. Yet Ninja Maid requires someone not acting like a ninja.

It is lampshaded in Kyon's thoughts that the maid seems to be a ninja, even if she isn't a Ninja Maid by the definition of the trope. I wonder what we're meant to do now?

As for the Overshadowed by Awesome, it seems more like Kyon's overshadowing the awesome than the other way around.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 2nd 2010 at 3:45:01 PM •••

OK, since we agree I'm deleting the Overshadowed by Awesome entry.

About Ninja Maid, I call Shout-Out to the trope name than the trope itself. I think that the entry should be moved there.

(Presonally I think the trouble is in the Ninja Maid trope name, however its name is too cool to change— starting by myself)

Now, sorry to insist but what happened with Kanae being a Kuudere? I still don't get it.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 3rd 2010 at 3:19:31 AM •••

I don't have a clue about that one, but you're probably right. She reminds me more of Haruhi than anyone else in the cast... except even more perverted.

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RainyDaze Eheheh... Since: Jul, 2010
Eheheh...
Jul 31st 2010 at 7:38:41 AM •••

In the Blessed with Suck entry, it mentions Haruhi forgetting she has godlike power... but later on she used it. I thought she forgot about changing the way her power works (well, getting rid of closed space), gaining telekinesis, and, most importantly, altering her own personality. O_o

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 1st 2010 at 1:17:29 PM •••

Your question? Anyway, I see that part is relevant because it is a subversion later: keep the blessing while containing the suck, which happens to appear in Playing With/Blessed With Suck.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Aug 1st 2010 at 2:42:52 PM •••

I dislike the inaccuracy that it states Haruhi forgot she has godlike powers when she clearly didn't forget. I'm not sure how to edit it to reflect that.

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Aug 2nd 2010 at 12:38:19 PM •••

It's more of a Trigger Phrase-secured Neuro-Vault than Laser-Guided Amnesia, to be honest. She technically sealed her original memory of how her powers work in the Neuro-Vault, and then replaced them with new memories that she hoped would solve the problem; and beforehand, she informed Kyon that he could use his original Trust Password as a Trigger Phrase to restore her memories if an emergency situation comes about.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Aug 2nd 2010 at 3:31:37 PM •••

I agree with the rewrite of that section.

After checking Neuro-Vault and Laser-Guided Amnesia I can also agree that the former is better suited for the Memory Gambit than the latter.

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MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer (Before Recorded History)
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
Jul 29th 2010 at 7:14:19 PM •••

So we have this conversation between Mikuru and Kyon from "The Filler Arc (IV) - Chapter Eight: Relationship Building" (my boldface)...

"Perhaps you're right. Um, but I remember what you said, about ... making my own impressions in the world, and I wonder if it can really be done?"

"That's absolutely already happened," he returned, grinning. "Say ... when we nailed that can to the ground?"

What can is he talking about? No matter how much I look through the chapters concerning that day, I can find any trace of the "can-nailing". And just why does he not even ponder the fact that apparently his future self had talked with her after he left her at the bench (like he usually does in every other instance involving a Stable Time Loop)? It's as if he already did the Time Travel jump to that point and say that - which does not happen until the recently uploaded Chapter 24.

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24.4.217.176 Since: Dec, 1969
Jul 29th 2010 at 7:35:48 PM •••

That actually is a continuity nod; that happened in the Melancholy of Asahina Mikuru. the seventh book, The Scheme of Haruhi Suzumiya

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MarqFJA (Before Recorded History)
Jul 29th 2010 at 7:56:53 PM •••

I see... It's a pity that I have zero legal access to the light novels in my locale, otherwise I wouldn't be puzzling over every semi-obscure Continuity Nod or Mythology Gag due to lack of knowledge. TT_TT

That still doesn't answer my second point, however. Or am I missing something else?

Scratch that, I forgot about his first response a few lines above:

He didn't meet her eyes. "Well, you know me," he said, shifting his shoulders. "After your dizzy spell?"

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RainyDaze Eheheh... Since: Jul, 2010
Eheheh...
Jul 29th 2010 at 7:19:54 AM •••

Isn't the first Fridge Brilliance topic a bit off? The timeline split because of Nagato's deletion, not because of meeting the Anti SOS Brigade. Sure, the second one makes sense - though it's more of a Brick Joke - but the first one... doesn't.

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Filraen Since: May, 2009
Jul 29th 2010 at 11:24:05 AM •••

I agree on deleting or moving both examples.

On the same note, is the Kanae crying on Kyon a CMoFunny? I didn't delete it only because it's subjective.

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RainyDaze Since: Jul, 2010
Jul 29th 2010 at 1:35:46 PM •••

I checked chapter 2: it explains why Mikuru wanted to go into a different cafe, so it counts, but it has nothing to do with diverging timelines.

Still think the second one's a Brick Joke.

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24.6.155.45 Since: Dec, 1969
Jul 5th 2010 at 2:19:37 AM •••

Stable Time Loop: When did Future Mikuru meet anyone other than Kyon and Miyoko?

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