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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12552597/1/Sailor-Moon-The-Road-Not-Taken Sailor Moon: The Road Not Taken]]'' is a fan fiction written by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9387366/Androzani84 Androzani84]]''. It sees Sailor Chibi-Moon thrust into an Alternate Universe where everything is significantly different. [[spoiler:at least 3 different [[TheBadGuyWins villainous groups have triumphed]].]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12552597/1/Sailor-Moon-The-Road-Not-Taken Sailor Moon: The Road Not Taken]]'' is a fan fiction written by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9387366/Androzani84 Androzani84]]''. It sees Sailor Chibi-Moon thrust into an Alternate Universe {{Main/Alternate Universe}} where everything is significantly different. [[spoiler:at least 3 different [[TheBadGuyWins villainous groups have triumphed]].]]
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* Foreshadowing: the flashbacks at the start are to episodes of the anime, with [[ShownTheirWork dialogue recreated faithfully]]. But there are subtle differences, setting up that this is an alternate universe.
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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: the flashbacks at the start are to episodes of the anime, with [[ShownTheirWork dialogue recreated faithfully]]. But there are subtle differences, setting up that this is an alternate universe.
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* TheStarscream/VillainTeamUp: [[spoiler:Jadeite]] and [[spoiler:Grand Zirconia]] have teamed up to seize joint power. Once he becomes [[spoiler:The Doom Phantom]], the former [[spoiler:kills]] the latter.
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* TheStarscream/VillainTeamUp: TheStarscream / VillainTeamUp: [[spoiler:Jadeite]] and [[spoiler:Grand Zirconia]] have teamed up to seize joint power. Once he becomes [[spoiler:The Doom Phantom]], the former [[spoiler:kills]] the latter.
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* AscendedFanon: [[spoiler:Jadeite]] is [[spoiler:the Doom Phantom]], a theory suggested by fans of the dub, due to Tony Daniels ActingForTwo.
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* FandomNod: See AscendedFanon
** A lot of the internal monologues wouldn't be out of place as dialogue in ''WebVideo/SailorMoonAbridged''
** A lot of the internal monologues wouldn't be out of place as dialogue in ''WebVideo/SailorMoonAbridged''
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Sailor Moon: The Road Not Taken is a fan fiction written by Androzani84. It sees Sailor Chibi-Moon thrust into an Alternate Universe where everything is significantly different. [[spoiler:at least 3 different [[TheBadGuyWins villainous groups have triumphed]].]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12552597/1/Sailor-Moon-The-Road-Not-Taken Sailor Moon: The Road Not Taken Taken]]'' is a fan fiction written by Androzani84.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9387366/Androzani84 Androzani84]]''. It sees Sailor Chibi-Moon thrust into an Alternate Universe where everything is significantly different. [[spoiler:at least 3 different [[TheBadGuyWins villainous groups have triumphed]].]]
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* AlternativeUniverse: One based on the widely hated original dub.
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* AlternativeUniverse: AlternateUniverse: One based on the widely hated original dub.
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* Chekov'sGunman: A literal example. The soldier who saves Chibi-Moon turns out to be a major player.
* Chekov'sLecture: An offscreen version. Serena remembering something Zirconia told her about Remless and dream mirrors allows her to [[spoiler:escape captivity]].
* Chekov'sLecture: An offscreen version. Serena remembering something Zirconia told her about Remless and dream mirrors allows her to [[spoiler:escape captivity]].
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* Chekov'sGunman: ChekhovsGunman: A literal example. The soldier who saves Chibi-Moon turns out to be a major player.
*Chekov'sLecture: ChekhovsLecture: An offscreen version. Serena remembering something Zirconia told her about Remless and dream mirrors allows her to [[spoiler:escape captivity]].
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** A lot of the internal monologues wouldn't be out of place as dialogue in ''WebVideo:SailorMoonAbridged''
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** A lot of the internal monologues wouldn't be out of place as dialogue in ''WebVideo:SailorMoonAbridged''''WebVideo/SailorMoonAbridged''
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* ShoutOut: the bomber is called [[Literature:AlexRider| Eagle Striker]]
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* ShoutOut: the bomber is called [[Literature:AlexRider| [[Literature/AlexRider Eagle Striker]]
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* AscendedFanon: [[spoiler:Jadeite]] is [[Spoiler:the Doom Phantom]], a theory suggested by fans of the dub, due to Tony Daniels ActingForTwo.
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* AndIMustScream: Venus has this reaction after [[spoiler:recovering from being a monster]]
* AscendedExtra: several character sets were only Characters of the day in the anime
* AscendedFanon: [[spoiler:Jadeite]] is[[Spoiler:the [[spoiler:the Doom Phantom]], a theory suggested by fans of the dub, due to Tony Daniels ActingForTwo.
* AscendedExtra: several character sets were only Characters of the day in the anime
* AscendedFanon: [[spoiler:Jadeite]] is
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* ChekovsGunman: A literal example. The soldier who saves Chibi-Moon turns out to be a major player.
* ChekovsLecture: An offscreen version. Serena remembering something Zirconia told her about Remless and dream mirrors allows her to [[spoiler:escape captivity]].
* ChekovsLecture: An offscreen version. Serena remembering something Zirconia told her about Remless and dream mirrors allows her to [[spoiler:escape captivity]].
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* ChekovsGunman: BlessedWithSuck: The Nega-Verse healing power causes you to waste away more of your life force.
* Chekov'sGunman: A literal example. The soldier who saves Chibi-Moon turns out to be a major player.
*ChekovsLecture: Chekov'sLecture: An offscreen version. Serena remembering something Zirconia told her about Remless and dream mirrors allows her to [[spoiler:escape captivity]].
* Chekov'sGunman: A literal example. The soldier who saves Chibi-Moon turns out to be a major player.
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* DeusExMachina: Just as Lita is about to be killed by a monster, [[spoiler:Diana]] shows up and blasts the creature with a ray that [[spoiler:neutralises her negative impulses, restoring her to normal]].
* DueToTheDead: The deaths of [[spoiler:Tuxedo Mask and Sailor Mars]] are what lead to the bad reality.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Dovlin and Osojii don't want to deal with the man at the temple.
* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:The Doom Phantom]], complete with bold text.
* FandomNod: See AscendedFanon
** A lot of the internal monologues wouldn't be out of place as dialogue in ''WebVideo:SailorMoonAbridged''
* DueToTheDead: The deaths of [[spoiler:Tuxedo Mask and Sailor Mars]] are what lead to the bad reality.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Dovlin and Osojii don't want to deal with the man at the temple.
* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:The Doom Phantom]], complete with bold text.
* FandomNod: See AscendedFanon
** A lot of the internal monologues wouldn't be out of place as dialogue in ''WebVideo:SailorMoonAbridged''
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** Venus turning out to be a [[spoiler:Remless]] sets up the reveal the Mistress 9's pet is really [[spoiler:Sailor Neptune, turned into a Heart Snatcher.]]
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** Venus turning out to be a [[spoiler:Remless]] sets up the reveal the Mistress 9's pet is really [[spoiler:Sailor Neptune, turned into a Heart Snatcher.]]]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Malachite]] has undergone one, following a HeelRealisation.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: a lot of Chibi-USA's reactions to the differences in the alternate universe are meant to mimic a Japanese fans reaction to the changes in the dub.
* Narm: InUniverse, characters point out the ridiculous appearance of the monsters.
* PatchworkFic: Provides a logical explanation for the dub changes. Also uses the manga version of Dark Moon.
* ShoutOut: the bomber is called [[Literature:AlexRider| Eagle Striker]]
* TheStarscream/VillainTeamUp: [[spoiler:Jadeite]] and [[spoiler:Grand Zirconia]] have teamed up to seize joint power. Once he becomes [[spoiler:The Doom Phantom]], the former [[spoiler:kills]] the latter.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Malachite]] has undergone one, following a HeelRealisation.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: a lot of Chibi-USA's reactions to the differences in the alternate universe are meant to mimic a Japanese fans reaction to the changes in the dub.
* Narm: InUniverse, characters point out the ridiculous appearance of the monsters.
* PatchworkFic: Provides a logical explanation for the dub changes. Also uses the manga version of Dark Moon.
* ShoutOut: the bomber is called [[Literature:AlexRider| Eagle Striker]]
* TheStarscream/VillainTeamUp: [[spoiler:Jadeite]] and [[spoiler:Grand Zirconia]] have teamed up to seize joint power. Once he becomes [[spoiler:The Doom Phantom]], the former [[spoiler:kills]] the latter.
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Sailor Moon: The Road Not Taken is a fan fiction written by Androzani84. It sees Sailor Chibi-Moon thrust into an Alternate Universe where everything is significantly different. [[spoiler:at least 3 different [[TheBadGuyWins villainous groups have triumphed]].]]
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!! ''Sailor Moon: The Road Not Taken'' contains examples of.
* AdaptationalBadass: Many MonsterOfTheWeek characters are more powerful than the canon.
* AdaptationalHeroism: [[spoiler:Malachite and his army of reformed monsters]]
* AlternativeUniverse: One based on the widely hated original dub.
* AscendedFanon: [[spoiler:Jadeite]] is [[Spoiler:the Doom Phantom]], a theory suggested by fans of the dub, due to Tony Daniels ActingForTwo.
* TheBadGuyWins: The city has been taken over by Metalia, Mistress 9 and Nehelenia. Only a small holdout of humanity remains.
* ChekovsGunman: A literal example. The soldier who saves Chibi-Moon turns out to be a major player.
* ChekovsLecture: An offscreen version. Serena remembering something Zirconia told her about Remless and dream mirrors allows her to [[spoiler:escape captivity]].
* DarkestHour: [[spoiler:The city is crawling with monsters, one of the Sailor Scouts is dead, three of them are missing and the rest of the world intends to bomb the city.]]
* FiveSecondForeshadowing: the commandant's name is Anderson. [[spoiler:She turns out to be Sailor Mercury]].
* Foreshadowing: the flashbacks at the start are to episodes of the anime, with [[ShownTheirWork dialogue recreated faithfully]]. But there are subtle differences, setting up that this is an alternate universe.
** Venus turning out to be a [[spoiler:Remless]] sets up the reveal the Mistress 9's pet is really [[spoiler:Sailor Neptune, turned into a Heart Snatcher.]]
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!! ''Sailor Moon: The Road Not Taken'' contains examples of.
* AdaptationalBadass: Many MonsterOfTheWeek characters are more powerful than the canon.
* AdaptationalHeroism: [[spoiler:Malachite and his army of reformed monsters]]
* AlternativeUniverse: One based on the widely hated original dub.
* AscendedFanon: [[spoiler:Jadeite]] is [[Spoiler:the Doom Phantom]], a theory suggested by fans of the dub, due to Tony Daniels ActingForTwo.
* TheBadGuyWins: The city has been taken over by Metalia, Mistress 9 and Nehelenia. Only a small holdout of humanity remains.
* ChekovsGunman: A literal example. The soldier who saves Chibi-Moon turns out to be a major player.
* ChekovsLecture: An offscreen version. Serena remembering something Zirconia told her about Remless and dream mirrors allows her to [[spoiler:escape captivity]].
* DarkestHour: [[spoiler:The city is crawling with monsters, one of the Sailor Scouts is dead, three of them are missing and the rest of the world intends to bomb the city.]]
* FiveSecondForeshadowing: the commandant's name is Anderson. [[spoiler:She turns out to be Sailor Mercury]].
* Foreshadowing: the flashbacks at the start are to episodes of the anime, with [[ShownTheirWork dialogue recreated faithfully]]. But there are subtle differences, setting up that this is an alternate universe.
** Venus turning out to be a [[spoiler:Remless]] sets up the reveal the Mistress 9's pet is really [[spoiler:Sailor Neptune, turned into a Heart Snatcher.]]
