History YMMV / TheWheelAndTheButterflySaga

* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: Though it doesn't hurt the story too much, the author having to remove all non-public domain songs, due to Website/FimfictionDotNet's policy, really takes a lot away from chapters that made heavy use of said songs.

* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: Though it doesn't hurt the story too much, the author having to remove all non-public domain songs, due to Website/FimfictionDotNet's policy, really takes a lot away from chapters that made heavy use of said songs.

* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: Though it doesn't hurt the story too much, the author having to remove all non-public domain songs, due to Website/FimfictionDotNet's policy, really takes a lot away from chapters that made heavy use of said songs.
* WhatAnIdiot: The waitress at Lenny's and Dan and Pinkie's personal ButtMonkey for giving them terrible service, refuses to just let someone else serve them, so she could get back at them with bad service...

* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: Though it doesn't hurt the story too much, the author having to remove all non-public domain songs, due to FimFiction's policy, really takes a lot away from chapters that made heavy use of said songs.

* CrazyAwesome: Dan and Pinkie Pie are both this on their own, but put to together and you got the ultimate CrazyAwesome duo. The Pancake Launcher, anyone?

* BreakoutCharacter: In-universe example; It turns out one of the reasons the bakery was such a hit was because of the RagTagBunchOfMisfits staff-Dan, Pinkie, D.H.(Derpy), and Crunchy and the fact that most people were convinced their antics were ''the actual show.''
--> '''Dan:''' That... makes a disturbing amount of sense.

* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: A few readers feel that the story has strayed into this territory, with the protagonists becoming more unsympathetic and the villains only getting worse.

** The part where Pinkie starts to torture Dan*. See BrokenBase for more information.
* TheScrappy: Again, Elise's parents and ex-boyfriend.

* WhatAnIdiot:
** Colby. See above.
** The waitress at Lenny's and Dan and Pinkie's personal ButtMonkey for giving them terrible service, refuses to just let someone else serve them, so she could get back at them with bad service...

* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Terry-Man]] eventually crosses it, when he takes his obsession with Dan to the point of [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown savagely beating Dan and Pinkie]] and threatening to ''blow up Pinkie's head'' if he didn't surrender, only to try and '''kill them all''', including Elise and Chris (he latter of who, actually tried to make peace with and even ''comfort'' [[spoiler: Terry]]) even after Dan surrendered.

--> Dan: That... makes a disturbing amount of sense.

** Dan may be a violent, crazy JerkAss, and ''the'' patron saint of HairTriggerTemper and NoIndoorVoice, but considering [[AbusiveParents being told that he was a mistake and the source of all his parents,]] ''at the age of two'', was the ''high point'' of his childhood, not to mention being kept in a cage for hours at a time till he outgrew it and his parents put shackles on him, it is understandable that he wouldn't be right in the head. And this isn't even getting into his status as CosmicPlayThing. By the end of his story, Pinkie is so horrified, she goes into panic mode, wondering how she could blame him for what the world tuned him into.

* BreakOutCharacter: In-universe example; It turns out one of the reasons the bakery was such a hit was because of the RagTagBunchOfMisfits staff-Dan, Pinkie, D.H.(Derpy), and Crunchy and the fact that most people were convinced their antics were ''the actual show.''

* BrokenBase: The part where Pinkie starts to torture Dan*. Some fans liked it, while others found it extremely out of character for Pinkie even for the standards of this story.(which is really saying something)

* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The good guys are extremely unlikable, the bad guys aren't much better, and none of the ComedicSociopathy is very entertaining.
* DesignatedHero: Every good character, including the ones from My Little Pony which is especially jarring considering the Mane Six of the actual show are all [[AllLovingHero All loving Heroes]] and very forgiving.
* HilariousInHindsight: Sunset's reaction to Pinkie copying her moves, that took months to master, seems strangely familiar...

** The waitress at Lenny’s.
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Terry-Man]] eventually crosses it, when he takes his obsession with Dan to the point of [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown savagely beating Dan and Pinkie]] and threatening to ''blow up Pinkie's head'' if he didn't surrender, only to try and '''kill them all''', including Elise and Chris (The latter of who, actually tried to make piece and even ''comfort'' [[spoiler: Terry]].) even after Dan surrendered.

* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The good guys are extremely unlikable, the bad guys aren't much better, and none of the ComedicScociopathy is very entertaining.

* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: The good guys are extremely unlikable, the bad guys aren't much better, and none of TheComedicScociopathy is very entertaining.

* HateSink: Elise's parents and ex-boyfriend.
** Don and Elise Sr. want to '''kill''' Elise's husband and force her into marrying Colby for completely petty and selfish reasons, they constantly complain about Chris, for not being a ''real'' man, despite Elise's father doing nothing to help the situation, completely forget about their true son's existence, repeatedly talk down to Pinkie and Dan, and even after the gang saves their (worthless) hides, they only act like they had a change of heart to save face and ''still plan on finding a way to get rid of Chris.'' It says something when not only is ''Dan'' disgusted, but their daughter's only regret is her mother got off unscratched, while Chris, a normally forgiving guy isn't having ''any'' of their condescending "apologies" and punches her dad.
** Then there's Colby, Elise's egotistical and misogynist ex, who insists that Elise needs his protection ''after she had saved his life'', repeatedly treats Chris like a poor excuse for a man and was completely OK with getting Chris killed so he could take Elise back, and when everyone is cornered in the cabin, he complains about them not having the guts to go out and face a ''serial kill/[[spoiler: Wendigo]] while ignoring the fact that they were about to go out and save them earlier, foolishly underestimates the threat despite constant warning and tells Elise, the women who just saved him less than an hour ago, wouldn't stand a chance and tries the use the situation to win her over, before stepping outside to show Chris and Dan what a real man's supposed to do. [[spoiler: He lasts long enough for the creature to NoSell a punch, before throwing him in the air and ripping his throat out.]]

* CrazyAwesome: Dan and Pinkie Pie are both this on their own, but put to together and you got the ultimate Crazy Awesome duo. The Pancake Launcher, anyone?

** The waitress at Lenny’s

* TheDeterminator: Pinkie Pie, while trying to find a way to get her balance back, would not stop trying gymnastics, ''until she was physically immobilized!''

* BreakOutCharacter: In-universe example; It turns out one of the reasons the bakery was such a hit was because of the RagTagBunchOfMisfits staff-Dan, Pinkie, D.H.(Derpy), and Crunchy and the fact that most people were convinced their antics were ''actual show.''

* TheDeterminator: Pinkie Pie, while trying to find a way to get her balance back, would not stop trying gymnastics, ''until she physically immobilized!''

** Don and Elise Sr. want to '''kill''' Elise's husband and force her into marrying Colby, for completley petty and selfish reason, they constantly complain about Chris, for not being a ''real'' man, despite Elise's father doing nothing to help the situation, completely forget about their true son's existence, repeatedly talk down to Pinkie and Dan, and even after the gang saves their (worthless) hides, they only act like they had a change of heart to save face and ''still plan on finding a way to get rid of Chris." It says something when not only is ''Dan'' disgusted, but their daughter is only regret is her mother got off unscratched, while Chris, a normally forgiving guy isn't having ''any'' of their condescending "apologies" and punches her dad.
** Then theirs Colby, Elise's egotistical and misogynist ex, who insist that Elise needs his protection, ''after she had saved his life'', repeatedly treats Chris like a poor excuse for a man and was completely ok with getting Chris killed, so he could take Elise back, and when everyone is cornered in the cabin, he complains about them not having the guts to go out and face a ''serial kill/[[spoiler: Wendigo]] while ignoring the fact that they were about to go out and save them earlier, foolishly underestimates the threat despite constant warning and tells Elise, she the women who just saved him less than an hour ago, wouldn't stand a chance and tries the use the situation to win her over, before stepping outside to show Chris and Dan, what a real man's supposed to do. [[spoiler: He last long enough for the creature to NoSell a punch, before throwing him in the air and ripping his throat out.]]

** Dan may be a violent, crazy JerkAss, and ''the'' patron saint of HairTriggerTemper and NoIndoorVoice, but considering [[AbusiveParents being told that he was a mistake and the source of all his parents,]] ''at the age of two'', was the ''high point'' of his childhood, not to mention being kept in a cage for hours at a time till he outgrew it and his parents put shackles on him, it is understandable that he wouldn't be right in the head. In this isn't even getting into his status as CosmicPlayThing. By the end of his story, Pinkie is so horrified, she goes into panic mode, wondering how she could blame him for what the world tuned him into.

* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Terry-Man]] eventually crosses it, when he takes his obsession with Dan to the point of [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown savagley beating Dan and Pinkie]] and threatening to ''blow up Pinkies head'' if he didn't surrender, only to try and '''kill them all''', including Elise and Chris (The ladder of who, actually tried to make piece and even ''comfort'' [[spoiler:Terry]].) even after Dan surrendered.

* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: Though it doesn't hurt the story too much, the author habing to remove all non-public domain songs, due to FimFiction's polocy, really takes a lot away from chapters that made heavy use of said songs.

* CharacterDerailment: Even readers who enjoy the story, question whether Justice 3442 took Pinkie's psychotic side a little too far.

** The waitress at Lenny's and Dan and Pinkie's personal ButtMonkey for giving them terrible service, refuses to just let someone else serve them, so she could get back at them with bad service...

** Dan may be a violent, crazy JerkAss, and ''the'' patriont saint of HairTriggerTemper and NoIndoorVoice, but considering [[AbusiveParents being told that he was a mistake and the source of all his parents,]] ''at the age of two'', was the ''high point'' of his childhood, not to mention being kept in a cage for hours at a time till he outgrew it and his parents put shackles on him, it is understandable that he wouldn't be right in the head. In this isn't even getting into his status as CosmicPlayThing. By the end of his story, Pinkie is so horrified, she goes into panic mode, wondering how she could blame him for what the world tuned him into.