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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: A lot of people would avoid this manga or it's spiritual predecessor (Doubt) because the premise sounds just too similar to ''Franchise/{{Danganronpa}}'', the ''VisualNovel/ZeroEscape'' series, or ''VisualNovel/YourTurnToDie'' without bringing anything new to the table.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: A lot of people would avoid this manga or it's spiritual predecessor (Doubt) because the premise sounds just too similar to ''Franchise/{{Danganronpa}}, the ''VisualNovel/ZeroEscape'' series, or ''VisualNovel/YourTurnToDie'' without bringing anything new to the table.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: A lot of people would avoid this manga or it's spiritual predecessor (Doubt) because the premise sounds just too similar to ''Franchise/{{Danganronpa}}, ''Franchise/{{Danganronpa}}'', the ''VisualNovel/ZeroEscape'' series, or ''VisualNovel/YourTurnToDie'' without bringing anything new to the table.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: A lot of people would avoid this manga or it's spiritual predecessor (Doubt) because the premise sounds just too similar to Danganronpa, the Zero Escape Series or Your Turn to Die without bringing anything new to the table.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: A lot of people would avoid this manga or it's spiritual predecessor (Doubt) because the premise sounds just too similar to Danganronpa, ''Franchise/{{Danganronpa}}, the Zero Escape Series ''VisualNovel/ZeroEscape'' series, or Your Turn to Die ''VisualNovel/YourTurnToDie'' without bringing anything new to the table.
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%%* WhatAnIdiot: Hiro is rapidly shaping up to be this, as per Tonogai tradition. [[spoiler:Subverted in the end; he was EvilAllAlong.]]
* TheWoobie: The author really does enjoy putting Rina into horrible situations, first one [[AttemptedRape she's nearly raped by Ryuhei]], second one she's knocked unconscious and then framed for Ryuhei's death, third one she's stabbed in the leg by Miku and [[HostageSituation forced to vote for Asami]] and finally she's forced to hide from Hayato's father, who would have killed her. Luckily for her despite all these hardships [[EarnYourHappyEnding she survives.]]
* TheWoobie: The author really does enjoy putting Rina into horrible situations, first one [[AttemptedRape she's nearly raped by Ryuhei]], second one she's knocked unconscious and then framed for Ryuhei's death, third one she's stabbed in the leg by Miku and [[HostageSituation forced to vote for Asami]] and finally she's forced to hide from Hayato's father, who would have killed her. Luckily for her despite all these hardships [[EarnYourHappyEnding she survives.]]
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* SpiritualSuccessor: Likely one to ''Manga/{{Doubt}}''. Both involve a group suddenly awakening in an unknown area, with animal headmasks on and in mortal danger.
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* AssPull: TheReveal that [[spoiler: Hiro was the culprit, a VillainProtagonist and was working with Hikari to get revenge for Atsuya.]] Not only does it get almost no {{Foreshadowing}}, but it directly contradicts almost all of [[spoiler: Hiro's]] thoughts and actions.
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** TheReveal that [[spoiler: Hiro was the culprit, a VillainProtagonist and was working with Hikari to get revenge for Atsuya.]] Not only does it get almost no {{Foreshadowing}}, but it directly contradicts almost all of [[spoiler: Hiro's]] thoughts and actions.
** TheReveal that [[spoiler: Hiro was the culprit, a VillainProtagonist and was working with Hikari to get revenge for Atsuya.]] Not only does it get almost no {{Foreshadowing}}, but it directly contradicts almost all of [[spoiler: Hiro's]] thoughts and actions.
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* AssPull: TheReveal that [[spoiler: Hiro was the culprit, a VillainProtagonist and was working with Hikari to get revenge for Atsuya.]] Not only does it get almost no {{Foreshadowing}}, but it directly contradicts almost all of [[spoiler: Hiro's]] thoughts and actions.
** Just the fact that [[spoiler: Hiro in his personal thoughts gets surprised about getting abducted or angry that people get killed when he shouldn't act inside his thoughts]].
** Just the fact that [[spoiler: Hiro in his personal thoughts gets surprised about getting abducted or angry that people get killed when he shouldn't act inside his thoughts]].
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* ShockingSwerve: TheReveal that [[spoiler: Hiro was the culprit, a VillainProtagonist and was working with Hikari to get revenge for Atsuya.]] Not only does it get almost no {{Foreshadowing}}, but it directly contradicts almost all of [[spoiler: Hiro's]] thoughts and actions.
** Just the fact that [[spoiler: Hiro in his personal thoughts gets surprised about getting abducted or angry that people get killed when he shouldn't act inside his thoughts]].
** Just the fact that [[spoiler: Hiro in his personal thoughts gets surprised about getting abducted or angry that people get killed when he shouldn't act inside his thoughts]].
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* FridgeBrilliance: While the bear mask is a confusing choice for Nobuyuki considering the bear is supposed to represent wrath in the seven deadly sins, it makes more sense when you analyse the character and the animal. In real life, bears hibernate once they get enough food to survive the winter and are known to be very [[MamaBear protective parents]]. Nobuyuki's crime was that he killed his mother for criticising his indolent lifestyle, something that justified his death to the other mask wearers. Plus, it wasn't Nobuyuki's sin of sloth that killed his mother, it was his wrath about being criticised. Making the mask representation a little more accurate. To the non-Japanese audience, it also serves as a visual reference to the phrase "(as) busy as a hibernating bear" which describes someone as lazy and inactive.
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* FridgeBrilliance: While the bear mask is a confusing choice for Nobuyuki considering the bear is supposed to represent wrath in the seven deadly sins, it makes more sense when you analyse the character and the animal. In real life, bears hibernate once they get enough food to survive the winter and are known to be very [[MamaBear protective parents]]. Nobuyuki's crime was that he killed his mother for criticising his indolent lifestyle, something that justified his death to the other mask wearers. Plus, it wasn't Nobuyuki's sin of sloth that killed his mother, it was his wrath about being criticised. Making the mask representation Also, a little more accurate. To the non-Japanese audience, it also serves as group of bears is called a visual reference to the phrase "(as) busy as a hibernating bear" which describes someone as lazy and inactive.sloth.
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* FridgeBrilliance: While the bear mask is a confusing choice for Nobuyuki considering the bear is supposed to represent wrath in the seven deadly sins, it makes more sense when you analyse the character and the animal. In real life, bears hibernate once they get enough food to survive the winter and are known to be very [[MamaBear protective parents]]. Nobuyuki's crime was that he killed his mother for criticising his indolent lifestyle, something that justified his death to the other mask wearers. Plus, it wasn't Nobuyuki's sin of sloth that killed his mother, it was his wrath about being criticised. Making the mask representation a little more accurate.
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* FridgeBrilliance: While the bear mask is a confusing choice for Nobuyuki considering the bear is supposed to represent wrath in the seven deadly sins, it makes more sense when you analyse the character and the animal. In real life, bears hibernate once they get enough food to survive the winter and are known to be very [[MamaBear protective parents]]. Nobuyuki's crime was that he killed his mother for criticising his indolent lifestyle, something that justified his death to the other mask wearers. Plus, it wasn't Nobuyuki's sin of sloth that killed his mother, it was his wrath about being criticised. Making the mask representation a little more accurate. To the non-Japanese audience, it also serves as a visual reference to the phrase "(as) busy as a hibernating bear" which describes someone as lazy and inactive.
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* FridgeBrilliance: While the bear mask is a confusing choice for Nobuyuki considering the bear is supposed to represent wrath, it makes more sense when you analyse the character. In real life, bears hibernate once they get enough food and are known to be dangerous parents. Nobuyuki's crime was that he killed his mother for criticising his indolent lifestyle, a vilifying reverse of the [[MamaBear mother bear]]. Plus, it wasn't Nobuyuki's sloth that killed his mother, it was his wrath about being criticised. Making the mask representation a little more accurate.
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* FridgeBrilliance: While the bear mask is a confusing choice for Nobuyuki considering the bear is supposed to represent wrath, wrath in the seven deadly sins, it makes more sense when you analyse the character. character and the animal. In real life, bears hibernate once they get enough food to survive the winter and are known to be dangerous parents. very [[MamaBear protective parents]]. Nobuyuki's crime was that he killed his mother for criticising his indolent lifestyle, a vilifying reverse of something that justified his death to the [[MamaBear mother bear]]. other mask wearers. Plus, it wasn't Nobuyuki's sin of sloth that killed his mother, it was his wrath about being criticised. Making the mask representation a little more accurate.
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* FridgeBrilliance: While the bear mask is a confusing choice for Nobuyuki considering the bear is supposed to represent wrath, it makes more sense when you analyse the character. In real life, bears hibernate once they get enough food and are known to be dangerous parents. Nobuyuki's crime was that he killed his mother for criticising his indolent lifestyle, a vilifying reverse of the [[MamaBear mother bear]]. Plus, it wasn't Nobuyuki's sloth that killed his mother, it was his wrath about being criticised. Making the mask representation a little more accurate.
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* SeinfeldisUnfunny: SeinfeldIsUnfunny: A lot of people would avoid this manga or it's spiritual predecessor (Doubt) because the premise sounds just too similar to Danganronpa, the Zero Escape Series or Your Turn to Die without bringing anything new to the table.
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**Just the fact that [[spoiler: Hiro in his personal thoughts gets surprised about getting abducted or angry that people get killed when he shouldn't act inside his thoughts]].
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* AssPull: TheReveal that [[spoiler: Hiro was the culprit, a VillainProtagonist and was working with Hikari to get revenge for Atsuya.]] Not only does it get almost no {{Foreshadowing}}, but it directly contradicts almost all of [[spoiler: Hiro's]] thoughts and actions.
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* ShockingSwerve: TheReveal that [[spoiler: Hiro was the culprit, a VillainProtagonist and was working with Hikari to get revenge for Atsuya.]] Not only does it get almost no {{Foreshadowing}}, but it directly contradicts almost all of [[spoiler: Hiro's]] thoughts and actions.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Kazu is easily the most well liked character in the series.
* HoYay: Plenty between Hiro and Kazu, [[spoiler: before Kazu died.]]
* SurprisinglyImprovedSequel: Compared to the mangaka's previous work, ''Manga/{{Doubt}}'', this one has improved some in terms of the story and revelations.
* WhatAnIdiot: Hiro is rapidly shaping up to be this, as per Tonogai tradition. [[spoiler:Subverted in the end; he was EvilAllAlong.]]
* HoYay: Plenty between Hiro and Kazu, [[spoiler: before Kazu died.]]
* SurprisinglyImprovedSequel: Compared to the mangaka's previous work, ''Manga/{{Doubt}}'', this one has improved some in terms of the story and revelations.
* WhatAnIdiot: Hiro is rapidly shaping up to be this, as per Tonogai tradition. [[spoiler:Subverted in the end; he was EvilAllAlong.]]
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* TheWoobie: The author really does enjoy putting her into horrible situations, first one [[AttemptedRape she's nearly raped by Ryuhei]], second one she's knocked unconscious and then framed for Ryuhei's death, third one she's stabbed in the leg by Miku and [[HostageSituation forced to vote for Asami]] and finally she's forced to hide from Hayato's father, who would have killed her. Luckily for her despite all these hardships [[EarnYourHappyEnding she survives.]]
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* TheWoobie: The author really does enjoy putting her Rina into horrible situations, first one [[AttemptedRape she's nearly raped by Ryuhei]], second one she's knocked unconscious and then framed for Ryuhei's death, third one she's stabbed in the leg by Miku and [[HostageSituation forced to vote for Asami]] and finally she's forced to hide from Hayato's father, who would have killed her. Luckily for her despite all these hardships [[EarnYourHappyEnding she survives.]]
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* BrokenBase: The fact whether ''Judge'' is better than ''Manga/{{Doubt}}'' overall, to the point that it blows the latter out of the water. Some say that, improved as ''Judge'' is, it still suffers from the same problems as ''Manga/{{Doubt}}'' did.
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* WhatAnIdiot: Hiro is rapidly shaping up to be this, as per Tonogai tradition. [[spoiler:Subverted in the end; he was EvilAllAlong.]]
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* SurprisinglyImprovedSequel: Compared to the mangaka's previous work, ''Manga/{{Doubt}}'', this one has improved some in terms of the story and revelations.
* WhatAnIdiot: Hiro is rapidly shaping up to be this, as per Tonogai tradition. [[spoiler:Subverted in the end; he was EvilAllAlong.]]
* TheWoobie: The author really does enjoy putting her into horrible situations, first one [[AttemptedRape she's nearly raped by Ryuhei]], second one she's knocked unconscious and then framed for Ryuhei's death, third one she's stabbed in the leg by Miku and [[HostageSituation forced to vote for Asami]] and finally she's forced to hide from Hayato's father, who would have killed her. Luckily for her despite all these hardships [[EarnYourHappyEnding she survives.]]
* WhatAnIdiot: Hiro is rapidly shaping up to be this, as per Tonogai tradition. [[spoiler:Subverted in the end; he was EvilAllAlong.]]
* TheWoobie: The author really does enjoy putting her into horrible situations, first one [[AttemptedRape she's nearly raped by Ryuhei]], second one she's knocked unconscious and then framed for Ryuhei's death, third one she's stabbed in the leg by Miku and [[HostageSituation forced to vote for Asami]] and finally she's forced to hide from Hayato's father, who would have killed her. Luckily for her despite all these hardships [[EarnYourHappyEnding she survives.]]
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* AssPull: TheReveal that [[spoiler: Hiro was the culprit, a VillainProtagonist and was working with Hikari to get revenge for Atsuya.]] Not only does it get almost no {{Foreshadowing}}, but it directly contradicts almost all of [[Hiro's]] thoughts and actions.
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* AssPull: TheReveal that [[spoiler: Hiro was the culprit, a VillainProtagonist and was working with Hikari to get revenge for Atsuya.]] Not only does it get almost no {{Foreshadowing}}, but it directly contradicts almost all of [[Hiro's]] [[spoiler: Hiro's]] thoughts and actions.
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* AssPull: TheReveal that [[spoiler: Hiro was the culprit, a VillainProtagonist and was working with Hikari to get revenge for Atsuya.]] Not only does it get almost no {{Foreshadowing}}, but it directly contradicts almost all of [[Hiro's]] thoughts and actions.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Kazu is easily the most well liked character in the series.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Kazu is easily the most well liked character in the series.
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* WhatAnIdiot: Hiro is rapidly shaping up to be this, as per Tonogai tradition.
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* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler: Hiro, actually. Despite his wide-eyed behavior and talk of getting everyone out alive, he is one of the two masterminds, and creators, behind the entire ''Judge'' game. Hiro suggests they all vote for themselves and bring a tie, though it's set already in stone that everyone except Rina and her mother will die. The bastard part isn't shown until the final few chapters, when he and Hikari reveal everything to Hayato's corrupt father.]]
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* HoYay: Plenty between Hiro and Kazu, [[spoiler: before Kazu died.]]
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* HoYay: Plenty between Hiro and Kazu, [[spoiler: before Kazu died.]] ]]
* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler: Hiro, actually. Despite his wide-eyed behavior and talk of getting everyone out alive, he is one of the two masterminds, and creators, behind the entire ''Judge'' game. Hiro suggests they all vote for themselves and bring a tie, though it's set already in stone that everyone except Rina and her mother will die. The bastard part isn't shown until the final few chapters, when he and Hikari reveal everything to Hayato's corrupt father.]]
* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler: Hiro, actually. Despite his wide-eyed behavior and talk of getting everyone out alive, he is one of the two masterminds, and creators, behind the entire ''Judge'' game. Hiro suggests they all vote for themselves and bring a tie, though it's set already in stone that everyone except Rina and her mother will die. The bastard part isn't shown until the final few chapters, when he and Hikari reveal everything to Hayato's corrupt father.]]
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* HoYay: Already plenty between Hiro and Kazu.
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* HoYay: Already plenty Plenty between Hiro and Kazu.Kazu, [[spoiler: before Kazu died.]]
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* HoYay: Already plenty between Hiro and Kazu.
* WhatAnIdiot: Hiro is rapidly shaping up to be this, as per Tonogai tradition.
* WhatAnIdiot: Hiro is rapidly shaping up to be this, as per Tonogai tradition.