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* HealingHands: Jeremy know the healing arts, but he's not specialized in it.
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* HealingHands: Yehveh's soldiers know how to heal injured individuals with the ''Yehveh heal'' ability. Jeremy know the healing arts, but he's not specialized in it.
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* SpikesOfVillainy: The Mamon slaves in the first chapter.
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* FarmBoy:
** Not the protagonist, but some of the refugees who want to join the Yehveh´s forces.
** [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman: Randy Ed, who will later take the [[SomethingCompletelyDifferent focus of the story for a while]]]].
** Not the protagonist, but some of the refugees who want to join the Yehveh´s forces.
** [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman: Randy Ed, who will later take the [[SomethingCompletelyDifferent focus of the story for a while]]]].
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* FarmBoy:
** Not the protagonist, but someFarmBoy: Some of the refugees who want to join the Yehveh´s forces.
**forces are farm boys, with one of them being shown to be illiterate. [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman: That's Randy Ed, who will later take the [[SomethingCompletelyDifferent focus of the story for a while]]]].while]].
** Not the protagonist, but some
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Published by Creator/{{Mayshing}} on Website/SmackJeeves and Website/{{Tapastic}}, you can start reading [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/346505/vol-1/ here]] or [[https://tapastic.com/episode/81544 here]].
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Published by Creator/{{Mayshing}} on Website/SmackJeeves and Website/{{Tapastic}}, you can start reading [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/346505/vol-1/ here]] or [[https://tapastic.here]],[[https://tapastic.com/episode/81544 here]].here]] or [[https://comics.mayshing.com/2Masters/2m/1 Mayshing's own website]].
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Erasing potholes, and is time I rework this page. I'm moving the pages to a characters folder, but the examples here fall heavily in the Zero Context Example, which is mea culpa.
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''[[GodOfGood Master of Heaven, Yehveh]]; [[GodOfEvil Master of Earth, Mamon]].''\\
''[[GodOfGood Master of Heaven, Yehveh]]; [[GodOfEvil Master of Earth, Mamon]].''\\
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->''"There are [[TitleDrop 2Masters]] 2Masters in this world.''\\
''[[GodOfGood Master ''Master of Heaven, Yehveh]]; [[GodOfEvil Yehveh; Master of Earth, Mamon]].Mamon.''\\
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* DominoMask / CoolMask [[spoiler: DominoMask:[[spoiler: Komplex]]
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Published by Creator/Mayshing Creator/{{Mayshing}} on Website/SmackJeeves and Website/Tapastic, Website/{{Tapastic}}, you can start reading [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/346505/vol-1/ here]] or [[https://tapastic.com/episode/81544 here]].
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Published by Mayshing Creator/Mayshing on Website/SmackJeeves, Website/SmackJeeves and Website/Tapastic, you can start reading [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/346505/vol-1/ here]]here]] or [[https://tapastic.com/episode/81544 here]].
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* {{Badass}}: Mosa is the best example.
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''[[GodOfGood Master of Heaven, Yehveh]]; [[GodOfEvil Master of Earth Mamon]].''\\
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''[[GodOfGood Master of Heaven, Yehveh]]; [[GodOfEvil Master of Earth Earth, Mamon]].''\\
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* OurGodsAreGreater
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* OurGodsAreGreaterOurGodsAreDifferent
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* BigBadassBirdOfPrey: Master of Heaven, [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1157717/2/ Yehveh]]. The Giant Eagles also count.
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* NobleBirdOfPrey: Master of Heaven, [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1157717/2/ Yehveh]]. The Giant Eagles also count.
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Max Silver have a interest in crystals.
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Max Silver have a interest in crystals.
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* {{Greed}} / MoneyFetish: {{Greed}}[=/=]MoneyFetish: Mamons, according to the Yehvehs. Yehvehs.
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--->'''Jeremy Princeton''': Yehveh. That's how we call him.
--->'''Heart Mountain''': Great Spirit, Great Mystery, Great One, Great Grandfather, we call him...
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* {{Expy}}: Yehveh and Mamon are clearly based on the [[TheBible Christian God]] and the demon [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mammon Mammon]]
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* {{Expy}}: Yehveh and Mamon are clearly based on the [[TheBible [[Literature/TheBible Christian God]] and the demon [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mammon Mammon]]
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* BigBadassBirdsOfPrey: Master of Heaven, [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1157717/2/ Yehveh]]. The Giant Eagles also count.
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* BigBadassBirdsOfPrey: BigBadassBirdOfPrey: Master of Heaven, [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1157717/2/ Yehveh]]. The Giant Eagles also count.
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* BadassLonghair
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** HumanoidAbomination: On the other hand, its second form, while still having its wing as arms, looks a lot like a lady.
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** HandicappedBadass: Mosa have metal arms because they get chopped. He almost got metal legs too.
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** HandicappedBadass: Mosa have metal arms because they get chopped. He almost got metal legs too.
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* {{Bishounen}}:[[spoiler:Prince Alarico. He is a long-haired AffablyEvil pretty boy.]]
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* BigBadassBirdsOfPrey : BigBadassBirdsOfPrey: Master of Heaven, [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1157717/2/ Yehveh]], Yehveh]]. The Giant Eagles also count.
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* DisappearedDad: Its never explained what happen to Jeremy father, but its possible he´s either dead or [[AscendtoaHigherPlaneofExistence in another place]]
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* [[DontCallMeSir Dont call me Lady]] : Note 1. Never use the word "Lady" to address Sargent Silver.
* DragonRider: the Mamons rides traditional dragons.
** EvilCounterpart: to the Eagle riders.
* DragonRider: the Mamons rides traditional dragons.
** EvilCounterpart: to the Eagle riders.
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* [[DontCallMeSir Dont Don't call me Lady]] : Lady]]: Note 1. 1: Never use the word "Lady" to address Sargent Silver.
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* FarmBoy: Not the protagonist, but some of the refugees who want to join the Yehveh´s forces.
** [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman: Randy Ed, who will later take the [[SomethingCompletelyDifferent focus of the story for a while]] ]].
** [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman: Randy Ed, who will later take the [[SomethingCompletelyDifferent focus of the story for a while]] ]].
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* FarmBoy: FarmBoy:
** Not the protagonist, but some of the refugees who want to join the Yehveh´s forces.
** [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman: Randy Ed, who will later take the [[SomethingCompletelyDifferent focus of the story for awhile]] ]].while]]]].
** Not the protagonist, but some of the refugees who want to join the Yehveh´s forces.
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* HealingHands: Jeremy know the healing arts, but he´s not specialized in it.
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* HandicappedBadass: Mosa have metal arms because they get chopped. He almost got metal legs too.
* HealingHands: Jeremy know the healing arts, buthe´s he's not specialized in it.
* HumanoidAbomination: Yeveh's second form, while still having its wing as arms, looks a lot like a lady.
* HumbleHero: Jeremy. Unlike his comrades,he´s thankful he's grateful for his food.
* HealingHands: Jeremy know the healing arts, but
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* RuleOfSymbolism: WordofGod reveal [[http://comics.mayshing.com/2Masters/bio this]]
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''2Masters'' is a fantasy warfare series, in a world ruled by the two supreme Masters,Yehveh, Masters of Heaven, who represents the spirit of freedom and love, and Mamon, Master of Earth, who is the master of wealth and power.
The Two Masters fight one another and provides completely different philosophies for the living, and humans who follow them are granted powers. Thus creating a never ending world war.
The Two Masters fight one another and provides completely different philosophies for the living, and humans who follow them are granted powers. Thus creating a never ending world war.
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''2Masters'' is a fantasy warfare series, in a world ruled by the two supreme Masters,Yehveh, Masters Masters: Yehveh, Master of Heaven, who represents the spirit of freedom and love, and Mamon, Master of Earth, who is the master of wealth and power.
The Two Masters fight one another andprovides provide completely different philosophies for the living, and humans who follow them are granted powers. Thus creating This creates a never ending world war.
The Two Masters fight one another and
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--->'''Jeremy Princeton''': Yehveh. Thats That's how we call him.
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* TheStoic: Mosa really dont doesn't show emotions besides sarcasm.
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* HeroesPreferSwords
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** EldrichAbomination: On the other hand, its second form, while still having its wing as arms, looks a lot like a lady.
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* AnimalisticAbomination: Yehveh, a shining giant bird, the master of heaven, a god among its people who promise them love and freedom.
** EldrichAbomination: On the other hand, its second form, while still having its wing as arms, looks a lot like a lady.
** EldrichAbomination: On the other hand, its second form, while still having its wing as arms, looks a lot like a lady.
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* HairOfGold: Sargeant Rose Silver and her brother, Max. Jeremie also count.
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* {{Bishounen}}:[[spoiler:Prince Alarico. He is a long-haired pretty boy and its AffablyEvil]]
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* {{Bishounen}}:[[spoiler:Prince Alarico. He is a long-haired AffablyEvil pretty boy and its AffablyEvil]]boy.]]
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** [[spoiler: ChekhovsGunman: [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman: Randy Ed, who will later take the [[SomethingCompletelyDifferent focus of the story for a while]]while]] ]].
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** [[spoiler: ChekhovsGunman: Randy Ed.]]Ed, who will later take the [[SomethingCompletelyDifferent focus of the story for a while]]
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Mosa.
* [[DontCallMeSir Dont call me Lady]] : Note 1. Never use the word "Lady" to adress Sargeant Silver.
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