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Published by Mayshing on Website/SmackJeeves and Website/{{Tapastic}}, you can start reading [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/346505/vol-1/ here]],[[https://tapastic.com/episode/81544 here]] or [[https://comics.mayshing.com/2Masters/2m/1 Mayshing's own website]].
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Published by Mayshing on Website/SmackJeeves Platform/SmackJeeves and Website/{{Tapastic}}, Platform/{{Tapastic}}, you can start reading [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/346505/vol-1/ here]],[[https://tapastic.com/episode/81544 here]] or [[https://comics.mayshing.com/2Masters/2m/1 Mayshing's own website]].
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%%* {{Bishounen}}: [[spoiler:Prince Alarico. He is a long-haired AffablyEvil pretty boy.]]
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* MirroringFactions: In chapter 1, the leader of the Mamon slaves states that Yehvehs and Mamons are both the same: no matter which side he chooses, he will still be treated like trash and a slave. He then commits suicide in front of Jeremy because he doesn't want a life as a Yehveh prisoner, which is no better than being a Mamon's slave.
--> '''Bandit''': Yehvehs, Mamons, all the same... I'm... going to be chained again... in hell. Whether I'm here or there, I'll be treated the same - people look at me the same, like trash! It's all predestined. I cannot change this life given to me. I'm born a slave, and I'll die as one. I was fooling myself when I thought I could be free.
--> '''Bandit''': Yehvehs, Mamons, all the same... I'm... going to be chained again... in hell. Whether I'm here or there, I'll be treated the same - people look at me the same, like trash! It's all predestined. I cannot change this life given to me. I'm born a slave, and I'll die as one. I was fooling myself when I thought I could be free.
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* NotSoDifferent: In chapter 1, the leader of the Mamon slaves states that Yehvehs and Mamons are both the same: no matter which side he chooses, he will still be treated like trash and a slave. He then commits suicide in front of Jeremy because he doesn't want a life as a Yehveh prisoner, which is no better than being a Mamon's slave.
--> '''Bandit''': Yehvehs, Mamons, all the same... I'm... going to be chained again... in hell. Whether I'm here or there, I'll be treated the same - people look at me the same, like trash! It's all predestined. I cannot change this life given to me. I'm born a slave, and I'll die as one. I was fooling myself when I thought I could be free.
--> '''Bandit''': Yehvehs, Mamons, all the same... I'm... going to be chained again... in hell. Whether I'm here or there, I'll be treated the same - people look at me the same, like trash! It's all predestined. I cannot change this life given to me. I'm born a slave, and I'll die as one. I was fooling myself when I thought I could be free.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Serg and the driver, who both die in the first chapter. Even Jeremy didn't know him very much.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Serg and the driver, who both die in the first chapter. Even Jeremy remarks he didn't know him them very much.
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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Max Silver to her sister. They are only one age of difference, but still follow this trope straight.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Max Silver. Subverted, as he only manage to create a little robot.
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* HumanoidAbomination: Yehveh's second form, while still having its wing as arms, looks a lot like a lady.
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* TheMedic: Max Silver. Subverted, as he is a medic in study and has only make one operation before. On a pig.
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* TheMedic: Max Silver. Subverted, Silver is the official medic on the team to escord Sargeant Silver, but the subvertion comes as he is a medic in study and has made only make one operation before. On a pig.
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* TheEvilPrince: [[spoiler:Prince Alarico.]]
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* ActionDuo: Jeremy Princeton and Mosa Zuberi.
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Max Silver have a interest in crystals.
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* BadassArmy: The Mamons army in chapter 7.
* {{Bishounen}}: [[spoiler:Prince Alarico. He is a long-haired AffablyEvil pretty boy.]]
* BraidsBeadsandBuckskins: The three tribes.
* DominoMask:[[spoiler: Komplex]]
* [[DontCallMeSir Don't call me Lady]]: Note 1: Never use the word "Lady" to address Sargent Silver.
* DragonRider: the Mamons rides traditional dragons. EvilCounterpart to the Eagle riders.
* {{Expy}}: Yehveh and Mamon are clearly based on the [[Literature/TheBible Christian God]] and the demon [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mammon Mammon]]
* {{Bishounen}}: [[spoiler:Prince Alarico. He is a long-haired AffablyEvil pretty boy.]]
* BraidsBeadsandBuckskins: The three tribes.
* DominoMask:[[spoiler: Komplex]]
* [[DontCallMeSir Don't call me Lady]]: Note 1: Never use the word "Lady" to address Sargent Silver.
* DragonRider: the Mamons rides traditional dragons. EvilCounterpart to the Eagle riders.
* {{Expy}}: Yehveh and Mamon are clearly based on the [[Literature/TheBible Christian God]] and the demon [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mammon Mammon]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: In chapter 1, after being defeated and captured by Jeremy and Mosa, the leader of the Mamon slaves starts to curse his existence. Whether if he lives as a Yehveh criminal or a Mamon slave, he will be treated like trash, even claiming YouCantFightFate. He and his comrades decide to kill themselves, with Jeremy being unable to heal them.
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* {{Greed}}[=/=]MoneyFetish: Mamons, according to the Yehvehs.
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* HumanoidAbomination: Yeveh's second form, while still having its wing as arms, looks a lot like a lady.
* IHaveManyNames: The Master of Heaven, Yehveh.
* IHaveManyNames: The Master of Heaven, Yehveh.
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* HumanoidAbomination: Yeveh's Yehveh's second form, while still having its wing as arms, looks a lot like a lady.
* IHaveManyNames: The Master ofHeaven, Yehveh.Heaven is known with multiple names through the world.
* IHaveManyNames: The Master of
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* LongDistanceRelationship: [[spoiler:Jeremy and Sara.]]
* NiceGuy: Jeremy and Max.
* NobleBirdOfPrey: Master of Heaven, [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1157717/2/ Yehveh]]. The Giant Eagles also count.
* NonActionGuy: Max Silver.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Master of Earth, [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1157717/2/ Mamon]]
* OurGodsAreDifferent
* RuleOfSymbolism: WordOfGod reveal [[http://comics.mayshing.com/2Masters/bio this]]
* NiceGuy: Jeremy and Max.
* NobleBirdOfPrey: Master of Heaven, [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1157717/2/ Yehveh]]. The Giant Eagles also count.
* NonActionGuy: Max Silver.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Master of Earth, [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1157717/2/ Mamon]]
* OurGodsAreDifferent
* RuleOfSymbolism: WordOfGod reveal [[http://comics.mayshing.com/2Masters/bio this]]
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* NotSoDifferent: In chapter 1, the leader of the Mamon slaves states that Yehvehs and Mamons are both the same: no matter which side he chooses, he will still be treated like trash and a slave. He then commits suicide in front of Jeremy because he doesn't want a life as a Yehveh prisoner, which is no better than being a Mamon's slave.
--> '''Bandit''': Yehvehs, Mamons, all the same... I'm... going to be chained again... in hell. Whether I'm here or there, I'll be treated the same - people look at me the same, like trash! It's all predestined. I cannot change this life given to me. I'm born a slave, and I'll die as one. I was fooling myself when I thought I could be free.
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* SympathyForTheDevil
* TheEmpire: The Great Empire.
* TheEmpire: The Great Empire.
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* ThereCanOnlyBeOne: As Heart Mountain describes in chapter 1, Yehveh and Mamon both fight one another for the right to rule over the world, with people having to choose one as their master and obtaining the supernatural power and wealth to fight for the chosen god's cause.
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* ThereCanOnlyBeOne: As Heart Mountain describes in chapter 1, Yehveh and Mamon both fight one another each other for the right to rule over the world, with people having to choose one as their master and obtaining obtain the supernatural power and wealth to fight for the chosen god's cause.
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* DisappearedDad: Its never explained what happened to Jeremy father, but its possible he's either dead or [[AscendtoaHigherPlaneofExistence in another place]]
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* {{Deuteragonist}}: Mosa is pretty much this since the beginning.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Mosa.
* AnimalisticAbomination: Yehveh, a shining giant bird, the master of heaven, a god among its people who promise them love and freedom.
* AnimalisticAbomination: Yehveh, a shining giant bird, the master of heaven, a god among its people who promise them love and freedom.
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* AuraVision: Yehveh vision, seen in the first chapter.
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* AuraVision: Yehveh vision, seen in the first chapter. It allows Yehveh's army to detect their enemies.
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* SpontaneousWeaponCreationSpontaneousWeaponCreation: Jeremy can create a sword made from Yehveh's energy like all soldiers. He likewise can create daggers. These weapons are not made to kill, though, but to incapacitate, and they work to detect if someone works for Mamon or Yehveh.
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* TheAloner: Jeremy. Mosa too.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Serg. Even Jeremy didn't know him very much.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Serg.Serg and the driver, who both die in the first chapter. Even Jeremy didn't know him very much.
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Published by Creator/{{Mayshing}} on Website/SmackJeeves and Website/{{Tapastic}}, you can start reading [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/346505/vol-1/ here]],[[https://tapastic.com/episode/81544 here]] or [[https://comics.mayshing.com/2Masters/2m/1 Mayshing's own website]].
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Published by Creator/{{Mayshing}} Mayshing on Website/SmackJeeves and Website/{{Tapastic}}, you can start reading [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/346505/vol-1/ here]],[[https://tapastic.com/episode/81544 here]] or [[https://comics.mayshing.com/2Masters/2m/1 Mayshing's own website]].
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* LongDistanceRelationship:[[spoiler:Jeremy and Sara.]]
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* LongDistanceRelationship:[[spoiler:Jeremy LongDistanceRelationship: [[spoiler:Jeremy and Sara.]]
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Moving the characterization tropes, and working on the article.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Mosa.
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Mosa.
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* HandicappedBadass: Mosa have metal arms because they get chopped. He almost got metal legs too.
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* HumbleHero: Jeremy. Unlike his comrades, he's grateful for his food.
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* ManInWhite: Mosa.
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* NonActionGuy: Max Silver. Bonus points for having the same hair color as the trope image.
* OvershadowedByAwesome : Jeremy lives in his father's shadow.
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* NonActionGuy: Max Silver. Bonus points for having the same hair color as the trope image.
* OvershadowedByAwesome : Jeremy lives in his father's shadow.
* OvershadowedByAwesome : Jeremy lives in his father's shadow.
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* TheHero: Jeremy, our protagonist.
* TheComicallySerious: [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1258190/132/ "Mosa, give me a hand"]]
* TheComicallySerious: [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1258190/132/ "Mosa, give me a hand"]]
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* TheLancer: Mosa.
* TheStoic: Mosa really doesn't show emotions besides sarcasm.
* WalkingShirtlessScene: Mosa.
* TheStoic: Mosa really doesn't show emotions besides sarcasm.
* WalkingShirtlessScene: Mosa.
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* ThereCanOnlyBeOne: As Heart Mountain describes in chapter 1, both Yehveh and Mamon both fight one another for the right to rule over the world, with people having to choose one as their master and obtaining the supernatural power and wealth to fight for the chosen god's cause.
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* ThereCanOnlyBeOne: As Heart Mountain describes in chapter 1, both Yehveh and Mamon both fight one another for the right to rule over the world, with people having to choose one as their master and obtaining the supernatural power and wealth to fight for the chosen god's cause.
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* FarmBoy: Some of the refugees who want to join the Yehveh´s forces are farm boys, with one of them being shown to be illiterate. [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman: That's Randy Ed, who will later take the focus of the story for a while]].
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* FarmBoy: Some of the refugees who want to join the Yehveh´s forces are farm boys, with one of them being shown to be illiterate. [[spoiler:ChekhovsGunman: [[spoiler:[[ChekhovsGunman That's Randy Ed, Ed]], who will later take the focus of the story for a while]].
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* ThereCanOnlyBeOne: The gods. Check the quote above.
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* ThereCanOnlyBeOne: The gods. Check As Heart Mountain describes in chapter 1, both Yehveh and Mamon both fight one another for the quote above.right to rule over the world, with people having to choose one as their master and obtaining the supernatural power and wealth to fight for the chosen god's cause.
