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** Blitz's dream in the beginning of book 8, after we learn what it was about.
** When Blitz runs off in tears after seeing [[spoiler:Mikel and Deliza's newborn baby]] (and not of the happy variety) it seems off even for him, then the moment is quickly overshadowed by Credenza passing out. But then we find out that [[spoiler: Blitz, back when he was Anthony, had a wife who died giving birth.]] And then it's just... ''heartbreaking.''
** Blitz's dream in the beginning of book 8, after we learn what it was about.
** When Blitz runs off in tears after seeing [[spoiler:Mikel and Deliza's newborn baby]] (and not of the happy variety) it seems off even for him, then the moment is quickly overshadowed by Credenza passing out. But then we find out that [[spoiler: Blitz, back when he was Anthony, had a wife who died giving birth.]] And then it's just... ''heartbreaking.''
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* Spindle gently explaining to Clair [[spiler: Holly is dead.]] Like mama.
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* Spindle gently explaining to Clair [[spiler: [[spoiler: Holly is dead.]] Like mama.
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** Blitz's [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910270/book-8-page-11/ dream]] after we find out what it meant. Oh god, ''Chesska''.
** When Blitz runs off in tears after seeing [[spoiler:Mikal and Deliza's newborn baby]] (and not of the happy variety) it seems off even for him, then the moment is quickly overshadowed by Credenza passing out. But then we find out that [[spoiler: Blitz, back when he was Anthony, had a wife who died giving birth.]] And then it's just... ''heartbreaking.''
* In fact, the entirety of Book 8.
* [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910741/book-8-page-176/ Like mama.]]
* [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910657/book-8-page-96/ Tuff working out how to talk to Cassie]] After a somewhat embarrassing initial meeting, Tuff is trying to figure out how to approach Cassie again by talking to the Listing of Names. This immediately reminds poor Listy of Lucinda and how that [[LoveMakesYouEvil went so badly wrong]] and actually leads to a pretty funny moment. But still. All the feels for Listy.
* The scene beginning [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1237 here]]. KNULL.
* [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1911437/book-9-page-210/ The entire sequence]] where Snow {{Mind Rape}}s Credenza.
** When Blitz runs off in tears after seeing [[spoiler:Mikal and Deliza's newborn baby]] (and not of the happy variety) it seems off even for him, then the moment is quickly overshadowed by Credenza passing out. But then we find out that [[spoiler: Blitz, back when he was Anthony, had a wife who died giving birth.]] And then it's just... ''heartbreaking.''
* In fact, the entirety of Book 8.
* [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910741/book-8-page-176/ Like mama.]]
* [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910657/book-8-page-96/ Tuff working out how to talk to Cassie]] After a somewhat embarrassing initial meeting, Tuff is trying to figure out how to approach Cassie again by talking to the Listing of Names. This immediately reminds poor Listy of Lucinda and how that [[LoveMakesYouEvil went so badly wrong]] and actually leads to a pretty funny moment. But still. All the feels for Listy.
* The scene beginning [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1237 here]]. KNULL.
* [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1911437/book-9-page-210/ The entire sequence]] where Snow {{Mind Rape}}s Credenza.
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** Blitz's [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910270/book-8-page-11/ dream]] dream in the beginning of book 8, after we find out learn what it meant. Oh god, ''Chesska''.
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** When Blitz runs off in tears after seeing[[spoiler:Mikal [[spoiler:Mikel and Deliza's newborn baby]] (and not of the happy variety) it seems off even for him, then the moment is quickly overshadowed by Credenza passing out. But then we find out that [[spoiler: Blitz, back when he was Anthony, had a wife who died giving birth.]] And then it's just... ''heartbreaking.''
* In fact, the entirety of Book8.
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*[[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910741/book-8-page-176/ Spindle gently explaining to Clair [[spiler: Holly is dead.]] Like mama.]]
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*[[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910657/book-8-page-96/ Tuff working out how to talk to Cassie]] After a somewhat embarrassing initial meeting, Tuff is trying to figure out how to approach Cassie again by talking to the Listing of Names. This immediately reminds poor Listy of Lucinda and how that [[LoveMakesYouEvil went so badly wrong]] and actually leads to a pretty funny moment. But still. All the feels for Listy.
*The scene beginning [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1237 here]]. KNULL.
[[spoiler: Lucinda's death.]]
*[[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1911437/book-9-page-210/ The entire sequence]] sequence where Snow {{Mind Rape}}s Credenza.Credenza, trying to make her believe she's still a slave on his sub and ''the entire story'' never happened.
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* [[spoiler:[[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1989940/book-10-page-37/ [[spoiler: The Great Raven.]]]]Raven's eventual fate.]]
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* [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910657/book-8-page-96/ Tuff working out how to talk to Cassie]] After a somewhat embarrassing initial meeting, Tuff is trying to figure out how to approach Cassie again by talking to the Listing of Names. This immediately reminds poor Listy of Lucinda and how that [[LoveMakesYouEvil went so badly wrong wrong]] and actually leads to a pretty funny moment. But still. All the feels for Listy.
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--> ''I think I'm scared... I can't... I can't feel my wings.''
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* On a reread, you realize in Credenza's first interaction with Blitz, [[spoiler: It's actually Raven speaking, trapped in Blitz's broken mind and feeling emotion for the first time in his life. He's terrified, and he begs Credenza not to leave him alone.]]
** ''I think I'm scared...''
** ''I think I'm scared...''
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* [[spoiler:[[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1989940/book-10-page-37/ The Great Raven.]]]]
* [[spoiler:[[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1989940/book-10-page-37/ The Great Raven.]]]]
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* In fact, the entirety of Book 8.
* [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910741/book-8-page-176/ Like mama.]]
* [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910741/book-8-page-176/ Like mama.]]
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* [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1245 The entire sequence]] where Snow {{Mind Rape}}s Credenza.
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* [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1245 [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1911437/book-9-page-210/ The entire sequence]] where Snow {{Mind Rape}}s Credenza.
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* Blitz's [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910270/book-8-page-11/ dream]]. Oh god, ''Chesska''.
** HarsherInHindsight: When Blitz runs off in tears after seeing [[spoiler:Mikal and Deliza's newborn baby]] (and not of the happy variety) it seems off even for him, then the moment is quickly overshadowed by Credenza passing out. But then we find out that [[spoiler: Blitz, back when he was Anthony, had a wife who died giving birth.]] And then it's just... ''heartbreaking.''
** HarsherInHindsight: When Blitz runs off in tears after seeing [[spoiler:Mikal and Deliza's newborn baby]] (and not of the happy variety) it seems off even for him, then the moment is quickly overshadowed by Credenza passing out. But then we find out that [[spoiler: Blitz, back when he was Anthony, had a wife who died giving birth.]] And then it's just... ''heartbreaking.''
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* HarsherInHindsight
** Blitz's [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910270/book-8-page-11/dream]].dream]] after we find out what it meant. Oh god, ''Chesska''.
**HarsherInHindsight: When Blitz runs off in tears after seeing [[spoiler:Mikal and Deliza's newborn baby]] (and not of the happy variety) it seems off even for him, then the moment is quickly overshadowed by Credenza passing out. But then we find out that [[spoiler: Blitz, back when he was Anthony, had a wife who died giving birth.]] And then it's just... ''heartbreaking.''
** Blitz's [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910270/book-8-page-11/
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* "[[http://archipelagocomic.[[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1245 The entire sequence]] where Snow {{Mind Rape}}s Credenza.
--> '''Credenza:''' You'rereal!]] real! I know it! I found you on the beach! I saved you from Captain Syn! You have to be real! If...if you're not..."
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* "[[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1245 You're real! real!]] I know it! I found you on the beach! I saved you from Captain Syn! You have to be real! If...if you're not..."]]"
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* [[http://archipelagocomic."[[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1245 You're real! I know it! I found you on the beach! I saved you from Captain Syn! You have to be real! If...if you're not..."]]
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* "[[http://archipelagocomic.[[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1245 You're real! I know it! I found you on the beach! I saved you from Captain Syn! You have to be real! If...if you're not..."]]
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* [[http://archipelagocomic."[[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1245 "You're You're real! I know it!]] it! I found you on the beach! I saved you from Captain Syn! You have to be real! If...if you're not...""]]
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* The scene beginning [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1237 here]]. KNULL.
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* [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1245 "You're real! I know it!]] I found you on the beach! I saved you from Captain Syn! You have to be real! If...if you're not..."
* [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1245 "You're real! I know it!]] I found you on the beach! I saved you from Captain Syn! You have to be real! If...if you're not..."
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** * HarsherInHindsight: When Blitz runs off in tears after seeing [[spoiler:Mikal and Deliza's newborn baby]] (and not of the happy variety) it seems off even for him, then the moment is quickly overshadowed by Credenza passing out. But then we find out that [[spoiler: Blitz, back when he was Anthony, had a wife who died giving birth.]] And then it's just... ''heartbreaking.''
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** * HarsherInHindsight: When Blitz runs off in tears after seeing [[spoiler:Mikal and Deliza's newborn baby]] (and not of the happy variety) it seems off even for him, then the moment is quickly overshadowed by Credenza passing out. But then we find out that [[spoiler: Blitz, back when he was Anthony, had a wife who died giving birth.]] And then it's just... ''heartbreaking.''''
* The scene beginning [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1237 here]]. KNULL.
* The scene beginning [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1237 here]]. KNULL.
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* Blitz's [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1910270/book-8-page-11/ dream]]. Oh god, ''Chesska''.''Chesska''.
** * HarsherInHindsight: When Blitz runs off in tears after seeing [[spoiler:Mikal and Deliza's newborn baby]] (and not of the happy variety) it seems off even for him, then the moment is quickly overshadowed by Credenza passing out. But then we find out that [[spoiler: Blitz, back when he was Anthony, had a wife who died giving birth.]] And then it's just... ''heartbreaking.''
** * HarsherInHindsight: When Blitz runs off in tears after seeing [[spoiler:Mikal and Deliza's newborn baby]] (and not of the happy variety) it seems off even for him, then the moment is quickly overshadowed by Credenza passing out. But then we find out that [[spoiler: Blitz, back when he was Anthony, had a wife who died giving birth.]] And then it's just... ''heartbreaking.''
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