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* CallForward: The plot of "Grievances Arise" has the girls collaborate on a story for a writing competition, conflict arising when Sasha takes over the final draft, similar to when [[TheOwlHouseS1E11SenseAndInsensitivity King did the same to Luz in canon]].
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* CallForward: The plot of "Grievances Arise" has the girls collaborate on a story for a writing competition, conflict arising when Sasha takes over the final draft, similar to when [[TheOwlHouseS1E11SenseAndInsensitivity [[Recap/TheOwlHouseS1E11SenseAndInsensitivity King did the same to Luz in canon]].
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Luz might look up to Sasha and get along with Anne. But she and Marcy are much more alike in interests and temperament overall.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Luz might look up to Sasha and get along with Anne. But she and Marcy are much more alike in interests and temperament overall.overall, Anne even referring to them as "two peas in a pod".
* CallForward: The plot of "Grievances Arise" has the girls collaborate on a story for a writing competition, conflict arising when Sasha takes over the final draft, similar to when [[TheOwlHouseS1E11SenseAndInsensitivity King did the same to Luz in canon]].
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** While studying with Marcy, her mother muses that she has some concern about where her husband's job will lead, as there's a possibility they might have to move as their prospectsgrow.grow.
** The story outline Luz and Marcy present for the writing competition has characters based on each of the girls, Marcy's being an elf princess[=/=]adventurer, Luz's being a magic user, Sasha an orphan who joins and leads a viking tribe, and Anne a farmer.
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** The story outline Luz and Marcy present for the writing competition has characters based on each of the girls, Marcy's being an elf princess[=/=]adventurer, Luz's being a magic user, Sasha an orphan who joins and leads a viking tribe, and Anne a farmer.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Deconstructed with Sasha's contributions to the girls story, all of which Luz agrees are good suggestions. Her adding them ''after'' the others are finished outlining the plot and overruling Luz when she expresses her concerns rub the latter the wrong way, and contribute to her decision to change it again before submitting it (albeit she still implements said suggestions). This leads to friction between the friends, and in an interesting twist, Sasha herself agrees that she'd have avoided the worst of it all if she'd dropped the {{Jerkass}} part entirely.
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* FreudianExcuse: [=Iron117Prime=] specifically points to Sasha's parents' divorce as the root cause of her toxic behavior, noting how something as traumatic as that happening in early childhood (Sasha states that she was 3 or 4 when the divorce happened) would definitely lingering effects on a young person's development.
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* FreudianExcuse: [=Iron117Prime=] specifically points to Sasha's parents' divorce as the root cause of her toxic behavior, noting how something as traumatic as that happening in early childhood (Sasha states that she was 3 or 4 when the divorce happened) would definitely lingering effects on a young person's development. "Grievances Arise" make it even clearer with her comments on not liking change and that she's been taking care of herself since she was five.
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* AHouseDivided: "Grievances Arise" shows some friction forming between Sasha and Luz because the latter won't simply submit to the former's ControlFreak nature.
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** "Grievances Arise" begins with Luz and Marcy complaining about how the ''Cynthia Coven'' TV series was ScrewedByTheNetwork for not fitting the brand, and it then turns into a conversation about other cartoons cancelled too soon like ''[[WesternAnimation/TheSpectacularSpiderMan The Spectacular Tarantulad]]'', ''[[WesternAnimation/TheAvengersEarthsMightiestHeroes The Vengers: Earth's Mightiest Heroes]]'', and ''[[WesternAnimation/WolverineAndTheXMen Feral-Man and the Extreme-Men]]''. Luz says that the last show isn't quite as good as [[WesternAnimation/XMenTheAnimatedSeries the 90s Extreme-Men cartoon]], which is [[WesternAnimation/XMen97 getting a revival]], or [[WesternAnimation/XMenEvolution Evolution]] because it focused too much on [[Characters/MarvelComicsLogan Feral-Man]] at the expense of other characters like [[Characters/MarvelComicsCyclops Optic]]. [[ComicBook/FantasticFour The Fabulous Four]] and the ''[[Franchise/StarWars Galaxy Wars]]'' [[Film/StarWarsTheForceAwakens sequel]] [[Film/TheLastJedi tril]][[Film/TheRiseOfSkywalker ogy]] are also referenced.
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** The chapter "Grievances Arise" opens with Luz and Marcy having a conversation wherein they discuss various complaints they have about [[Creator/{{Disney}} Mouse Entertainment's]] handling of various ShowWithinAShow properties, including [[WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse a show getting cut short for not "fitting the brand"]], [[WesternAnimation/WolverineAndTheXMen another show being an inferior adaptation of a franchise]], and a [[Franchise/StarWars movie sequel trilogy being poorly executed]].
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** The game the girls were playing in Chapter 5, Ring World, is a clear reference to Halo.
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** The game the girls were playing in Chapter 5, Ring World, ''Ring World'', is a clear reference to Halo.''Franchise/{{Halo}}''.
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* BrilliantButLazy: Anne's status as the 'lazy' part of this trope is given more focus due to the prologue arc taking place prior to her CharacterDevelopment. She's athletic enough to easily win a tennis competition in school, but is typically such a slacker that said skill surprises Luz. And despite getting the worst grades out of the girls, she still proudly displays them and notes they're an improvement.
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* NiceMeanAndInBetween: Among the daughters of Sasha's mother and her new boyfriend, Molly Jo, Stacy, and Sasha fall into each respective category. Molly Jo is openly nice to Luz, and has apparently tried to stop Sasha from getting ''too'' reckless. Stacy is the mean on account of openly bullying Luz and several others. Sasha is the in-between, being an earnest friend to Anne, Marcy, and Luz, if [[ToxicFriendInfluence overly controlling of them]].
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* TakeThat: Luz makes a rather snide remark towards the ending of "War of Thrones", though it's somewhat obvious judging from the dialogue what [[Series/GameOfThrones show]] the story is taking a jab at:
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** Marcy's story at the Scare Dare Challenge is influenced by ''Film/Frankenstein1931'' and ''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney'', while Sasha's draws heavily on ''Franchise/FiveNightsAtFreddys''.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Luz might look up to Sasha and get along with Anne. But she and Marcy are much more alike in interests and temperament overall.
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** According to Marcy, the Sharpes' once tried to audition for a dance, but were rejected for being "[[Franchise/BackToTheFuture too darn loud]]".
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* AgeLift: The ''Amphibia'' Trio are thirteen from the get go and attending high school to justify them being in the same class as Luz.
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* AffectionateNickname: Marcy gives Luz the nickname "Luzura" as a reference to their shared love of the Azura books.
* AgeLift: The ''Amphibia''Trio trio are thirteen from the get go and attending high school to justify them being in the same class as Luz.
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* TruceZone: Sasha and Stacey can't stand each other, or the fact that the former's mom is dating the latter's dad, but for the sake of not upsetting either parent they have a "Switzerland agreement" that whenever they have to spend time in the same house, they just ignore each other.
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* TruceZone: Sasha and Stacey Stacy can't stand each other, or the fact that the former's mom is dating the latter's dad, but for the sake of not upsetting either parent they have a "Switzerland agreement" that whenever they have to spend time in the same house, they just ignore each other.
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** Luz demonstrates her piano-playing skills by playing [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=akHMQOgGrd8 the theme song]] from ''[[Manga/BlackClover Dark Clover]]''. Afterwards, Anne mentions how the water princess [[note]] [[Characters/BlackCloverNoelleSilva Noelle Silva]]
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** Luz demonstrates her piano-playing skills by playing [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=akHMQOgGrd8 the theme song]] from ''[[Manga/BlackClover Dark Clover]]''. Afterwards, Anne mentions how the water princess [[note]] [[Characters/BlackCloverNoelleSilva Noelle Silva]]
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** Luz demonstrates her piano-playing skills by playing [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=akHMQOgGrd8 the theme song]] from ''[[Manga/BlackClover Dark Clover]]''. Afterwards, Anne mentions how the water princess is her favorite character because she's a {{Tsundere}} much like Sasha.
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** Luz demonstrates her piano-playing skills by playing [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=akHMQOgGrd8 the theme song]] from ''[[Manga/BlackClover Dark Clover]]''. Afterwards, Anne mentions how the water princess [[note]] [[Characters/BlackCloverNoelleSilva Noelle Silva]]
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** Molly Jo appears in Chapter 4, way earlier than her initial appearance in "[[Recap/AmphibiaS3E12SpiderSprig Spider-Sprig]]".
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** Similarly, the Boonchuys' loyal customer Ned shows up in the same chapter as them, whereas in canon he first appears in the Season 3 episode "[[Recap/AmphibiaS3E04ThaiFeud Thai Food]]".
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** Similarly, the Boonchuys' loyal customer Ned shows up in the same chapter as them, whereas in canon he first appears in the Season 3 episode "[[Recap/AmphibiaS3E04ThaiFeud Thai Food]]".Feud]]".
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* ChildOfTwoWorlds: An unnamed baby from the Demon Realm, whose mother is a witch who dies fighting the invading Newtopians, is adopted by Newtopian general Gradina. King Aldrich, with some encouragement from The Core, suggests using the baby to learn more about the Demon Realm's magic capabilities.
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* ChildOfTwoWorlds: An unnamed baby from the Demon Realm, whose mother is a witch who dies fighting the invading Newtopians, is adopted by Newtopian general Gradina.Gradina, Barrel's biological mother. King Aldrich, with some encouragement from The Core, suggests using the baby to learn more about the Demon Realm's magic capabilities.
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** Canonically, Anne's mother didn't appear until several flashbacks in Season 2, and along with Anne's father didn't appear in person until Season 3. Here, they both appear in the story's prologue arc, which is set before Season 1.
** Similarly, the Boonchuys' loyal customer Ned shows up in the same chapter as them, whereas in canon he first appears in the Season 3 episode "[[Recap/AmphibiaS3E04ThaiFeud Thai Food]]".
** Similarly, the Boonchuys' loyal customer Ned shows up in the same chapter as them, whereas in canon he first appears in the Season 3 episode "[[Recap/AmphibiaS3E04ThaiFeud Thai Food]]".
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* CommonalityConnection: Luz and Marcy quickly bond over a love of Azura, and fantasy in general.
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** Camilla Noceda and Oum Boonchuy bond over their shared pasts as immigrants.
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** Camilla Noceda and Oum Boonchuy bond over their shared pasts as immigrants.
* FireBreathingDiner: Played with when Luz tries the green curry at Thai Go. She's able to last for an impressive amount of time before the spiciness gets to be too much for her, at which point it's noted that fire practically bursts out of her mouth and she has to quickly down multiple glasses of ice water to deal with it.
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--> '''Marcy''': I'm not sure that one really counts. [[OvertookTheManga The series caught up with the books pretty quickly]] so they had to kinda go in a different direction. [[AudienceAlienatingEnding Not to mention the final season]]..."\\
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--> '''Marcy''': I'm not sure that one really counts. [[OvertookTheManga The series caught up with the books pretty quickly]] so they had to kinda go in a different direction. [[AudienceAlienatingEnding Not to mention the final season]]..."\\\\
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** The witch rider controlling Stormchaser is named [[WesternAnimation/{{Fantasia}} Yen]][[VideoGame/KingdomHearts sid]].
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Despite being her pre-CharacterDevelopment self, and thus a bit of an abrasive ControlFreak, Sasha still feels sympathy for Luz upon learning of her FriendlessBackground.
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* FanArt: One of the reviewers, CMR Rosa, not only commissioned a cover picture but a whole ''gallery folder'' for character pictures from this story [[https://www.deviantart.com/crsto20/gallery/90193472/fanfiction-the-owl-house-of-amphibia here]].
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* AdaptationalExpansion: The girls taking the "BFFS" photo is showcased in the second chapter, as a celebration of their first day of high school.
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* AgeLift: The ''Amphibia'' Trio are thirteen from the get go and attending high school to justify them being in the same class as Luz.
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--> '''Luz''': Ugh, tell me about it! So many important plot points and world building, all thrown out the window! They even made [[Characters/GameOfThronesDaenerysTargaryen the dragon queen]] the bad guy! [[AssPull That came out of nowhere]]! They should have had at least one season to build on that!
--> '''Luz''': Ugh, tell me about it! So many important plot points and world building, all thrown out the window! They even made [[Characters/GameOfThronesDaenerysTargaryen the dragon queen]] the bad guy! [[AssPull That came out of nowhere]]! They should have had at least one season to build on that!
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'''Luz''': Ugh, tell me about it! So many important plot points and world building, all thrown out the window! They even made [[Characters/GameOfThronesDaenerysTargaryen the dragon queen]] the bad guy! [[AssPull That came out of nowhere]]! They should have had at least one season to build on that!
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'''Luz''': Ugh, tell me about it! So many important plot points and world building, all thrown out the window! They even made [[Characters/GameOfThronesDaenerysTargaryen the dragon queen]] the bad guy! [[AssPull That came out of nowhere]]! They should have had at least one season to build on that!
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* AdaptationalAngstDowngrade: At the start of the series, Luz is a friendless girl with no social circles. Here, while there are some doubts, the ''Amphibia'' trio accept her in, with Luz striking up a relationship with Marcy.
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* ArtisticLicenseArt: Marcy makes a haiku about Azura, but the middle line of the poem has eight syllables; traditional haiku has the middle line contain seven.
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