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** Two FNF mods are referenced in the Hall of Mirrors in Chapter 4: VideoGame/FridayNightFunkinCorruption and [[https://gamebanana.com/mods/42724 B-Side Remixes]].
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** Two FNF mods are referenced in the Hall of Mirrors in Chapter 4: VideoGame/FridayNightFunkinCorruption ''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkinCorruption'' and [[https://gamebanana.''[[https://gamebanana.com/mods/42724 B-Side Remixes]].Remixes]]''.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Downplayed with Skid and Pump. In Spooky Month proper, they are both [[FearlessFool fearless fools]] who's [[BornLucky insane luck]] is probably the only reason why they're still safe and sound. Here, they're still kids and have some sort of innocence, but they're not stupid enough to not think that Monster wants to eat them.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Downplayed with Skid and Pump. In Spooky Month proper, they are both [[FearlessFool fearless fools]] who's whose [[BornLucky insane luck]] is probably the only reason why they're still safe and sound. Here, they're still kids and have some sort of innocence, but they're not stupid enough to not think that Monster wants to eat them.
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: While Monster has always been an EldritchAbomination in canon, [[spoiler: here he WasOnceAMan, and only became a monster when he fell down the elevator shaft while wearing his monster costume.]]
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Downplayed with Skid and Pump. In Spooky Month proper, they are both {{Fearless Fool}}s who's [[BornLucky insane luck]] is probably the only reason why they're still safe and sound. Here, they're still kids and have some sort of innocence, but they're not stupid enough to not think that Monster wants to eat them.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Downplayed with Skid and Pump. In Spooky Month proper, they are both {{Fearless Fool}}s who's [[BornLucky insane luck]] is probably the only reason why they're still safe and sound. Here, they're still kids and have some sort of innocence, but they're not stupid enough to not think that Monster wants to eat them.
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: While Monster has always been an EldritchAbomination in canon, [[spoiler: here [[spoiler:here he WasOnceAMan, and only became a monster when he fell down the elevator shaft while wearing his monster costume.]]
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Downplayed with Skid and Pump. In Spooky Month proper, they are both{{Fearless Fool}}s [[FearlessFool fearless fools]] who's [[BornLucky insane luck]] is probably the only reason why they're still safe and sound. Here, they're still kids and have some sort of innocence, but they're not stupid enough to not think that Monster wants to eat them.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Downplayed with Skid and Pump. In Spooky Month proper, they are both
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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler: Pump's father. He willingly signed his own child up in an experiment in a dangerous laboratory, only for him to get killed by a [[EldritchAbomination lemon-headed monstrosity]] in that same lab.]]
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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler: Pump's [[spoiler:Pump's father. He willingly signed his own child up in an experiment in a dangerous laboratory, only for him to get killed by a [[EldritchAbomination lemon-headed monstrosity]] in that same lab.]]
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** [[spoiler: This was [[WasOnceAMan Monster's]] eventual fate once he fell down the elevator shaft. The lemon head of his mascot costume became his actual head.]]
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Skid becomes this at the end of Chapter 10. His mind is broken and he shows virtually no remorse when he starts cutting the roof of Pump's mouth open.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: While Spooky Month has always been based off of Halloween, the horror aspects of the holiday were mostly PlayedForLaughs. Here, not so much. [[spoiler: A prime example of this being a brainwashed Skid mutilating Pump in Chapter 12, slicing the roof of his mouth open.]]
* DisappearedDad: Just like in canon, Skid's dad is nowhere to be found. [[spoiler: Double]] Subverted with Pump's dad. He is alive, but he doesn't really pay attention to his son... [[spoiler: Until Chapter 11, when Lila witnesses Monster kill him.]]
* EldritchAbomination: Monster. [[spoiler: He wasn't always one, however.]]
* DisappearedDad: Just like in canon, Skid's dad is nowhere to be found. [[spoiler: Double]] Subverted with Pump's dad. He is alive, but he doesn't really pay attention to his son... [[spoiler: Until Chapter 11, when Lila witnesses Monster kill him.]]
* EldritchAbomination: Monster. [[spoiler: He wasn't always one, however.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: While Spooky Month has always been based off of Halloween, the horror aspects of the holiday were mostly PlayedForLaughs. Here, not so much. [[spoiler: A [[spoiler:A prime example of this being a brainwashed Skid mutilating Pump in Chapter 12, slicing the roof of his mouth open.]]
* DisappearedDad: Just like in canon, Skid's dad is nowhere to be found.[[spoiler: Double]] [[spoiler:Double]] Subverted with Pump's dad. He is alive, but he doesn't really pay attention to his son... [[spoiler: Until [[spoiler:Until Chapter 11, when Lila witnesses Monster kill him.]]
* EldritchAbomination: Monster.[[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He wasn't always one, however.]]
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* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In Chapter 12, Pump delivers one to Skid. Justified, as he was doing it in self defense.]]
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: [[spoiler: In Chapter 11, Monster says this to Lila after she witnesses him killing Pump's father.]]
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-->[[spoiler: "'''Keep this between us, else you’ll end up like the orange one’s father,'''" the lemon threatened, "'''Understood?'''"]]
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: [[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In Chapter 11, Monster says this to Lila after she witnesses him killing Pump's father.]]
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Monster calls Skid [[spoiler: "Lemondrop"]], while he calls Pump [[spoiler: "Stardrop"]].
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Monster calls Skid [[spoiler: "Lemondrop"]], [[spoiler:"Lemondrop"]], while he calls Pump [[spoiler: "Stardrop"]].[[spoiler:"Stardrop"]].
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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler: Pump's father. He willingly signed his own child up in an experiment in a dangerous laboratory, only for him to get killed by a [[EldritchAbomination lemon-headed monstrosity]] in that same lab.]]
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* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: In Chapter 12, Pump delivers one to Skid in self defense.]]
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-->[[spoiler: "'''Keep this between us, else you’ll end up like the orange one’s father,''' ” the lemon threatened, "'''Understood?'''"]]
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-->[[spoiler: "'''Keep this between us, else you’ll end up like the orange one’s father,''' ” father,'''" the lemon threatened, "'''Understood?'''"]]
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[[spoiler: [[RememberTheNewGuy Susie]] was trying to call.]]
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-->[[spoiler: Mister Lemon went into another room & looted Pump’s pockets. He found bandaids, loose change, & an [=MnM=]’s packet. He was about to organize the items when he heard a ringtone play. He turned to a basket of phones he had retrieved to try & see who it was from, & saw that Pump’s father’s phone had yet to run out of battery.]]\\
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-->[[spoiler: Mister Lemon went into another room & looted Pump’s pockets. He found bandaids, loose change, & an MnM’s [=MnM=]’s packet. He was about to organize the items when he heard a ringtone play. He turned to a basket of phones he had retrieved to try & see who it was from, & saw that Pump’s father’s phone had yet to run out of battery.]]\\
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NoPartyLikeADonnerParty: [[spoiler: Part of Skid's brainwashing by Monster involved forcing him to eat a human kidney. Not like he ''wanted'' to.]]
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* GratuitousSpanish: There are quite a few instances where Pump speaks Spanish in the fanfic. All a reference to [[Creator/SrPelo his creator]].
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* GratuitousSpanish: There are quite a few instances where Pump speaks Spanish in the fanfic. fanfic, most notably in Chapter 9. All a reference to [[Creator/SrPelo his creator]].creator]].
* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: In Chapter 12, Pump delivers one to Skid in self defense.]]
* HopeSpot: [[spoiler: Skid may have been driven crazy by Monster, but Pump knew that his friend wouldn't hurt him, even after he cut off the roots that had been bothering Pump for so long... except [[BaitAndSwitch he did]].]]
* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: In Chapter 12, Pump delivers one to Skid in self defense.]]
* HopeSpot: [[spoiler: Skid may have been driven crazy by Monster, but Pump knew that his friend wouldn't hurt him, even after he cut off the roots that had been bothering Pump for so long... except [[BaitAndSwitch he did]].]]
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* ImAHumanitarian:
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** Enforced in Skid's case [[spoiler: Part of his brainwashing by Monster involved forcing him to eat a human kidney. Not like he ''wanted'' to.]]
** Just like in canon, Monster eats humans.
** Enforced in Skid's case [[spoiler: Part of his brainwashing by Monster involved forcing him to eat a human kidney. Not like he ''wanted'' to.]]
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'''All spoilers for Chapters 1-5 will be unmarked.'''
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* BreakTheCutie: Skid and Pump both experience horrific events while they're both in the laboratory. It gets worse once they meet Monster.
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* HypnoticEyes: [[spoiler: Pump still has his [[GlowingEyes glowing blue eyes]] from his and Skid's encounter with the Eyes of the Universe. He tries to use this to his advantage against Monster, but fails.]]
* ImAHumanitarian: Enforced. [[spoiler: Part of Skid's brainwashing by Monster involved forcing him to eat a human kidney. Not like he ''wanted'' to.]]
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* HypnoticEyes: [[spoiler: Pump still has his [[GlowingEyes glowing blue eyes]] from his and Skid's encounter with the Eyes of the Universe. He Universe; he even hypnotizes Skid in Chapter 7, albeit accidentally. In the next chapter, he tries to use this to his advantage against Monster, but fails.]]
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** Enforced in Skid's case [[spoiler: Part ofSkid's his brainwashing by Monster involved forcing him to eat a human kidney. Not like he ''wanted'' to.]]]]
* JarPotty: In Chapter 6, Skid ends up peeing into the soup in order to stop Monster from eating them.
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* JarPotty: In Chapter 6, Skid ends up peeing into the soup in order to stop Monster from eating them.
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* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch: Done by [[spoiler: Pump]] in Chapter 8:
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-->[[spoiler: Pump]]: "Why don't you pick on someone your own size! ''Bitch!''"
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* TermsOfEndangerment: Monster calls Skid [[spoiler: "Lemondrop"]], while he calls Pump [[spoiler: "Stardrop"]].
* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch: Done by[[spoiler: Pump]] Pump in Chapter 8:
-->[[spoiler: Pump]]: -->Pump: "Why don't you pick on someone your own size! ''Bitch!''"
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…& a lime monster behind them?
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…& a lime monster behind them?them?
** The last lines of Chapter 15:
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[[spoiler: [[RememberTheNewGuy Susie]] was trying to call.]]
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-->[[spoiler: Mister Lemon went into another room & looted Pump’s pockets. He found bandaids, loose change, & an MnM’s packet. He was about to organize the items when he heard a ringtone play. He turned to a basket of phones he had retrieved to try & see who it was from, & saw that Pump’s father’s phone had yet to run out of battery.]]\\
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: [[spoiler: In Chapter 11, Monster says this to Lila after she witnesses him killing Pump's father.]]
-->[[spoiler: "'''Keep this between us, else you’ll end up like the orange one’s father,''' ” the lemon threatened, "'''Understood?'''"]]
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* FreeRangeChildren: Deconstructed. Skid and Pump find themselves stuck inside of an abandoned laboratory and are therefore free to do whatever they like. However, they are quickly found by a [[EldritchAbomination lemon-headed monster]] who wants to eat them. As the children find themselves in danger time and again, they realize that none of this would have happened if they went inside the right elevator.
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* MortonsFork: In the story, Skid and Pump change into [[BecomingTheCostume real versions of their Halloween costumes]]. The other option[[note]]the experiment[[/note]] is no better, given the laboratory's [[NoOshaCompliance health and safety violations]].
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* HypnoticEyes: [[spoiler: Pump still has his [[GlowingEyes glowing blue eyes]] from his and Skid's encounter with Eyes. He tries to use this to his advantage against Monster, but fails.]]
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* HypnoticEyes: [[spoiler: Pump still has his [[GlowingEyes glowing blue eyes]] from his and Skid's encounter with Eyes.the Eyes of the Universe. He tries to use this to his advantage against Monster, but fails.]]
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* DisappearedDad: Just like in canon, Skid's dad is nowhere to be found. Double Subverted with Pump's dad. He is alive, but he doesn't really pay attention to his son... [[spoiler: Until Chapter 11, when Lila sees Monster kill him.]]
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* DisappearedDad: Just like in canon, Skid's dad is nowhere to be found. Double [[spoiler: Double]] Subverted with Pump's dad. He is alive, but he doesn't really pay attention to his son... [[spoiler: Until Chapter 11, when Lila sees witnesses Monster kill him.]]
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* MissingMom: Pump's mother is only mentioned in his deepest desire. Other than that, there seems to be no indication of her existence in the story.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: In Spooky Month proper, Pump and Skid have [[TheDividual near-identical personalities]]. Here, Pump is significantly [[ShrinkingViolet more timid and reserved]] that Skid, when he is apprehensive about the experiment.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: In Spooky Month proper, Pump and Skid have [[TheDividual near-identical personalities]]. Here, Pump is significantly [[ShrinkingViolet more timid and reserved]] that Skid, when and he is more apprehensive about the experiment.experiment than his friend.
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* WasOnceAMan: Skid and Pump [[spoiler: and Monster, as revealed in Chapter 11]] after falling down the elevator shaft.
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* WasOnceAMan: Skid and Pump [[spoiler: and Monster, as revealed in Chapter 11]] after falling down the elevator shaft.shaft.
* WhamLine: The last lines of Chapter 4, showing us who our BigBad is:
--> The mirror to the right seemed to be the most mediocre of the three. It just showed [[ShoutOut Skid with orange bones & Pump with a white pumpkin…]]\\
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--> The mirror to the right seemed to be the most mediocre of the three. It just showed [[ShoutOut Skid with orange bones & Pump with a white pumpkin…]]\\
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]]'' [[note]][[https://www.wattpad.com/story/259577259-it-all-started-with-an-osha-violation Wattpad link]][[/note]] is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' {{Crossover}} DarkFic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]]'' [[note]][[https://www.wattpad.com/story/259577259-it-all-started-with-an-osha-violation Wattpad link]][[/note]] is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' {{Crossover}} DarkFic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
[=WokaDokaDee=]]] (known as [[https://www.wattpad.com/user/StarberrySpider666 StarberrySpider666]] on Wattpad).