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* BloodierAndGorier: So much, compared to the source material. Spooky Month is rated T on Website/{{Newgrounds}}, and there isn't much blood. This fic goes out of its way to include graphic descriptions of violence, especially later on.
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* BloodierAndGorier: So much, compared to the source material. Spooky Month is rated T on Website/{{Newgrounds}}, Platform/{{Newgrounds}}, and there isn't much blood. This fic goes out of its way to include graphic descriptions of violence, especially later on.
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* AdultFear: Skid and Pump are being signed up for an experiment at a laboratory with virtually NoOshaCompliance. Their parents don't know what is inside of that laboratory, and Skid's mother doesn't know what will happen to her son, if at all. Invoked in Chapter 11.
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** In Chapter 5, Monster mentions the [[IHaveManyNames many names he has gone by]]: [[FanNickname Lemon Demon]], Lemon Monster, LD, Neil Cicierega, and just "[[ADogNamedDog Monster]]". Skid eventually settles with "[[WebOriginal/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics Mr. Lemon]]", however.
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** In Chapter 5, Monster mentions the [[IHaveManyNames many names he has gone by]]: [[FanNickname Lemon Demon]], Lemon Monster, LD, Neil Cicierega, and just "[[ADogNamedDog Monster]]". Skid eventually settles with "[[WebOriginal/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics "[[WebAnimation/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics Mr. Lemon]]", however.
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: While Monster has always been an EldritchAbomination in canon, [[spoiler:here he WasOnceAMan, and only became a monster when he fell down the elevator shaft while wearing his monster costume.]]
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: While Monster has always been an EldritchAbomination a HumanoidAbomination in canon, [[spoiler:here he WasOnceAMan, and only became a monster when he fell down the elevator shaft while wearing his monster costume.]]
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* EldritchAbomination: Monster. [[spoiler:He wasn't always one, however.]]
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* HumanoidAbomination: Monster. [[spoiler:He wasn't always one, however.]]
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* DisappearedDad: Just like in canon, Skid's dad is nowhere to be found. [[spoiler:Double]] Subverted with Pump's dad. He is alive, but he doesn't really pay attention to his son... [[spoiler:Until Chapter 11, when Lila witnesses Monster kill him.]]
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* DisappearedDad: DisappearedDad:
** Just like in canon, Skid's dad is nowhere to befound. found.
** [[spoiler:Double]] Subverted with Pump's dad. He is alive, but he doesn't really pay attention to his son... [[spoiler:Until Chapter 11, when Lila witnesses Monster kill him.]]
** Just like in canon, Skid's dad is nowhere to be
** [[spoiler:Double]] Subverted with Pump's dad. He is alive, but he doesn't really pay attention to his son... [[spoiler:Until Chapter 11, when Lila witnesses Monster kill him.]]
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* EldritchLocation: Downplayed with Monster's cave/hideout. In it houses an entire underground "house", complete with a kitchen and a bathroom of all things.
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Updated with the release of Chapter 16 (finally)
* AmbiguouslyAbsentParent: Downplayed with Pump's mother, as she is only seen in his deepest desire, with no other indication of her existence in the story.
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* MissingMom: Implied with Pump's mother, as she is only seen in his deepest desire. Other than that, there seems to be no indication of her existence in the story.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Pump's sister is named "Susie" in this story.]]
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* RememberTheNewGuy: [[spoiler:A girl named Susie was only mentioned in the last line of Chapter 15. She's soon revealed to be Pump's sister in the next chapter.]]
