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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]]'' is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' {{Crossover}} DarkFic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]]'' [[note]][[https://www.wattpad.com/story/259577259-it-all-started-with-an-osha-violation Wattpad link]][[/note]] is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' {{Crossover}} DarkFic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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* GratuitousSpanish: There are quite a few instances where Pump speaks Spanish in the fanfic.
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* GratuitousSpanish: There are quite a few instances where Pump speaks Spanish in the fanfic. All a reference to [[Creator/SrPelo his creator]].
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* GratuitousSpanish: There are quite a few instances where Pump speaks Spanish in the fanfic.
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* AbusiveParents: Downplayed with Pump's parents. They're simply neglectful to him, and they don't really pay any attention to him. May be played straighter with his dad, however, since he signed his son up for an experiment in a laboratory that [[NoOshaCompliance should have been shut down years ago]].
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* AbusiveParents: Downplayed with Pump's parents. They're They simply neglectful to him, and they [[ParentalNeglect don't really pay any attention to him.him]]. May be played straighter with his dad, however, since he signed his son up for an experiment in a laboratory that [[NoOshaCompliance should have been shut down years ago]].
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Downplayed with Skid and Pump. In Spooky Month proper, they are both {{Fearless Fool}}s who's [[BornLucky insane luck]] is probably the only reason why they're still safe and sound. Here, they're still kids and have some sort of innocence, but they're not stupid enough to not think that Monster wants to eat them..
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Downplayed with Skid and Pump. In Spooky Month proper, they are both {{Fearless Fool}}s who's [[BornLucky insane luck]] is probably the only reason why they're still safe and sound. Here, they're still kids and have some sort of innocence, but they're not stupid enough to not think that Monster wants to eat them..them.
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* LaughingMad: [[spoiler: Skid does this after brutally mutilating Pump.]] Doubles as CryLaughing
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* LaughingMad: [[spoiler: Skid does this after brutally mutilating Pump.]] Doubles as CryLaughingCryLaughing.
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* AbusiveParents: Downplayed with Pump's parents. They're simply neglectful to him, and they don't really pay any attention to him. May be played straighter with his dad, however, since he signed his son up for an experiment in a laboratory that [[NoOshaCompliance should have been shut down years ago]].
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Downplayed with Skid and Pump. They're still kids and have some sort of innocence, but they're not stupid enough to not think that Monster wants to eat them..
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Downplayed with Skid and Pump. They're In Spooky Month proper, they are both {{Fearless Fool}}s who's [[BornLucky insane luck]] is probably the only reason why they're still safe and sound. Here, they're still kids and have some sort of innocence, but they're not stupid enough to not think that Monster wants to eat them..
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]]'' is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]]'' is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' Crossover Fic {{Crossover}} DarkFic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]]'' is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin[='=]' Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]]'' is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin[='=]' ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]]'' is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin[='=]'' Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]]'' is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin[='=]'' ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin[='=]' Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]]'' is a WebAnimation/SpookyMonth/VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]]'' is a WebAnimation/SpookyMonth/VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin[='=]'' Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Downplayed with Skid and Pump. They're still kids and have some sort of innocence, but they're not stupid enough to not think that Monster wants to eat them..
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* EldritchAbomination: Monster. [[spoiler: He wasn't always one, however.]]
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: While Monster has always been an EldritchAbomination in canon, [[spoiler: here he WasOnceAMan, and only became a monster when he fell down the elevator shaft while wearing his monster costume.]]
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* LaughingMad: [[spoiler: Skid does this after brutally mutilating Pump.]] Doubles as CryLaughing
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* HypnoticEyes: [[spoiler: Pump retained these from his and Skid's encounter with Eyes. He tries to use this to his advantage against Monster, but fails.]]
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** While in the elevator, Skid and Pump see the Eyes of the Universe. It doesn't hear Pump say, "hello", however.
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* WasOnceAMan: [[spoiler: Revealed to be Monster in Chapter 11.]]
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* WasOnceAMan: Skid and Pump [[spoiler: Revealed to be Monster and Monster, as revealed in Chapter 11.]]11]] after falling down the elevator shaft.
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* ImAHumanitarian: [[spoiler: Part of Skid's brainwashing by Monster involved forcing him to eat a human kidney. Not like he ''wanted'' to.]]
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* ImAHumanitarian: Enforced. [[spoiler: Part of Skid's brainwashing by Monster involved forcing him to eat a human kidney. Not like he ''wanted'' to.]]
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** While in the elevator, Skid's skeleton costume fuses with his bones, while Pump's head turns into a pumpkin.
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** While in the elevator, Skid's skeleton costume fuses with his bones, while Pump's head turns into becomes a pumpkin.
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** While in the elevator, Skid becomes an actual skeleton, while Pump's head turns into a pumpkin.
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** While in the elevator, Skid becomes an actual skeleton, Skid's skeleton costume fuses with his bones, while Pump's head turns into a pumpkin.
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* BecomingTheCostume: PlayedForHorror. While in the elevator, Skid becomes an actual skeleton, while Pump turns into a pumpkin.
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* BecomingTheCostume: PlayedForHorror. PlayedForHorror in both instances.
** While in the elevator, Skid becomes an actual skeleton, whilePump Pump's head turns into a pumpkin.pumpkin.
** [[spoiler: This was [[WasOnceAMan Monster's]] eventual fate once he fell down the elevator shaft. The lemon head of his mascot costume became his actual head.]]
** While in the elevator, Skid becomes an actual skeleton, while
** [[spoiler: This was [[WasOnceAMan Monster's]] eventual fate once he fell down the elevator shaft. The lemon head of his mascot costume became his actual head.]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: How did Monster end up in that cavern? [[spoiler: In Chapter 11, Lila reads an article about a horrific accident. The victim was a college student wearing a lemon-headed mascot costume.]]
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-->[[spoiler: Pump]]: "Why don't you pick on someone your own size! ''Bitch!''"''Bitch!''"
* WasOnceAMan: [[spoiler: Revealed to be Monster in Chapter 11.]]
* WasOnceAMan: [[spoiler: Revealed to be Monster in Chapter 11.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: Skid and Pump both experience in horrific events while they're both in the laboratory. It gets worse once they meet Monster.
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* BreakTheCutie: Skid and Pump both experience in horrific events while they're both in the laboratory. It gets worse once they meet Monster.
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'''All spoilers for Chapters 1-4 will be unmarked.'''
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* BreakTheCutie: Skid and Pump both experience in horrific events while they're both in the laboratory. [[spoiler: It gets worse once they meet Monster.]]
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* BigBad: Monster.
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** In Chapter 5, [[spoiler: Monster mentions the [[IHaveManyNames many names he has gone by]]: [[FanNickname Lemon Demon]], Lemon Monster, LD, Neil Cicierega, and just "[[ADogNamedDog Monster]]". Skid eventually settles with "[[WebOriginal/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics Mr. Lemon]]", however.]]
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-->[[spoiler: Pump]]: "Why don't you pick on someone your own size! ''Bitch!''"
* ToServeMan: [[spoiler: Part of Skid's brainwashing by Monster involved forcing him to eat a human kidney. Not like he ''wanted'' to.]]''Bitch!''"
* ToServeMan: [[spoiler: Part of Skid's brainwashing by Monster involved forcing him to eat a human kidney. Not like he ''wanted'' to.]]
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-->[[spoiler: Pump]]: "Why don't you pick on someone your own size! ''Bitch!''"''Bitch!''"
* ToServeMan: [[spoiler: Part of Skid's brainwashing by Monster involved forcing him to eat a human kidney. Not like he ''wanted'' to.]]
* ToServeMan: [[spoiler: Part of Skid's brainwashing by Monster involved forcing him to eat a human kidney. Not like he ''wanted'' to.]]
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** In Chapter 5, [[spoiler: Monster mentions the many names he has gone by: [[FanNickname Lemon Demon]], Lemon Monster, LD, Neil Cicierega, and just "[[ADogNamedDog Monster]]". Skid eventually settles with "[[WebOriginal/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics Mr. Lemon]]", however.]]
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** In Chapter 5, [[spoiler: Monster mentions the [[IHaveManyNames many names he has gone by: by]]: [[FanNickname Lemon Demon]], Lemon Monster, LD, Neil Cicierega, and just "[[ADogNamedDog Monster]]". Skid eventually settles with "[[WebOriginal/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics Mr. Lemon]]", however.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: Skid and Pump are both involved in horrific events while they're both in the laboratory. [[spoiler: It gets worse once they meet Monster.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: Skid and Pump are both involved experience in horrific events while they're both in the laboratory. [[spoiler: It gets worse once they meet Monster.]]
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** In Chapter 5, [[spoiler: Monster mentions the many names it has gone by: [[FanNickname Lemon Demon]], Lemon Monster, LD, Neil Cicierega, and just "[[ADogNamedDog Monster]]". Skid eventually settles with "[[WebOriginal/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics Mr. Lemon]]", however.]]
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** In Chapter 5, [[spoiler: Monster mentions the many names it he has gone by: [[FanNickname Lemon Demon]], Lemon Monster, LD, Neil Cicierega, and just "[[ADogNamedDog Monster]]". Skid eventually settles with "[[WebOriginal/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics Mr. Lemon]]", however.]]
