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* DarkerAndEdgier: While Spooky Month has always been based off of Halloween, the horror aspects of the holiday were mostly played for laughs. Here, not so much. [[spoiler: A prime example of this being a brainwashed Skid mutilating Pump in Chapter 12, slicing the roof of his mouth open.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: While Spooky Month has always been based off of Halloween, the horror aspects of the holiday were mostly played for laughs.PlayedForLaughs. Here, not so much. [[spoiler: A prime example of this being a brainwashed Skid mutilating Pump in Chapter 12, slicing the roof of his mouth open.]]
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* ShoutOut: Two FNF mods are referenced in the Hall of Mirrors in Chapter 4: VideoGame/FridayNightFunkinCorruption and [[https://gamebanana.com/mods/42724 B-Side Remixes]].
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Two FNF mods are referenced in the Hall of Mirrors in Chapter 4: VideoGame/FridayNightFunkinCorruption and [[https://gamebanana.com/mods/42724 B-SideRemixes]].Remixes]].
** In Chapter 5, [[spoiler: Monster mentions the many names it has gone by: [[FanNickname Lemon Demon]], Lemon Monster, LD, Neil Cicierega, and just "[[ADogNamedDog Monster]]". Skid eventually settles with "[[WebOriginal/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics Mr. Lemon]]", however.]]
** Two FNF mods are referenced in the Hall of Mirrors in Chapter 4: VideoGame/FridayNightFunkinCorruption and [[https://gamebanana.com/mods/42724 B-Side
** In Chapter 5, [[spoiler: Monster mentions the many names it has gone by: [[FanNickname Lemon Demon]], Lemon Monster, LD, Neil Cicierega, and just "[[ADogNamedDog Monster]]". Skid eventually settles with "[[WebOriginal/FridayNightFunkinWithLyrics Mr. Lemon]]", however.]]
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* ShoutOut: Two FNF mods are referenced in the Hall of Mirrors in Chapter 4: VideoGame/FridayNightFunkinCorruption and [[https://gamebanana.com/mods/42724 B-Side Remixes.Remixes]].
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* AdultFear: Skid and Pump are being signed up for an experiment at a shady laboratory. Their parents don't know what is inside of that laboratory, and Skid's mother doesn't know what will happen to her son, if at all. Invoked in Chapter 11.
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* AdultFear: Skid and Pump are being signed up for an experiment at a shady laboratory.laboratory with virtually NoOshaCompliance. Their parents don't know what is inside of that laboratory, and Skid's mother doesn't know what will happen to her son, if at all. Invoked in Chapter 11.
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* PrecisionFStrike: Done by [[spoiler: Pump]] in Chapter 8:
-->[[spoiler: Pump]]: "Why don't you pick on someone your own size! ''Bitch!''"
* ShoutOut: Two FNF mods are referenced in the Hall of Mirrors in Chapter 4: VideoGame/FridayNightFunkinCorruption and B-Side Remixes.
-->[[spoiler: Pump]]: "Why don't you pick on someone your own size! ''Bitch!''"
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-->[[spoiler: Pump]]: "Why don't you pick on someone your own size! ''Bitch!''"
* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch: Done by [[spoiler: Pump]] in Chapter 8:
-->[[spoiler: Pump]]: "Why don't you pick on someone your own size! ''Bitch!''"
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* NoOshaCompliance: This fic practically ''feeds'' off of this trope. There seems to be no security in the laboratory itself, and the staff that is present doesn't seem to realize that Skid and Pump went down the wrong elevator shaft. [[spoiler: In chapter 11, Lila begins reading an article from three years before the events of the fanfic. The article explains in detail how the lab itself had been declared unsafe due to their faulty elevators. It also mentioned an accident from five years before the article was written, when a college student fell down the elevator shaft and presumably died. The company blamed it on the [[BlatantLies costume he wore exceeding the elevator's weight limit]].]]
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* NoOshaCompliance: This fic practically ''feeds'' off of this trope. There seems to be no security in the laboratory itself, and the staff that is present doesn't seem to realize that Skid and Pump went down the wrong elevator shaft. [[spoiler: In chapter Chapter 11, Lila begins reading an article from three years before the events of the fanfic. The article explains in detail how the lab itself had been declared unsafe due to their faulty elevators. It also mentioned an accident from five years before the article was written, when a college student fell down the elevator shaft and presumably died. The company blamed it on the [[BlatantLies costume he wore exceeding the elevator's weight limit]].]]
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* NoOshaCompliance: This fic practically ''feeds'' off of this trope. There seems to be no security in the laboratory Skid and Pump are, and the staff that is there doesn't seem to realize that Skid and Pump went down the wrong elevator shaft. [[spoiler: In chapter 11, Lila begins reading an article from three years before the events of the fanfic. The article explains in detail how the lab itself had been declared unsafe due to their faulty elevators. It also mentioned an accident from five years before the article was written, when a college student fell down the elevator shaft and presumably died. The company blamed it on the [[BlatantLies costume he wore exceeding the elevator's weight limit]].]]
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* NoOshaCompliance: This fic practically ''feeds'' off of this trope. There seems to be no security in the laboratory Skid and Pump are, itself, and the staff that is there present doesn't seem to realize that Skid and Pump went down the wrong elevator shaft. [[spoiler: In chapter 11, Lila begins reading an article from three years before the events of the fanfic. The article explains in detail how the lab itself had been declared unsafe due to their faulty elevators. It also mentioned an accident from five years before the article was written, when a college student fell down the elevator shaft and presumably died. The company blamed it on the [[BlatantLies costume he wore exceeding the elevator's weight limit]].]]
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* BloodierAndGorier: So much, compared to the source material. While Spooky Month is rated T on Website/{{Newgrounds}}, there isn't much blood. This fic goes out of its way to include graphic descriptions of violence, especially later on.
* DarkerAndEdgier: While Spooky Month has always been based off of horror, it was mostly played for laughs. Here, not so much. [[spoiler: A prime example of this being a brainwashed Skid mutilating Pump in Chapter 12, slicing the roof of his mouth open.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: While Spooky Month has always been based off of horror, it was mostly played for laughs. Here, not so much. [[spoiler: A prime example of this being a brainwashed Skid mutilating Pump in Chapter 12, slicing the roof of his mouth open.]]
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* BloodierAndGorier: So much, compared to the source material. While Spooky Month is rated T on Website/{{Newgrounds}}, and there isn't much blood. This fic goes out of its way to include graphic descriptions of violence, especially later on.
* DarkerAndEdgier: While Spooky Month has always been based off ofhorror, it was Halloween, the horror aspects of the holiday were mostly played for laughs. Here, not so much. [[spoiler: A prime example of this being a brainwashed Skid mutilating Pump in Chapter 12, slicing the roof of his mouth open.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: While Spooky Month has always been based off of
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* NoOshaCompliance: This fic practically ''feeds'' off of this trope. There seems to be no security in the laboratory Skid and Pump are, and the staff that is there doesn't seem to realize that Skid and Pump went down the wrong elevator shaft. [[spoiler: In chapter 11, Lila begins reading an article from three years before the events of the fanfic about fanfic. The article explains in detail how the factory lab itself had been declared unsafe due to their faulty elevators. It also mentioned an accident from five years before the article was written, when a college student fell down the elevator shaft.shaft and presumably died. The company blamed it on the [[BlatantLies costume he wore exceeding the elevator's weight limit]].]]
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* NoOshaCompliance: This fic practically ''feeds'' off of this trope. [[spoiler: In chapter 11, Lila begins reading an article from three years before the events of the fanfic about how the factory itself had been declared unsafe due to their faulty elevators. It also mentioned an accident from five years before the article was written, when a college student fell down the elevator shaft. The company blamed it on the [[BlatantLies costume he wore exceeding the elevator's weight limit.limit]].]]
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* BecomingTheCostume: Played for horror. While in the elevator, Skid becomes an actual skeleton, while Pump turns into a pumpkin.
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* BecomingTheCostume: Played for horror.PlayedForHorror. While in the elevator, Skid becomes an actual skeleton, while Pump turns into a pumpkin.
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* BloodierAndGorier: So much, compared to the source material. While Spooky Month is rated T on Website/Newgrounds, there isn't much blood. This fic goes out of its way to include graphic descriptions of violence, especially later on.
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* BloodierAndGorier: So much, compared to the source material. While Spooky Month is rated T on Website/Newgrounds, Website/{{Newgrounds}}, there isn't much blood. This fic goes out of its way to include graphic descriptions of violence, especially later on.
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* BloodierAndGorier: So much, compared to the source material. While Spooky Month is rated T on Newgrounds, there isn't much blood. This fic goes out of its way to include graphic descriptions of violence, especially later on.
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* BloodierAndGorier: So much, compared to the source material. While Spooky Month is rated T on Newgrounds, Website/Newgrounds, there isn't much blood. This fic goes out of its way to include graphic descriptions of violence, especially later on.
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* BloodierAndGorier: While Spooky Month has always been based off of horror, it was mostly played for laughs. Here, not so much. [[spoiler: A prime example of this being a brainwashed Skid mutilating Pump in Chapter 12, slicing the roof of his mouth open.]]
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* BloodierAndGorier: So much, compared to the source material. While Spooky Month is rated T on Newgrounds, there isn't much blood. This fic goes out of its way to include graphic descriptions of violence, especially later on.
* DarkerAndEdgier: While Spooky Month has always been based off of horror, it was mostly played for laughs. Here, not so much. [[spoiler: A prime example of this being a brainwashed Skid mutilating Pump in Chapter 12, slicing the roof of his mouth open.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: While Spooky Month has always been based off of horror, it was mostly played for laughs. Here, not so much. [[spoiler: A prime example of this being a brainwashed Skid mutilating Pump in Chapter 12, slicing the roof of his mouth open.]]
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* BloodierAndGorier: While Spooky Month has always been based off of horror, it was mostly played for laughs. Here, not so much. [[spoiler: A prime example of this being a brainwashed Skid mutilating Pump in Chater 12, slicing the roof of his mouth open.]]
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* BloodierAndGorier: While Spooky Month has always been based off of horror, it was mostly played for laughs. Here, not so much. [[spoiler: A prime example of this being a brainwashed Skid mutilating Pump in Chater Chapter 12, slicing the roof of his mouth open.]]
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]] is a WebAnimation/SpookyMonth/VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]] Violation]]'' is a WebAnimation/SpookyMonth/VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]] is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin '' Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]] is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin '' WebAnimation/SpookyMonth/VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]] is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin '' Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]] is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin''' ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]] is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin''' Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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* NoOshaCompliance: This fic practically ''feeds'' off of this trope. [[spoiler: In chapter 11, Lila begins reading article from three years before about how the factory itself had been declared unsafe due to their faulty elevators. It also mentioned an accident from five years before the article was written, when a college student fell down the elevator shaft. The company blamed it on the costume he wore exceeding the elevator's weight limit.]]
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* NoOshaCompliance: This fic practically ''feeds'' off of this trope. [[spoiler: In chapter 11, Lila begins reading an article from three years before the events of the fanfic about how the factory itself had been declared unsafe due to their faulty elevators. It also mentioned an accident from five years before the article was written, when a college student fell down the elevator shaft. The company blamed it on the costume he wore exceeding the elevator's weight limit.]]
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]] is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' CrossoverFic Crossover Fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
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'''All spoilers from Chapters 1-4 will be unmarked.''
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* BecomingTheCostume: Played for horror. Skid becomes an actual skeleton, while Pump turns into a pumpkin.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29808366 It All Started with an OSHA Violation]] is a ''WebAnimation/SpookyMonth''/''VideoGame/FridayNightFunkin'' CrossoverFic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/WokaDokaDee/pseuds/WokaDokaDee [=WokaDokaDee=]]].
Pump's father signed him up for a strange experiment, while Skid's mom signed her child up because Skid did not want his friend to be alone. However, things [[FromBadToWorse take a turn for the worst]] when the children take the wrong elevator...
The fic is still ongoing, with new chapters on a semi-regular basis.
'''All spoilers from Chapters 1-4 will be unmarked.''
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!! ''It All Started with an OSHA Violation'' provides examples of:
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* BecomingTheCostume: Played for horror. Skid becomes an actual skeleton, while Pump turns into a pumpkin.
* PrecisionFStrike: Done by [[spoiler: Pump]] in Chapter 8:
-->[[spoiler: Pump]]: "Why don't you pick on someone your own size! ''Bitch!''"
* ShoutOut: Two FNF mods are referenced in the Hall of Mirrors in Chapter 4: VideoGame/FridayNightFunkinCorruption and B-Side Remixes.
Pump's father signed him up for a strange experiment, while Skid's mom signed her child up because Skid did not want his friend to be alone. However, things [[FromBadToWorse take a turn for the worst]] when the children take the wrong elevator...
The fic is still ongoing, with new chapters on a semi-regular basis.
'''All spoilers from Chapters 1-4 will be unmarked.''
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!! ''It All Started with an OSHA Violation'' provides examples of:
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* BecomingTheCostume: Played for horror. Skid becomes an actual skeleton, while Pump turns into a pumpkin.
* PrecisionFStrike: Done by [[spoiler: Pump]] in Chapter 8:
-->[[spoiler: Pump]]: "Why don't you pick on someone your own size! ''Bitch!''"
* ShoutOut: Two FNF mods are referenced in the Hall of Mirrors in Chapter 4: VideoGame/FridayNightFunkinCorruption and B-Side Remixes.
