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* {{Troll}}: Coby briefly has fun with Tashigi by honestly answering her question with a simple yes without going into detail and letting her stew for a few seconds before he then goes into detail.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Sanji constantly running from the citizens of the Kamabakka Kingdom has left him little time for anything other than training and basic self-care, leaving him rather uninformed of the going-ons of the world while separated from the rest of his crew as he explains to Namur. He also thinks several other members of the crew had similar problems with keeping themselves informed.
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** Sanji constantly running from the citizens of the Kamabakka Kingdom has left him little time for anything other than training and basic self-care, leaving him rather uninformed of the going-ons of the world while separated from the rest of his crew as he explains to Namur. He also thinks several other members of the crew had similar problems with keeping themselvesinformed.informed.
** Smoker keeps Tashigi away from the truth of the corruption of the Marines and the World Government as well as his own opinion that perhaps it is too deep-rooted to be saved because he fears her faith in the Marines won't just crack but break and make her go full revolutionary.
** Sanji constantly running from the citizens of the Kamabakka Kingdom has left him little time for anything other than training and basic self-care, leaving him rather uninformed of the going-ons of the world while separated from the rest of his crew as he explains to Namur. He also thinks several other members of the crew had similar problems with keeping themselves
** Smoker keeps Tashigi away from the truth of the corruption of the Marines and the World Government as well as his own opinion that perhaps it is too deep-rooted to be saved because he fears her faith in the Marines won't just crack but break and make her go full revolutionary.
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* ResignationsNotAccepted: If an individual Marine has a Devil Fruit and/or the rank of Captain or higher, quitting isn't that simple. Devil Fruits are an important source of power and high-ranking Marines often know secrets the top brass don't want leaking out. The best they'll get is retiring to a pre-approved Island. Otherwise, they just get reassigned doing things that don't involve going to the front lines.
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* SimpleSolutionWontWork: Amy asks Smoker why he doesn't just quit the Marines given his reservation about the corruption in it, and he explains that he ''can't''. He has a Devil Fruit and he knows secrets. If he wants to quit, he either has to go to a pre-approved Island or take up an assignment away from the front lines. Trying to leave anyway will result in a bounty on his head.
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** Rosward and Shalria are stongly implied to have been killed by Kidd and Law.
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** As if refusing to be outdone by the ''First Mate'' of a ''rival'' pirate crew, ''Captains'' Eustass Kid and Trafalgar Law are strongly implied to have killed the World Nobles Rosward and Shalria.
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* EvilIsPetty: According to Smoker, Helmeppo tried to bombard Shells Town after becoming Vice-Admiral as revenge for perceived slights against him in the past.
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* EvilIsPetty: According to Smoker, Helmeppo tried to bombard Shells Town after becoming Vice-Admiral as revenge for perceived slights against him in the past.past and the only reason Helmeppo couldn't follow through on that is because Admiral Fujitora put a stop to that.
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* ThePardon: For some inexplicable reason that Smoker himself doesn't understand, Kidd and Law were given pardons for their murders of two Celestial Dragons.
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* EvilIsPetty: According to Smoker, Helmeppo tried to bombard Shells Town after becoming Vice-Admiral as revenge for perceived slights against him in the past.
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* GroinAttack: Robin subtly threatens Coby with this when he's teasing her about her {{UST}} with Zoro.
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* {{Realpolitik}}: While in an EnemyMine with them on Punk Hazard, Smoker points the Straw Hats in the direction of Doflamingo on Dressrosa, since he hates the latter's corruption but legally can't do anything about it himself.
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* TooMuchInformation: When Robin alludes to the GroinAttack she pulled on Franky during his recruitment in order to subtly threaten Coby after he teases her about her feelings for Zoro, the onlooking Billy and Tashigi both decide they don't need to know the details.
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* MagicPant: Chopper theorizes that the very reason this trope exists for Zoans is because their Devil Fruit powers exert a small zone of effect when they transform, causing their clothes to transform with them.
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* MagicPant: Chopper theorizes that the very reason this trope exists for Zoans is because their Devil Fruit powers exert a small zone of effect when they transform, causing their clothes to transform with them.
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* TrapIsTheOnlyOption: During the G-8 arc, when Robin, Zoro and Coby reach an empty bridge, they realise it's a trap but not having any other choice, they elect to spring the trap.
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** In spite of Usopp not being there with him, Sheppard still gets called Condoriano as part of a ruse to make the Marines think he's with the Straw Hats to maintain Robin's cover. It just happens to be Coby who makes it up instead.
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** Ace is still killed during the War of the Best. The author, however, was somewhat hesitant to decide whether or not to do it and thus left it to a poll.
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** Ace is still killed during the War of the Best.Best in spite of the odds being better for various reasons, up to and including [[spoiler:Moby Dick's spirit joining the fray]]. The author, however, was somewhat hesitant to decide whether or not to do it and thus left it to a poll.
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** A pair of guards named [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} Jessie and James]] appear in Impel Down. They even have their own motto.
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** A pair of guards named [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} [[Anime/PokemonTheSeries Jessie and James]] appear in Impel Down. They even have their own motto.
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* InternalReveal: Sengoku learns about Luffy's and Nami's son Ace when Garp gushes about his great-grandson to him; in that same conversation, he also learns Kuma was a revolutionary and was passing information to Dragon for years. Later, the World Government makes sure the whole world knows about Ace by getting Morgans to publish a special edition on the Straw Hats' return and issuing a bounty for him.
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** Sengoku learns about Luffy's and Nami's son Ace when Garp gushes about his great-grandson to him; in that same conversation, he also learns Kuma was a revolutionary and was passing information to Dragon for years. Later, the World Government makes sure the whole world knows about Ace by getting Morgans to publish a special edition on the Straw Hats' return and issuing a bounty forhim.him.
** Smoker learns Luffy is connected to Sabo in Chapter 51 of Book 2.
** Sengoku learns about Luffy's and Nami's son Ace when Garp gushes about his great-grandson to him; in that same conversation, he also learns Kuma was a revolutionary and was passing information to Dragon for years. Later, the World Government makes sure the whole world knows about Ace by getting Morgans to publish a special edition on the Straw Hats' return and issuing a bounty for
** Smoker learns Luffy is connected to Sabo in Chapter 51 of Book 2.
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* HealingFactor: Velo's crab-eel monsters have a limited regenerative ability, able to regrow lost body parts at the cost of body mass.
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* NoSell: While on Punk Hazard, the Snipe that Coby's group is fighting somehow finds a way to hide from his Observation Haki.
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* MakerOfMonsters: Velo, an OriginalCharacter introduced during the Punk Hazard arc, is a scientist who is able to create monsters inspired by Lovecraft. These monsters cause the Punk Hazard incident to be a lot harder for the Straw Hats in spite of their greater numbers and strength.
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* AdaptationExpansion: The concept of Klabautermanns is pushed even further in the sequel. Though rarer than with pirate ships, Marine ships can also have their own spirits and one Marine Klabautermann is responsible for Kaku having to flee Water 7. [[spoiler:There are also enemy Klabautermanns, such as Flying Dutchman who manifests himself in defence of Vander Decken, and Wave Breaker, the Klabautermann of the Neo-Marines flagship]].
* AdaptationNameChange: The name of Z's flagship changed from White Tiger to Wave Breaker.
* AdaptationNameChange: The name of Z's flagship changed from White Tiger to Wave Breaker.
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* AdaptationExpansion: The concept of Klabautermanns is pushed even further in the sequel. Though rarer than with pirate ships, Marine ships can also have their own spirits and one Marine Klabautermann is responsible for Kaku having to flee Water 7. [[spoiler:There are also enemy Klabautermanns, such as Flying Dutchman who manifests himself in defence of Vander Decken, and Wave Wake Breaker, the Klabautermann of the Neo-Marines flagship]].
* AdaptationNameChange: The name of Z's flagship changed from White Tiger toWave Wake Breaker.
* AdaptationNameChange: The name of Z's flagship changed from White Tiger to
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* InJoke: Kaku and Merry chuckle whenever they hear the word "trap" for some inexplicable reason only they know.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Gin causes a power surge to disable the traps in Caesar's lab not realizing it'd take the lights out too. Sanji outright tells him that it wasn't his best plan.
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* BrawnHilda: Petunia, also known as Tune, one of the few women in the G-5 Marines, looks incredibly masculine and is hard to distinguish from the actual men. Only her voice gives away her gender.
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* WorfHadTheFlu: Played with. Zoro is unable to fight at his best while he's stuck in Billy's body. Too bad for the Marines that tried to challenge him with this handicap that he's still good enough to easily beat them.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Sanji constantly running from the citizens of the Kamabakka Kingdom has left him little time for anything other than training and basic self-care, leaving him rather uninformed of the going-ons of the world while separated from the rest of his crew.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Sanji constantly running from the citizens of the Kamabakka Kingdom has left him little time for anything other than training and basic self-care, leaving him rather uninformed of the going-ons of the world while separated from the rest of his crew.crew as he explains to Namur. He also thinks several other members of the crew had similar problems with keeping themselves informed.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: While on Fishman Island, Sanji thinks that Luffy having a child would make headline news. Sure enough, when they're in the New World proper, the newspaper releases an emergency edition informing the world about Monkey D. Ace.
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* MookHorrowShow: [[spoiler:When Monet forces Velo to order her monsters to rampage, Caesar's other subordinates proceed to get slaughtered by creatures inspired by Lovecraftian horrors]].
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* MookHorrowShow: MookHorrorShow: [[spoiler:When Monet forces Velo to order her monsters to rampage, Caesar's other subordinates proceed to get slaughtered by creatures inspired by Lovecraftian horrors]].
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* SpiderSense: [[spoiler:Klabautermanns have a specialized sense where they can detect their crew and how they're doing, and only for their crew]].
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* TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne: [[spoiler:Klabautermanns can sense the development of unformed members of their kind and generally detect each other at a distance]].
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* OhNoNotAgain: Kaku, Paulie and Merry are not looking forward to informing Iceberg that it turns out his new secretary is yet ''another'' spy.
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** During the Thriller Bark arc, Usopp is worried they all got eaten by a giant creature ''again''.
** Kaku, Paulie and Merry are not looking forward to informing Iceberg that it turns out his new secretary is yet ''another'' spy.
** During the Thriller Bark arc, Usopp is worried they all got eaten by a giant creature ''again''.
** Kaku, Paulie and Merry are not looking forward to informing Iceberg that it turns out his new secretary is yet ''another'' spy.
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* MookHorrowShow: [[spoiler:When Monet forces Velo to order her monsters to rampage, Caesar's other subordinates proceed to get slaughtered by creatures inspired by Lovecraftian horrors]].
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** Coby still awakens his Haki at Marineford in spite of the very different reasons he's there.
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** The presence of Velo at Punk Hazard causes several changes:
*** The monsters she created are an additional hazard for the Straw Hat Pirates and their allies to deal with, leading to an overall harder time for them.
*** [[spoiler:Her figuring out and improving on the artifical Devil Fruit formula results in Monet deciding they don't need Caesar anymore and Monet kidnapping Velo to Dressrosa, derailing Law's own plans since that was reliant on Caesar being worth something to Doflamingo]].
*** The monsters she created are an additional hazard for the Straw Hat Pirates and their allies to deal with, leading to an overall harder time for them.
*** [[spoiler:Her figuring out and improving on the artifical Devil Fruit formula results in Monet deciding they don't need Caesar anymore and Monet kidnapping Velo to Dressrosa, derailing Law's own plans since that was reliant on Caesar being worth something to Doflamingo]].
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* AtrociousAlias: Sanji teaches Ace to call Zoro "Uncle Stupid Moss". Zoro retaliates by teaching him to call Sanji "Uncle Pervy Cook".
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** Sanji teaches Ace to call Zoro "Uncle Stupid Moss". Zoro retaliates by teaching him to call Sanji "Uncle PervyCook".Cook".
** To Smoker's constant consternation, several of the Straw Hats calls him Smokey.
** Sanji teaches Ace to call Zoro "Uncle Stupid Moss". Zoro retaliates by teaching him to call Sanji "Uncle Pervy
** To Smoker's constant consternation, several of the Straw Hats calls him Smokey.
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* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: [[spoiler:Going Merry's bounty poster, proof of the existence of Klabautermanns, forever changed sailing, since now everyone has incentive to treat their ships with love and care to encourage their development.]]
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** [[spoiler: Indigo is killed by Usopp during their clash with the Golden Lion Pirates.]]
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* ImpostorForgotOneDetail: Inverted. Luffy notes that the ''hair'' is the only thing the Fake Straw Hats got right in their, frankly, lousy attempt to impersonate the real deal.
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* JustFollowingOrders: Most Marines don't like protecting the Celestial Dragons. They do it because they have no choice.
