Follow TV Tropes

Following

History Fanfic / CobysChoice

Go To

OR

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* TheProphecy: Gambia gives a prophecy during the Dressrosa Arc. It goes like this: "Pink and Blue hold the keys to the seas. If the Sand and Rose can fix what the Dragon has cost, there will come peace from the ashes. If the price is paid in full, the kings will rage and the world will cower. Even the Sun will not smile as the Sea swallows all."
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* CharacterExaggeration: The Barto Pirates personality trait of being Straw Hat fanatics are made more extreme here.


Added DiffLines:

* RevealingSkill: When Merry recognized Wyrm is using Paper Art, she realizes he must be a Marine since the World Government has a near monopoly on the Six Powers.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* AdaptationDeviation: [[spoiler:In addition to Robin, Zoro is also turned into a toy, and both spend quite a bit of time as toys unlike canon where Robin manages to turn back to normal quickly]].


Added DiffLines:

* SpottingTheThread: When Robin is turned into a toy and Zoro forgets about her, he notices oddities in his memories and wonders why they would raid Enies Lobby for Franky when at the time, they didn't know him that well.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

** [[spoiler:Gladius is killed by Law after getting his heart back]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* PaperThinDisguise: Luffy's "Lucy" disguise is even more flimsy than canon. His undisguised son Ace openly calls him dad, and anyone who recognises the Heir of Chaos from his wanted poster will realise Lucy is actually Luffy if they haven't seen through it already.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


** Brownbeard mentions that two of the other monsters were a [[Characters/SuperMarioBrosBowser a bipedal fire-breathing turtle that only turned into skeleton after being dumped in lava]] and a [[Characters/UndertaleFlowey flower that enjoyed taunting them when they attacked and running away while having a sharp-toothed grin]].

to:

** Brownbeard mentions that two of the other monsters were a [[Characters/SuperMarioBrosBowser a bipedal fire-breathing turtle that only turned into a skeleton after being dumped in lava]] and a [[Characters/UndertaleFlowey flower that enjoyed taunting them when they attacked and running away while having a sharp-toothed grin]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

** Doflamingo offering [[spoiler:''Whitebeard's Devil Fruit'']] causes even more competitors to come to Dressrosa.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

** [[spoiler:Ucy is killed by Hakuba during the Dressrosa Tournament]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* PatchworkFic: It turns out the events of ''WebVideo/OnePieceDandD'' ([[spoiler: sans Coby's parentage]]) are canon to this fic, as one of the competitors is an aged William [[spoiler: D. Chapstain]] of the Devil's Luck Pirates. Additionally, it's brought up that the previous user of the Flame-Flame Fruit before Ace was [[spoiler: Blake of the Eight Flames and the Black Knight]], whereas William recalls he once thought a group of men were narrating his life.

to:

* PatchworkFic: It turns out the events of ''WebVideo/OnePieceDandD'' ([[spoiler: sans Coby's parentage]]) are canon to this fic, as one One of the competitors in Dressrosa's coloseum is an aged William [[spoiler: D. Chapstain]] of the [[WebVideo/OnePieceDandD Devil's Luck Pirates.Pirates]]. Additionally, it's brought up that the previous user of the Flame-Flame Fruit before Ace was [[spoiler: Blake of the Eight Flames and the Black Knight]], whereas William recalls he once thought a group of men were narrating his life.

Added: 463

Removed: 463

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* PatchworkFic: It turns out the events of ''WebVideo/OnePieceDandD'' ([[spoiler: sans Coby's parentage]]) are canon to this fic, as one of the competitors is an aged William [[spoiler: D. Chapstain]] of the Devil's Luck Pirates. Additionally, it's brought up that the previous user of the Flame-Flame Fruit before Ace was [[spoiler: Blake of the Eight Flames and the Black Knight]], whereas William recalls he once thought a group of men were narrating his life.



* PatchworkFic: It turns out the events of ''WebVideo/OnePieceDandD'' ([[spoiler: sans Coby's parentage]]) are canon to this fic, as one of the competitors is an aged William [[spoiler: D. Chapstain]] of the Devil's Luck Pirates. Additionally, it's brought up that the previous user of the Flame-Flame Fruit before Ace was [[spoiler: Blake of the Eight Flames and the Black Knight]], whereas William recalls he once thought a group of men were narrating his life.

Added: 1340

Changed: 94

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


** Miltia and Melanie and their boss Junior are all directly pulled from ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}''. Additionally, one of the crews at Sabaody Archipelago is the "Crescent Blades" lead by "Ruby of the Sea" Roseanne.

to:

** Miltia and Melanie and their boss Junior are all directly pulled from ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}''. Additionally, one of the crews at Sabaody Archipelago is the "Crescent Blades" lead by "Ruby of the Sea" Roseanne.Roseanne, a fairly obvious reference to Ruby Rose and her [=scythe/sniper=] rifle hybrid Crescent Rose.


Added DiffLines:

* PatchworkFic: It turns out the events of ''WebVideo/OnePieceDandD'' ([[spoiler: sans Coby's parentage]]) are canon to this fic, as one of the competitors is an aged William [[spoiler: D. Chapstain]] of the Devil's Luck Pirates. Additionally, it's brought up that the previous user of the Flame-Flame Fruit before Ace was [[spoiler: Blake of the Eight Flames and the Black Knight]], whereas William recalls he once thought a group of men were narrating his life.


Added DiffLines:

** Brownbeard mentions that two of the other monsters were a [[Characters/SuperMarioBrosBowser a bipedal fire-breathing turtle that only turned into skeleton after being dumped in lava]] and a [[Characters/UndertaleFlowey flower that enjoyed taunting them when they attacked and running away while having a sharp-toothed grin]].


Added DiffLines:

** One of the competitors in A-block is "Black-Cat" Belladonna, pretty obviously themed around [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Blake Belladonna]]. She has a mostly black ensemble, has the Cat-Cat Fruit: Model Panther to reference Blake being a Cat [[LittleBitBeastly Faunus]], and was a member of the Crescent Blade pirates captained by Roseanne, a reference to her team leader Ruby.


Added DiffLines:

* YouKilledMyFather: [[spoiler: Belladonna's grudge against William stems from the fact that he and his crew murdered her Aunt Cleo and led to the death of her uncle Blake]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

** Jonathan being there with Fujitora means Doflamingo's men don't get to cheat him out of his gambling winnings.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


''Coby's Choice'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6496938/SwordOfTheGods Sword Of The Gods]] is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' AlternateUniverse fanfiction.

to:

''Coby's Choice'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6496938/SwordOfTheGods Sword Of The Gods]] SwordOfTheGods]] is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' AlternateUniverse fanfiction.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

** After the events of Punk Hazard, Law gets 460,000,000 following the revocation of his Warlord title while his ally Luffy gets 470,000,000. Nami's is raised to 47,000,000 and she's upset she's worth less than her own less than two-years-old son. Zoro and Gin are both raised to 210,000,000 each while Sanji gets 130,000,000. Kaku breaks the 100,000,000 mark by getting 104,000,000. Chopper is wanted for 32,000,000 and wanted for 61,000,000. Amyis raised to 43,000,000. Billy is now wanted for 20,000,000. Coby is worth 129,000,000. Merry is worth 79,000,000 and she's upset that she, the first confirmed Wood Fairy, has such a low bounty.

Added: 719

Changed: 562

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* AdaptationExpansion: The concept of Klabautermanns is pushed even further in the sequel. Though rarer than with pirate ships, Marine ships can also have their own spirits and one Marine Klabautermann is responsible for Kaku having to flee Water 7. Crews allied to the Straw Hats also have their own Klabautermanns like Polar Tang of the Heart Pirates. [[spoiler:There are also enemy Klabautermanns, such as Flying Dutchman who manifests himself in defence of Vander Decken, and Wake Breaker, the Klabautermann of the Neo-Marines flagship]].

to:

* AdaptationExpansion: AdaptationExpansion:
**
The concept of Klabautermanns is pushed even further in the sequel. Though rarer than with pirate ships, Marine ships can also have their own spirits and one Marine Klabautermann is responsible for Kaku having to flee Water 7. Crews allied to the Straw Hats also have their own Klabautermanns like Polar Tang of the Heart Pirates. [[spoiler:There are also enemy Klabautermanns, such as Flying Dutchman who manifests himself in defence of Vander Decken, and Wake Breaker, the Klabautermann of the Neo-Marines flagship]].flagship]].
** The story provides more details about why Homing left the World Nobles. Apparently, his father had a Fishman friend (Dellinger's grandfather) who was a bard who told Homing all sorts of stories.



* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Monet escapes from Punk Hazard with Velo and Vergo, instead of having her heart accidentally stabbed by Caesar.]]

to:

* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Monet escapes from Punk Hazard with Velo and Vergo, instead of having her heart accidentally stabbed by Caesar.]] Vergo also survives the Punk Hazard arc]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

** [[spoiler:Tashigi learns about Vivi's connection to the Straw Hats in Chapter 55]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* AdaptationExpansion: The concept of Klabautermanns is pushed even further in the sequel. Though rarer than with pirate ships, Marine ships can also have their own spirits and one Marine Klabautermann is responsible for Kaku having to flee Water 7. [[spoiler:There are also enemy Klabautermanns, such as Flying Dutchman who manifests himself in defence of Vander Decken, and Wake Breaker, the Klabautermann of the Neo-Marines flagship]].

to:

* AdaptationExpansion: The concept of Klabautermanns is pushed even further in the sequel. Though rarer than with pirate ships, Marine ships can also have their own spirits and one Marine Klabautermann is responsible for Kaku having to flee Water 7. Crews allied to the Straw Hats also have their own Klabautermanns like Polar Tang of the Heart Pirates. [[spoiler:There are also enemy Klabautermanns, such as Flying Dutchman who manifests himself in defence of Vander Decken, and Wake Breaker, the Klabautermann of the Neo-Marines flagship]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Monet escapes from Punk Hazard with Velo and Vergo, instead of having her heart accidentally stabbed by Caesar.]]

Added: 3741

Changed: 25

Removed: 3735

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


''Coby's Choice'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6496938/SwordOfTheGods Sword Of The Gods]] is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' ForWantOfANail fanfiction.

to:

''Coby's Choice'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6496938/SwordOfTheGods Sword Of The Gods]] is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' ForWantOfANail AlternateUniverse fanfiction.



* ForWantOfANail:
** The starting premise: because of Ax-Hand Morgan's tyranny, Coby's dreams to become a marine are shattered, and he instead chooses to help Luffy become the pirate king.
** Ms Valentine Day's defection from Baroque Works to the Straw Hats results in her confronting Mr 4 and Ms Merry Christmas alongside Usopp and Chopper and is the one to defeat them both.
** Coby and Grace being there with Vivi allows her to successfully defuse tensions between the Royal and Rebel armies before blood could be spilt and Amy is able to pick out the Baroque Work infiltrators on both sides.
** Without Coby's influence, Helmeppo takes a different path as a marine. [[spoiler:He is scouted by Akainu and follows his ideals]].
** [[spoiler: Amy ends up revealing details about her crewmates during the Post-Enies Loby Celebration, including Chopper being their doctor, which is present on his larger bounty. However, when Hogback is killed by Brook, Moria targets Chopper (or more specifically his shadow) as a replacement.]]
** [[spoiler: Thanks to Luffy's AdaptationalBadass granting him rudimentary Observation Haki by the time of Thriller Bark, Moria can't capture him to give his shadow to Oars. Instead, he sends his Spider-Mice to capture Franky instead, using his Shadow to bring the ''Super'' giant to life]].
** [[spoiler: Gin takes Zoro's place in taking on all the pain Luffy had that Kuma pushed out]].
** [[spoiler: The Going Merry's survival by manifesting as a physical being inspires the Moby Dick to do the same at Marineford, where Whitebeard appoints him the new captain of the Whitebeard Pirates as he prepares to face his own death. Under Moby's leadership, the crew is still intact and protecting Fishman Island post-TimeSkip.]]
** Between Luffy saying he hates him at Sabaody, and Ace's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech at Marineford, Garp is so emotionally broken that he can't bring himself to join in the fighting against Whitebeard. [[spoiler: He does join in near the end, but only in order to restrain Sengoku from attacking Luffy and Ace.]]
** [[spoiler: Akainu accidentally destroys Whitebeard's body before Blackbeard can steal the Tremor-Tremor Fruit from it.]]



* PointOfDivergence:
** The starting premise: because of Ax-Hand Morgan's tyranny, Coby's dreams to become a marine are shattered, and he instead chooses to help Luffy become the pirate king.
** Ms Valentine Day's defection from Baroque Works to the Straw Hats results in her confronting Mr 4 and Ms Merry Christmas alongside Usopp and Chopper and is the one to defeat them both.
** Coby and Grace being there with Vivi allows her to successfully defuse tensions between the Royal and Rebel armies before blood could be spilt and Amy is able to pick out the Baroque Work infiltrators on both sides.
** Without Coby's influence, Helmeppo takes a different path as a marine. [[spoiler:He is scouted by Akainu and follows his ideals]].
** [[spoiler: Amy ends up revealing details about her crewmates during the Post-Enies Loby Celebration, including Chopper being their doctor, which is present on his larger bounty. However, when Hogback is killed by Brook, Moria targets Chopper (or more specifically his shadow) as a replacement.]]
** [[spoiler: Thanks to Luffy's AdaptationalBadass granting him rudimentary Observation Haki by the time of Thriller Bark, Moria can't capture him to give his shadow to Oars. Instead, he sends his Spider-Mice to capture Franky instead, using his Shadow to bring the ''Super'' giant to life]].
** [[spoiler: Gin takes Zoro's place in taking on all the pain Luffy had that Kuma pushed out]].
** [[spoiler: The Going Merry's survival by manifesting as a physical being inspires the Moby Dick to do the same at Marineford, where Whitebeard appoints him the new captain of the Whitebeard Pirates as he prepares to face his own death. Under Moby's leadership, the crew is still intact and protecting Fishman Island post-TimeSkip.]]
** Between Luffy saying he hates him at Sabaody, and Ace's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech at Marineford, Garp is so emotionally broken that he can't bring himself to join in the fighting against Whitebeard. [[spoiler: He does join in near the end, but only in order to restrain Sengoku from attacking Luffy and Ace.]]
** [[spoiler: Akainu accidentally destroys Whitebeard's body before Blackbeard can steal the Tremor-Tremor Fruit from it.]]



** Caeser Clown thinks Grace's presence on Punk Hazard with a Devil Fruit that so completely counters his own to be so improbable that he considers diving intervention as the only possible explanation.

to:

** Caeser Clown thinks Grace's presence on Punk Hazard with a Devil Fruit that so completely counters his own to be so improbable that he considers diving divine intervention as the only possible explanation.



* ForWantOfANail:
** Whitebeard appointing Moby Dick as his successor allows the Whitebeard Pirates to remain a viable crew and they retain a lot of territory, including Fishman Island.
** The canon plot of the Sabaody Arc being derailed by Zoro successfully assaulting a World Noble prevents Nami from learning how badly Fishmen are persecuted which would in turn lead to her keeping her distrust of Fishmen by the time they are on Fishman Island. She only starts letting go of it after Namur tells her Fishman Island's long history of being on the receiving end of prejudice.
** Madam Finwaters reveals Sanji's family history to the rest of the Straw Hats while they're on Fishman Island.
** Ace befriending Lily results in him stopping most of the fight she has with the Straw Hats when they find her eating their food.
** Instead of Nami, Chopper, Robin and Brook, Ain's age regression powers are used on Usopp, Amy and Gin.
** Because it's Zoro, Grace and Billy that first encounter Law on Punk Hazard, they're the ones that get hit by his shambles and body-swapped.
** The presence of Velo at Punk Hazard causes several changes:
*** The monsters she created are an additional hazard for the Straw Hat Pirates and their allies to deal with, leading to an overall harder time for them.
*** [[spoiler:Her figuring out and improving on the artifical Devil Fruit formula results in Monet deciding they don't need Caesar anymore and Monet kidnapping Velo to Dressrosa, derailing Law's own plans since that was reliant on Caesar being worth something to Doflamingo]].


Added DiffLines:

* PointOfDivergence:
** Whitebeard appointing Moby Dick as his successor allows the Whitebeard Pirates to remain a viable crew and they retain a lot of territory, including Fishman Island.
** The canon plot of the Sabaody Arc being derailed by Zoro successfully assaulting a World Noble prevents Nami from learning how badly Fishmen are persecuted which would in turn lead to her keeping her distrust of Fishmen by the time they are on Fishman Island. She only starts letting go of it after Namur tells her Fishman Island's long history of being on the receiving end of prejudice.
** Madam Finwaters reveals Sanji's family history to the rest of the Straw Hats while they're on Fishman Island.
** Ace befriending Lily results in him stopping most of the fight she has with the Straw Hats when they find her eating their food.
** Instead of Nami, Chopper, Robin and Brook, Ain's age regression powers are used on Usopp, Amy and Gin.
** Because it's Zoro, Grace and Billy that first encounter Law on Punk Hazard, they're the ones that get hit by his shambles and body-swapped.
** The presence of Velo at Punk Hazard causes several changes:
*** The monsters she created are an additional hazard for the Straw Hat Pirates and their allies to deal with, leading to an overall harder time for them.
*** [[spoiler:Her figuring out and improving on the artifical Devil Fruit formula results in Monet deciding they don't need Caesar anymore and Monet kidnapping Velo to Dressrosa, derailing Law's own plans since that was reliant on Caesar being worth something to Doflamingo]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


** To Smoker's constant consternation, several of the Straw Hats calls him Smokey.

to:

** To Smoker's constant consternation, several of the Straw Hats calls him Smokey. When he hears Luffy call Law "Traffy", he is both empathetic to him and glad the bad nicknames aren't unique to him.

Added: 324

Changed: 121

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ContrivedCoincidence: Through pure chance, Sanji manages to miss that Luffy and Nami now have a son while on their way down to Fishman Island.

to:

* ContrivedCoincidence: ContrivedCoincidence:
**
Through pure chance, Sanji manages to miss that Luffy and Nami now have a son while on their way down to Fishman Island.


Added DiffLines:

** Caeser Clown thinks Grace's presence on Punk Hazard with a Devil Fruit that so completely counters his own to be so improbable that he considers diving intervention as the only possible explanation.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* BigotryException. Downplayed. Hody still considers Caribou trash simply because he's human, but finds Caribou useful enough for his plans to allow him and his crew some leeway he does not give to other humans.

to:

* BigotryException. BigotryException: Downplayed. Hody still considers Caribou trash simply because he's human, but finds Caribou useful enough for his plans to allow him and his crew some leeway he does not give to other humans.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

** Coby paraphrases [[WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerbTheMovieAcrossThe2ndDimension Doofenshmirtz]] when he says he would have two Berries for every time he was attacked by a two-headed lizard, which isn't a lot but it's weird it happened twice.

Added: 499

Changed: 171

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ChekhovsGun: The importance of the IQ plant does not stop with the end of Strong World. Some of it made its way to Punk Hazard where Velo used it in her monster creations.



* TemptingFate: Coby calls out Luffy for doing this when the crew is heading towards Fishman Island and he says that nothing could go wrong. Naturally, they're attacked right afterwards.

to:

* TemptingFate: TemptingFate:
**
Coby calls out Luffy for doing this when the crew is heading towards Fishman Island and he says that nothing could go wrong. Naturally, they're attacked right afterwards.afterwards.
** Coby gets mad at Tashigi for wondering if things could get worse only for the lizard monster they are fighting to assimilate body parts from its prey.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* InternalReformist: After Sakazuki's ascension to Fleet Admiral, Sengoku, fearing the Marines will become ''even worse'', creates DAGGER. Standing for Division Against Gruesome Governance, Enforcement, and Rule, they are meant to combat corruption and extremism in the Marines.

to:

* InternalReformist: After Sakazuki's ascension to Fleet Admiral, Sengoku, fearing the Marines will become ''even worse'', creates DAGGER. Standing for Division "Division Against Gruesome Governance, Enforcement, and Rule, Rule", they are meant to combat corruption and extremism in the Marines.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* CurseCutShort: In order to avoid Ace learning expletives, many of the Straw Hats who almost use them cut themselves short or are interrupted by others.


Added DiffLines:

* InternalReformist: After Sakazuki's ascension to Fleet Admiral, Sengoku, fearing the Marines will become ''even worse'', creates DAGGER. Standing for Division Against Gruesome Governance, Enforcement, and Rule, they are meant to combat corruption and extremism in the Marines.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* AdaptationalJobChange:
** The biggest one is Coby deciding to join Luffy in becoming a pirate instead of becoming a Marine.
** Zoro is explicitly the First Mate instead of his position as just a combatant in canon.
** Helmeppo is a Vice-Admiral instead of his canon Marine rank.

Added: 284

Changed: 238

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


** One of the New Fishman Pirates spouts the mistaken belief that [[Fanfic/ThisBites Going Merry is able to manifest as a humanoid due to eating a Devil Fruit]]. One of his companions informs him that [[LampshadeHanging this is the wrong reality]].

to:

** Several to ''Fanfic/ThisBites'':
***
One of the New Fishman Pirates spouts the mistaken belief that [[Fanfic/ThisBites Going Merry is able to manifest as a humanoid due to eating a Devil Fruit]]. Fruit. One of his companions informs him that [[LampshadeHanging this is the wrong reality]].reality]].
*** The Cloth-Cloth Fruit is name-dropped in Chapter 52.



* SimpleSolutionWontWork: Amy asks Smoker why he doesn't just quit the Marines given his reservation about the corruption in it, and he explains that he ''can't''. He has a Devil Fruit and he knows secrets. If he wants to quit, he either has to go to a pre-approved Island or take up an assignment away from the front lines. Trying to leave anyway will result in a bounty on his head.

to:

* SimpleSolutionWontWork: Amy asks Smoker why he doesn't just quit the Marines given his reservation reservations about the corruption in it, and he explains that he ''can't''. He has a Devil Fruit and he knows secrets. If he wants to quit, he either has to go to a pre-approved Island or take up an assignment away from the front lines. Trying to leave anyway will result in a bounty on his head.

Top