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* AccidentalProposal: Amy does this to Gin while on Little East Blue, by offering to give him a last name, which counts as a proposal in his homeland.
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Now has a sequel, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13950645/1/Coby-s-Choice-2-New-World-New-Choices Coby's Choice 2: New World, New Choices]]'', which picks up post-TimeSkip.
* DeadGuyJunior: Nami names her and Luffy's son after Ace.
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* HonoraryUncle: [[spoiler: Merry the ship see's Usopp as this, given his relationship with Kaya and her being the mistress of her creator, Merry the butler.]]
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** All the Straw Hats are this (and honorary aunts) to Nami and Luffy's son Ace.
** [[spoiler: Merry the ship
** All the Straw Hats are this (and honorary aunts) to Nami and Luffy's son Ace.
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* SpitTake: Coby's reaction to hearing Zoro spent the TimeSkip training under Mihawk.
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Also has a NSFW side story, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12871650/1/That-Night-in-Skypia That Night in Skypia]]'', which shows some of the sex scenes between Luffy and Nami that are only implied in the main story.
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* TheirFirstTime: Luffy and Nami have sex for the first time in Skypiea after slipping away from the celebration of Eneru's defeat.
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* WeddingEpisode: [[spoiler: After stopping Absalom's attempt to force Nami into marriage, Luffy decides to take advantage of the setup to make his and Nami's relationship official.]]
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Grace's attempt to place a Color Trap on Jabra is interrupted by a stray bee, which is greatly allergic to.
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* BewareTheSillyOnes: ''Many'' of the Strawhats qualify, being extremely skilled pirates despite their quirks.
** [[spoiler: Thanks to Luffy's AdaptationalBadass granting him rudimentary Observation Haki by the time of Thriller Bark, Moria can't capture him to give his shadow to Oars. Instead, he sends his Spider-Mice to capture Franky instead, using his Shadow to bring the ''Super'' giant to life]].
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* ThouShaltNotKill: Luffy himself is against killing, having to establish it as a rule after Gin killed an enemy marine. [[ZigzaggedTrope However, he knows that he and the others will have to kill if they can save their friends]] what this means is that,while killing is prohibited most of the time the captain, aka Luffy can lift the killing band, and if Luffy lifts the killing ban, serious stuff is about to go down.
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* ThouShaltNotKill: Luffy himself is against killing, having to establish it as a rule after Gin killed an enemy marine. [[ZigzaggedTrope However, he knows that he and the others will have to kill if they can save their friends]] what this means is that,while that, while killing is prohibited most of the time the captain, aka Luffy can lift the killing band, ban, and if Luffy lifts the killing ban, serious stuff is about to go down.
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* {{Lemon}}: A group of stories are gathered under the title ''That Night in Skypia'' serves as a the fanfic's repository of these kinds of scenes. Only ''The Mermaid'' is non-canon.
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** [[spoiler: Finding his life as a Galley-La employee more fulfilling than as an assassin, Kaku leaves CP9 and helps the Straw Hats rescue Robin.]]
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* ScreamingBirth: Justified, as Nami gives birth to her and Luffy's son, [[DeadGuyJr Ace]], far away from any form of proper medical facilities and with only a nurse to act as a midwife.
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Today's the day I forgot my alphabet.
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R before S in the Alphabet.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Amy and Grace are both siblings in this continuity.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Compared to their canon status as just TrueCompanions, Luffy and Nami become romantically involved after Arlong Park, sexually intimate after the events of Skypia and married during Thriller Bark.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Compared to their canon status as just TrueCompanions, Luffy and Nami become romantically involved after Arlong Park, sexually intimate after the events of Skypia and married during Thriller Bark.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Ace is still killed during the War of the Best, the author however was somewhat hesitant to decide whether or not to do it and thus left it a poll.
* MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces: Luffy and Nami, in order to scratch off Nami's "Honeymoon Bucket List", have an sex in the tangerine grove on Little East Blue. Although, while the couple did find the thrill of being caught exciting, it was a little too stimulating and put the possibility of anything similar happening on hold for the moment.
* MarkOfShame: Coby, who was taught by Zoro and has the belief that scars on a swordsman's back are this, has his back whipped, branded and given all kinds of other forms of torture during his time in Impel Down. Worse is that a good portion of those scars are where his Strawhat Tattoo was.
* MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces: Luffy and Nami, in order to scratch off Nami's "Honeymoon Bucket List", have an sex in the tangerine grove on Little East Blue. Although, while the couple did find the thrill of being caught exciting, it was a little too stimulating and put the possibility of anything similar happening on hold for the moment.
* MarkOfShame: Coby, who was taught by Zoro and has the belief that scars on a swordsman's back are this, has his back whipped, branded and given all kinds of other forms of torture during his time in Impel Down. Worse is that a good portion of those scars are where his Strawhat Tattoo was.
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* TattooedCrook: All the Strawhats have tattoos of their personal Jolly Rogers somewhere on their body.
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** The starting premise: because of Ax-Hand Morgan's tyranny, Coby's dreams to become a marine are shattered, and he instead chooses to help Luffy become the pirate king.
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* ForWantOfANail:
** Without Coby's influence, Helmeppo takes a different path as a marine. See above...
** [[spoiler: Amy ends up revealing details about her crewmates during the Post-Enies Loby Celebration, including Chopper being their doctor, which is present on his larger bounty. However, when Hogback is killed by Brook, Moria targets Chopper (or more specifically his shadow) as a replacement.]]
** Without Coby's influence, Helmeppo takes a different path as a marine. See above...
** [[spoiler: Amy ends up revealing details about her crewmates during the Post-Enies Loby Celebration, including Chopper being their doctor, which is present on his larger bounty. However, when Hogback is killed by Brook, Moria targets Chopper (or more specifically his shadow) as a replacement.]]
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** [[spoiler: Enel is beaten and killed by Gin. This allows his Devil Fruit to reincarnate into one of Nami's Orange.]]
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* AntiHeroTeam: Luffy admits this to Smoker that he or most of his crew are not as heroic in his heart like Coby, and many of his good deeds are done to protect his crewmates and loved ones rather out of motivation from justice.
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* NominalHero: Luffy admits this to Smoker that he's not HonoraryUncle: [[spoiler: Merry the ship see's Usopp as heroic in this, given his heart like Coby, relationship with Kaya and many her being the mistress of his good deeds are done to protect his crewmates and loved ones rather out of motivation from justice.her creator, Merry the butler.]]
* TheScapegoat: [[spoiler: Because Zoro was sent off by Kuma, his punishment for killing a Celestial Dragon will be fulfilled by another: his apprentice Coby.]]
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** [[spoiler: Shura and his bird Fuza are defeated by Zoro and Robin, and are implied to have been eaten by the Sky Sharks.]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: Many of the Strawhats, both canon and otherwise become stronger.
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** After realizing what Crocodile's plan would bring unto Alabasta, Miss Valentine's Day and Miss Goldenweek defect from Baroque Works and join the Strawhats.
** [[spoiler: Finding his life as a Galley-La employee more fulfilling than as an assassin, Kaku leaves CP9 and helps the Straw Hats rescue Robin.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: Without Coby or Garp's influence, Helmeppo takesinin both his father [[spoiler:and Akainu's teaching]].
** After realizing what Crocodile's plan would bring unto Alabasta, Miss Valentine's Day and Miss Goldenweek defect from Baroque Works and join the Strawhats.
** [[spoiler: Finding his life as a Galley-La employee more fulfilling than as an assassin, Kaku leaves CP9 and helps the Straw Hats rescue Robin.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: Without Coby or Garp's influence, Helmeppo takes
* DeathByAdaptation: Many of the villains don't survive the Strawhats this time.
** Don Krieg is left to drown by Luffy and Sanji.
** Kuromario is killed in battle against Coby.
** [[spoiler: Enel is beaten and killed by Gin. This allows his Devil Fruit to reincarnate into one of Nami's Orange.]]
** [[spoiler: Doctor Hogback is executed by Brook for his part in making the zombies of Thriller Bark.]]
** [[spoiler: Thanks to his strength, Zoro isn't stopped in time by Bonney, and he kills Saint Charloss for trying to shoot him]].
** Don Krieg is left to drown by Luffy and Sanji.
** Kuromario is killed in battle against Coby.
** [[spoiler: Enel is beaten and killed by Gin. This allows his Devil Fruit to reincarnate into one of Nami's Orange.]]
** [[spoiler: Doctor Hogback is executed by Brook for his part in making the zombies of Thriller Bark.]]
** [[spoiler: Thanks to his strength, Zoro isn't stopped in time by Bonney, and he kills Saint Charloss for trying to shoot him]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12227895/1/Coby-s-Choice Coby's Choice]] by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6496938/SwordOfTheGods Sword Of The Gods]] is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' ForWantOfANail fanfiction.
After witnessing the tyranny of 'Ax-Hand' Morgan, Coby's dreams of becoming a marine is shattered. Instead, he chooses to follow the person to show him kindness, Monkey D. Luffy.
Featuring a larger crew, a more serious Luffy, this story will take a different path from the original path.
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! Coby's Choice Contains examples of
* AdaptationNameChange: Retroactively for Miss Valentine's Day to Amy and Miss Goldenweek to Grace, since the story was written before the Vivre Cards with their real names were released.
* AdaptationalVillainry: Without Coby or Garp's influence, Helmeppo takes in
* AscendedExtra: Alongside Coby, we have Gin, Miss Valentine's Day, Miss Goldenweek, [[spoiler: Merry, and Billy]].
* BadassTeacher: To help Coby become stronger, Zoro trains him in swordsmanship.
* BetaCouple: Primarily there is Coby and Grace. Other couples are Usopp/Kaya and Gin/Amy
* EmpoweredBadassNormal: [[spoiler: With the crew trapped in Navarone, Gin eats the Rumble-Rumble Fruit to help them break out.]]
* EverythingsBetterWithDinosaurs: Coby finds and eats an Ancient Zoan that lets him transform into a Triceratops.
* OfficialCouple: Luffy and Nami get together at the end of the Arlong Park Arc. [[spoiler: And during Thriller Bark, they officially get married.]]
* SparedByAdaptation: [[spoiler: With the help of Franky and Galley-Law, Merry's Keel is converted into a heart that lets her take a human form.]]
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After witnessing the tyranny of 'Ax-Hand' Morgan, Coby's dreams of becoming a marine is shattered. Instead, he chooses to follow the person to show him kindness, Monkey D. Luffy.
Featuring a larger crew, a more serious Luffy, this story will take a different path from the original path.
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! Coby's Choice Contains examples of
* AdaptationNameChange: Retroactively for Miss Valentine's Day to Amy and Miss Goldenweek to Grace, since the story was written before the Vivre Cards with their real names were released.
* AdaptationalVillainry: Without Coby or Garp's influence, Helmeppo takes in
* AscendedExtra: Alongside Coby, we have Gin, Miss Valentine's Day, Miss Goldenweek, [[spoiler: Merry, and Billy]].
* BadassTeacher: To help Coby become stronger, Zoro trains him in swordsmanship.
* BetaCouple: Primarily there is Coby and Grace. Other couples are Usopp/Kaya and Gin/Amy
* EmpoweredBadassNormal: [[spoiler: With the crew trapped in Navarone, Gin eats the Rumble-Rumble Fruit to help them break out.]]
* EverythingsBetterWithDinosaurs: Coby finds and eats an Ancient Zoan that lets him transform into a Triceratops.
* OfficialCouple: Luffy and Nami get together at the end of the Arlong Park Arc. [[spoiler: And during Thriller Bark, they officially get married.]]
* SparedByAdaptation: [[spoiler: With the help of Franky and Galley-Law, Merry's Keel is converted into a heart that lets her take a human form.]]
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