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** From Chapter 26, we get this piece.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Barty Crouch Junior because he (currently) [[BeautyEqualsGoodness looks like]] [[Creator/DavidTennant Robert Pattinson]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: Barty Crouch Junior because he (currently) [[BeautyEqualsGoodness looks like]] [[Creator/DavidTennant Robert Pattinson]].Pattinson.
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* CallingParentsByTheirName: Ginny refers to her parents by their given names. According to the WordOfGod, she does so since she is as "awesome" as [[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Bella Swann]].
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* CallingParentsByTheirName: Ginny refers to her parents by their given names. According to the WordOfGod, she does so since she is as "awesome" as [[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Bella Swann]].Swan]].
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* CallingParentsByTheirName: Ginny refers to her parents by their first names. According to the WordOfGod, she does so since she is as "awesome" as [[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Bella Swann]].
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* CallingParentsByTheirName: Ginny refers to her parents by their first given names. According to the WordOfGod, she does so since she is as "awesome" as [[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Bella Swann]].
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* CallingParentsByTheirName: Ginny refers to her parents by their first names. According to the WordOfGod, she does so since she is as "awesome" as [[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Bella Swann]].
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* VoodooShark: Umbridge explains her survival from the first story as being that a hologram of her was killed instead. Considering that the canon series takes place in the 1990s, such advanced technology should be impossible. There is also the fact [[MagicHarmsTechnology that regular electronics break down around Hogwarts]], so a hologram being able to exist there is questionable at best, and that’s without mentioning how wizards in canon are HopelessWithTech, so Umbridge even having access to one is a real stretch.
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* VoodooShark: Umbridge explains her survival from the first story as being that a hologram of her was killed instead. Considering that the canon series takes place in the 1990s, such advanced technology should be impossible. There is also the fact [[MagicHarmsTechnology that regular electronics break down around Hogwarts]], so a hologram being able to exist there is questionable at best, and that’s without mentioning how wizards in canon are HopelessWithTech, so Umbridge even having access to one is a real stretch.stretch.
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--->"How about we call him Sunshine Archimedes Malfoy?" I suggested happily while I smiled a lot.
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* ArtisticLicenseChemistry: A barred up window is melted using "the dangerous chemical dihydrogen monoxide". In layman's terms, dihydrogen monoxide means water.
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* ArtisticLicenseChemistry: A barred up barred-up window is melted using "the dangerous chemical dihydrogen monoxide". In layman's terms, dihydrogen monoxide means water.
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--->"'How about we call him Sunshine Archimedes Malfoy?' I suggested happily while I smiled a lot."
*** " 'Okay!' said Draco and he smiled too with his mouth!"
*** "Then we started to kiss romantically with our lips touching."
*** "Ginny was crying her eyes and it looked like she had been abused by someone abusive."
*** "She was also wearing an ugly pink slutty bikini because she was a slut."
*** " 'Okay!' said Draco and he smiled too with his mouth!"
*** "Then we started to kiss romantically with our lips touching."
*** "Ginny was crying her eyes and it looked like she had been abused by someone abusive."
*** "She was also wearing an ugly pink slutty bikini because she was a slut."
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* FaceHeelTurn: As with Lockhart in the previous story, Victor Krum turns evil after the author realizes that he wasn't played by Robert Pattinson. Apparently, '''[[Creator/DavidTennant Barty Crouch Junior]]''' is the current clone of Pattinson.
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* FaceHeelTurn: As with Lockhart in the previous story, Victor Viktor Krum turns evil after the author realizes that he wasn't played by Robert Pattinson. Apparently, '''[[Creator/DavidTennant Barty Crouch Junior]]''' is the current clone of Pattinson.
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** Series/JerseyShore appears as a sexist show which literally dropped Dudley's IQ.
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** Series/JerseyShore ''Series/JerseyShore'' appears as a sexist show which literally dropped Dudley's IQ.
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* FaceHeelTurn: As with Lockhart in the previous story, Victor Krum turns evil after the author realizes that he wasn't played by Robert Pattinson. Apparently, '''[[Creator/DavidTennant Barty Crouch]] [[HeelFaceTurn Junior]]''' is the current clone of Pattinson.
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* FaceHeelTurn: As with Lockhart in the previous story, Victor Krum turns evil after the author realizes that he wasn't played by Robert Pattinson. Apparently, '''[[Creator/DavidTennant Barty Crouch]] [[HeelFaceTurn Crouch Junior]]''' is the current clone of Pattinson.
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"Being Female" is the sequel to the ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' fanfic "Fanfic/BecomingFemale." It got deleted but is archived [[http://archive.is/D52ms here]].
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* BeautyEqualsGoodness: Barty Crouch Jr. becomes a good guy due to the author's mistake belief that he was played by Creator/RobertPattinson.
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* BeautyEqualsGoodness: Barty Crouch Jr. becomes a good guy due to the author's mistake mistaken belief that he was played by Creator/RobertPattinson.
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* ViewersAreGoldfish: We are constantly reminded that Uncle Vernon is [[ChurchMilitant a Christian fundamentalist.]]
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* ViewersAreGoldfish: We are constantly reminded that Uncle Vernon is [[ChurchMilitant a Christian fundamentalist.]]]]
* VoodooShark: Umbridge explains her survival from the first story as being that a hologram of her was killed instead. Considering that the canon series takes place in the 1990s, such advanced technology should be impossible. There is also the fact [[MagicHarmsTechnology that regular electronics break down around Hogwarts]], so a hologram being able to exist there is questionable at best, and that’s without mentioning how wizards in canon are HopelessWithTech, so Umbridge even having access to one is a real stretch.
* VoodooShark: Umbridge explains her survival from the first story as being that a hologram of her was killed instead. Considering that the canon series takes place in the 1990s, such advanced technology should be impossible. There is also the fact [[MagicHarmsTechnology that regular electronics break down around Hogwarts]], so a hologram being able to exist there is questionable at best, and that’s without mentioning how wizards in canon are HopelessWithTech, so Umbridge even having access to one is a real stretch.
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* BeautyEqualsGoodness: Barty Crouch Jr. becomes a good guy due to the author's mistake belief that he was played by Creator/RobertPattinson.
* DroppedABridgeOnHim: After the author finds out that Robert Pattinson didn't play Viktor Krum, he immediately dies off-screen in much the same way as Lockhart in the previous story.
* FaceHeelTurn: As with Lockhart in the previous story, Victor Krum turns evil after the author realizes that he wasn't played by Robert Pattinson. Apparently, '''[[Creator/DavidTennant Barty Crouch]] [[HeelFaceTurn Junior]]''' is the current clone of Pattinson.
* FaceHeelTurn: As with Lockhart in the previous story, Victor Krum turns evil after the author realizes that he wasn't played by Robert Pattinson. Apparently, '''[[Creator/DavidTennant Barty Crouch]] [[HeelFaceTurn Junior]]''' is the current clone of Pattinson.
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** There is one of the TakeThatAudience kind against one negative reviewer, Jokegirl. She is the star of ''yet another'' sexist show which also dropped Dudley's IQ, and they end up giving her "the lobotomy she needed".
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** There is one of the TakeThatAudience kind against one negative reviewer, Jokegirl. She is the star of ''yet another'' sexist show which also dropped Dudley's IQ, and they end up giving her "the lobotomy she needed".needed".
* UnexplainedRecovery: Ron Raper turns out to be alive after his apparent death... because.
* ViewersAreGoldfish: We are constantly reminded that Uncle Vernon is [[ChurchMilitant a Christian fundamentalist.]]
* UnexplainedRecovery: Ron Raper turns out to be alive after his apparent death... because.
* ViewersAreGoldfish: We are constantly reminded that Uncle Vernon is [[ChurchMilitant a Christian fundamentalist.]]
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* MadeOfExplodium: Vernon meets his demise from falling onto a TV, which then explodes.
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* BackFromTheDead: Umbridge is killed in the first story, but returns in the sequel. She explains that [[VoodooShark it was only a hologram of her that was killed]]. Ron Raper also does this in the sequel.
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* BackFromTheDead: Ron Raper and Umbridge is are killed in the first story, but returns return in the sequel. She Umbridge explains that [[VoodooShark it was only a hologram of her that was killed]]. Ron Raper also does this in the sequel.killed]].
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** From Chapter 26, we get this piece.
---> "HOW DID YOU GET LOOSE, YOU FEMALE GIRLS!" shouted that sexist idiot Ron Raper sexistly in a sexist voice because he was sexist.
---> "HOW DID YOU GET LOOSE, YOU FEMALE GIRLS!" shouted that sexist idiot Ron Raper sexistly in a sexist voice because he was sexist.
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* TheDragon: Arthur Weasley replaces Lucius, who filled this role in the previous story.
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** From Chapter 26, we get this piece.
---> "HOW DID YOU GET LOOSE, YOU FEMALE GIRLS!" shouted that sexist idiot Ron Raper sexistly in a sexist voice because he was sexist.
* TheDragon: Arthur Weasley replaces Lucius, who filled this role in the previous story. Note that Ron is the BigBad that they're serving.
---> "HOW DID YOU GET LOOSE, YOU FEMALE GIRLS!" shouted that sexist idiot Ron Raper sexistly in a sexist voice because he was sexist.
* TheDragon: Arthur Weasley replaces Lucius, who filled this role in the previous story. Note that Ron is the BigBad that they're serving.
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"Being Female" is the sequel to the ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' fanfic "Fanfic/BecomingFemale." It got deleted but is archived [[http://archive.is/D52ms here]].
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!!''Being Female'' contains examples of:
* ArtisticLicenseChemistry: A barred up window is melted using "the dangerous chemical dihydrogen monoxide". In layman's terms, dihydrogen monoxide means water.
* BackFromTheDead: Umbridge is killed in the first story, but returns in the sequel. She explains that [[VoodooShark it was only a hologram of her that was killed]]. Ron Raper also does this in the sequel.
* BananaPeel: Vernon [[DeusExMachina randomly]] slips on one, which ends up causing him to land on the TV and die.
* ChurchMilitant: Uncle Vernon, to a ridiculous degree.
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment:
** From Chapter 26, we get this piece.
---> "HOW DID YOU GET LOOSE, YOU FEMALE GIRLS!" shouted that sexist idiot Ron Raper sexistly in a sexist voice because he was sexist.
** One of the opening lines of Chapter 1 reads, "Lucius didn't live there anymore because Draco had epically killed him for being sexist, making him dead and not alive anymore."
*** Just a few lines later, we get:
---->"Hello, I'm a healer," said a healer.
*** "[A]nd I knew he would never be sexist like that sexist idiot Ron Raper who used to be called Ron!"
** From Chapter 2:
--->"'How about we call him Sunshine Archimedes Malfoy?' I suggested happily while I smiled a lot."
*** " 'Okay!' said Draco and he smiled too with his mouth!"
*** "Then we started to kiss romantically with our lips touching."
*** "Ginny was crying her eyes and it looked like she had been abused by someone abusive."
*** "She was also wearing an ugly pink slutty bikini because she was a slut."
* TheDragon: Arthur Weasley replaces Lucius, who filled this role in the previous story.
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Ginny makes Theodore Nott's skin fall off, then puts him on fire and laughs as he dies slowly and painfully. That would teach him for being so sexist!
* HeelFaceTurn: Barty Crouch Junior because he (currently) [[BeautyEqualsGoodness looks like]] [[Creator/DavidTennant Robert Pattinson]].
* IronicLastWords: The narration outright says as such about Vernon’s last words of "[[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney And He shall smite the wicked and plunge them into the fiery pit!]]", stating that Vernon was the wicked one, and ended up dying after said words.
* KatanasAreJustBetter: Vernon has a samurai sword, which he attempts to use against Viktor.
* ShotgunWedding: Arthur and Molly Weasley plan to force their daughter Ginny into marrying Theodore Nott.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Umbridge insists that [[KilledOffscreen Cornelius Fudge’s death]] was definitely not murder.
* TakeThat:
** Glenn Beck makes a random appearance in Chapter 16, with Vernon watching his show. He is, of course, described as sexist ([[InsaneTrollLogic after he makes a comment about evolution, which has nothing to do with gender issues]]).
** Series/JerseyShore appears as a sexist show which literally dropped Dudley's IQ.
** There is one of the TakeThatAudience kind against one negative reviewer, Jokegirl. She is the star of ''yet another'' sexist show which also dropped Dudley's IQ, and they end up giving her "the lobotomy she needed".
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!!''Being Female'' contains examples of:
* ArtisticLicenseChemistry: A barred up window is melted using "the dangerous chemical dihydrogen monoxide". In layman's terms, dihydrogen monoxide means water.
* BackFromTheDead: Umbridge is killed in the first story, but returns in the sequel. She explains that [[VoodooShark it was only a hologram of her that was killed]]. Ron Raper also does this in the sequel.
* BananaPeel: Vernon [[DeusExMachina randomly]] slips on one, which ends up causing him to land on the TV and die.
* ChurchMilitant: Uncle Vernon, to a ridiculous degree.
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment:
** From Chapter 26, we get this piece.
---> "HOW DID YOU GET LOOSE, YOU FEMALE GIRLS!" shouted that sexist idiot Ron Raper sexistly in a sexist voice because he was sexist.
** One of the opening lines of Chapter 1 reads, "Lucius didn't live there anymore because Draco had epically killed him for being sexist, making him dead and not alive anymore."
*** Just a few lines later, we get:
---->"Hello, I'm a healer," said a healer.
*** "[A]nd I knew he would never be sexist like that sexist idiot Ron Raper who used to be called Ron!"
** From Chapter 2:
--->"'How about we call him Sunshine Archimedes Malfoy?' I suggested happily while I smiled a lot."
*** " 'Okay!' said Draco and he smiled too with his mouth!"
*** "Then we started to kiss romantically with our lips touching."
*** "Ginny was crying her eyes and it looked like she had been abused by someone abusive."
*** "She was also wearing an ugly pink slutty bikini because she was a slut."
* TheDragon: Arthur Weasley replaces Lucius, who filled this role in the previous story.
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Ginny makes Theodore Nott's skin fall off, then puts him on fire and laughs as he dies slowly and painfully. That would teach him for being so sexist!
* HeelFaceTurn: Barty Crouch Junior because he (currently) [[BeautyEqualsGoodness looks like]] [[Creator/DavidTennant Robert Pattinson]].
* IronicLastWords: The narration outright says as such about Vernon’s last words of "[[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney And He shall smite the wicked and plunge them into the fiery pit!]]", stating that Vernon was the wicked one, and ended up dying after said words.
* KatanasAreJustBetter: Vernon has a samurai sword, which he attempts to use against Viktor.
* ShotgunWedding: Arthur and Molly Weasley plan to force their daughter Ginny into marrying Theodore Nott.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Umbridge insists that [[KilledOffscreen Cornelius Fudge’s death]] was definitely not murder.
* TakeThat:
** Glenn Beck makes a random appearance in Chapter 16, with Vernon watching his show. He is, of course, described as sexist ([[InsaneTrollLogic after he makes a comment about evolution, which has nothing to do with gender issues]]).
** Series/JerseyShore appears as a sexist show which literally dropped Dudley's IQ.
** There is one of the TakeThatAudience kind against one negative reviewer, Jokegirl. She is the star of ''yet another'' sexist show which also dropped Dudley's IQ, and they end up giving her "the lobotomy she needed".
