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RebelFalcon [[Music/BlueStahli ULTRANumb]] (Private)
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04/16/2024 07:05:04 •••

Generic for the most part, but just turns disgusting with Chapter 42 (Trigger Warning: Rape)

There's little to actually write home about with this fic. It's another "Izuku has a Power aside from One For All" fic that makes liberal use of transplanted characters, introduces a bunch of OC's that take focus away from canon characters, while bashing those that the author doesn't like. The only thing worth noting would be that the fic gives Adaptational Curves to several characters, most notable being Momo, Midnight, and Hilda, something fine on its own but not enough to really be a major hook.

Chapter 42 though manages to just be disgusting. Chapter 42 has the author take Pixie-Bob, who they consider an ephebophile due to a single Mrs. Robinson joke in canon, and proceeds to depower her, then subjects her to Karmic Rape by the villains as its recorded, outright saying it was meant to be punishment for her. And apparently, it was originally even worse, since multiple reviews on AO3 make clear she was originally flayed alive too, and that its supposed to be seen as punishment, with the response to one review being its "Pay Evil unto Evil". This goes severely into Karmic Overkill, being the kind of stuff you see in Revenge Porn.

Before this chapter, I would have just wrote this fic off as "generic" at best, but may be worth a read if you could find something I couldn't. Now though, I can say its not worth reading this if this is the kind of thing the fic thinks is acceptable. Its immature, its gross, and it isn't something I want to read about, nor do I think anyone else will want to read about it.

TheLethalSperg500 Since: Jun, 2020
12/12/2023 00:00:00

Outstanding. Wonderful. Perfect. This is exactly what I wanted to hear.

I knew damn fucking well what I was doing and how it would cause people to react. I don\'t regret a single bit of it.

It may be immature, juvenile, and disgusting, but I\'m the only one who actually has the guts to go there. Hate me all you want, hate this fic all you want, but nothing will unrape Pixie-Bob.

And also, Monoma Neito doesn\'t deserve to be a Hero. He\'s an arrogant, pompous twat who doesn\'t even understand what it really means to be one. Even Katsuki and Mineta, for all their flaws, realized the true meaning of hero in their own ways in canon.

SpectralTime Since: Apr, 2009
12/12/2023 00:00:00

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VeryMelon Since: Jul, 2011
12/12/2023 00:00:00

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Reymma Since: Feb, 2015
12/12/2023 00:00:00

SpectralTime: Creators are allowed to edit their own work pages except for the YMMV page (and they have no special privileges on the others). However I\'m going to report this as flaming and drama importation.

Stories don't tell us monsters exist; we knew that already. They show us that monsters can be trademarked and milked for years.
theTamer Since: Apr, 2013
12/12/2023 00:00:00

For me it's more like this is the first time I saw creator comment on their own fic's Tv Tropes review on Tv Tropes. Also, who the hell is TLS 500?

Me: "I think I'll go and edit the page of a work I read" Also me: Get frustrated at the editing UI, gives up, and hopes someone else does i
RebelFalcon (Private)
SeptimusHeap (Edited uphill both ways)
12/13/2023 00:00:00

<Moderator headband on>

I've redacted several comments for being personal attacks. Comment on the review, not the author.

Rebel Falcon, I'd like you to redact your review so that it spends less time talking about the author. The Lethal Sperg 500, these rape comments in the review aren't very funny. And leave Rebel Falcon's PM box alone, please

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
RebelFalcon (Private)
12/13/2023 00:00:00

I\'ve redacted as much as I can without losing the overall point of the issues I have with the fic.

Vegeta: I'm back bitches!
MrMallard Since: Oct, 2010
12/15/2023 00:00:00

I have literally never seen a content creator commenting on a TV Tropes review of their own work without everything going wrong.

Come sail your ships around me, and burn your bridges down.
aara941 Since: Jul, 2018
04/16/2024 00:00:00

I love that the author is acting so edgy saying things like \"It may be immature, juvenile, and disgusting, but I\'m the only one who actually has the guts to go there.\" or \"nothing will unrape Pixie-Bob\". Like... Dude, there are like 500 fanfics that has done this.

Boy, you ain\'t special. You wrote rape? Yes, but you wrote it for the Shock Value. That\'s the equivalent of a screamer to call attention.


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