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SeptimusHeap MOD (Edited uphill both ways)
Mar 22nd 2021 at 6:56:48 AM •••

Linking to a past Trope Repair Shop thread that dealt with this page: Split:, started by Frank75 on Mar 21st 2011 at 3:48:47 PM

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
TotalDramaRox97 Since: Jul, 2011
Dec 18th 2016 at 9:34:31 AM •••

In One Tribe I thought they rhymed amensia with "feed ya" which is still horrendous, but better than evil

TotalDramaRox97 Since: Jul, 2011
Dec 18th 2016 at 9:34:31 AM •••

In One Tribe I thought they rhymed amensia with "feed ya" which is still horrendous, but better than evil

ILoveDogs Since: May, 2010
Dec 28th 2014 at 7:26:31 PM •••

I think this has suffered from some decay-I think people use it to describe anything that isn't a perfect rhyme nowadays.

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djbj Since: Oct, 2010
Sep 6th 2015 at 11:31:22 AM •••

I've noticed this too. It is important to consider that context of how the lines come across in the song, instead of just scrutinizing every rhyme on a purely technical level. A lot of these are noticeable at all in the song. Also, several of these entries assume that every line has to rhyme with a previous line, but some of these songs are structured in such a way that I'm not sure the lines were even supposed to rhyme. An example is the entry for "How to Save a Life".

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Technarch Since: Dec, 1969
Dec 15th 2011 at 3:55:13 PM •••

I'm not sure I understand this page, doesn't this include every rap song ever?

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Pinokio Since: Feb, 2015
Aug 12th 2015 at 1:38:17 PM •••

Yo it's legit

oblique: a rhyme with an imperfect match in sound. (one/thumb) assonance: matching vowels. (shake/hate) consonance: matching consonants. (rabies/robbers) half rhyme: matching final consonants. (bent/ant, orange/porridge) identity: rhyming a sound with itself or a homophone. (foul/fowl, grace/disgrace)

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Frank75 Since: Jan, 2001
Jul 13th 2010 at 6:08:25 AM •••

English is not my mother tongue, but I really don't get why some of the mentioned rhymes are in there. They may be overused, but they don't look to me as painful as girl/world, for example.

  • Baby/maybe
  • Fingertips/lips/hips
  • Fire/desire/higher
  • Table/able
  • Moon/June/spoon
  • Fly/sky/high
  • Heaven/seven
  • Dance/chance/romance
  • Groovy/movie
  • Lonely/only
  • Good/hood
  • Be/Me
  • This/Kiss
  • Walk/Talk and Walkin/Talkin
  • Town/Down
  • Drink(ing)/Think(ing)
  • Cup/up

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Telesam Since: Jan, 2001
Aug 3rd 2010 at 1:52:09 AM •••

They aren't bad rhymes- I mean, they do rhyme perfectly with each other. They're just considered cliches nowadays- especially ones like heart/apart, high/sky/fly, or fire/desire. Inevitably, you probably will be rhyming be with me eventually, but for the most part, it's encouraged to experiment a bit. However, if you can find a way to use these rhymes in a way that smoothly helps along the lyrical quality without hindering it, then I see no problem with using them anyway.

qwop9935 Since: May, 2014
May 20th 2014 at 3:39:32 PM •••

It bothers me that so many of the rhymes on this page are perfectly reasonable rhymes, especially where they make sense. It's ridiculous to call out Paul Mc Cartney for rhyming "day" and "way" when there are examples like "I won't attend your pity party/I'd rather go have calamari." The page needs a cull so the examples are more pertinent.

(Also, why is the formatting automatically adding a space after Mc?)

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SeptimusHeap MOD (Edited uphill both ways)
May 20th 2014 at 10:12:35 PM •••

Because it has CamelCase in the word. The wiki automatically converts anything with CamelCase into a wiki link, unless you put it between and tags.

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Nigel Since: Aug, 2012
May 15th 2014 at 7:07:49 AM •••

Would it be appropriate to add something Benedick says in Shakespeare's Much Ado About Nothing

Marry, I cannot show it in rhyme. I have tried. I can find out no rhyme to “lady” but “baby”—an innocent rhyme; for “scorn,” “horn”—a hard rhyme; for, “school,” “fool”—a babbling rhyme; very ominous endings. No, I was not born under a rhyming planet

Stoogebie Since: Apr, 2011
Oct 10th 2013 at 3:56:39 PM •••

"It's common for amateur poets to do this, since they often rigidly adhere to an "ABAB" rhyme scheme, forcing them to twist their verse into grotesque contortions."

Funnily enough, my usual scheme is "ABCB", where only the 2nd and 4th verses rhyme. I also tend toward "looser" beats, and I've noticed people are prone to getting the beat pattern 'off' when they read it out loud. Also, some of my rhymes technically fall under "not-quite-a-rhyme", but I guess I manage to pull it off. I dunno, is it fair to count every "not really a rhyme" as this trope, even if it can somehow be made to work?

reno2200 Since: Apr, 2012
May 9th 2012 at 12:28:41 PM •••

Run This Town (Jay-Z, Rihanna and Kanye West) has a wonderful moment near the start. "We are, yeah, I said it, we are, This is Roc Nation, pledge your allegiance..." only the third syllable sounds more like 'jar' and Jay-Z quickly throws in a 'nce' sound at the start of the next line.

Jusamies Digital Analogy Since: Sep, 2011
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Jan 31st 2012 at 12:17:17 PM •••

I wonder if Metallica's "Master of Puppets" counts as Lampshade Hanging

"Hell is worth all that/natural habitat/just a rhyme without a reason"

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