YMMV / Moon Daughter

• Accidental Innuendo: Quite a few involving a misspelling of "horse."
  • "Some wild hores ran over the hill."
  • "It ran away and I chased it faster, it was a thrill chase, that hore would be mine!"
  • "Do you notice something weird about these hores," Said Albaster suspiciously.
  • "This is a secret hore of Artemis" I diclared.
  • This was no time to think of the cleevage of mortals, it was the monsters who would be cleeved in the battle tamorrow!
  • "Luke is dead" Said Kornos. "Now Im just usin him for his body."
  • "You will suffer nightily" Kornos yelled.
  • “Flavia theres a very impotant thing you should know about, its my biggest secret”
  • "Suddenly Hazel told me to take off my clothes"
  • Every time Flavia describes another character's sword, she quickly reassures the reader that her own sword is "bigger," also "thicker and longer."
• Crack Pairing: Sally Jackson and Grover's corpse.
• Hilarious in Hindsight: The Egyptian gods being present in the sequel, to anyone familiar with Riordan's The Kane Chronicles, which is set in the same 'verse as Percy Jackson.
• Narm:
  • "I knew that day I was borned to be a killer."
  • "This is my story my life my dream"
  • "I can make mistakes if I want CUZ U DONT OWN MY LIFES!"
• So Bad, It's Good: Have you seen the main page?
• Spiritual Successor: To My Immortal.
• Squick:
  • Flavia briefly considers having kids with Zeus, who looks like "an old guy." What makes it worse is that Zeus is supposed to be the father of Artemis, thus Zeus is Flavia's grandfather ^note Although, Fridge Brilliance kicks in if you're even slightly familiar with Greek mythology, which is pretty much full of godly incest. The books themselves note that gods don't have DNA, so it doesn't count- then again, Percy's justifying relationships between campers, and notes that kids from the same cabin don't pair off..
  • Piper looks at naked pictures of her dad.
  • Chapters 9 and 20 are made of this.

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