YMMV / Corrin in Peril

• Narm
  • Corrin letting out a Big "NO!" and yelling at Laslow to "GET OUT, YOU RAPIST!" is hardly what one would expect from a traumatized rape victim.
  • The sheer pettiness of the Nohrians abusing Corrin can be rather hard to take seriously, such as beating Corrin up just for one snarky comment about getting rust off a pot.
  • Likewise, Ryoma's declaration that they will "KICK. SOME. BUTT!" is supposed to be awesome, but is uncharacteristically informal for the gentlemanly crown prince of Hoshido, who speaks in a serious and dignified manner in the game.
• Squick:
  • The image of a cabbage "slither(ing) down (Corrin's) tender pink esophagus" is unnecessarily disgusting for what is supposed to be a normal eating scene.
  • For those who disliked the idea of Corrin getting together with her Hoshidan siblings, the fact that she ends up in love with Ryoma at the end, albeit with the romance limited to her kissing him in the last sentence of the fic.