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* InformedWrongness: After Henry's fight with his son over Frank's embracing of socialist views, various characters in the next few novels keep saying how wrong Henry was. However, Henry was one of the central heroes in the series, so it was hard to see him as a bad guy. Additionally, after one reads how Frank spent the rest of his life in the following books, Henry was justly concerned.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: in the last two books he wrote for the series, Neil Gerson had both a tong leader (''Louisiana!'') and an assistant secretary of the U.S. cabinet (''Tennessee!'') set up as a long term nemesis for Toby Holt. With Aaron Fletcher taking over in ''Illinois!'', the tong leader is never mentioned again and the assistant secretary is eliminated in a matter of sentences in a way that Tpby never realized he was ever a threat.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: in the last two books he wrote for the series, Neil Gerson had both a tong leader (''Louisiana!'') and an assistant secretary of the U.S. cabinet (''Tennessee!'') set up as a long term nemesis for Toby Holt. With Aaron Fletcher taking over in ''Illinois!'', the tong leader is never mentioned again and the assistant secretary is eliminated in a matter of sentences in a way that Tpby Toby never realized he was ever a threat.
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* InformedWrongness: After Henry's fight with his son over Frank's embracing of socialist views, various characters in the next few novels keep saying how wrong Henry was. However, Henry was one of the central heroes in the series, so it was hard to see him as a bad guy. Additionally, after one reads how Frank spent the rest of his life in the following books, Henry was justly concerned.
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* InformedWrongness: After Henry's fight with his son over Frank's embracing of socialist views, various characters in the next few novels keep saying how wrong Henry was. However, Henry was one of the central heroes in the series, so it was hard to see him as a bad guy. Additionally, after one reads how Frank spent the rest of his life in the following books, Henry was justly concerned.concerned.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: in the last two books he wrote for the series, Neil Gerson had both a tong leader (''Louisiana!'') and an assistant secretary of the U.S. cabinet (''Tennessee!'') set up as a long term nemesis for Toby Holt. With Aaron Fletcher taking over in ''Illinois!'', the tong leader is never mentioned again and the assistant secretary is eliminated in a matter of sentences in a way that Tpby never realized he was ever a threat.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: in the last two books he wrote for the series, Neil Gerson had both a tong leader (''Louisiana!'') and an assistant secretary of the U.S. cabinet (''Tennessee!'') set up as a long term nemesis for Toby Holt. With Aaron Fletcher taking over in ''Illinois!'', the tong leader is never mentioned again and the assistant secretary is eliminated in a matter of sentences in a way that Tpby never realized he was ever a threat.
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* InformedWrongness: After Henry's fight with his son over Frank's embracing of socialist views, various characters in the next few novels keep saying how wrong Henry was. However, Henry was one of the central heroes in the series, so it was hard to see him as a bad guy. Additionally, after one reads how Frank spent the rest of his life the the following books, Henry was justly concerned.
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* InformedWrongness: After Henry's fight with his son over Frank's embracing of socialist views, various characters in the next few novels keep saying how wrong Henry was. However, Henry was one of the central heroes in the series, so it was hard to see him as a bad guy. Additionally, after one reads how Frank spent the rest of his life the in the following books, Henry was justly concerned.
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* InformedWrongness: After Henry's fight with his son over Frank's embracing of socialist views, various characters in the next few novels keep saying how wrong Henry was. However, Henry was one of the central heroes in the series and, after reading how Frank spent the rest of his life, Henry wasn't exactly wrong.
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* InformedWrongness: After Henry's fight with his son over Frank's embracing of socialist views, various characters in the next few novels keep saying how wrong Henry was. However, Henry was one of the central heroes in the series and, series, so it was hard to see him as a bad guy. Additionally, after reading one reads how Frank spent the rest of his life, life the the following books, Henry wasn't exactly wrong.was justly concerned.
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* InformedWrongness: After Henry's fight with his son over Frank's embracing of socialist views, various characters in the next few novels keep saying how wrong Henry was. However, Henry was one of the central heroes in the series and, after reading how Frank spent the rest of his life, Henry wasn't exactly wrong.
