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--->''The thought of having to go on without his best friend - the thought the world could even keep spinning without him in it - was simply absurd to him. Nothing would be the same ever again. Even music would lose its magic.''
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* DracoInLeatherPants: '''Averted'''. While Ernesto is young, slightly nicer and [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold he seems to care about Héctor in his own way]], he's still portrayed as a sociopath that is willing to use lies to manipulate others and even brutal methods to severely harm anyone who stands in his way, just like his canon counterpart.
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** Also, when Imelda and Ernesto murder the government soldiers in ''"Revolution"''.
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** Also, when Imelda and Ernesto murder the government soldiers in ''"Revolution"''.''"Revolution"''.
* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic:
** Ernesto's resentment of his alcoholic father Esteban and preferring to hang out at the Rivera house to avoid his abuse is supposed to be sympathetic, but most of the time he comes across as a {{Wangst}}y, entitled brat, especially since despite of his shortcomings, Esteban tries to fix their relationship while Ernesto continually rebukes him.
** Imelda in ''"Revolution"''. Being upset and angry over her father leaving the family to help the revolutionaries only to be killed for it? Completely understandable. Chewing out Ernesto for saying he doesn't miss Esteban, who's stated to be an abusive drunkard and is implied to beat Ernesto? Not so much.
* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic:
** Ernesto's resentment of his alcoholic father Esteban and preferring to hang out at the Rivera house to avoid his abuse is supposed to be sympathetic, but most of the time he comes across as a {{Wangst}}y, entitled brat, especially since despite of his shortcomings, Esteban tries to fix their relationship while Ernesto continually rebukes him.
** Imelda in ''"Revolution"''. Being upset and angry over her father leaving the family to help the revolutionaries only to be killed for it? Completely understandable. Chewing out Ernesto for saying he doesn't miss Esteban, who's stated to be an abusive drunkard and is implied to beat Ernesto? Not so much.
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* HarsherInHindsight: The whole fic in a shellnut. Also, to the events of the sequel ''Fanfic/DownToDust''.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Ernesto. A lot of people dislike him due to [[AllTakeAndNoGive his toxic friendship with Héctor]] and being the catalyst for a lot of Héctor's poor decisions and darker moments, even if he didn't want that to happen. However, some find him a JerkassWoobie, due to his horrible upbringing and his few PetTheDog moments towards Héctor.
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* HoYay:
** Héctor's words after Ernesto is conscripted ''"Revolution"'' have a vibe of this.
** Héctor's words after Ernesto is conscripted ''"Revolution"'' have a vibe of this.
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* HoYay:
**HoYay: Héctor's words after Ernesto is conscripted ''"Revolution"'' have a vibe of this.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Ernesto's father, Esteban. At times, he may seem to border EvilPatriarch levels. At times, he seems to just be grumpy. Besides Ernesto, he is without a doubt the most conflicted character within the series.
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* {{Moe}}: 2-year-old Héctor is ''adorable''.
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* HoYay:
** Héctor's words after Ernesto is conscripted ''"Revolution"'' have a vibe of this.
--->''The thought of having to go on without his best friend - the thought the world could even keep spinning without him in it - was simply absurd to him. Nothing would be the same ever again. Even music would lose its magic.''
* {{Moe}}: 2-year-old Héctor is ''adorable''. Also, when he falls in love with Imelda.
** Héctor's words after Ernesto is conscripted ''"Revolution"'' have a vibe of this.
--->''The thought of having to go on without his best friend - the thought the world could even keep spinning without him in it - was simply absurd to him. Nothing would be the same ever again. Even music would lose its magic.''
* {{Moe}}: 2-year-old Héctor is ''adorable''. Also, when he falls in love with Imelda.
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* DracoInLeatherPants: '''Averted'''. While Ernesto is young, slightly nicer and he seems to genuinely care about Héctor, he's still portrayed as a sociopath that is willing to use lies to manipulate others and even brutal methods to severely harm anyone who stands in his way, just like his canon counterpart.
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* DracoInLeatherPants: '''Averted'''. While Ernesto is young, slightly nicer and [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold he seems to genuinely care about Héctor, Héctor in his own way]], he's still portrayed as a sociopath that is willing to use lies to manipulate others and even brutal methods to severely harm anyone who stands in his way, just like his canon counterpart.
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* DracoInLeatherPants: '''Averted'''. While Ernesto is young, slightly nicer and he seems to genuinely care about Héctor, he's still portrayed as a sociopath that is willing to use lies to manipulate others and even brutal methods to severely harm anyone who stands in his way, just like his canon counterpart.
* {{Moe}}: 2-year-old Héctor is ''adorable''.
* NightmareFuel: Ernesto's prophetic nightmare in ''"Presagio"''.
** Also, when Imelda and Ernesto murder the government soldiers in ''"Revolution"''.
* {{Moe}}: 2-year-old Héctor is ''adorable''.
* NightmareFuel: Ernesto's prophetic nightmare in ''"Presagio"''.
** Also, when Imelda and Ernesto murder the government soldiers in ''"Revolution"''.
