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* HarsherInHindsight: The fic's first chapter ends with Saki and Nodoka being badly injured and hospitalized after the tournament at the end of the first chapter. In Chapter 220 in canon, [[spoiler:Hisa falls and injures her right arm]] ''during'' the tournament [[spoiler:and since she hasn't played yet, she fears that if she goes to the hospital, she won't get back in time for her match]].
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* HarsherInHindsight: The fic's first chapter ends with Saki and Nodoka being badly injured and hospitalized after the tournament at the end of the first chapter. In Chapter 220 in canon, [[spoiler:Hisa falls and injures her right arm]] ''during'' the tournament [[spoiler:and since she hasn't played yet, she fears that if she goes to the hospital, she won't get back in time for her match]].match, although she does manage to tough it out long enough to get through]].
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* HarsherInHindsight: The fic's first chapter ends with Saki and Nodoka being badly injured and hospitalized after the tournament at the end of the first chapter. In Chapter 220 in canon, [[spoiler:Hisa falls and injures her right arm]] ''during'' the tournament [[spoiler:and since she hasn't played yet, she fears that if she goes to the hospital, she won't get back in time for her match]].
* RonTheDeathEater: Teru has an explosive temper and hates Saki to the point at which when Saki tries to talk to her after the championship, Teru beats Saki so badly she ends up in the hospital, doing the same to Nodoka when she tries to help. Granted, the author had planned a redemption arc for Teru, but this is in stark contrast to Teru's cold and detached but not entirely heartless canon personality, particularly considering that when they finally met in canon, [[spoiler:Teru walked off, because she simply had no idea what to say to Saki, and so couldn't face her]].
* RonTheDeathEater: Teru has an explosive temper and hates Saki to the point at which when Saki tries to talk to her after the championship, Teru beats Saki so badly she ends up in the hospital, doing the same to Nodoka when she tries to help. Granted, the author had planned a redemption arc for Teru, but this is in stark contrast to Teru's cold and detached but not entirely heartless canon personality, particularly considering that when they finally met in canon, [[spoiler:Teru walked off, because she simply had no idea what to say to Saki, and so couldn't face her]].
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* HarsherInHindsight: The fic's first chapter ends with Saki and Nodoka being badly injured and hospitalized after the tournament at the end of the first chapter. In Chapter 220 in canon, [[spoiler:Hisa falls and injures her right arm]] ''during'' the tournament [[spoiler:and since she hasn't played yet, she fears that if she goes to the hospital, she won't get back in time for her match]].
* RonTheDeathEater: Teru has an explosive temper and hates Saki to the point at which when Saki tries to talk to her after the championship, Teru beats Saki so badly she ends up in the hospital, doing the same to Nodoka when she tries to help. Granted, the author had planned a redemption arc for Teru, but this is in stark contrast to Teru's cold and detached but not entirely heartless canon personality, particularly considering that when they finally met in canon, [[spoiler:Teru walked off, because she simply had no idea what to say to Saki, and so couldn't face her]].match]].
* RonTheDeathEater: Teru has an explosive temper and hates Saki to the point at which when Saki tries to talk to her after the championship, Teru beats Saki so badly she ends up in the hospital, doing the same to Nodoka when she tries to help. Granted, the author had planned a redemption arc for Teru, but this is in stark contrast to Teru's cold and detached but not entirely heartless canon personality, particularly considering that when they finally met in canon, [[spoiler:Teru walked off, because she simply had no idea what to say to Saki, and so couldn't face her]].
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* CriticalResearchFailure: In canon, the national mahjong tournament takes place over several days, with each round being a series of five matches between four schools. Except for the first round, in which only 12 of the 48 non-seeded schools advance and the four seeded schools get a bye, each round has the top two schools advance, and takes place on its own separate day. Here, the entire tournament is said to take place over the course of one day, and the final is said to be a one-on-one match between Saki and Teru, despite the two having different positions (Teru will face Yuuki while Saki will face Awai).
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* HarsherInHindsight: The fic's first chapter ends with Saki and Nodoka being badly injured and hospitalized after the tournament at the end of the first chapter. In Chapter 220 in canon, [[spoiler:Hisa falls and injures her right arm]] ''during'' the tournament [[spoiler:and since she hasn't played yet, she fears that if she goes to the hospital, she won't get back in time for her match]].
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* FridgeLogic: While the fic uses Japanese modes of address, it has Saki call Teru by her first name rather than "[[UsefulNotes/JapaneseSiblingTerminology Onee-chan]]." This decision is rather strange, since being addressed as an older sister would have been the perfect way to press this fic's Teru's BerserkButton.
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* CreatorBacklash / OldShame: The author states on his FanFiction.net profile page that he deleted the original fanfic "because of how much it sucked", and flat-out called it the worst fanfic he's ever written.
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* CreatorBacklash / OldShame: The author states on his FanFiction.net profile page that he deleted the original fanfic "because of how much it sucked", and flat-out called it the worst fanfic he's ever written.
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* CriticalResearchFailure: In canon, the national mahjong tournament takes place over several days, with each round being a series of five matches between four schools. Except for the first round, in which only 12 of the 48 non-seeded schools advance and the four seeded schools get a bye, each round has the top two schools advance, and takes place on its own separate day. Here, the entire tournament is said to take place over the course of one day, and the final is said to be a one-on-one match between Saki and Teru, despite the two having different positions (Teru will face Yuuki while Saki will face Awai).
* RonTheDeathEater: Teru has an explosive temper and hates Saki to the point at which when Saki tries to talk to her after the championship, Teru beats Saki so badly she ends up in the hospital, doing the same to Nodoka when she tries to help. Granted, the author had planned a redemption arc for Teru, but this is in stark contrast to Teru's cold and detached but not entirely heartless canon personality, particularly considering that when they finally met in canon, [[spoiler:Teru walked off, because she simply had no idea what to say to Saki, and so couldn't face her]].
* CriticalResearchFailure: In canon, the national mahjong tournament takes place over several days, with each round being a series of five matches between four schools. Except for the first round, in which only 12 of the 48 non-seeded schools advance and the four seeded schools get a bye, each round has the top two schools advance, and takes place on its own separate day. Here, the entire tournament is said to take place over the course of one day, and the final is said to be a one-on-one match between Saki and Teru, despite the two having different positions (Teru will face Yuuki while Saki will face Awai).
* RonTheDeathEater: Teru has an explosive temper and hates Saki to the point at which when Saki tries to talk to her after the championship, Teru beats Saki so badly she ends up in the hospital, doing the same to Nodoka when she tries to help. Granted, the author had planned a redemption arc for Teru, but this is in stark contrast to Teru's cold and detached but not entirely heartless canon personality, particularly considering that when they finally met in canon, [[spoiler:Teru walked off, because she simply had no idea what to say to Saki, and so couldn't face her]].
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* CreatorBacklash / OldShame: The author states on his FanFiction.net profile page that he deleted the original fanfic "because of how much it sucked", and flat-out called it the worst fanfic he's ever written.
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* CreatorBacklash/OldShame: CreatorBacklash / OldShame: The author states on his profile page that he deleted the fanfic "because of how much it sucked", and called it the worst fanfic he's ever written.
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* OldShame: CreatorBacklash/OldShame: The author has stated this is why states on his profile page that he deleted the fanfic was deleted."because of how much it sucked", and called it the worst fanfic he's ever written.
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* OldShame: The author has stated this is why the fanfic was deleted.
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* CriticalResearchFailure: The mahjong games in the tournament are presented as one-on-one, rather than four-player games. Additionally, the last match of the tournament is Saki against Teru, while in canon, Saki is the captain and Teru is the vanguard, meaning that Teru would face Yuuki, while Saki would face Awai.
** To be fair, the author admitted that he screwed up and apologized at the start of Chapter 2, saying that he would try harder later on.
* MoralEventHorizon: Teru attacking Saki and Nodoka and sending them to the hospital could be considered this. She does have a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, and the author plans on making her a more sympathetic character later on, but it’s difficult to come back from something like this, especially after she ends up getting led away in handcuffs.
* RonTheDeathEater: Teru, by the author's own admission. In canon, she’s an AloofBigSister who treats Saki coldly and denies she has a sister, but is not without redeeming traits, such as [[spoiler:showing concern for Toki after her collapse]]. Here, she not only viciously beats up her own sister for claiming to be such, but also threatens her own teammate Sumire with violence for claiming they're related.
** Although towards the end of the first chapter, Teru starts to realize she has gone too far.
** To be fair, the author admitted that he screwed up and apologized at the start of Chapter 2, saying that he would try harder later on.
* MoralEventHorizon: Teru attacking Saki and Nodoka and sending them to the hospital could be considered this. She does have a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, and the author plans on making her a more sympathetic character later on, but it’s difficult to come back from something like this, especially after she ends up getting led away in handcuffs.
* RonTheDeathEater: Teru, by the author's own admission. In canon, she’s an AloofBigSister who treats Saki coldly and denies she has a sister, but is not without redeeming traits, such as [[spoiler:showing concern for Toki after her collapse]]. Here, she not only viciously beats up her own sister for claiming to be such, but also threatens her own teammate Sumire with violence for claiming they're related.
** Although towards the end of the first chapter, Teru starts to realize she has gone too far.
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** To be fair, the author realized he messed up and apologized at the start of Chapter 2, saying that he would try harder later on.
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** To be fair, the author realized admitted that he messed screwed up and apologized at the start of Chapter 2, saying that he would try harder later on.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Teru.Teru, by the author's own admission. In canon, she’s an AloofBigSister who treats Saki coldly and denies she has a sister, but is not without redeeming traits, such as [[spoiler:showing concern for Toki after her collapse]]. Here, she not only viciously beats up her own sister for claiming to be such, but also threatens her own teammate Sumire with violence for claiming they're related.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Teru attacking Saki and Nodoka, sending them to the hospital. She does have a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, and the author plans on making her a more sympathetic character later on, but it’s difficult to come back from something like this, especially after she ends up getting led away in handcuffs.
* RonTheDeathEater: Teru. In canon, she’s an AloofBigSister who treats Saki coldly and denies she has a sister, but is not without redeeming traits, such as [[spoiler:showing concern for Toki after her collapse]]. Here, she not only viciously beats up her own sister for claiming to be such, but also threatens her own teammate Sumire with violence for claiming they're related.
* RonTheDeathEater: Teru. In canon, she’s an AloofBigSister who treats Saki coldly and denies she has a sister, but is not without redeeming traits, such as [[spoiler:showing concern for Toki after her collapse]]. Here, she not only viciously beats up her own sister for claiming to be such, but also threatens her own teammate Sumire with violence for claiming they're related.
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** To be fair, the author realized he messed up and apologized at the start of Chapter 2, saying that he would try harder later on.
* MoralEventHorizon: Teru attacking Saki andNodoka, Nodoka and sending them to the hospital.hospital could be considered this. She does have a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, and the author plans on making her a more sympathetic character later on, but it’s difficult to come back from something like this, especially after she ends up getting led away in handcuffs.
* RonTheDeathEater: Teru. In canon, she’s an AloofBigSister who treats Saki coldly and denies she has a sister, but is not without redeeming traits, such as [[spoiler:showing concern for Toki after her collapse]]. Here, she not only viciously beats up her own sister for claiming to be such, but also threatens her own teammate Sumire with violence for claiming they're related.
** Although towards the end of the first chapter, Teru starts to realize she has gone too far.
* MoralEventHorizon: Teru attacking Saki and
* RonTheDeathEater: Teru. In canon, she’s an AloofBigSister who treats Saki coldly and denies she has a sister, but is not without redeeming traits, such as [[spoiler:showing concern for Toki after her collapse]]. Here, she not only viciously beats up her own sister for claiming to be such, but also threatens her own teammate Sumire with violence for claiming they're related.
** Although towards the end of the first chapter, Teru starts to realize she has gone too far.
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*CriticalResearchFailure: The mahjong games in the tournament are presented as one-on-one, rather than four-player games. Additionally, the last match of the tournament is Saki against Teru, while in canon, Saki is the captain and Teru is the vanguard, meaning that Teru would face Yuuki, while Saki would face Awai.
*MoralEventHorizon: Teru attacking Saki and Nodoka, sending them to the hospital. She does have a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, and the author plans on making her a more sympathetic character later on, but it’s difficult to come back from something like this, especially after she ends up getting led away in handcuffs.
*RonTheDeathEater: Teru. In canon, she’s an AloofBigSister who treats Saki coldly and denies she has a sister, but is not without redeeming traits, such as [[spoiler:showing concern for Toki after her collapse]]. Here, she not only viciously beats up her own sister for claiming to be such, but also threatens her own teammate Sumire with violence for claiming they're related.
*MoralEventHorizon: Teru attacking Saki and Nodoka, sending them to the hospital. She does have a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, and the author plans on making her a more sympathetic character later on, but it’s difficult to come back from something like this, especially after she ends up getting led away in handcuffs.
*RonTheDeathEater: Teru. In canon, she’s an AloofBigSister who treats Saki coldly and denies she has a sister, but is not without redeeming traits, such as [[spoiler:showing concern for Toki after her collapse]]. Here, she not only viciously beats up her own sister for claiming to be such, but also threatens her own teammate Sumire with violence for claiming they're related.
