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* HilariousInHindsight: The premise of the fic actually becomes morbidly amusing when canon reveals that the user of the Sick-Sick Fruit can ''create'' diseases that induce a GenderBender, which implies that such a disease may actually exist already in the ''One Piece'' world.
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* TearJerker: Chapter 4, "Brought Up Short", when Zoro struggles to adjust to the changes in his body enough to fight, while the raiders taunt and leer. Given Zoro's [[ThePromise reasons]] for wanting to become the strongest swordsman in the world, watching him grapple with the reality of how much the shift has affected his combat ability is difficult.
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** Chapter 4, "Brought Up Short", when Zoro struggles to adjust to the changes in his body enough to fight, while the raiders taunt and leer. Given Zoro's [[ThePromise reasons]] for wanting to become the strongest swordsman in the world, watching him grapple with the reality of how much the shift has affected his combat ability is difficult.
** Chapter 4, "Brought Up Short", when Zoro struggles to adjust to the changes in his body enough to fight, while the raiders taunt and leer. Given Zoro's [[ThePromise reasons]] for wanting to become the strongest swordsman in the world, watching him grapple with the reality of how much the shift has affected his combat ability is difficult.
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* TearJerker: In Chapter 4, "Brought Up Short", Zoro struggles to adjust to the changes in his body enough to fight. The constant taunting and leering of the raiders doesn't help, either. Sanji also learns that the genderswitch has almost completely destroyed Usopp's confidence in his own abilities, and he can't comfort her because ''she asked him not to''. Not only that, but his sense of chivalry forces him to block ''Zoro'' from going to talk with Usopp, despite being very aware he probably needs ''somebody'' to talk to.
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* TearJerker: In Chapter 4, "Brought Up Short", when Zoro struggles to adjust to the changes in his body enough to fight. The constant taunting and leering of fight, while the raiders doesn't help, either. taunt and leer. Given Zoro's [[ThePromise reasons]] for wanting to become the strongest swordsman in the world, watching him grapple with the reality of how much the shift has affected his combat ability is difficult.
** In the same chapter, Sanjialso learns that the genderswitch has almost completely destroyed Usopp's confidence in his own abilities, self-confidence, and he can't comfort her him because ''she ''he asked him not to''. to''. Not only that, but his misplaced sense of chivalry forces him to block ''Zoro'' '''Zoro''' from going talking to talk with Usopp, the sniper, despite being very aware he probably needs ''somebody'' '''needs''' to talk to.about it and that Zoro's the most likely to understand.
** In the same chapter, Sanji
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* TearJerker: In Chapter 4, "Brought Up Short", Zoro struggles to adjust to the changes in his body enough to fight. The constant taunting and leering of the raiders doesn't help, either. Sanji also learns that the genderswitch has almost completely destroyed Usopp's confidence in his own abilities, and he can't comfort her, ''by her own request''. Not only that, but he blocks Zoro from offering his own form of encouragement.
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* TearJerker: In Chapter 4, "Brought Up Short", Zoro struggles to adjust to the changes in his body enough to fight. The constant taunting and leering of the raiders doesn't help, either. Sanji also learns that the genderswitch has almost completely destroyed Usopp's confidence in his own abilities, and he can't comfort her, ''by her own request''. because ''she asked him not to''. Not only that, but he blocks Zoro his sense of chivalry forces him to block ''Zoro'' from offering his own form of encouragement.going to talk with Usopp, despite being very aware he probably needs ''somebody'' to talk to.
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* TearJerker: In Chapter 4, "Brought Up Short", Zoro struggles to adjust to the changes in his body enough to fight. The constant taunting and leering of the raiders doesn't help, either. Sanji also learns that the genderswitch has almost completely destroyed Usopp's confidence in his own abilities, and he can't comfort her, ''by her own request''. Not only that, but he blocks Zoro from offering his own form of encouragement.
