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* SeasonalRot: In addition to the dropping quality of the story itself, this "saga" also marks a notable drop in quality for Kamen Rider Chrome and Ten-Faced Paladin in general as their previous stories were received far better. This can mostly be attributed to [[SpotlightStealingSquad the fic drawing the bloat of the authors attention compared to their other fics]] and [[ArcFatigue the fact that it just won't]] ''[[ArcFatigue end.]]''
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* SeasonalRot: In addition to the dropping quality of the story itself, this "saga" also marks a notable drop in quality for Kamen Rider Chrome and Ten-Faced Paladin in general as their previous stories were received far better. This can mostly be attributed to [[SpotlightStealingSquad the fic drawing the bloat of the authors attention compared to their other fics]] and [[ArcFatigue the fact that it just won't]] ''[[ArcFatigue end.]]'']]'' It gets to the point that in the author's note in the final chapter, Kamen Rider Chrome acknowledges that it "dragged on".
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** The series has been going on since ''2014'' with no end in sight. Almost every seeming BigBad so far is inevitably usurped [[spoiler: [[OurHeroIsDead and the main character has died]] ''twice''.]] It's no wonder that for some this is starting to settle in.
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** The series has been going on since ''2014'' with no end and finally ended in sight. ''2021.'' Almost every seeming BigBad so far is inevitably usurped [[spoiler: [[OurHeroIsDead and the main character has died]] ''twice''.]] It's no wonder that for some this is starting to settle in.
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** The first "End of the Armored War Gods" saga was originally posted in September 2016. As of August 2020, it's up to ''three'' "End of the Armored War Gods" sagas, and work is still ongoing.
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** The first "End of the Armored War Gods" saga was originally posted in September 2016. As of August 2020, it's up to ''three'' "End of the Armored War Gods" sagas, and work is still ongoing.only ended the next year.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Every villain seems to have another hiding behind them waiting to erase any sense of triumph the heroes gain. There's ''always'' a cruel twist to create drama and after five years of writing there's ''still no resolution to any of this in sight.'' After a while reading the story it just gets hard to ''care.''
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: TooBleakStoppedCaring: Every villain seems to have another hiding behind them waiting to erase any sense of triumph the heroes gain. There's ''always'' a cruel twist to create drama and after five years of writing there's ''still no resolution to any of this in sight.'' After a while reading the story it just gets hard to ''care.''
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* SeasonalRot: In addition to the dropping quality of the story itself, this "saga" also marks a notable drop in quality for Kamen Rider Chrome and Ten-Faced Paladin in general as their previous stories were received far better. This can mostly be attributed to [[SpotlightStealingSquad the fic drawing the bloat of the authors attention compared to their other fics]] and [[ArcFatigue the fact that it just won't]] ''[[ArcFatigue end.]]''
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* ArcFatigue: The series has been going on since ''2014'' with no end in sight. Almost every seeming BigBad so far is inevitably usurped [[spoiler: [[OurHeroIsDead and the main character has died]] ''twice''.]] It's no wonder that for some this is starting to settle in.
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* ArcFatigue: ArcFatigue:
** The series has been going on since ''2014'' with no end in sight. Almost every seeming BigBad so far is inevitably usurped [[spoiler: [[OurHeroIsDead and the main character has died]] ''twice''.]] It's no wonder that for some this is starting to settle in.
** The series has been going on since ''2014'' with no end in sight. Almost every seeming BigBad so far is inevitably usurped [[spoiler: [[OurHeroIsDead and the main character has died]] ''twice''.]] It's no wonder that for some this is starting to settle in.
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*** The first "End of the Armored War Gods" saga was originally posted in September 2016. As of August 2020, it's up to ''three'' "End of the Armored War Gods" sagas, and work is still ongoing.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: The Armored War Gods in general. They built their fame and status on being 'Messengers of Heaven' when in reality they just magically got toys they were carrying to turn real. They ''never'' tell their loved ones the truth of their origins in favor of their fabricated backstories. It makes all of their relationships duplicitous and built on lies by default. It doesn't help that ''all of them'' to some extent can best be summed up as [[FlatCharacter "Generic Isekai protagonist]] [[{{Expy}} with some of the personality of the Rider they're based on."]] with the story-original riders being ''[[FlatCharacter even flatter characters.]]''
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: UnintentionallyUnsympathetic:
** The Armored War Gods in general. They built their fame and status on being 'Messengers of Heaven' when in reality they just magically got toys they were carrying to turn real. They ''never'' tell their loved ones the truth of their origins in favor of their fabricated backstories. It makes all of their relationships duplicitous and built on lies by default. It doesn't help that ''all of them'' to some extent can best be summed up as [[FlatCharacter "Generic Isekai protagonist]] [[{{Expy}} with some of the personality of the Rider they're based on."]] with the story-original riders being ''[[FlatCharacter even flatter characters.]]''
** The Armored War Gods in general. They built their fame and status on being 'Messengers of Heaven' when in reality they just magically got toys they were carrying to turn real. They ''never'' tell their loved ones the truth of their origins in favor of their fabricated backstories. It makes all of their relationships duplicitous and built on lies by default. It doesn't help that ''all of them'' to some extent can best be summed up as [[FlatCharacter "Generic Isekai protagonist]] [[{{Expy}} with some of the personality of the Rider they're based on."]] with the story-original riders being ''[[FlatCharacter even flatter characters.]]''
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Given the trope, pretty sure this was the intended meaning.
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*** The first "End of the Armored War Gods" saga was originally posted in September 2016. As of August 2020, it's up to ''three'' "End of the Armored War Gods" sagas, and work is still ongoing.
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** The Sloth Rinrishi Nanamomo. She's supposed to be a fun and sexy character who's death at Bujin Gaim's hands was cruel and tragic. However, she spent six volumes with a characterization that amounted to being lazy and sleeping around rendering her a FlatCharacter, with her apathy reaching the point of joining the harem of an evil noble who drugged and raped young women and didn't care. It's hard not to see her fate as undeserved.
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** The Sloth Rinrishi Nanamomo. She's supposed to be a fun and sexy character who's whose death at Bujin Gaim's hands was cruel and tragic. However, she spent six volumes with a characterization that amounted to being lazy and sleeping around rendering her a FlatCharacter, with her apathy reaching the point of joining the harem of an evil noble who drugged and raped young women and didn't care. It's hard not to see her fate as undeserved.deserved.
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** Not helping matters is the fact that the series tried to staple together the plots of Series/JukenSentaiGekiranger, Series/KamenRiderGaim and VisualNovel/KoihimeMusou despite the fact that all three of those stories don't mesh well, then tried to make that frankenplot last ''over five years.''
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** The Sloth Rinrishi Nanamomo. She's supposed to be a fun and sexy character who's death at Bujin Gaim's hands was cruel and tragic. However, she spent six volumes who's characterization amounted to being lazy and sleeping around rendering her a FlatCharacter, with her apathy reaching the point of joining the harem of an evil noble who drugged and raped young women and didn't care. It's hard not to see her fate as undeserved.
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** The Sloth Rinrishi Nanamomo. She's supposed to be a fun and sexy character who's death at Bujin Gaim's hands was cruel and tragic. However, she spent six volumes who's with a characterization that amounted to being lazy and sleeping around rendering her a FlatCharacter, with her apathy reaching the point of joining the harem of an evil noble who drugged and raped young women and didn't care. It's hard not to see her fate as undeserved.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: The Armored War Gods in general. They built their fame and status on being 'Messengers of Heaven' when in reality they just magically got toys they were carrying to turn real. They ''never'' tell their loved ones the truth of their origins in favor of their fabricated backstories. It makes all of their relationships duplicitous and built on lies by default. It doesn't help that ''all of them'' to some extent can best be summed up as [[FlatCharacter "Generic Isekai protagonist]] [[{{Expy}} with some of the personality of the Rider they're based on."]] with the original riders being ''[[FlatCharacter even flatter characters.]]''
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: The Armored War Gods in general. They built their fame and status on being 'Messengers of Heaven' when in reality they just magically got toys they were carrying to turn real. They ''never'' tell their loved ones the truth of their origins in favor of their fabricated backstories. It makes all of their relationships duplicitous and built on lies by default. It doesn't help that ''all of them'' to some extent can best be summed up as [[FlatCharacter "Generic Isekai protagonist]] [[{{Expy}} with some of the personality of the Rider they're based on."]] with the original story-original riders being ''[[FlatCharacter even flatter characters.]]''
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: The Armored War Gods in general. They built their fame and status on being 'Messengers of Heaven' when in reality they just magically got toys they were carrying to turn real. They ''never'' tell their loved ones the truth of their origins in favor of their fabricated backstories. It makes all of their relationships duplicitous and built on lies by default.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: The Armored War Gods in general. They built their fame and status on being 'Messengers of Heaven' when in reality they just magically got toys they were carrying to turn real. They ''never'' tell their loved ones the truth of their origins in favor of their fabricated backstories. It makes all of their relationships duplicitous and built on lies by default. It doesn't help that ''all of them'' to some extent can best be summed up as [[FlatCharacter "Generic Isekai protagonist]] [[{{Expy}} with some of the personality of the Rider they're based on."]] with the original riders being ''[[FlatCharacter even flatter characters.]]''
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Every villain seems to have another hiding behind them waiting to erase any sense of triumph the heroes gain. There's ''always'' a cruel twist to create drama and after five years of writing there's ''still no end in sight.'' After a while reading the story it just gets hard to ''care.''
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Every villain seems to have another hiding behind them waiting to erase any sense of triumph the heroes gain. There's ''always'' a cruel twist to create drama and after five years of writing there's ''still no end resolution to any of this in sight.'' After a while reading the story it just gets hard to ''care.''
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Every villain seems to have another hiding behind them waiting to erase any sense of triumph the heroes gain. There's ''always'' a cruel twist to create drama and after five years of writing there's ''still no end in sight.'' After a while reading the story it just gets hard to ''care.''
* FightSceneFailure: To the point where some of the fights scenes aren't even ''fights'' and can be summed up as "Villain gloats, Belt sounds, finishing move, the villain just dumbly stands there and takes the hit".
* FightSceneFailure: To the point where some of the fights scenes aren't even ''fights'' and can be summed up as "Villain gloats, Belt sounds, finishing move, the villain just dumbly stands there and takes the hit".
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** The Sloth Rinshi Nanamomo. She's supposed to be a fun and sexy character who's death at Bujin Gaim's hands was cruel and tragic. However, she spent six volumes who's characterization amounted to being lazy and sleep around rendering her a FlatCharacter, with her apathy reaching the point of joining the harem of an evil noble who drugged and raped young women and didn't care. It's hard not to see her fate as undeserved.
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** The Sloth Rinshi Rinrishi Nanamomo. She's supposed to be a fun and sexy character who's death at Bujin Gaim's hands was cruel and tragic. However, she spent six volumes who's characterization amounted to being lazy and sleep sleeping around rendering her a FlatCharacter, with her apathy reaching the point of joining the harem of an evil noble who drugged and raped young women and didn't care. It's hard not to see her fate as undeserved.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: The Armored War Gods in general. They built their fame and status on being 'Messengers of Heaven' when in reality they just magically got toys they were carrying to turn real. They ''never'' tell their loved ones the truth of their origins in favor of their fabricated backstories. It makes all of their relationships duplicitous and built on lies by default.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: The Armored War Gods in general. They built their fame and status on being 'Messengers of Heaven' when in reality they just magically got toys they were carrying to turn real. They ''never'' tell their loved ones the truth of their origins in favor of their fabricated backstories. It makes all of their relationships duplicitous and built on lies by default.default.
** The Sloth Rinshi Nanamomo. She's supposed to be a fun and sexy character who's death at Bujin Gaim's hands was cruel and tragic. However, she spent six volumes who's characterization amounted to being lazy and sleep around rendering her a FlatCharacter, with her apathy reaching the point of joining the harem of an evil noble who drugged and raped young women and didn't care. It's hard not to see her fate as undeserved.
** The Sloth Rinshi Nanamomo. She's supposed to be a fun and sexy character who's death at Bujin Gaim's hands was cruel and tragic. However, she spent six volumes who's characterization amounted to being lazy and sleep around rendering her a FlatCharacter, with her apathy reaching the point of joining the harem of an evil noble who drugged and raped young women and didn't care. It's hard not to see her fate as undeserved.
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** UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: The Armored War Gods in general. They built their fame and status on being 'Messengers of Heaven' when in reality they just magically got toys they were carrying to turn real. They ''never'' tell their loved ones the truth of their origins in favor of their fabricated backstories. It makes all of their relationships duplicitous by default.
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* ArcFatigue: The series has been going on since ''2014'' with no end in sight. Almost every seeming BigBad so far is inevitably usurped [[spoiler: [[OurHeroIsDead and the main character has died]] ''twice''.]] It's no wonder that for some this is starting to settle in.
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* ArcFatigue: The series has been going on since ''2014'' with no end in sight. Almost every seeming BigBad so far is inevitably usurped [[spoiler: [[OurHeroIsDead and the main character has died]] ''twice''.]] It's no wonder that for some this is starting to settle in.in.
* UnintentionallySympathetic: Many of the villains fall into this because of the story's ProtagonistCenteredMorality.
** While Nise ''is'' a cowardly, lying, back-stabber the writer goes out of his way to bash him, making every scene he's in to make him as one-dimensionally evil as possible to justify torturing him. The blatant bias in the narrative, and how Nise seems to just exist to have the writer shit on him makes him quite pitiable as it becomes clear that he's less of a character and more of a punching bag with no agency.
** Iori's fiance, Ryoma, while she's vapid and shallow...that's all she is. But this seems to justify Iori treating her with malignant disdain and having revenge fantasies about killing her.
** UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: The Armored War Gods in general. They built their fame and status on being 'Messengers of Heaven' when in reality they just magically got toys they were carrying to turn real. They ''never'' tell their loved ones the truth of their origins in favor of their fabricated backstories. It makes all of their relationships duplicitous by default.
* UnintentionallySympathetic: Many of the villains fall into this because of the story's ProtagonistCenteredMorality.
** While Nise ''is'' a cowardly, lying, back-stabber the writer goes out of his way to bash him, making every scene he's in to make him as one-dimensionally evil as possible to justify torturing him. The blatant bias in the narrative, and how Nise seems to just exist to have the writer shit on him makes him quite pitiable as it becomes clear that he's less of a character and more of a punching bag with no agency.
** Iori's fiance, Ryoma, while she's vapid and shallow...that's all she is. But this seems to justify Iori treating her with malignant disdain and having revenge fantasies about killing her.
** UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: The Armored War Gods in general. They built their fame and status on being 'Messengers of Heaven' when in reality they just magically got toys they were carrying to turn real. They ''never'' tell their loved ones the truth of their origins in favor of their fabricated backstories. It makes all of their relationships duplicitous by default.
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* ArcFatigue: The series has been going on since ''2014'' with no end in sight. Almost every seeming BigBad so far is inevitably usurped by a BiggerBad than them [[spoiler: [[OurHeroIsDead and the main character has died]] ''twice''.]] It's no wonder that for some this is starting to settle in.
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* ArcFatigue: The series has been going on since ''2014'' with no end in sight. Almost every seeming BigBad so far is inevitably usurped by a BiggerBad than them [[spoiler: [[OurHeroIsDead and the main character has died]] ''twice''.]] It's no wonder that for some this is starting to settle in.
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* ArcFatigue: The series has been going on since ''2014'' with no end in sight. Almost every seeming BigBad so far is inevitably usurped by a BiggerBad than them [[spoiler: [[OurHeroIsDead and the main character has died]] ''twice''.]] It's no wonder that for some this is starting to settle in.
