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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Neirenn was a very divisive character on the forum during the comic's run. Some fans liked her smart-aleck attitude, friendship with Acheron, and veiled motives, others hated her smart-aleck attitude, arrogance, and propensity to zap people who annoy her, considering her a BrattyHalfPint.
* EsotericHappyEnding: Some readers found the ending dissatisfying for its revelation that [[spoiler:having Acheron be an elf all along. Although he wasn't the only good da'kor shown, he was the only one the other characters actually met, which undercut "his" attempts to demonstrate that da'kor didn't deserve to be denigrated by the other two races. Additionally, the original WhereAreTheyNow epilogue "solved" their DyingRace problem by having the main characters transport them from their homeland to live on an island, fully segregated from the other races, rather than confronting human prejudice or having the elves fulfill their broken deal]].
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the Dakor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, is a good person.]]
* EsotericHappyEnding: Some readers found the ending dissatisfying for its revelation that [[spoiler:having Acheron be an elf all along. Although he wasn't the only good da'kor shown, he was the only one the other characters actually met, which undercut "his" attempts to demonstrate that da'kor didn't deserve to be denigrated by the other two races. Additionally, the original WhereAreTheyNow epilogue "solved" their DyingRace problem by having the main characters transport them from their homeland to live on an island, fully segregated from the other races, rather than confronting human prejudice or having the elves fulfill their broken deal]].
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the Dakor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, is a good person.]]
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Neirenn was a very divisive character on the forum during the comic's run. Some fans liked her smart-aleck attitude, friendship with Acheron, and veiled motives, motives; others hated her smart-aleck attitude, arrogance, and propensity to zap people who annoy her, considering her and considered her a BrattyHalfPint.
* EsotericHappyEnding: Some readers found the ending dissatisfying for its revelation that[[spoiler:having Acheron be [[spoiler:Acheron was an elf all along. Although he wasn't the only good da'kor shown, he was the only one the other characters actually met, which undercut "his" attempts to demonstrate that da'kor didn't deserve to be denigrated by the other two races. Additionally, the original WhereAreTheyNow epilogue "solved" their DyingRace problem by having the main characters transport them from their homeland to live on an island, fully segregated from the other races, rather than confronting human prejudice or having the elves fulfill their broken deal]].
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how theDakor da'kor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, da'kor, is a good person.]]
* EsotericHappyEnding: Some readers found the ending dissatisfying for its revelation that
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the
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* EsotericHappyEnding: Some readers found the ending dissatisfying for its revelation that [[spoiler:having Acheron be an elf all along. Although he wasn't the only good da'kor shown, he was the only one the other characters actually met, which undercut "his" attempts to demonstrate that da'kor didn't deserve to be denigrated by the other two races. Additionally, the original WhereAreTheyNow epilogue "solved" their DyingRace problem by having the main characters transport them from their homeland to live on an island, fully segregated from the other races, rather than confronting human prejudice or having the elves fulfill their broken deal]].
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the Dakor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, is a good person.]]
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Neirenn was a very divisive character on the forum during the comic's run. Some fans liked her smart-aleck attitude, friendship with Acheron, and veiled motives, others hated her smart-aleck attitude, arrogance, and propensity to zap people who annoy her, considering her a BrattyHalfPint.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the Dakor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, is a good person.]]
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the Dakor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, is a good person.]]
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the Dakor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, is a good person.]]
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* BrokenAesop:
** Engaging in FantasticRacism is wrong, except against [[spoiler: the real Acheron]] who turned out to be JerkAss after all. Furthermore, the ultimate solution for FantasticRacism towards Dakor is to [[spoiler: move them somewhere else. As in segregation.]]
** [[EvilIsNotAToy Dark magic is an evil force not to be taken lightly]], unless you're a main character.
** Engaging in FantasticRacism is wrong, except against [[spoiler: the real Acheron]] who turned out to be JerkAss after all. Furthermore, the ultimate solution for FantasticRacism towards Dakor is to [[spoiler: move them somewhere else. As in segregation.]]
** [[EvilIsNotAToy Dark magic is an evil force not to be taken lightly]], unless you're a main character.
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* BaseBreaker: Neirenn was a very divisive character on the forum during the comic's run. Some fans liked her smart-aleck attitude, friendship with Acheron, and veiled motives, others hated her smart-aleck attitude, arrogance, and propensity to zap people who annoy her, considering her a BrattyHalfPint.
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* BaseBreaker: BaseBreakingCharacter: Neirenn was a very divisive character on the forum during the comic's run. Some fans liked her smart-aleck attitude, friendship with Acheron, and veiled motives, others hated her smart-aleck attitude, arrogance, and propensity to zap people who annoy her, considering her a BrattyHalfPint.
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Whoa. Pulling this to discussion.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the Dakor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, is a good person.]]
* UnfortunateImplications: aside from the examples under broken aesop, the elves can breed with the lesser races, producing a race that's not as good as the elves but not as lowly as the humans (magi). Either the author slept through a fairly important part of history class or we just learned something [[ThoseWackyNazis extremely disturbing]] [[TheSocialDarwinist about]] [[SuperBreedingProgram his politics]].
* UnfortunateImplications: aside from the examples under broken aesop, the elves can breed with the lesser races, producing a race that's not as good as the elves but not as lowly as the humans (magi). Either the author slept through a fairly important part of history class or we just learned something [[ThoseWackyNazis extremely disturbing]] [[TheSocialDarwinist about]] [[SuperBreedingProgram his politics]].
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the Dakor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, is a good person.]]
* UnfortunateImplications: aside from the examples under broken aesop, the elves can breed with the lesser races, producing a race that's not as good as the elves but not as lowly as the humans (magi). Either the author slept through a fairly important part of history class or we just learned something [[ThoseWackyNazis extremely disturbing]] [[TheSocialDarwinist about]] [[SuperBreedingProgram his politics]].]]
* UnfortunateImplications: aside from the examples under broken aesop, the elves can breed with the lesser races, producing a race that's not as good as the elves but not as lowly as the humans (magi). Either the author slept through a fairly important part of history class or we just learned something [[ThoseWackyNazis extremely disturbing]] [[TheSocialDarwinist about]] [[SuperBreedingProgram his politics]].
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the Dakor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, is a good person.]]
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the Dakor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, is a good person.]]]]
* UnfortunateImplications: aside from the examples under broken aesop, the elves can breed with the lesser races, producing a race that's not as good as the elves but not as lowly as the humans (magi). Either the author slept through a fairly important part of history class or we just learned something [[ThoseWackyNazis extremely disturbing]] [[TheSocialDarwinist about]] [[SuperBreedingProgram his politics]].
* UnfortunateImplications: aside from the examples under broken aesop, the elves can breed with the lesser races, producing a race that's not as good as the elves but not as lowly as the humans (magi). Either the author slept through a fairly important part of history class or we just learned something [[ThoseWackyNazis extremely disturbing]] [[TheSocialDarwinist about]] [[SuperBreedingProgram his politics]].
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** Engaging in FantasticRacism is wrong, except against [[spoiler: the real Acheron]] who turned out to be JerkAss after all. Furthermore, the ultimate solution for FantasticRacism towards Dakor is to [[spoiler: move them somewhere else.]]
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** Engaging in FantasticRacism is wrong, except against [[spoiler: the real Acheron]] who turned out to be JerkAss after all. Furthermore, the ultimate solution for FantasticRacism towards Dakor is to [[spoiler: move them somewhere else. As in segregation.]]
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* BrokenAesop: Engaging in FantasticRacism is wrong, except against [[spoiler: the real Acheron]] who turned out to be JerkAss after all.
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* BrokenAesop: BrokenAesop:
** Engaging in FantasticRacism is wrong, except against [[spoiler: the real Acheron]] who turned out to be JerkAss afterall.all. Furthermore, the ultimate solution for FantasticRacism towards Dakor is to [[spoiler: move them somewhere else.]]
** [[EvilIsNotAToy Dark magic is an evil force not to be taken lightly]], unless you're a main character.
** Engaging in FantasticRacism is wrong, except against [[spoiler: the real Acheron]] who turned out to be JerkAss after
** [[EvilIsNotAToy Dark magic is an evil force not to be taken lightly]], unless you're a main character.
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* BaseBreaker: Neirenn was a very divisive character on the forum during the comic's run. Some fans liked her smart-aleck attitude, friendship with Acheron, and veiled motives, others hated her smart-aleck attitude, arrogance, and propensity to zap people who annoy her, considering her a BrattyHalfPint.
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* BrokenAesop: Engaging in FantasticRacism is wrong, except against [[spoiler: the real]] Acheron who turned out to be JerkAss after all.
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* BrokenAesop: Engaging in FantasticRacism is wrong, except against [[spoiler: the real]] Acheron real Acheron]] who turned out to be JerkAss after all.
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Restored. There\'s a reason why it\'s called \"Your Mileage May Vary\"
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* BrokenAesop: Engaging in FantasticRacism is wrong, except against [[spoiler: the real]] Acheron who turned out to be JerkAss after all.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the Dakor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, is a good person.]]
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the Dakor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, is a good person.]]
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So, one? You\'re trying to use Broken Aesop twice. And two? Nope.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: [[spoiler: The revelation that Acheron was actually Kayn'dar all along negated the earlier themes about how the Dakor aren't all bad because Acheron, thought to have been a Dakor, is a good person.]]
