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*** [[spoiler:Colin's death is particularly painful because of the context change. Here it's not just a younger ally of Hannah's who dies; it's her [[FamilyOfChoice little brother]] lying dead in front of her and all she can do is scream.]]

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*** [[spoiler:Colin's death is particularly painful because of the context change. Here Here, it's not just a younger ally of Hannah's who dies; it's her [[FamilyOfChoice little brother]] lying dead in front of her and all she can do is scream.]]
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*** [[spoiler:Colin's death is particularly painful because of the context change. Here it's not just a younger ally of Cho's who dies; it's her [[FamilyOfChoice little brother]] lying dead in front of her and all she can do is scream.]]

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*** [[spoiler:Colin's death is particularly painful because of the context change. Here it's not just a younger ally of Cho's Hannah's who dies; it's her [[FamilyOfChoice little brother]] lying dead in front of her and all she can do is scream.]]

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* JerkassWoobie: Pansy may have been a huge JerkAss towards non pure-blooded people, but ultimately, she's only a young woman who is unprepared for the horrors of the war unfolding right before her eyes.
* NightmareFuel: The story was taking place in a middle of a war. And when Death Eaters took over the ministry, no one, not even children, is safe.

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* JerkassWoobie: Pansy may have been a huge JerkAss {{Jerkass}} towards non pure-blooded non-pure-blooded people, but ultimately, she's only a young woman who is unprepared for the horrors of the war unfolding right before her eyes.
* NightmareFuel: The story was taking place in a middle of a war. And when Death Eaters took over the ministry, Ministry, no one, not even children, is safe.



** Cho is also given a handful of hidden depth and her own adventures in USA outside of simply being Harry's first crush.

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** Cho is also given a handful of hidden depth depths and her own adventures in the USA outside of simply being Harry's first crush.



** When Hannah's [[spoiler: mother]] got killed in an explosion, she let out a very heartwrenching cry.
** Bridget's [[spoiler: trial]] is a heartwrench from start to finish. The way she is unfairly prosecuted by Umbridge and was nearly subjected to [[spoiler: Dementor's Kiss]] is painful to watch.
** Owen's [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice when he tried to protect his mother from an incoming killing curse which ends up killing both of them in one shot]].
** Arjuna's [[spoiler: heartfelt letter after her HeroicSacrifice and got killed by Montmercy]] was very sad yet uplifting. Seeing Harry, Ron, and Hermione's reaction to the letter was pretty heartbreaking.
** [[spoiler: Colin and Millicent's death after they got killed by Dolohov and Bellatrix respectively. Seeing Hannah, Cho, Dennis, and Kevin reacting to their corpses in The Great Hall is just heartbreaking.]]
*** [[spoiler: Colin's death is particularly painful because of the context change. Here it's not just a younger ally of Cho's who dies; it's her [[FamilyOfChoice little brother]] lying dead in front of her and all she can do is scream.]]

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** When Hannah's [[spoiler: mother]] [[spoiler:mother]] got killed in an explosion, she let out a very heartwrenching cry.
** Bridget's [[spoiler: trial]] [[spoiler:trial]] is a heartwrench heart-wrencher from start to finish. The way she is unfairly prosecuted by Umbridge and was nearly subjected to [[spoiler: [[spoiler:the Dementor's Kiss]] is painful to watch.
** Owen's [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice when he tried to protect his mother from an incoming killing curse Killing Curse, which ends up killing both of them in one shot]].
** Arjuna's [[spoiler: heartfelt [[spoiler:heartfelt letter after her HeroicSacrifice and got killed by Montmercy]] was very sad yet uplifting. Seeing Harry, Ron, and Hermione's reaction to the letter was pretty heartbreaking.
** [[spoiler: Colin [[spoiler:Colin and Millicent's death after they got killed by Dolohov and Bellatrix respectively. Seeing Hannah, Cho, Dennis, and Kevin reacting to their corpses in The Great Hall is just heartbreaking.]]
*** [[spoiler: Colin's [[spoiler:Colin's death is particularly painful because of the context change. Here it's not just a younger ally of Cho's who dies; it's her [[FamilyOfChoice little brother]] lying dead in front of her and all she can do is scream.]]]]
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* JerkassWoobie:
** Pansy may have been a huge JerkAss towards non pure-blooded people, but ultimately, she's only a young woman who is unprepared for the horrors of the war unfolding right before her eyes.
* NightmareFuel:
** The story was taking place in a middle of a war. And when Death Eaters took over the ministry, no one, not even

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* JerkassWoobie:
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JerkassWoobie: Pansy may have been a huge JerkAss towards non pure-blooded people, but ultimately, she's only a young woman who is unprepared for the horrors of the war unfolding right before her eyes.
* NightmareFuel:
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NightmareFuel: The story was taking place in a middle of a war. And when Death Eaters took over the ministry, no one, not even children, is safe.
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** [[spoiler: Colin and Millicent's death after they got killed by Dolohov and Bellatrix respectively. Seeing Hannah, Cho, Dennis, and Kevin reacting to their corpses in The Great Hall is just heartbreaking.]]

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** [[spoiler: Colin and Millicent's death after they got killed by Dolohov and Bellatrix respectively. Seeing Hannah, Cho, Dennis, and Kevin reacting to their corpses in The Great Hall is just heartbreaking.]]
*** [[spoiler: Colin's death is particularly painful because of the context change. Here it's not just a younger ally of Cho's who dies; it's her [[FamilyOfChoice little brother]] lying dead in front of her and all she can do is scream.
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* JerkAssWoobie:

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* JerkAssWoobie:*JerkassWoobie:
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** Pansy may have been a huge JerkAss towards non pure-blooded people, but ultimately, she's only a young woman who is unprepared for the horrors of the war unfolding right before her eyes.

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* NightmareFuel:
** The story was taking place in a middle of a war. And when Death Eaters took over the ministry, no one, not even



** Cho is also given a handful of hidden depth and her own adventures outside of simply being Harry's first crush.

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** Cho is also given a handful of hidden depth and her own adventures in USA outside of simply being Harry's first crush.crush.
* TearJerker:
** When Hannah's [[spoiler: mother]] got killed in an explosion, she let out a very heartwrenching cry.
** Bridget's [[spoiler: trial]] is a heartwrench from start to finish. The way she is unfairly prosecuted by Umbridge and was nearly subjected to [[spoiler: Dementor's Kiss]] is painful to watch.
** Owen's [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice when he tried to protect his mother from an incoming killing curse which ends up killing both of them in one shot]].
** Arjuna's [[spoiler: heartfelt letter after her HeroicSacrifice and got killed by Montmercy]] was very sad yet uplifting. Seeing Harry, Ron, and Hermione's reaction to the letter was pretty heartbreaking.
** [[spoiler: Colin and Millicent's death after they got killed by Dolohov and Bellatrix respectively. Seeing Hannah, Cho, Dennis, and Kevin reacting to their corpses in The Great Hall is just heartbreaking.]]
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** Colin, who was simply an annoying fanboy of Harry in the books, is given much more depth in this fic.

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** Colin, who was simply an annoying fanboy of Harry in the books, is given much more depth in this fic.fic.
** Cho is also given a handful of hidden depth and her own adventures outside of simply being Harry's first crush.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap:
** Colin, who was simply an annoying fanboy of Harry in the books, is given much more depth in this fic.

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