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---> '''Jagi:''' "You're...ANNA! Anna, save me, please! I'm begging you! Tell meee...please, tell me...where did I go wrong?!" ''(Thinking.)'' ''[[MyGreatestFailure Oh, that's right... ...I even abandoned Anna...]]''
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---> '''Jagi:''' "You're... ANNA! Anna, save me, please! I'm begging you! Tell meee...meee... please, tell me...me... where did I go wrong?!" ''(Thinking.)'' ''[[MyGreatestFailure Oh, that's right... ...I even abandoned Anna...]]''
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** Anna's [[spoiler:death]]. After being raped and gravely wounded, she's crawling desesperately in order to find Jagi. [[spoiler:He arrives too late. She's already dead when he finds her.]] Also, after finding her, Jagi [[spoiler:gets shot and it looks like he's going to die with her in his arms]].
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** Anna's [[spoiler:death]]. After being raped and gravely wounded, she's crawling desesperately desperately in order to find Jagi. [[spoiler:He arrives too late. She's already dead when he finds her.]] Also, after finding her, Jagi [[spoiler:gets shot and it looks like he's going to die with her in his arms]].
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--> '''Jagi:''' "[[MyGreatestFailure Anna... I couldn't do anything...]]"
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* CounterpartComparison: This story could be compared to ''ComicBook/TheKillingJoke,'' as both have a questionably canonical tragic backstory to [[Comicbook/TheJoker a character]] who is a monster in canon.
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* CounterpartComparison: This story could be compared to ''ComicBook/TheKillingJoke,'' as both have a questionably canonical tragic backstory to a [[Comicbook/TheJoker a character]] who is a monster in canon.
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* CounterpartComparison: This story could be compared to ''ComicBook/TheKillingJoke,'' as both have a questionably canonical tragic backstory to a [[Comicbook/TheJoker a character]] who is a monster in canon.
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* CounterpartComparison: This story could be compared to ''ComicBook/TheKillingJoke,'' as both have a questionably canonical tragic backstory to a [[SelfDemonstrating/TheJoker a character]] who is a CompleteMonster in canon.
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* CounterpartComparison: This story could be compared to ''ComicBook/TheKillingJoke,'' as both have a questionably canonical tragic backstory to a [[SelfDemonstrating/TheJoker [[Comicbook/TheJoker a character]] who is a CompleteMonster monster in canon.
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* CounterpartComparison: This story could be compared to ''ComicBook/TheKillingJoke,'' as both have a questionably canonical tragic backstory to a [[SelfDemonstrating/TheJoker a character]] who is a CompleteMonster in canon.
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** Anna's [[spoiler:death]]. After being raped and gravely wounded, she's crawling desesperately in order to find Jagi. [[spoiler:He arrives too late. She's already dead when he finds her.]]
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** Anna's [[spoiler:death]]. After being raped and gravely wounded, she's crawling desesperately in order to find Jagi. [[spoiler:He arrives too late. She's already dead when he finds her.]]]] Also, after finding her, Jagi [[spoiler:gets shot and it looks like he's going to die with her in his arms]].
--> '''Jagi:''' "[[MyGreatestFailure Anna... I couldn't do anything...]]"
--> '''Jagi:''' "[[MyGreatestFailure Anna... I couldn't do anything...]]"
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** Even after all the heinous things he did, Jagi may evoke a tiny bit of sympathy when, while dying, he starts to hallucinate and thinks he sees Anna.
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** Even after all the heinous things he did, Jagi may evoke [[CryForTheDevil a tiny bit of sympathy sympathy]] when, while dying, he starts to hallucinate and thinks he sees Anna.Anna.
--> '''Jagi:''' "You're...ANNA! Anna, save me, please! I'm begging you! Tell meee...please, tell me...where did I go wrong?!" ''(Thinking.)'' ''[[MyGreatestFailure Oh, that's right... ...I even abandoned Anna...]]''
--> '''Jagi:''' "You're...ANNA! Anna, save me, please! I'm begging you! Tell meee...please, tell me...where did I go wrong?!" ''(Thinking.)'' ''[[MyGreatestFailure Oh, that's right... ...I even abandoned Anna...]]''
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* JerkassWoobie: Jagi.
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* JerkassWoobie: Jagi.Jagi, after losing his girlfriend.
* TearJerker:
** Anna's [[spoiler:death]]. After being raped and gravely wounded, she's crawling desesperately in order to find Jagi. [[spoiler:He arrives too late. She's already dead when he finds her.]]
** Even after all the heinous things he did, Jagi may evoke a tiny bit of sympathy when, while dying, he starts to hallucinate and thinks he sees Anna.
* TearJerker:
** Anna's [[spoiler:death]]. After being raped and gravely wounded, she's crawling desesperately in order to find Jagi. [[spoiler:He arrives too late. She's already dead when he finds her.]]
** Even after all the heinous things he did, Jagi may evoke a tiny bit of sympathy when, while dying, he starts to hallucinate and thinks he sees Anna.
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* CryForTheDevil: This manages to give [[TheSociopath Jagi]] a sympathetic backstory.
* JerkassWoobie: Jagi.
* JerkassWoobie: Jagi.
