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** Just when it looks like Warden and Mistress are going to be separated for good, Cherice suddenly reveals that Mistress is pregnant. The reason that moment qualifies for this trope is because there was no indication of it prior. Even Mistress had no idea she was pregnant until then.
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** Just when it looks like Warden and Mistress are going to be separated for good, Cherice suddenly reveals that Mistress is pregnant. The reason that moment qualifies for this trope is because there There was no ''no'' indication of it prior.this happening up until that moment. Even Mistress had no idea she was pregnant until then.
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* AssPull: Just when it looks like Warden and Mistress are going to be separated for good, Cherice suddenly reveals that Mistress is pregnant. The reason that moment is considered to be an AssPull is because there was no indication of it prior. Even Mistress had no idea she was pregnant until then.
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** Just when it looks like Warden and Mistress are going to be separated for good, Cherice suddenly reveals that Mistress is pregnant. The reason that momentis considered to be an AssPull qualifies for this trope is because there was no indication of it prior. Even Mistress had no idea she was pregnant until then.
** Just when it looks like Warden and Mistress are going to be separated for good, Cherice suddenly reveals that Mistress is pregnant. The reason that moment
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* EndingFatigue: For some reason, the fanfic feels the need to drag its feet after Chapter 10, which probably would've made for an okay ending.
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** It also just so happens that her mother had a rule that if her daughter was pregnant, she couldn't leave.
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** It also just so happens that her mother had a rule that if her daughter was pregnant, tied to anything at all (i.e. she was pregnant by somebody successful or something like that), she couldn't leave.
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** It also just so happens that her mother had a rule that if her daughter was pregnant, she couldn't leave.
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* AssPull: Just when it looks like Warden and Mistress are going to be separated for good, Cherice suddenly reveals that Mistress is pregnant. The reason that moment is considered to be an AssPull is due to the fact that there was no indication prior to it. Even Mistress had no idea she was pregnant until then.
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* AssPull: Just when it looks like Warden and Mistress are going to be separated for good, Cherice suddenly reveals that Mistress is pregnant. The reason that moment is considered to be an AssPull is due to the fact that because there was no indication prior to it.of it prior. Even Mistress had no idea she was pregnant until then.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Some readers argue that the fanfic would've been better off without the Warden and the Mistress having children at the end (because they think [[spoiler: Mistress turning out to be pregnant in Chapter 10]] was a bit of an AssPull on the writer's part) and just focusing on the two being StarCrossedLovers instead.
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* AssPull: Just when it looks like Warden and Mistress are going to be separated for good, Cherice suddenly reveals that Mistress is pregnant. The reason that moment is considered to be an AssPull is due to the fact that there was no indication prior to it. Even Mistress had no idea she was pregnant until then.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Some readers argue that the fanfic would've been better off without the Warden and the Mistress having children at the end (because they think[[spoiler: Mistress turning out to be pregnant in Chapter 10]] 10 was a bit of an AssPull on the writer's part) and just focusing on the two being StarCrossedLovers instead.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Some readers argue that the fanfic would've been better off without the Warden and the Mistress having children at the end (because they think
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Some readers argue that the fanfic would've been better off without the Warden and the Mistress having children at the end (because they think the later chapters were a bit of an AssPull on the writer's part) and just focusing on the two being StarCrossedLovers instead.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Some readers argue that the fanfic would've been better off without the Warden and the Mistress having children at the end (because they think the later chapters were [[spoiler: Mistress turning out to be pregnant in Chapter 10]] was a bit of an AssPull on the writer's part) and just focusing on the two being StarCrossedLovers instead.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Some readers argue that the fanfic would've been better off without the Warden and the Mistress having children at the end (because they think the ending was a bit of a CopOut on the writer's part) and just focusing on the two being StarCrossedLovers instead.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Some readers argue that the fanfic would've been better off without the Warden and the Mistress having children at the end (because they think the ending was later chapters were a bit of a CopOut an AssPull on the writer's part) and just focusing on the two being StarCrossedLovers instead.
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* YouWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Some readers argue that the fanfic would've been better off without the Warden and the Mistress having children at the end (because they think the ending was a bit of a cop out on the writer's part) and just focusing on the two being StarCrossedLovers instead.
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* YouWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Some readers argue that the fanfic would've been better off without the Warden and the Mistress having children at the end (because they think the ending was a bit of a cop out CopOut on the writer's part) and just focusing on the two being StarCrossedLovers instead.
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