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** The new President was the holder of the lowest-ranking position in the Cabinet (Secretary of Health, Education, and Welfare). As she says in her inaugural address (on an emergency radio message broadcast to the nation) "Some of you may have guessed how it happens that I, the head of the most junior of government departments and a woman, have been forced to assume the duties and responsibilities of Chief Executive on this, the most terrible day in our history". She goes on to confirm that Washington, D.C., has been destroyed, and the President, Vice President, all other Cabinet members, leaders of the U.S. Senate and House of Representatives, and the large majority of Congress have been killed; the new Acting Chief Executive happened to be out of town on The Day. That she is "head of the most junior of government departments" seems to be as shocking as that she is a woman.

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** The new President was the holder of the lowest-ranking position in the Cabinet (Secretary of Health, Education, and Welfare). As she says in her inaugural address (on an emergency radio message broadcast to the nation) "Some of you may have guessed how it happens that I, the head of the most junior of government departments and a woman, have been forced to assume the duties and responsibilities of Chief Executive on this, the most terrible day in our history". She goes on to confirm that Washington, D.C., has been destroyed, and the President, Vice President, all other Cabinet members, leaders of the U.S. Senate and House of Representatives, and the large majority of Congress have been killed; the new Acting Chief Executive happened to be out of town on The Day. That she is was "head of the most junior of government departments" seems to be as shocking as that she is a woman.
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The new President is explicitly named as the former Secretary of Health, Education, and Welfare, which did already exist at the time of the novel's publication. (That department was created in 1953.)


** The reference to the new President referring to herself as having previously been Secretary of Education could be an example given that it wasn't until 1979, 20 years after the novel's publication, that the Department of Education was spun off from the former Department of Health, Education and Welfare to become a separate office in the United States Cabinet.
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** Everyone is more surprised by the fact that the new President is a woman than that she was the Secretary of Education. Her inaugural address even says something along the lines of "The fact that I, the former Secretary of Education and a woman, am addressing you should tell you how bad things are".

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** Everyone is more surprised by the fact that the The new President is a woman than that she was the Secretary holder of Education. Her the lowest-ranking position in the Cabinet (Secretary of Health, Education, and Welfare). As she says in her inaugural address even says something along (on an emergency radio message broadcast to the lines nation) "Some of "The fact you may have guessed how it happens that I, the former Secretary head of Education the most junior of government departments and a woman, am addressing you should tell you how bad things are".have been forced to assume the duties and responsibilities of Chief Executive on this, the most terrible day in our history". She goes on to confirm that Washington, D.C., has been destroyed, and the President, Vice President, all other Cabinet members, leaders of the U.S. Senate and House of Representatives, and the large majority of Congress have been killed; the new Acting Chief Executive happened to be out of town on The Day. That she is "head of the most junior of government departments" seems to be as shocking as that she is a woman.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: CoolOldLady Alice Cooksley the librarian and (for some of their FairForItsDay characterization) Malachi, Peyton and Rita.

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* EnsembleDarkhorse: CoolOldLady Alice Cooksley the librarian and (for some of their FairForItsDay characterization) Malachi, Peyton and Rita.Rita are all decently-regarded secondary characters.

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* HilariousInHindsight: At the time the novel was written, both home canning and breastfeeding were in decline and are portrayed as relics which have all but disappeared, although both have enjoyed a resurgence since then. This leads to dialogue where a character unintentionally sounds sarcastic:

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* HilariousInHindsight: HilariousInHindsight:
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At the time the novel was written, both home canning and breastfeeding were in decline and are portrayed as relics which have all but disappeared, although both have enjoyed a resurgence since then. This leads to dialogue where a character unintentionally sounds sarcastic:


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** The reference to the new President referring to herself as having previously been Secretary of Education could be an example given that it wasn't until 1979, 20 years after the novel's publication, that the Department of Education was spun off from the former Department of Health, Education and Welfare to become a separate office in the United States Cabinet.
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* HilariousInHindsight: At the time the novel was written, both home canning and breastfeeding were in decline and are portrayed as relics which have all but disappeared, although both have enjoyed a resurgence since then. This leads to dialogue where a character unintentionally sounds sarcastic:
-->'''Helen:''' What happens to babies?\\
'''Doctor:''' Evaporated or condensed canned milk... while it lasts. After that, it's mother's milk.\\
'''Helen:''' That will be old-fashioned, won't it?

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** The women aren't housewives or trophies. Lavinia's house may have been poorly designed for Florida, but the fact is she designed a house. Libby resents being sidelined as a woman, but her degree in psychology comes in handy for understanding the pressures put on the various citizens of River Road. Where the boys are content to settle into their roles and take orders, Peyton's the one who explores and strives to contribute on her own.

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** The women aren't housewives or trophies. Lavinia's house may have been poorly designed for Florida, UsefulNotes/{{Florida}}, but the fact is she designed a house. Libby resents being sidelined as a woman, but her degree in psychology comes in handy for understanding the pressures put on the various citizens of River Road. Where the boys are content to settle into their roles and take orders, Peyton's the one who explores and strives to contribute on her own.



* InferredHolocaust: If the USA can suffer such catastrophic damage and still be considered the victor, then the Soviet Union must be in a ''ghastly'' state. The only knowledge the characters and reader get of their situation is that at last report their government was ruling from ''Mongolia''.

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* InferredHolocaust: If the USA can suffer such catastrophic damage and still be considered the victor, then the Soviet Union must be in a ''ghastly'' state. The only knowledge the characters and reader get of their situation is that at last report their government was ruling from ''Mongolia''.''Mongolia''.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: CoolOldLady Alice Cooksley the librarian and (for some of their FairForItsDay characterization) Malachi, Peyton and Rita.
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** Randy's really gets around ex Rita Hernandez is initially just a hanger on to her storekeeper brother. After he dies, Randy and Dan predict Rita will need to attach herself to another man to survive, but she keeps trading on her own, and when reluctantly approached to provide supplies for the plan to trap the raiders not only agrees but proves innovative in suggesting ways not to raise suspicions that it's a trap.

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** Randy's really gets around Hispanic, ReallyGetsAround ex Rita Hernandez is initially just a hanger on to her storekeeper brother. After he dies, Randy and Dan predict Rita will need to attach herself to another man to survive, but she keeps trading on her own, and when reluctantly approached to provide supplies for the plan to trap the raiders not only agrees but proves innovative in suggesting ways not to raise suspicions that it's a trap.
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** Randy's really gets around ex Rita Hernandez is initially just a hanger on to her storekeeper brother. After he dies, Randy and Dan predict Rita will need to attach herself to another man to survive, but she keeps trading on her own, and when reluctantly approached to provide supplies for the plan to trap the raiders not only agrees but proves innovative in suggesting ways not to raise suspicions that it's a trap.

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** The most capable individuals are black: Malachai, the non-drinking mechanic who knows war is coming because he keeps up with the news who is responsible for the folks on River Road having running water; Preacher Henry, who is a more than capable farmer and expert fisherman whose knowledge, passed on to young Peyton (a girl), helps keep the people of River Road from starving in August. He also, without any comment from anyone, presides over Randy and Libby's wedding. Even Two-Tone, who mostly is an arch-typical Lazy Shiftless Black Guy, manages one or two moments where he is genuinely useful.
*** Racism generally dies in the town when the white residents realize that the black residents are more capable of living off the land and generally aren't starving as a result.

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** The most capable individuals are black: Malachai, the non-drinking mechanic who knows war is coming because he keeps up with the news who is responsible for the folks on River Road having running water; Preacher Henry, who is a more than capable farmer and expert fisherman whose knowledge, passed on to young Peyton (a girl), helps keep the people of River Road from starving in August. He also, without any comment from anyone, presides over Randy and Libby's wedding. Even Two-Tone, who mostly is an arch-typical Lazy Shiftless Black Guy, manages one or two moments where he is genuinely useful. \n*** Racism generally dies in the town when the white residents realize that the black residents are more capable of living off the land and generally aren't starving as a result.
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** The most capable individuals are black: Malachai, the non-drinking mechanic who knew war was coming because he kept up with the news who was responsible for the folks on River Road having running water; Preacher Henry, who was a more than capable farmer and expert fisherman whose knowledge, passed on to young Peyton (a girl), helped keep the people of River Road from starving in August.

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** The most capable individuals are black: Malachai, the non-drinking mechanic who knew knows war was is coming because he kept keeps up with the news who was is responsible for the folks on River Road having running water; Preacher Henry, who was is a more than capable farmer and expert fisherman whose knowledge, passed on to young Peyton (a girl), helped helps keep the people of River Road from starving in August.August. He also, without any comment from anyone, presides over Randy and Libby's wedding. Even Two-Tone, who mostly is an arch-typical Lazy Shiftless Black Guy, manages one or two moments where he is genuinely useful.
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** The most capable individuals are black: Malachai, the non-drinking mechanic who knew war was coming because he kept up with the news who was responsible for the folks on river road having running water; Preacher Henry, who was a more than capable farmer and expert fisherman whose knowledge, passed on to young Peyton (a girl), helped keep the people of River Road from starving in August.

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** The most capable individuals are black: Malachai, the non-drinking mechanic who knew war was coming because he kept up with the news who was responsible for the folks on river road River Road having running water; Preacher Henry, who was a more than capable farmer and expert fisherman whose knowledge, passed on to young Peyton (a girl), helped keep the people of River Road from starving in August.

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* FairForItsDay: The author was incredibly progressive.

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* FairForItsDay: The author was was, in some ways, incredibly progressive.



** Despite that, the people in charge are the educated white men, and the ''de facto'', later ''de jure'' ruler of Fort Repose is Lieutenant Randall Bragg (Res.), white scion of a wealthy and politically powerful family.
** Everyone is more surprised by the fact that the new President is a woman than that it's the Secretary of Education. Her inaugural address even says something along the lines of "The fact that I, the former Secretary of Education and a woman, am addressing you should tell you how bad things are".

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** Despite that, the people in charge are the educated white men, and the ''de facto'', later ''de jure'' ruler of Fort Repose is Lieutenant Randall Bragg (Res.), white scion of a wealthy and politically powerful family.
** Everyone is more surprised by the fact that the new President is a woman than that it's she was the Secretary of Education. Her inaugural address even says something along the lines of "The fact that I, the former Secretary of Education and a woman, am addressing you should tell you how bad things are".
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** Everyone is more surprised by the fact that the new President is a woman than that it's the Secretary of Education. Her inaugural address even says something along the lines of "The fact that I, the former Secretary of Education and a woman, am addressing you should tell you how bad things are".

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** Everyone is more surprised by the fact that the new President is a woman than that it's the Secretary of Education. Her inaugural address even says something along the lines of "The fact that I, the former Secretary of Education and a woman, am addressing you should tell you how bad things are".are".
* InferredHolocaust: If the USA can suffer such catastrophic damage and still be considered the victor, then the Soviet Union must be in a ''ghastly'' state. The only knowledge the characters and reader get of their situation is that at last report their government was ruling from ''Mongolia''.
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*** Racism generally dies in the town when the white residents realize that the black residents are more capable of living off the land and generally aren't starving as a result.
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** The most capable individuals are black: Malachai, the non-drinking mechanic who knew war was coming because he kept up with the news who was responsible for the folks on river road having running water; Precher Henry, who was a more than capable farmer and expert fisherman whose knowledge, passed on to young Peyton (a girl), helped keep the people of River Road from starving in August.

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** The most capable individuals are black: Malachai, the non-drinking mechanic who knew war was coming because he kept up with the news who was responsible for the folks on river road having running water; Precher Preacher Henry, who was a more than capable farmer and expert fisherman whose knowledge, passed on to young Peyton (a girl), helped keep the people of River Road from starving in August.
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* FairForItsDay: The author was incredibly progressive.
** The most capable individuals are black: Malachai, the non-drinking mechanic who knew war was coming because he kept up with the news who was responsible for the folks on river road having running water; Precher Henry, who was a more than capable farmer and expert fisherman whose knowledge, passed on to young Peyton (a girl), helped keep the people of River Road from starving in August.
** The women aren't housewives or trophies. Lavinia's house may have been poorly designed for Florida, but the fact is she designed a house. Libby resents being sidelined as a woman, but her degree in psychology comes in handy for understanding the pressures put on the various citizens of River Road. Where the boys are content to settle into their roles and take orders, Peyton's the one who explores and strives to contribute on her own.
** Despite that, the people in charge are the educated white men, and the ''de facto'', later ''de jure'' ruler of Fort Repose is Lieutenant Randall Bragg (Res.), white scion of a wealthy and politically powerful family.
** Everyone is more surprised by the fact that the new President is a woman than that it's the Secretary of Education. Her inaugural address even says something along the lines of "The fact that I, the former Secretary of Education and a woman, am addressing you should tell you how bad things are".

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