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** The moment where Pterodactus [[SpottingTheThread spots the thread]] and breaks through Unicron's manipulations. [[spoiler: The moment Unicron tries to convince Pterodactus that Grimlock is just using him, Pterodactus is infuriated that Unicron tried to paint Grimlock as a villain. After everything Grimlock has done for Pterodactus before and after he became leaders of the Autobots, it's a touching showcase of the strength of their bond.]]
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Pterodactus's WhatTheHellHero speech is ''most'' satisfying after everything he's gone through at the Autobots' hands.
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** Pterodactus's WhatTheHellHero speech is ''most'' satisfying after everything he's gone through at the Autobots' hands.
** Pterodactus's WhatTheHellHero speech is ''most'' satisfying after everything he's gone through at the Autobots' hands.
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%%** Pterodactus's his final encounter with Unicron.
* MoralEventHorizon: Galvatron seems reasonable enough to make an alliance with at first… but when he [[spoiler: stabs Pterodactus in the back and tries to cut the Matrix out of him while he's still alive,]] all pretense of AffablyEvil is gone.
* MoralEventHorizon: Galvatron seems reasonable enough to make an alliance with at first… but when he [[spoiler: stabs Pterodactus in the back and tries to cut the Matrix out of him while he's still alive,]] all pretense of AffablyEvil is gone.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Galvatron seems reasonable enough to make an alliance with at
* SpiritualSuccessor: Can be seen as this to the author's other Dinobot fics, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4016598/1/The-Alone-Place The Alone Place]] and its sequel, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4662482/1/The-Dividing-WallThe Dividing Wall.]] All three fics share similar elements, such as Swoop being a medic's apprentice, Snarl being a pilot, and Arcee being one of the few Autobots to stand up for the Dinobots. The mistreatment of the Dinobots and the [[FantasticRacism divide between them and the other Autobots]] also drives the plot in all three fics.
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* WhatAnIdiot: Quick, Hot Rod, you’re being chased by a horde of angry Junkions! What do you do? Why, run back to your friends and lead the entire pack directly toward them, of course!
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* CompleteMonster: [[GodOfEvil Unicron]], the [[CainAndAbel evil brother]] and antithesis of Primus himself, [[PlanetEater devoured many planets and their inhabitants]], including Lithone, Kranix's homeworld. After learning about Optimus Prime's death, he rebuilt Megatron into Galvatron, orders him to destroy Pterodactus Prime, and devours the Autobots' Moonbase. When Galvatron [[YouHaveFailedMe fails him]], Unicron torments him and decides to destroy Cybertron as a punishment. After Pterodactus got inside him, Unicron tries to convince him to destroy the Matrix of Leadership and when that fails, orders Galvatron to kill him. A sadistic and merciless monster who hates Primus's creatures, Unicron won't stop until he [[OmnicidalManiac destroys the entire universe]].
* CrossesTheLineTwice: Pterodactus chopping off Wreck-Gar's arms -- not especially funny. Slag and Sludge proceeding to play catch with said severed arms -- priceless.
* {{Fanon}}: Swoop serves as a medic in this fic, a popular Fanon for ''Franchise/{{Transformers}}'' fanfics.
* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments:
** "Me Grimlock good teacher!"
** "For last time, Sludge, Easter Bunny just stupid human legend! No such thing!"
%%* GoddamnedBats: Unicron's antibodies.
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Pterodactus' meeting with Optimus Prime, Wheeljack, and Ratchet in the Matrix. After everything he's been through, a SoProudOfYou moment is sorely needed.
* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Pterodactus's WhatTheHellHero speech is ''most'' satisfying after everything he's gone through at the Autobots' hands.
%%** Pterodactus's his final encounter with Unicron.
* MoralEventHorizon: Galvatron seems reasonable enough to make an alliance with at first… but when he [[spoiler: stabs Pterodactus in the back and tries to cut the Matrix out of him while he's still alive,]] all pretense of AffablyEvil is gone.
* TakeThatScrappy: [[MotorMouth Blurr]], whom the author has claimed to be the most annoying character in the cartoon on several occasions, gets told to shut up frequently.
* WhatAnIdiot: Quick, Hot Rod, you’re being chased by a horde of angry Junkions! What do you do? Why, run back to your friends and lead the entire pack directly toward them, of course!
%%* TheWoobie: You will want to hug Swoop at some point during this fic.
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* CompleteMonster: [[GodOfEvil Unicron]], the [[CainAndAbel evil brother]] and antithesis of Primus himself, [[PlanetEater devoured many planets and their inhabitants]], including Lithone, Kranix's homeworld. After learning about Optimus Prime's death, he rebuilt Megatron into Galvatron, orders him to destroy Pterodactus Prime, and devours the Autobots' Moonbase. When Galvatron [[YouHaveFailedMe fails him]], Unicron torments him and decides to destroy Cybertron as a punishment. After Pterodactus got inside him, Unicron tries to convince him to destroy the Matrix of Leadership and when that fails, orders Galvatron to kill him. A sadistic and merciless monster who hates Primus's creatures, Unicron won't stop until he [[OmnicidalManiac destroys the entire universe]].
* CrossesTheLineTwice: Pterodactus chopping off Wreck-Gar's arms -- not especially funny. Slag and Sludge proceeding to play catch with said severed arms -- priceless.
* {{Fanon}}: Swoop serves as a medic in this fic, a popular Fanon for ''Franchise/{{Transformers}}'' fanfics.
* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments:
** "Me Grimlock good teacher!"
** "For last time, Sludge, Easter Bunny just stupid human legend! No such thing!"
%%* GoddamnedBats: Unicron's antibodies.
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Pterodactus' meeting with Optimus Prime, Wheeljack, and Ratchet in the Matrix. After everything he's been through, a SoProudOfYou moment is sorely needed.
* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Pterodactus's WhatTheHellHero speech is ''most'' satisfying after everything he's gone through at the Autobots' hands.
%%** Pterodactus's his final encounter with Unicron.
* MoralEventHorizon: Galvatron seems reasonable enough to make an alliance with at first… but when he [[spoiler: stabs Pterodactus in the back and tries to cut the Matrix out of him while he's still alive,]] all pretense of AffablyEvil is gone.
* TakeThatScrappy: [[MotorMouth Blurr]], whom the author has claimed to be the most annoying character in the cartoon on several occasions, gets told to shut up frequently.
* WhatAnIdiot: Quick, Hot Rod, you’re being chased by a horde of angry Junkions! What do you do? Why, run back to your friends and lead the entire pack directly toward them, of course!
%%* TheWoobie: You will want to hug Swoop at some point during this fic.
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