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** Undine is (understandably) very reluctant to talk to others about the events of Chapter 2, and some of that reluctance eventually leads to trouble down the line. [[spoiler:A lot of pain could possibly have been avoided if she'd been equally candid about Goops with the authorities and Tessa from the get-go. As-is, Undine only reveals it to Tessa at a point where Tessa is severely traumatised (and after what is implied to be weeks of the two missing each other over the phone) and after she's already talked with Goops. As a result, Tessa has a complete breakdown and ends up making a DealWithTheDevil.]]
** Part of this also stems from [[spoiler:her earlier conversation with Anemone]] in Chapter 12, [[spoiler:who wipes her memory of the conversation afterwards. Anemone points out the poor decision to contact Tessa during her end-of-chapter segment in chapter 12, adding that she couldn't possibly have seen what was coming.]]
** There's also [[spoiler:Cassidy, whose lashing out against Undine]] in Chapter 14 [[spoiler:comes as a result of her misinterpreting one of Vedika's statements and also a bad case of GreenEyedMonster. Her extremely poor handling of Undine's reluctance to talk leads directly to her death.]]

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** Undine is (understandably) very reluctant to talk to others about the events of Chapter 2, and some of that reluctance eventually leads to trouble down the line. [[spoiler:A lot of pain could possibly have been avoided if she'd been equally candid about Goops with the authorities and Tessa from the get-go. As-is, Undine only reveals it to Tessa at a point where Tessa is severely traumatised (and after what is implied to be weeks of the two missing each other over the phone) and after she's already talked with Goops. As a result, Tessa has a complete breakdown and ends up making a DealWithTheDevil.]]
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]] Part of this also stems from [[spoiler:her earlier conversation with Anemone]] in Chapter 12, [[spoiler:who wipes her memory of the conversation afterwards. Anemone points out the poor decision to contact Tessa during her end-of-chapter segment in chapter 12, adding that she couldn't possibly have seen what was coming.]]
** There's also [[spoiler:Cassidy, whose [[spoiler:Cassidy's lashing out against Undine]] in Chapter 14 [[spoiler:comes as a result of her misinterpreting one of Vedika's statements and also a bad case of GreenEyedMonster. Her extremely poor handling of Undine's reluctance to talk leads directly to her death.]]
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''[[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-1-cover Sleepless Domain]]'' is a Website/{{Hiveworks}} original webcomic written by Creator/MaryCagle. Mary is also the series' lead artist, though Oscar Vega (previously the artist of ''Webcomic/OlympusOverdrive'') illustrated the first two chapters, and [[https://twitter.com/cysketch Cheryl Young]] would later provide environmental design and background assistance. The comic is edited by Xellette Stillwell (current head of [[Website/{{Hiveworks}} Hiveworks Comics]]) and Isabelle Melançon (co-creator of ''Webcomic/{{Namesake}}'').

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''[[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-1-cover Sleepless Domain]]'' is a Website/{{Hiveworks}} Platform/{{Hiveworks}} original webcomic written by Creator/MaryCagle. Mary is also the series' lead artist, though Oscar Vega (previously the artist of ''Webcomic/OlympusOverdrive'') illustrated the first two chapters, and [[https://twitter.com/cysketch Cheryl Young]] would later provide environmental design and background assistance. The comic is edited by Xellette Stillwell (current head of [[Website/{{Hiveworks}} [[Platform/{{Hiveworks}} Hiveworks Comics]]) and Isabelle Melançon (co-creator of ''Webcomic/{{Namesake}}'').
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* GenderRestrictedAbility: Only girls can receive "the Dream" that turns them into magical girls. However, this is not strictly tied to biological sex; it's shown that transgender girls can also become magical girls. This can even occur before they transition, as Zoe was still living and presenting as a boy when she got her dream.

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* PoorCommunicationKills: Undine is (understandably) very reluctant to talk to others about the events of Chapter 2, and some of that reluctance eventually leads to trouble down the line. [[spoiler:A lot of pain could possibly have been avoided if she'd been equally candid about Goops with the authorities and Tessa from the get-go. As-is, Undine only reveals it to Tessa at a point where Tessa is severely traumatised (and after what is implied to be weeks of the two missing each other over the phone) and after she's already talked with Goops. As a result, Tessa has a complete breakdown and ends up making a DealWithTheDevil.]]

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* PoorCommunicationKills: PoorCommunicationKills:
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Undine is (understandably) very reluctant to talk to others about the events of Chapter 2, and some of that reluctance eventually leads to trouble down the line. [[spoiler:A lot of pain could possibly have been avoided if she'd been equally candid about Goops with the authorities and Tessa from the get-go. As-is, Undine only reveals it to Tessa at a point where Tessa is severely traumatised (and after what is implied to be weeks of the two missing each other over the phone) and after she's already talked with Goops. As a result, Tessa has a complete breakdown and ends up making a DealWithTheDevil.]]
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That link went to chapter 22, probably better to start at chapter 1.


''[[http://www.sleeplessdomain.com Sleepless Domain]]'' is a Website/{{Hiveworks}} original webcomic written by Creator/MaryCagle. Mary is also the series' lead artist, though Oscar Vega (previously the artist of ''Webcomic/OlympusOverdrive'') illustrated the first two chapters, and [[https://twitter.com/cysketch Cheryl Young]] would later provide environmental design and background assistance. The comic is edited by Xellette Stillwell (current head of [[Website/{{Hiveworks}} Hiveworks Comics]]) and Isabelle Melançon (co-creator of ''Webcomic/{{Namesake}}'').

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''[[http://www.''[[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com com/comic/chapter-1-cover Sleepless Domain]]'' is a Website/{{Hiveworks}} original webcomic written by Creator/MaryCagle. Mary is also the series' lead artist, though Oscar Vega (previously the artist of ''Webcomic/OlympusOverdrive'') illustrated the first two chapters, and [[https://twitter.com/cysketch Cheryl Young]] would later provide environmental design and background assistance. The comic is edited by Xellette Stillwell (current head of [[Website/{{Hiveworks}} Hiveworks Comics]]) and Isabelle Melançon (co-creator of ''Webcomic/{{Namesake}}'').
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Undine is (understandably) very reluctant to talk to others about the events of Chapter 2, and some of that reluctance eventually leads to trouble down the line. [[spoiler:A lot of pain could possibly have been avoided if she'd been equally candid about Goops with the authorities and Tessa from the get-go. As-is, Undine only reveals it to Tessa at a point where Tessa is severely traumatised (and after what is implied to be weeks of the two missing each other over the phone) and after she's already talked with Goops. As a result, Tessa has a complete breakdown and ends up making a DealWithTheDevil.]]
** Part of this also stems from [[spoiler:her earlier conversation with Anemone]] in Chapter 12, [[spoiler:who wipes her memory of the conversation afterwards. Anemone points out the poor decision to contact Tessa during her end-of-chapter segment in chapter 12, adding that she couldn't possibly have seen what was coming.]]
** There's also [[spoiler:Cassidy, whose lashing out against Undine]] in Chapter 14 [[spoiler:comes as a result of her misinterpreting one of Vedika's statements and also a bad case of GreenEyedMonster. Her extremely poor handling of Undine's reluctance to talk leads directly to her death.]]
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* ElementalHairColors: Most of the girls' hair colors match their elements. Undine (water) and Melty Frost (ice) have blue hair, Sally and Melty Flame (both fire) have red, Gwen's (earth) is brown, Tessa and HP (HeartIsAnAwesomePower) are pink.

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* ElementalHairColors: Most of the magical girls' hair colors match their elements. Undine (water) and Melty Frost (ice) have blue hair, Sally and Melty Flame (both fire) have red, Gwen's (earth) is brown, Tessa and HP (HeartIsAnAwesomePower) are pink. This happens after they have the Dream that grants them their powers.
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** A brief scene in [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-11-page-26 Chapter 11]] ends with Zoe's younger cousin Claire asking to see the former's magical girl form, which had not yet been shown to the audience. The last panel before the end of the scene is a shot from the hallway outside the room, with the glow from Zoe's offscreen TransformationSequence just visible inside.

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** A brief scene in [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-11-page-26 Chapter 11]] ends with Zoe's younger cousin Claire asking to see the former's magical girl form, which had not yet been shown to the audience. The last panel before the end of the scene is a shot from the hallway outside the room, with the glow from Zoe's offscreen TransformationSequence just visible inside. She doesn't reveal her transformation until [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-13-page-32 Chapter 13, page 32]] after escorting Rue home.
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* ElementalFusion: The members of [[FourElementEnsemble Team Alchemical]] can combine their powers to form new elemental {{Combination Attack}}s in battle. [[BlowYouAway Alchemical Air]] and [[PlayingWithFire Alchemical Fire]] can combine their powers to create a raging firestorm, [[DishingOutDirt Alchemical Earth]] and [[MakingASplash Alchemical Water]] can [[GreenThumb restrain enemies with vines]], and Alchemical Earth and Alchemical Fire can summon and control [[MagmaMan molten lava]].

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* ElementalFusion: The members of [[FourElementEnsemble ClassicalElementsEnsemble Team Alchemical]] Alchemical can combine their powers to form new elemental {{Combination Attack}}s in battle. [[BlowYouAway Alchemical Air]] and [[PlayingWithFire Alchemical Fire]] can combine their powers to create a raging firestorm, [[DishingOutDirt Alchemical Earth]] and [[MakingASplash Alchemical Water]] can [[GreenThumb restrain enemies with vines]], and Alchemical Earth and Alchemical Fire can summon and control [[MagmaMan molten lava]].
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* BladeOnAStick: There have been at least two incarnations of "Team Spear" within two decades of the story's present day. Heartful Punch's mother was a member of the earlier incarnation as "Moonlight Spear". She wielded a naginata while her teammates, Sunlight Spear and Starlight Spear, used a halberd and guandao respectively.
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* SpitTake: Referenced in the AltText of [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-21-page-22 Chapter 21 - Page 22]], which ends with Undine saying there's something she'd like to bring up, while the interviewer listening to her sips from a mug:
-->'''AltText:''' Hold on just let me take a big sip of my drink and then hold it in for a while until I'm surprised enough to PTEW
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** The AltText from [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-7-page-10 Chapter 7 page 10]] is a lyric from [[Music/DMX "X Gon' Give It to Ya"]], with a twist:

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** The AltText from [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-7-page-10 Chapter 7 page 10]] is a lyric from [[Music/DMX [[Music/{{DMX}} "X Gon' Give It to Ya"]], with a twist:
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** The AltText from [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-7-page-10 Chapter 7 page 10]] is a lyric from [[Music/DMX "X Gon' Give It to Ya"]], with a twist:
--->First we're gonna rock, then we're gonna [[OutclassedAtTheGym roll over and give up]].
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** Undine gains Tessa's big fancy bow after Tessa heals her, and, as of Chapter 14, Undine's costume has sleeves that match Heartful Punch's costume, indicating that she's become more comfortable with the idea of teaming up.

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** Undine gains Tessa's big fancy bow after Tessa heals her, and, as of Chapter 14, Undine's costume has sleeves that match Heartful Punch's costume, indicating that she's become more comfortable with the idea of teaming up. In Chapter 21, a few chapters after the two start dating, we see the ends of Undine's big bow change to look like the end of HP's scarf.
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* RecruitersAlwaysLie: A [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/interstitial-2 recruitment poster]] sent out by the Board of Magical Girls lists various benefits to entice young girls to register as {{Magical Girl Warrior}}s (read: ChildSoldiers) and defend the city, playing up the exciting and glamorous aspects of the job as much as possible. Of course, one of these benefits also happens to be [[DisturbingStatistic a 70% lower risk of serious injury or death]] compared to girls who don't register. [[MagicalGirlGenreDeconstruction Make of that what you will.]]
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* OutclassedAtTheGym:
** In a [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/guest-comic-psu guest comic]], magical girl and FitnessNut Heartful Punch tries to star in a TV workout series, but her workout regimen proves to be too intense for her fellow magical girls to keep up with -- by the end of the program, both of her co-stars have collapsed on the floor.
--->'''Heartful Punch:''' Oh, sorry! I just assumed you two were, y'know, fit.
** Later on, Undine attempts to join her at the Magical Girl Power Training Club, but quickly grows frustrated with her lack of progress compared to the others. Still, Heartful Punch offers some encouragement and reminds Undine not to push herself too hard, especially since she's just starting out.

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* GraveMarkingScene: Tessa is shown to visit the graves of [[spoiler:Gwen, Sally, and Sylvia, the fallen members of Team Alchemical,]] throughout the course of the comic, and is implied that she visits them every day, to the point where she keeps comes home from school late. [[spoiler: The first time we see her at their graves, she begins TalkingToTheDead, and expresses her sorrow and her SurvivorGuilt that she was unable to save the other members of Team Alchemical, save for one second survivor. Later on, as her mental health deteriorates, she comes home later and later, and it becomes one of the only places where she can (temporarily) regain her sanity.]]

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Tessa is shown to visit the graves of [[spoiler:Gwen, Sally, and Sylvia, the fallen members of Team Alchemical,]] throughout the course of the comic, and is implied that she visits them every day, to the point where she keeps comes coming home from school late. [[spoiler: The first time we see her at their graves, she begins TalkingToTheDead, and expresses her sorrow and her SurvivorGuilt that she was unable to save the other members of Team Alchemical, save for one second survivor. Later on, as her mental health deteriorates, she comes home later and later, and it becomes one of the only places where she can (temporarily) regain her sanity.]]
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** In Chapter 17, [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-17-page-11 Harley idly wonders what would happen if Vedika used her psychic powers on a monster]]. [[spoiler:In Chapter 20, [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-20-page-21 we find out]]. It isn't pretty.]]
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* EatenAlive: In Chapter 8, Heartful Punch is caught off-guard by a monster, and it proceeds to pull her into its mouth as Undine looks on in horror. [[spoiler:In the end, this is very narrowly averted, but only thanks to a massive HeroicSecondWind on Undine's part.]]


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* IsItAlwaysLikeThis: Zoe joins the Magical Girl Power Training Club right when the plot is getting into full swing and questions far outnumber answers: girls are being stalked in the night by a mysterious [[DarkMagicalGirl rogue magical girl]], and the [[DomedHometown Inner Barrier]] has completely shut down last night, inciting mass panic. When Zoe asks the rest of the club if this is just what it's like to be a magical girl, the other girls are quick to reassure her that the recent events are definitely out of the ordinary.


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* NightmareFace: When Tessa [[DreamSequence relives her Dream]], things quickly [[NightmareSequence start going off the rails]] as Goops inserts her own memories, causing the Girl in the Dream's face to melt away into her own terrifying SlasherSmile.


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* PrimalFear: The monster designs featured in the series are all based on various common fears and phobias. Some more prominent monsters are based on the fear of heights (acrophobia), fear of crowds (agoraphobia), fear of extreme cold (cryophobia), fear of bugs (entomophobia), and fear of needles (trypanophobia), among others.


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* SwallowedWhole: Heartful Punch is very nearly swallowed whole by a monster in Chapter 8. [[spoiler:It's only thanks to Undine's last-second HeriocSecondWind that she makes it out alive.]]


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* WindIsGreen: {{Averted|Trope}} by the members of Team Alchemical -- Alchemical Air is associated with the color yellow, while the color green instead goes to Alchemical ''Earth''. The reason for this is that Team Alchemical is based specifically on the four elements used in classical Greek UsefulNotes/{{alchemy}}, which commonly ascribes the color yellow to Air [[YellowEarthGreenEarth and the color green to Earth]].
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Tessa is in charge because she has the strongest powers; the other girls' resentment of this kicks off the plot.

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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: Tessa is in charge because she has the strongest powers; the other girls' resentment of this kicks off the plot.
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* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: Tessa takes just one night off, to show her teammates how much they need her, even coming out of her TenMinuteRetirement to help them just after they've gone out to fight, and it [[spoiler:gets all but one of her teammates killed, and Tessa depowered.]]

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* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: Tessa takes just one night off, to show her teammates how much they need her, even coming out of her TenMinuteRetirement to help them just after they've gone out to fight, and it [[spoiler:gets all but one of her teammates killed, and Tessa depowered. It's later implied Goopy wanted Tessa specifically alive, meaning the attack wouldn't have happened until they were separated.]]
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* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: Tessa takes just one night off, to show her teammates how much they need her, even coming out of her TenMinuteRetirement to help them just after they've gone out to fight, and it [[spoiler:gets all but one of her teammates killed, and Tessa depowered.]]
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Tessa is in charge because she has the strongest powers; the other girls' resentment of this kicks off the plot.
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* FiveFiveFive: [[http://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/interstitial-2 Interstitial 2]] shows a {{magical girl}} recruitment poster, with a phone number written using Roman numerals: V.V.V.-IX.VI.VI.IX. In Arabic numerals, that's 555-9669.

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* FiveFiveFive: [[http://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/interstitial-2 Interstitial 2]] shows a {{magical girl}} recruitment poster, with a phone number written using Roman numerals: V.V.V.-IX.VI.VI.IX. In Arabic numerals, that's 555-9669.555-96[[LOL69 69]].
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* FrustratedOverheadScribble:
** When Sally has to use a ladder to get up to the fight with the rest of Team Alchemical she's got a little frustrated speech bubble [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-2-page-20 with a scribble in it.]]
** To indicate the golden being getting frustrated with Greg it gets a [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-11-page-31 looping scribble above its head.]]
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* ShapesOfDisappearance: When Rue is trapped between the two halves of a large insectoid monster, Zoe steps in to [[DrawAggro get its attention]] by shooting one of the halves with her slingshot. When Rue turns around, she realizes that the other half is no longer behind her, as indicated by a [[https://www.sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-13-page-14 dotted outline]] of where it just was. She promptly looks up to find that it had climbed the buildings and was rearing to attack Zoe.

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