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the love animatic doesnt seem to be canon. feel free to correct me though
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* {{Adaptational Villainy}}: In canon, King wasn't the best person, he had his flaws, (even as a villain later). but he never tried to [[spoiler: groom and force two twelve year olds to marry, and have heavy undertones of being a {{Heteronormative Crusader}} like in Love.]]
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* {{Ambiguously Related}}: Though the creator hinted about it on Discord, and there have been non-canon sketches of the two interacting, it has never been comfirmed outright whether Enemie and Lyer are related or not. [[spoiler: Enemie might know of his existence though, considering his weird dream about King and the Lyer-Worshipping {{Cult}}.]]
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* {{Ambiguously Related}}: Though the creator hinted about it on Discord, and there have been non-canon sketches of the two interacting, it has never been comfirmed outright whether Enemie and Lyer are related or not. [[spoiler: Enemie might know of his existence though, considering his weird dream about King and the Lyer-Worshipping {{Cult}}.]]
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* {{Arranged Marriage}}: [[spoiler: King and Lyer force Enemie and Mia into one in Love.]]
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* {{Cult}}: [[spoiler: King runs one in Love, and attempts to groom Enemie into it and forcibly marry the twelve-year-old to his arranged suitor, Mia.]].
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might be wrong but their deviantart says they use they/them
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Mia's World, styled Mias World, is a [[StickFigureComic Stick-Figure Comic]] made by Mogry311 on his [[https://www.deviantart.com/mogry331 deviantart page]]. It begins following his {{OC}}s, and tells about our two main protagonists, Mia and Mr. World.
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Mia's World, styled Mias World, is a [[StickFigureComic Stick-Figure Comic]] made by Mogry311 on his their [[https://www.deviantart.com/mogry331 deviantart page]]. It begins following his their {{OC}}s, and tells about our two main protagonists, Mia and Mr. World.
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Mia's World, styled Mias World, is a [[StickFigureComic Stick-Figure Comic]] made by Mogry311 on her [[https://www.deviantart.com/mogry331 deviantart page]]. It begins following her {{OC}}s, and tells about our two main protagonists, Mia and Mr. World.
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Mia's World, styled Mias World, is a [[StickFigureComic Stick-Figure Comic]] made by Mogry311 on her his [[https://www.deviantart.com/mogry331 deviantart page]]. It begins following her his {{OC}}s, and tells about our two main protagonists, Mia and Mr. World.
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* {{Ambiguously Bi}}: Although we have seen Mr. World talking to his ex-girlfriend, Mogry once (albeit jokingly) said she shipped [[PortmanteauCoupleName Lychael]] together.
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* {{Ambiguously Bi}}: Although we have seen Mr. World talking to his ex-girlfriend, Mogry once (albeit jokingly) said she he shipped [[PortmanteauCoupleName Lychael]] together.
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* {{Wham Line}}: [[https://www.deviantart.com/mogry331/art/Mias-World-45-855037078?ga_submit_new=10%3A1600001415 "Who's that guy that came in with Mr. Mike?"]]
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*{{Wham Line}}: [[https://www.deviantart.com/mogry331/art/Mias-World-45-855037078?ga_submit_new=10%3A1600001415 "Who's that guy that came in with Mr. Mike?"]]
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* {{Harmful To Minors}}: If it wasn't a hallucination, Enemie was allowed to watch [[spoiler: Mr. World]] being tortured. Even if he was willing to go that far for revenge, he still shouldn't have been allowed to do so.
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* {{Downer Ending}}: [[spoiler: Mia dies, Mr. World is kidnapped, drugged, sent to a likely vigilante {{Kangaroo Court}} and [[ElectricTorture electrocuted into possible catatonia]] by [[EtTuBrute his own brother, and '44, and Lyer is a KarmaHoudini who gets off scot-free for everything he did to the main cast despite Mr. World claiming again and again that he is real.]].
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* {{Downer Ending}}: [[spoiler: Mia dies, Mr. World is kidnapped, drugged, sent to a likely vigilante {{Kangaroo Court}} and [[ElectricTorture electrocuted into possible catatonia]] by [[EtTuBrute his own brother, brother]], and '44, and Lyer is a KarmaHoudini who gets off scot-free for everything he did to the main cast despite Mr. World claiming again and again that he is real.]].
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* {{Downer Ending}}: [[spoiler: Mia dies, Mr. World is kidnapped, drugged, sent to a likely vigilante {{Kangaroo Court}} and [[ElectricTorture electrocuted into possible catatonia]] by [[EtTuBrute his own brother, and '44, and Lyer ies is a KarmaHoudini who gets off scot-free for everything he did to the main cast despite Mr. World claiming again and again that he is real.]].
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* {{Downer Ending}}: [[spoiler: Mia dies, Mr. World is kidnapped, drugged, sent to a likely vigilante {{Kangaroo Court}} and [[ElectricTorture electrocuted into possible catatonia]] by [[EtTuBrute his own brother, and '44, and Lyer [[KarmaHoudini ies a KarmaHoudini who gets off scot-free for everything he did to the main cast]] cast despite Mr. World claiming again and again that he is real.]].
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* {{Adaptational Villainy}}: In canon, King wasn't the best person, [[note]] villain later. [[note/]] but he never tried to [[spoiler: groom and force two twelve year olds to marry, and have heavy undertones of being a {{Heteronormative Crusader}} like in Love.]]
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* {{Adaptational Villainy}}: In canon, King wasn't the best person, [[note]] he had his flaws, (even as a villain later. [[note/]] later). but he never tried to [[spoiler: groom and force two twelve year olds to marry, and have heavy undertones of being a {{Heteronormative Crusader}} like in Love.]]
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* {{Comically Missing The Point}}: When Enemie attempts to brush her off with hostility, she replies with a warm greeting, much to his confusion.
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* {{Comically Missing The Point}}: When Enemie attempts to brush her off with hostility, she Mia replies with a warm greeting, much to his confusion.
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** Mr. World's real name is Michael [[note]] Michael means 'Who is like god'. [[/note]] and he's being tormented by a demon.
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** Mr. World's real name is Michael [[note]] [[/note]] Michael means 'Who is like god'[[/note]] god'[[note]] and he's being tormented by a demon.
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* {{Stylistic Suck}}: For Mia's drawings. [[/note]] See image above, which most of Mia's World is much better than.[[note]]
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* {{Ambiguously Absent Parent}}: Possibly Enemie's, because he and Lyer might be father and son, and it seems unlikely he cares about or loves him, as evidenced by the fact that Enemie and the others are metaphorically shown as puppets to Lyer and the likely emotional trauma and grief he put Enemie through with [[spoiler: Mia's death.]]
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* {{Ambiguously Absent Parent}}: Possibly Enemie's, because he and Lyer might be father and son, and it seems unlikely he cares about or loves him, as evidenced by the fact that Enemie and the others are metaphorically shown as puppets to Lyer and the likely emotional trauma and grief he put Enemie through with [[spoiler: Mia's death.If Lyer really is Enemie's father.]]