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It is a horror story, meant to go completely wrong, and probably going to kill every character in the process. Said characters are ''[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ParodySue Parodie Sues]]'' and various fantrolls archetypes. The story mixes action sequences, twisted horror and dark humour.
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It is a horror story, meant to go completely wrong, and probably going to kill every character in the process. Said characters are ''[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ParodySue Parodie Sues]]'' and various fantrolls archetypes. The story mixes action sequences, twisted horror and dark humour. \n
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I hate to break it to you (partially because SJAHJ is my work) but there\'s at least \'\'Sweet Jade And Hella John\'\' at 2,496 pages. And the translations of Homestuck itself if you want to count them. But hey, SJAHJ\'s concluded, soon this will be old news unless the comic\'s near its end (I\'m not far into this, only around page 100, so I don\'t know how far in the plot its gone) or if it were to suddenly discontinue for some reason. Right?
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* AuthorAvatar: Notoriously brief appearance (probably in contrast to Hussie's frequent avatar). Cauchemar [[spoiler:Cauchemar appears, starts running away from a random threat, get stopped by an inquisitive Formspring question and dies, all in the same scene.scene]].
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* BackstoryHorror: Ginneo looks cute until you learn he's twenty years old. Copycat seems to be funny enough in her imitation of canon characters until you know she does it out of desperation. Ophiuchus the Great sounds merely disturbing until you discover what he's really up to. Also, all of the Denizens have horrific origins stories.
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* BackstoryHorror: Ginneo looks cute until you learn he's [[spoiler:he's twenty years old. old]]. Copycat seems to be funny enough in her imitation of canon characters until you know she [[spoiler:she does it out of desperation.amorous desperation]]. Ophiuchus the Great sounds merely disturbing until you discover what he's really up to. Also, all of the Denizens have horrific origins stories.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Each of the main characters evolves drastically during the story. Vamuin goes from overconfident, overpowered troll to complete victim, Batori is forced to face her greatest fear, Ginneo grows up...
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* CharacterDevelopment: Each of the main characters evolves drastically during the story. Vamuin [[spoiler:Vamuin goes from overconfident, overpowered troll to complete victim, Batori is forced to face her greatest fear, Ginneo grows up...]]
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* CoincidentalDodge: Copycat when Ophiuchus is trying to shoot her.
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* CoincidentalDodge: Copycat when [[spoiler:when Ophiuchus is trying to shoot her.her]].
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* FaceFullOfAlienWingWong: Tentacle King. Or maybe it's another kind of tentacle-on-troll action.
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* FaceFullOfAlienWingWong: Tentacle [[spoiler:Tentacle King. Or maybe it's another kind of tentacle-on-troll action.action]].
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* NoFourthWall: Both averted and played straight. In opposition to Homestuck, Alabaster usually keeps the meta stuff out of the way of the narration. Then there is the Glitch and Light Ending parts, special sequences which are complete craziness, playing not only with the readers and the support, but also with other webcomics.
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* NoFourthWall: Both averted and played straight. In opposition to Homestuck, Alabaster usually keeps the meta stuff out of the way of the narration. Then there [[spoiler:there is the Glitch and Light Ending parts, special sequences which are complete craziness, playing not only with the readers and the support, but also with other webcomics.webcomics]].
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* PhlebotinumInducedStupidity: The sopor slime vapors.
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* PhlebotinumInducedStupidity: The [[spoiler:The sopor slime vapors.vapors]].
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* UndignifiedDeath
* UnEntendre
* WatchOutForThatTree
* UnEntendre
* WatchOutForThatTree
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Most of the pesterlogs are filled with innuendo, both intentional and completely accidental.
* ThereWasADoor
* ThisIsGoingToBeHuge: Vamuin when talking about his future success.
* ToiletHumour: Very rare and [[spoiler:horribly done]].
* ThereWasADoor
* ThisIsGoingToBeHuge: Vamuin when talking about his future success.
* ToiletHumour: Very rare and [[spoiler:horribly done]].
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* TooMuchInformation: Frequent with Vamuin.
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: The cannon in Renart's big bloody scene.
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: The cannon in Renart's [[spoiler:Renart's big bloody scene.scene]].
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* StealthPun
* StraightMan: Via, Cross to an extent.
* SuperZeroes: [[spoiler:Ophiuchus Forever]].
* StraightMan: Via, Cross to an extent.
* SuperZeroes: [[spoiler:Ophiuchus Forever]].
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* TheTalk: ''[[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=236&p=196 Done and illustrated with the canon Homestuck characters]]''.
* TestosteronePoisoning: Vamuin, a concentration of strength and epicness getting ridiculous quite quickly, also surrounded with phallic imagery.
* TestosteronePoisoning: Vamuin, a concentration of strength and epicness getting ridiculous quite quickly, also surrounded with phallic imagery.
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* SignsOfDisrepair: "Dead [end]", "To the rat[tle room]"...
* SimpletonVoice: Ginneo.
* SimpletonVoice: Ginneo.
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: The cannon in Renart's big bloody scene.
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* Splastick
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Your Mileage May Vary is an index, not a trope. It should not be linked from any trope or work page for any reason. Also removing Complete Monster Zero Context Example (all new examples must be cleared with the cleanup thread on the forums first). Leaving that aside, nearly every example on this page is a Zero Context Example. How about focusing on QUALITY of entries and not quantity; don\'t race to add as many tropes as possible, actually explain how each one fits.
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* CompleteMonster: Renart, Ophiuchus the Great.
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* ShoehornedFirstLetter: Done with the "DOO..." words at the end of each chapter, even if YourMileageMayVary about the "shoehorned" part.
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* ShoehornedFirstLetter: Done with the "DOO..." words at the end of each chapter, even if YourMileageMayVary about the "shoehorned" part.chapter.
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* TheScream: Done literally and repeatedly. The Glub by Edvard Munchk.
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* ShoehornedFirstLetter: Done with the "DOO..." words at the end of each chapter, even if YourMileageMayVary about the "shoehorned" part.
