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An abridged series of LightNovel/SwordArtOnline ''Literature/SwordArtOnline'' created by The Rollin Nolan [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=57chZN9I__g and can be found here.]]
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: ''Klein.''
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* TrueCompanions: The Moonlight Black Cats. They are all players whose avatars have various bugs because of the problems they encountered while logging in When finding Kirito, they enthusiastically (try to get in contact with him before kidnapping him and tying him up) invite him to join, and tell him of a way that could get rid of his own bug. They remain supportive of him, even when his bug accidentally destroys part of a floor. [[spoiler:Ducker is a subversion, as he fully intends, and succeeds, in murdering the group via [[WebVideo/SwordArtOnlineAbridged Slaughternaughts and Murder Golems]] before being killed himself.]]
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* TrueCompanions: The Moonlight Black Cats. They are all players whose avatars have various bugs because of the problems they encountered while logging in When in. After finding Kirito, they enthusiastically (try to get in contact with him before kidnapping him and tying him up) invite him to join, and tell him of a way that could get rid of his own bug. They remain supportive of him, even when his bug accidentally destroys part of a floor. [[spoiler:Ducker is a subversion, as he fully intends, and succeeds, in murdering the group via [[WebVideo/SwordArtOnlineAbridged Slaughternaughts and Murder Golems]] before being killed himself.]]
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* TakeThat: [[invoked]] Akihiko Kayaba's reason for turning SAO into a death game: he was turned onto this path after [[TakeThatAudience being disgusted by the behaviour of modern gamers]].
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->'''Opening Narration:''' Aren't there already other people abridged SAO- (Gunshot)
An abridged series of SwordArtOnline created by The Rollin Nolan [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=57chZN9I__g]]
An abridged series of SwordArtOnline created by The Rollin Nolan [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=57chZN9I__g]]
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->'''Opening Narration:''' Aren't there already other people abridged SAO- (Gunshot)
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An abridged series ofSwordArtOnline LightNovel/SwordArtOnline created by The Rollin Nolan [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=57chZN9I__g]]
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* ChainsawGood: Agil wields one for no inexplicable reason- [[RuleOfCool doesn't make it any less cool.]]
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* ChainsawGood: Agil wields one for no inexplicable reason; [[RuleOfCool doesn't make it any less cool.]]
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* TheHeart: Asuna acts as this towards Kirito. She is one of the only players who treats him as a player, and emphasizes with him over his issues because she faced similar situations as his. Even after being shunned after defeating the first floor boss, Asuna still has faith in Kirito and asks him to help her clear the remaining floors.
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* MadeOfExplodium: Kirito's bug makes him this whenever he attacks something [[spoiler: or gets attacked by something. Though this may not apply anymore because he ate [[TheArtifact The Blue Thing.]]]]
* MisunderstoodLonerWithAHeartOfGold: Justified in Kirito's case- his avatar has [[spoiler: (had?)]] a bug that causes explosions if he attacks something, or is attacked by something. Those he gets close to either shun him, or are in danger of being hurt because of said bug. This causes him a great deal of angst because he wants to be a normal player and be able to be seen as such, rather than the [[RedBaron Beta Buster.]]
* MisunderstoodLonerWithAHeartOfGold: Justified in Kirito's case- his avatar has [[spoiler: (had?)]] a bug that causes explosions if he attacks something, or is attacked by something. Those he gets close to either shun him, or are in danger of being hurt because of said bug. This causes him a great deal of angst because he wants to be a normal player and be able to be seen as such, rather than the [[RedBaron Beta Buster.]]
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* MadeOfExplodium: Kirito's bug makes him this whenever he attacks something [[spoiler: or [[spoiler:or gets attacked by something. Though this may not apply anymore because he ate [[TheArtifact The Blue Thing.]]]]
* MisunderstoodLonerWithAHeartOfGold: Justified in Kirito'scase- case: his avatar has [[spoiler: (had?)]] [[spoiler:(had?)]] a bug that causes explosions if he attacks something, or is attacked by something. Those he gets close to either shun him, or are in danger of being hurt because of said bug. This causes him a great deal of angst because he wants to be a normal player and be able to be seen as such, rather than the [[RedBaron Beta Buster.]]
* TheQuietOne: Sachi only speaks in small grunts or sighs, the only time she says a word is [[spoiler:right before her avatar disappears after her death blow.]]
* MisunderstoodLonerWithAHeartOfGold: Justified in Kirito's
* TheQuietOne: Sachi only speaks in small grunts or sighs, the only time she says a word is [[spoiler:right before her avatar disappears after her death blow.]]
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* TheArtifact: The Blue Thing. [[spoiler: Justified in that it apparently cures bugs that avatars might get when logging in. Whether this actually works has yet to be seen, though there are apparently side-affects.]]
* ShutUpHannibal!: A nonverbal example- Agil slashes apart Kibao to make him stop shunning the [[TheDreaded Beta Buster]]/Kirito.
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* TheHeart: Asuna acts as this towards Kirito. She is one of the only players who treats him as a player, and emphasizes with him over his issues because she faced similar situations as his. Even after being shunned after defeating the first floor boss, Asuna still has faith in Kirito and asks him to help her clear the remaining floors.
* TheQuietOne: Sachi only speaks in small grunts or sighs- the only time she says a word is [[spoiler: right before her avatar disappears after her death blow.]]
* TrueCompanions: The Moonlight Black Cats. They are all players whose avatars have various bugs because of the problems they encountered while logging in When finding Kirito, they enthusiastically (try to get in contact with him before kidnapping him and tying him up) invite him to join, and tell him of a way that could get rid of his own bug. They remain supportive of him, even when his bug accidentally destroys part of a floor. [[spoiler: Ducker is a Subversion, as he fully intends- and succeeds- in murdering the group via [[SwordArtOnlineAbridged Slaughternaughts and Murder Golems]] before being killed himself.]]
* TheQuietOne: Sachi only speaks in small grunts or sighs- the only time she says a word is [[spoiler: right before her avatar disappears after her death blow.]]
* TrueCompanions: The Moonlight Black Cats. They are all players whose avatars have various bugs because of the problems they encountered while logging in When finding Kirito, they enthusiastically (try to get in contact with him before kidnapping him and tying him up) invite him to join, and tell him of a way that could get rid of his own bug. They remain supportive of him, even when his bug accidentally destroys part of a floor. [[spoiler: Ducker is a Subversion, as he fully intends- and succeeds- in murdering the group via [[SwordArtOnlineAbridged Slaughternaughts and Murder Golems]] before being killed himself.]]
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* TheQuietOne: Sachi only speaks in small grunts or sighs- the only time she says a word is [[spoiler: right before her avatar disappears after her death blow.]]
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* SanitySlippage: It's implied that [[BigBad Akihiko Kayaba]] went through this when he tried to research the present day gamers while making SAO.
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* ShutUpHannibal!: A nonverbal example- Agil slashes apart Kibao to make him stop shunning the [[TheDreaded Beta Buster/Kirito.]]
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* ShutUpHannibal!: A nonverbal example- Agil slashes apart Kibao to make him stop shunning the [[TheDreaded Beta Buster/Kirito.]]
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-> '''Agil''': Yeah, he just needs time for the message to ''sink in.''
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-> '''Diable''': Is he gonna be all right?
-> '''Agil''': Yeah, he just needs time for the message to ''sink in.''
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* ShutUp,Hannibal!: A nonverbal example- Agil slashes apart Kibao to make him stop shunning the [[TheDreaded Beta Buster/Kirito.]]
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* ShutUp,Hannibal!: ShutUpHannibal!: A nonverbal example- Agil slashes apart Kibao to make him stop shunning the [[TheDreaded Beta Buster/Kirito.]]
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: Keita dies not by committing suicide, but being run over by a school bus- driven by Klein.]]
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* TheHeart: Asuna acts as this towards Kirito. She is one of the only players who treats him as a player, and emphasizes with him over his issues because she faced similar situations as his. Even after being shunned after defeating the first floor boss, Asuna still has faith in Kirito and asks him to help her clear the remaining floors.
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* MadeOfExplodium: Kirito's bug makes him this whenever he attacks something [[spoiler: or gets attacked by something. Though this may not apply anymore because he ate the Blue Thing.]]
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* MadeOfExplodium: Kirito's bug makes him this whenever he attacks something [[spoiler: or gets attacked by something. Though this may not apply anymore because he ate the [[TheArtifact The Blue Thing.]]
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* TheWoobie: Dear God, '''Kirito'''. [[spoiler: His avatar becomes bugged, accidentally destroys SAO's beta, becomes reviled as the "Beta Buster", gets shunned even when he defeats the first floor's boss even when his bug had nothing to do with it, loses the only friends he ever made because of a trap one of them led them into, finds out that the item that he wanted to use to revive them could only work for a short time... it gets so bad that by the end of the third episode, he is fully ready to commit [[SuicideByCop Suicide By Nicholas the Renegade.]]]]
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* TheWoobie: Dear God, '''Kirito'''. [[spoiler: His avatar becomes bugged, TrueCompanions: The Moonlight Black Cats. They are all players whose avatars have various bugs because of the problems they encountered while logging in When finding Kirito, they enthusiastically (try to get in contact with him before kidnapping him and tying him up) invite him to join, and tell him of a way that could get rid of his own bug. They remain supportive of him, even when his bug accidentally destroys SAO's beta, becomes reviled as the "Beta Buster", gets shunned even when he defeats the first floor's boss even when his bug had nothing to do with it, loses the only friends he ever made because part of a trap one of them led them into, finds out that the item that floor. [[spoiler: Ducker is a Subversion, as he wanted to use to revive them could only work for a short time... it gets so bad that by the end of the third episode, he is fully ready to commit [[SuicideByCop Suicide By Nicholas intends- and succeeds- in murdering the Renegade.]]]]group via [[SwordArtOnlineAbridged Slaughternaughts and Murder Golems]] before being killed himself.]]
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->'''Opening Narration:''' Aren't there already other people abridged SAO- (Gunshot)
An abridged series of SwordArtOnline created by The Rollin Nolan [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=57chZN9I__g]]
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*JerkassHasAPoint: Kibao, surprisingly enough. While often brought up as a StrawCharacter, he does have a point in pointing out that a bug that causes explode via contact is incredibly dangerous and that having someone with that bug around so many people could result in injury or death.
* MadeofExplodium: Kirito's bug makes him this whenever he attacks something [[spoiler: or gets attacked by something. Though this may not apply anymore because he ate the Blue Thing.]]
* MisunderstoodLonerWithAHeartOfGold: Justified in Kirito's case- his avatar has [[spoiler: (had?)]] a bug that causes explosions if he attacks something, or is attacked by something. Those he gets close to either shun him, or are in danger of being hurt because of said bug. This causes him a great deal of angst because he wants to be a normal player and be able to be seen as such, rather than the [[RedBaron Beta Buster.]]
* SanitySlippage: It's implied that [[BigBad Akihiko Kayaba]] went through this when he tried to research the present day gamers while making SAO.
* TheArtifact: The Blue Thing. [[spoiler: Justified in that it apparently cures bugs that avatars might get when logging in. Whether this actually works has yet to be seen, though there are apparently side-affects.]]
* TheQuietOne: Sachi only speaks in small grunts or sighs- the only time she says a word is [[spoiler: right before her avatar disappears after her death blow.]]
* TheWoobie: Dear God, '''Kirito'''. [[spoiler: His avatar becomes bugged, accidentally destroys SAO's beta, becomes reviled as the "Beta Buster", gets shunned even when he defeats the first floor's boss even when his bug had nothing to do with it, loses the only friends he ever made because of a trap one of them led them into, finds out that the item that he wanted to use to revive them could only work for a short time... it gets so bad that by the end of the third episode, he is fully ready to commit [[SuicideByCop Suicide By Nicholas the Renegade.]]]]
An abridged series of SwordArtOnline created by The Rollin Nolan [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=57chZN9I__g]]
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*JerkassHasAPoint: Kibao, surprisingly enough. While often brought up as a StrawCharacter, he does have a point in pointing out that a bug that causes explode via contact is incredibly dangerous and that having someone with that bug around so many people could result in injury or death.
* MadeofExplodium: Kirito's bug makes him this whenever he attacks something [[spoiler: or gets attacked by something. Though this may not apply anymore because he ate the Blue Thing.]]
* MisunderstoodLonerWithAHeartOfGold: Justified in Kirito's case- his avatar has [[spoiler: (had?)]] a bug that causes explosions if he attacks something, or is attacked by something. Those he gets close to either shun him, or are in danger of being hurt because of said bug. This causes him a great deal of angst because he wants to be a normal player and be able to be seen as such, rather than the [[RedBaron Beta Buster.]]
* SanitySlippage: It's implied that [[BigBad Akihiko Kayaba]] went through this when he tried to research the present day gamers while making SAO.
* TheArtifact: The Blue Thing. [[spoiler: Justified in that it apparently cures bugs that avatars might get when logging in. Whether this actually works has yet to be seen, though there are apparently side-affects.]]
* TheQuietOne: Sachi only speaks in small grunts or sighs- the only time she says a word is [[spoiler: right before her avatar disappears after her death blow.]]
* TheWoobie: Dear God, '''Kirito'''. [[spoiler: His avatar becomes bugged, accidentally destroys SAO's beta, becomes reviled as the "Beta Buster", gets shunned even when he defeats the first floor's boss even when his bug had nothing to do with it, loses the only friends he ever made because of a trap one of them led them into, finds out that the item that he wanted to use to revive them could only work for a short time... it gets so bad that by the end of the third episode, he is fully ready to commit [[SuicideByCop Suicide By Nicholas the Renegade.]]]]
