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* DisappearedDad: The De Noir family's only son has one. It turns out he's an evil sorcerer.
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* DisappearedDad: The De Noir family's only son has one. It turns out he's an evil sorcerer.{{evil sorcerer}}.
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* BigBad: The EvilTwin, right down to laughing evilly about evil things, having a VillainSong and proclaiming that "[he's] having so much fun".
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* CardCarryingVillain: The EvilTwin, right down to laughing evilly about evil things, having a VillainSong and proclaiming that "[he's] having so much fun".
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* ContinuitySnarl: Considering that he Mane Six doing battle with Discord is shown on a door containing the Elements of Harmony, we have to assume that this takes place some time after the start of Season Two. However, the same scene shows Nightmare Moon still in the Moon, even though she is not imprisoned there, at this time?
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* ContinuitySnarl: Considering that he the Mane Six doing battle with Discord is shown on a door containing the Elements of Harmony, we have to assume that this takes place some time after the start of Season Two. However, the same scene shows Nightmare Moon still in the Moon, even though she is not imprisoned there, at this time?
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* ContinuitySnarl: Considering that he Mane Six doing battle with Discord is shown on a door containing the Elements of Harmony, we have to assume that this takes place some time after the start of Season Two. However, the same scene shows Nightmare Moon still in the Moon, even though she is not imprisoned there, at this time?
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* AnticlimaxBoss: They seem to treat Dark Dusk's Scepter as some kind of Power Weapon, but Breeze Rider just comes in, with a Towel, and grabs it in that, with no issue. Even Dusk is puzzle at what just happen!?
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* AnticlimaxBoss: They seem to treat Dark Dusk's Scepter as some kind of Power Weapon, but Breeze Rider just comes in, with a Towel, and grabs it in that, with no issue. Even Dusk is puzzle at what just happen!?
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''[[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NgJPHj7Cjss My Little Pony: Dusk's Dawn]]'' is an "orginal" fanfiction based on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', made by Project Interlude. The story is composed entirely of [[OriginalCharacter original characters]], other than passing references to Princess Celestia, Nightmare Moon, Discord and the [[FanNickname Mane Six]].
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''[[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NgJPHj7Cjss My Little Pony: Dusk's Dawn]]'' is an "orginal" "original" fanfiction based on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', made by Project Interlude. The story is composed entirely of [[OriginalCharacter original characters]], other than passing references to Princess Celestia, Nightmare Moon, Discord and the [[FanNickname Mane Six]].
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* WrapAroundBackground: A rather egregious example occurs towards the end when Donut is walking down the longest and least interesting hallway in Equestria for over an entire minute. He even [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it, not that it makes it any more bearable.
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* WrapAroundBackground: A rather egregious example occurs towards the end when Donut is walking down the longest and least interesting hallway in Equestria for over an entire minute. He even [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it, not that it makes it any more bearable.bearable.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: The De Noir son looks like a stallion, but claims to be nine years old.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: The De Noir son looks like a stallion, but claims to be nine years old.
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* ArtisticLicensePhysics: See DoNotTouchTheFunnelCloud below.
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* ArtisticLicensePhysics: See DoNotTouchTheFunnelCloud below.In an example of DoNotTouchTheFunnelCloud, Mister Brave ''ducks under a tornado.''
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* DoNotTouchTheFunnelCloud: Mister Brave ''ducks under a tornado.''
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* FiveManBand
** TheLeader: Donut leads the group throughout the castle and calls himself a "royal guard."
** TheLancer: Star Whistle, as she's a major plot point in the first half and is the last pony standing when fighting the EvilTwin.
** TheBigGuy: Mister Brave. He can ram though ''tornadoes''.
** TheSmartGuy: Iridescence, sort of. It's inferred that she's an expert in the medical field by her Cutie Mark, and she senses something bad is happening in the De Noir's castle.
** TheChick: Doodlecute seems to be the most emotional and fragile of the group.
** SixthRanger: Breeze Rider is generally comic relief throughout the episode.
** TheLeader: Donut leads the group throughout the castle and calls himself a "royal guard."
** TheLancer: Star Whistle, as she's a major plot point in the first half and is the last pony standing when fighting the EvilTwin.
** TheBigGuy: Mister Brave. He can ram though ''tornadoes''.
** TheSmartGuy: Iridescence, sort of. It's inferred that she's an expert in the medical field by her Cutie Mark, and she senses something bad is happening in the De Noir's castle.
** TheChick: Doodlecute seems to be the most emotional and fragile of the group.
** SixthRanger: Breeze Rider is generally comic relief throughout the episode.
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* SuspiciouslyAproposMusic: Sure, that one song provides pretty much all of the {{Exposition}} there is in the entire episode, but it lasts a whopping 3 minutes and 50 seconds and is completely forgettable, with the exception of the part where the villain sings in gibberish. Basically, it's mostly there to just kill time.
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* SuspiciouslyAproposMusic: Sure, that one song provides pretty much all of the {{Exposition}} there is in the entire episode, but it lasts a whopping 3 minutes and 50 seconds and is completely forgettable, with the exception of the part where the villain sings in gibberish.starts ScatSinging. Basically, it's mostly there to just kill time.
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* FurryReminder: Tried and failed. The De Noir son states that he's turning nine, and at the start of the musical number sings that "Today I am/A kid no more". Problem: real stallions are considered mature somewhere between a year to three years old (depending on the rancher), and in [=FiM=], there's at least one normal character (Grannie Smith) who's lived to be at ''least'' one hundred years old, implying that MLP ponies age at human rates. So either De Noir is an incredibly slow bloomer, or he's kidding himself about being an adult.
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* CliffHanger: We never see [[spoilerwhat happened to the antagonist, or when the protagonists went to Celestia. It was intended to be a SequelHook, but a new production hasn't been made in years, so it's either been abandoned or stuck in DevelopmentHell.]]
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* CliffHanger: We never see [[spoilerwhat [[spoiler:what happened to the antagonist, or when the protagonists went to Celestia. It was intended to be a SequelHook, but a new production hasn't been made in years, so it's either been abandoned or stuck in DevelopmentHell.]]
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* [[spoiler:CliffHanger]]: [[spoiler:We never see what happened to the antagonist, or when the protagonists went to Celestia.]]
** [[spoiler:SequelHook]]:[[spoiler:What it was intended to be. However, a new production hasn't been made in years, so it's either been abandoned or stuck in DevelopmentHell.]]
** [[spoiler:SequelHook]]:[[spoiler:What it was intended to be. However, a new production hasn't been made in years, so it's either been abandoned or stuck in DevelopmentHell.]]
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* [[spoiler:CliffHanger]]: [[spoiler:We CliffHanger: We never see what [[spoilerwhat happened to the antagonist, or when the protagonists went to Celestia.]]
** [[spoiler:SequelHook]]:[[spoiler:What itCelestia. It was intended to be. However, be a SequelHook, but a new production hasn't been made in years, so it's either been abandoned or stuck in DevelopmentHell.]]
** [[spoiler:SequelHook]]:[[spoiler:What it
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* ChekhovsGun: When fighting the antagonist, Donut and Star Whistle wonder where Breeze Rider is. [[spoiler:He shows up later to snatch the villain's weapon.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: When fighting the antagonist, Donut and Star Whistle wonder where Breeze Rider is. [[spoiler:He shows up later to snatch the villain's weapon.]]
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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: "What happened here? Is anypony able to tell me what happened here?"
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: "What happened here? Is anypony able to tell me what happened here?"
* GenericDoomsdayVillain: The villain's motivation is never really explained. He's just doing… evil, well… because he's evil.
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* GenericDoomsdayVillain: The villain's motivation is never really explained. He's just doing… evil, well… because he's evil.
* ThatMakesMeFeelAngry: At one point, the villain outright states that he is evil, [[ObviouslyEvil in case that wasn't clear enough already]].
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* ThatMakesMeFeelAngry: At one point, the villain outright states that he is evil, [[ObviouslyEvil in case that wasn't clear enough already]].
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* ArtisticLicensePhysics: Mister Brave ''ducks under a tornado.''
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* ArcSymbol: The EvilTwin's cutie mark, as well as the De Noir family crest, is the [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Invisible_Pink_Unicorn Invisible Pink Unicorn]] logo. What this has to do with anything relevant to the story is anyone's guess.
* ArtisticLicensePhysics:Mister Brave ''ducks under a tornado.''See DoNotTouchTheFunnelCloud below.
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* WrapAroundBackground: A rather egregious example occurs towards the end when Donut is walking down the longest and least interesting hallway in Equestria for over an entire minute. He even [[LampshadeHangings lampshades]] it, not that it makes it any more bearable.
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* WrapAroundBackground: A rather egregious example occurs towards the end when Donut is walking down the longest and least interesting hallway in Equestria for over an entire minute. He even [[LampshadeHangings [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it, not that it makes it any more bearable.
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* WrapAroundBackground: A rather egregious example occurs towards the end when Donut is walking down the longest and least interesting hallway in Equestria for over an entire minute. He even [[Lampshade Hangingslampshades]] it, not that it makes it any more bearable.
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* WrapAroundBackground: A rather egregious example occurs towards the end when Donut is walking down the longest and least interesting hallway in Equestria for over an entire minute. He even [[Lampshade Hangingslampshades]] [[LampshadeHangings lampshades]] it, not that it makes it any more bearable.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: An incredibly rare example when the guard in question; Donut is a main character! He doesn't notice anything about the BigBad who's "obviously cured" and as he's walking down a corridor [[InnerMonologue monologing]] about how bored he is, a highly suspicious dark shadow flies by. Rather than do his job and check it out, he just brushes off a potential intruder as "a cat or something" (despite seeing it fly) and continues walking forward. See IdiotBall Below.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: An incredibly rare example when the guard in question; Donut question, Donut, is a main character! He doesn't notice anything about the BigBad who's "obviously cured" and as he's walking down a corridor [[InnerMonologue monologing]] about how bored he is, a highly suspicious dark shadow flies by. Rather than do his job and check it out, he just brushes off a potential intruder as "a cat or something" (despite seeing it fly) and continues walking forward. See IdiotBall Below.
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* WrapAroundBackground: A rather egregious example occurs towards the end when Donut is walking down the longest and least interesting hallway in Equestria for over an entire minute.
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* WrapAroundBackground: A rather egregious example occurs towards the end when Donut is walking down the longest and least interesting hallway in Equestria for over an entire minute. He even [[Lampshade Hangingslampshades]] it, not that it makes it any more bearable.
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Pretty sure Breeze Rider is a guy.
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* ChekhovsGun: When fighting the antagonist, Donut and Star Whistle wonder where Breeze Rider is. [[spoiler:She shows up later to snatch the villain's weapon.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: When fighting the antagonist, Donut and Star Whistle wonder where Breeze Rider is. [[spoiler:She [[spoiler:He shows up later to snatch the villain's weapon.]]
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** She is also definitely trying to be a lot like Pinkie Pie by providing goofy PluckyComicRelief at random times, like popping her head out of a cloud.
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** She He is also definitely trying to be a lot like Pinkie Pie by providing goofy PluckyComicRelief (attempted) [[PluckyComicRelief comic relief]] at random times, like popping her his head out of a cloud.cloud and impossible areas.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: An incredibly rare example when the guard in question is a main character! As he's walking down a corridor [[InnerMonologue monologing]] about how bored he is, a highly suspicious dark shadow flies by. Rather than do his job and check it out, he just ignores it, assuming that it's just a cat or something (despite seeing it fly) and continues walking forward. See IdiotBall Below.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: An incredibly rare example when the guard in question question; Donut is a main character! As He doesn't notice anything about the BigBad who's "obviously cured" and as he's walking down a corridor [[InnerMonologue monologing]] about how bored he is, a highly suspicious dark shadow flies by. Rather than do his job and check it out, he just ignores it, assuming that it's just brushes off a potential intruder as "a cat or something something" (despite seeing it fly) and continues walking forward. See IdiotBall Below.
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Breeze rider is voiced by a male.
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* AmbiguousGender: Unless you notice the difference in the males' and females' faces, it's unclear what Breeze Rider is (she's female).
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* AmbiguousGender: Unless you notice the difference in the males' and females' faces, it's unclear what Despite having a female body design Breeze Rider is (she's female).voiced by a male actor and is most likely male. Still, it's never really made clear.
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* ContinuityNod: Breeze Rider references the opening when the group approaches the castle.
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* TheHeart: Doodlecute. See TheChick.
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** She is also definitely trying to be a lot like Pinkie Pie by providing goofy ComicRelief at random times, like popping her head out of a cloud.
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* TheGaurdsMustBeCrazy: An incredibly rare example when the guard in question is a main character! As he's walking down a corridor [[InnerMonologue monologing]] about how bored he is, a highly suspicious dark shadow flies by. Rather than do his job and check it out, he just ignores it, assuming that it's just a cat or something (despite seeing it fly) and continues walking forward. See IdiotBall Below.
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* TheGaurdsMustBeCrazy: TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: An incredibly rare example when the guard in question is a main character! As he's walking down a corridor [[InnerMonologue monologing]] about how bored he is, a highly suspicious dark shadow flies by. Rather than do his job and check it out, he just ignores it, assuming that it's just a cat or something (despite seeing it fly) and continues walking forward. See IdiotBall Below.
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** She is also definitely trying to be a lot like Pinkie Pie by providing goofy ComicRelief at random times, like popping her head out of a cloud.
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* FunPersonified: Breeze Rider cracks (bad) jokes many times in the short and tends to be a daredevil...if flying through a forest counts.
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* FunPersonified: Breeze Rider cracks (bad) jokes many times in the short and tends to be a daredevil...daredevil… if flying through a forest counts.
* TheGaurdsMustBeCrazy: An incredibly rare example when the guard in question is a main character! As he's walking down a corridor [[InnerMonologue monologing]] about how bored he is, a highly suspicious dark shadow flies by. Rather than do his job and check it out, he just ignores it, assuming that it's just a cat or something (despite seeing it fly) and continues walking forward. See IdiotBall Below.
* GenericDoomsdayVillain: The villain's motivation is never really explained. He's just doing… evil, well… because he's evil.
* GenericDoomsdayVillain: The villain's motivation is never really explained. He's just doing… evil, well… because he's evil.
* StockSoundEffect: The highly cliched [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bW7Op86ox9g Dun dun dunnnnn]] gets played when the heroes first encounter the villain.
* SuspiciouslyAproposMusic: Sure, that one song provides pretty much all of the {{Exposition}} there is in the entire episode, but it lasts a whopping 3 minutes and 50 seconds and is completely forgettable, with the exception of the part where the villain sings in gibberish. Basically, it's mostly there to just kill time.
* ThatMakesMeFeelAngry: At one point, the villain outright states that he is evil, [[ObviouslyEvil in case that wasn't clear enough already]].
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* WatchOutForThatTree: Breeze Rider smacks into a tree while flying in the intro.
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* WatchOutForThatTree: Breeze Rider smacks into a tree while flying in the intro.intro.
* WrapAroundBackground: A rather egregious example occurs towards the end when Donut is walking down the longest and least interesting hallway in Equestria for over an entire minute.
* WrapAroundBackground: A rather egregious example occurs towards the end when Donut is walking down the longest and least interesting hallway in Equestria for over an entire minute.
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* ChekhovsGun: When fighting the antagonist, Donut and Star Whistle wonder where Breeze Rider is. She shows up later to snatch the villain's weapon.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: One of the De Noirs gives us an InfoDump about how his father is missing and "illusions can't help."
* DarkAndTroubledPast: One of the De Noirs gives us an InfoDump about how his father is missing and "illusions can't help."
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* ChekhovsGun: When fighting the antagonist, Donut and Star Whistle wonder where Breeze Rider is. She [[spoiler:She shows up later to snatch the villain's weapon.
weapon.]]
* DarkAndTroubledPast: One of the De Noirs gives us an InfoDump about how his father is missing and how "illusions can't help."
* DarkAndTroubledPast: One of the De Noirs gives us an InfoDump about how his father is missing and how "illusions can't help."
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** Breeze Rider saves the day by grabbing the sceptre.
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** Breeze Rider saves [[spoiler:saves the day by grabbing the sceptre.]]
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* FunPersonified: Breeze Rider cracks (bad) jokes many times in the short and tends to be a daredevil.
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* FunPersonified: Breeze Rider cracks (bad) jokes many times in the short and tends to be a daredevil.daredevil...if flying through a forest counts.
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* AerithAndBob: Donut is a name along side Iridescence and Star Whistle.
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* AerithAndBob: Donut is a name along side alongside Iridescence and Star Whistle.
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* BigBad: The EvilTwin, right down to laughing evilly about evil things and having a VillainSong.
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* BigBad: The EvilTwin, right down to laughing evilly about evil things and things, having a VillainSong.VillainSong and proclaiming that "[he's] having so much fun".
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* IdiotBall: Donut doesn't notice anything suspicious about the antagonist after he claims that he's "cured" and "obviously not evil."
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* LargeHam: The BigBad admits to enjoying himself while he casts disaster on Ponyville, and seems to be the most energetic actor. This isn't saying a whole lot, as everyone else is stiff or unintelligible sometimes.
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* TyopOnTheCover: The intro claims this is an "orginal production."
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* AliceAndBob: Donut is a name along side Iridescence and Star Whistle.
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* AliceAndBob: AerithAndBob: Donut is a name along side Iridescence and Star Whistle.
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* ActionHero: Mister Brave, and to an extent Donut.
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* ActionHero: Mister Brave, Brave gallops through a raging windstorm and charges at his possessed friend. Donut is also this to an extent Donut.extent, as he busts through the doors of the castle twice.
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* AmplifierArtifact: The ring on Star Whistle's hoof amplifies her magic, which causes the windstorm.
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* AmplifierArtifact: The ring on Star Whistle's hoof amplifies her magic, which causes the windstorm.windstorm and makes her summon magic tornadoes.
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* AuthorityInNameOnly: Donut really isn't a royal guard of Celestia.
* BigBad: The EvilTwin.
* BigBad: The EvilTwin.
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* AuthorityInNameOnly: Donut really isn't a royal guard of Celestia.
Celestia, but claims himself as one.
* BigBad: TheEvilTwin.EvilTwin, right down to laughing evilly about evil things and having a VillainSong.
* BigBad: The
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** [[spoiler:SequelHook]][[spoiler:SequelHook]]:[[spoiler:What it was intended to be. However, a new production hasn't been made in years, so it's either been abandoned or stuck in DevelopmentHell.]]
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: One of the De Noirs gives us an InfoDump about this.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: One of the De Noirs gives us an InfoDump about this.how his father is missing and "illusions can't help."
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* DemotedToExtra: Iridescence and Doodlecute don't do much, despite being in an ensemble cast.
* DisappearedDad: The De Noir family's only son has one.
* EasilyForgiven: Star Whistle. This is lampshaded in a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nH4Jjz_AjZ8 commentary]]:
* DisappearedDad: The De Noir family's only son has one.
* EasilyForgiven: Star Whistle. This is lampshaded in a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nH4Jjz_AjZ8 commentary]]:
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* DemotedToExtra: Iridescence and Doodlecute don't do much, much but stand around, despite being in an ensemble cast.
cast. Meanwhile:
**Mister Brave saves Star Whistle from the magic ring.
**Donut finds the antagonist and performs a HeroicSacrifice.
**Star Whistle fights against the antagonist using her telekinesis.
**Breeze Rider saves the day by grabbing the sceptre.
* DisappearedDad: The De Noir family's only son hasone.
one. It turns out he's an evil sorcerer.
* EasilyForgiven: StarWhistle.Whistle, after she wreaks havoc in Ponyville with her windstorm. This is lampshaded in a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nH4Jjz_AjZ8 commentary]]:
**Mister Brave saves Star Whistle from the magic ring.
**Donut finds the antagonist and performs a HeroicSacrifice.
**Star Whistle fights against the antagonist using her telekinesis.
**Breeze Rider saves the day by grabbing the sceptre.
* DisappearedDad: The De Noir family's only son has
* EasilyForgiven: Star
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* EnsembleCast
* EvilTwin: The antagonist is one.
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Guess what Mister Brave's element is?
* {{Expy}}: Breeze Rider is this to Rainbow Dash.
* EvilTwin: The antagonist is one.
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Guess what Mister Brave's element is?
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* EnsembleCast
EnsembleCast: Like in the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic source material]], there's a cast of six and no one pony has the most focus.
* EvilTwin: The antagonist isone.
one, formed after one of the De Noirs goes into the family library. He takes over the De Noir's son's body.
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin:Guess what Mister Brave's element is?
Brave has bravery as his element, as he gallops through a storm to save Star Whistle.
* {{Expy}}: Breeze Rider is this to RainbowDash.Dash, both being able to fly, cracking jokes and having a strong sense of adventure.
* EvilTwin: The antagonist is
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin:
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** TheLeader: Donut.
** TheLancer: Star Whistle.
** TheBigGuy: Mister Brave.
** TheSmartGuy: Iridescence, sort of.
** TheChick: Doodlecute.
** SixthRanger: Breeze Rider.
** TheLancer: Star Whistle.
** TheBigGuy: Mister Brave.
** TheSmartGuy: Iridescence, sort of.
** TheChick: Doodlecute.
** SixthRanger: Breeze Rider.
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** TheLeader: Donut.
Donut leads the group throughout the castle and calls himself a "royal guard."
** TheLancer: StarWhistle.
Whistle, as she's a major plot point in the first half and is the last pony standing when fighting the EvilTwin.
** TheBigGuy: MisterBrave.
Brave. He can ram though ''tornadoes''.
** TheSmartGuy: Iridescence, sortof.
of. It's inferred that she's an expert in the medical field by her Cutie Mark, and she senses something bad is happening in the De Noir's castle.
** TheChick:Doodlecute.
Doodlecute seems to be the most emotional and fragile of the group.
** SixthRanger: BreezeRider.Rider is generally comic relief throughout the episode.
** TheLancer: Star
** TheBigGuy: Mister
** TheSmartGuy: Iridescence, sort
** TheChick:
** SixthRanger: Breeze
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: Doodlecute.
* FunPersonified: What Breeze Rider tries to be.
* TheHeart: Interchangeable between Iridescence and Doodlecute.
* InfoDump: A few times from Breeze Rider, the evil twin and Donut.
* TheMedic: Iridescence.
* FunPersonified: What Breeze Rider tries to be.
* TheHeart: Interchangeable between Iridescence and Doodlecute.
* InfoDump: A few times from Breeze Rider, the evil twin and Donut.
* TheMedic: Iridescence.
to:
* FriendToAllLivingThings: Doodlecute.
Doodlecute's talent is allying herself with nature and plants.
* FunPersonified:What Breeze Rider tries cracks (bad) jokes many times in the short and tends to be.
be a daredevil.
* TheHeart:Interchangeable between Doodlecute. See TheChick.
* HeroicSacrifice: Donut charges into the EvilTwin's scepter, knocking himself out to save Star Whistle. [[spoiler:He's alright.]]
* IdiotBall: Donut doesn't notice anything suspicious about the antagonist after he claims that he's "cured" and "obviously not evil."
* InfoDump:
** In the beginning, Breeze Rider and one of the De Noirs inform the audience that the family's only son hasn't been outside for a long time, he owns the land, and that his father is missing.
** The VillainSong states that the father assembled the castle with dark powers, and a doppelganger is formed from them.
** Donut has the longest one in the story, admitting that he's not a royal guard, he was recently instructed about the Elements of Harmony, he filed a report to Celestia and that the villain is in Ponyville.
* TheMedic: Iridescence specializes in medical work, as evidenced by working in a hospital andDoodlecute.
* InfoDump: A few times from Breeze Rider, the evil twin and Donut.
* TheMedic: Iridescence.her Cutie Mark.
* FunPersonified:
* TheHeart:
* HeroicSacrifice: Donut charges into the EvilTwin's scepter, knocking himself out to save Star Whistle. [[spoiler:He's alright.]]
* IdiotBall: Donut doesn't notice anything suspicious about the antagonist after he claims that he's "cured" and "obviously not evil."
* InfoDump:
** In the beginning, Breeze Rider and one of the De Noirs inform the audience that the family's only son hasn't been outside for a long time, he owns the land, and that his father is missing.
** The VillainSong states that the father assembled the castle with dark powers, and a doppelganger is formed from them.
** Donut has the longest one in the story, admitting that he's not a royal guard, he was recently instructed about the Elements of Harmony, he filed a report to Celestia and that the villain is in Ponyville.
* TheMedic: Iridescence specializes in medical work, as evidenced by working in a hospital and
* InfoDump: A few times from Breeze Rider, the evil twin and Donut.
* TheMedic: Iridescence.
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* OriginalCharacter
* TheStoic: Donut.
* VillainSong: The evil twin gets a long one, which doubles as an InfoDump.
* WatchOutForThatTree: Breeze Rider in the intro.
* TheStoic: Donut.
* VillainSong: The evil twin gets a long one, which doubles as an InfoDump.
* WatchOutForThatTree: Breeze Rider in the intro.
to:
* OriginalCharacter
OriginalCharacter: According to Project Interlude, they didn't use any of the canon ''My Little Pony'' characters in order to avoid backlash from the fanbase.
* TheStoic:Donut.
Donut doesn't emote outside of assertiveness, inquisition and disappointment.
* VillainSong: The evil twin gets a long one, which doubles as anInfoDump.
InfoDump, when the De Noir's son goes into the library.
* WatchOutForThatTree: Breeze Rider smacks into a tree while flying in the intro.
* TheStoic:
* VillainSong: The evil twin gets a long one, which doubles as an
* WatchOutForThatTree: Breeze Rider smacks into a tree while flying in the intro.
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''[[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NgJPHj7Cjss My Little Pony: Dusk's Dawn]]'' is an "orginal" fanfiction based on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', made by Project Interlude. The story is composed entirely of [[OriginalCharacter original characters]], other than passing references to Princess Celestia, Nightmare Moon, Discord and the [[FanNickname Mane Six]].
In the magical land of Equestria lives a shy neon yellow pony, depressed by the loss of his father. On his ninth birthday, he decides to burst into his family's library and discovers that his castle was created by dark powers and sorcery. Suddenly, the pony is [[MakesSenseInContext consumed by his]] EvilTwin. He causes a massive storm, which ravages Ponyville. A group of six ponies venture forth into the castle in hopes of stopping him.
Allegedly, the short was rushed to be the first fan-made ''My Little Pony'' episode, beating ''WebAnimation/DoubleRainboom'' to the title. As a result, ''Dusk's Dawn'' was widely criticized for its subpar animation, voice acting and plotting.
This isn't to be confused with ''FanFic/DuskAndDawn'', another ''My Little Pony'' fanfiction.
Project Interlude's website can be found [[http://interlude.thican.net/index.php here.]]
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!! This fanfic contains the following tropes:
*ActionHero: Mister Brave, and to an extent Donut.
*AliceAndBob: Donut is a name along side Iridescence and Star Whistle.
*AllThereInTheManual: Since some of the dialogue is unintelligible, most people wouldn't know what Iridescence's name is, or that the yellow pony's last name is De Noir. The former's shown on the website banner.
*AmbiguousGender: Unless you notice the difference in the males' and females' faces, it's unclear what Breeze Rider is (she's female).
*AmplifierArtifact: The ring on Star Whistle's hoof amplifies her magic, which causes the windstorm.
*AnAesop: Tries to shoehorn one in at the end about not thinking things through.
*ArtisticLicensePhysics: Mister Brave ''ducks under a tornado.''
*AuthorityInNameOnly: Donut really isn't a royal guard of Celestia.
*BigBad: The EvilTwin.
*TheCameo: Celestia, Nightmare Moon, Discord, and the Mane Six are shown on a door containing the Elements of Harmony.
*[[spoiler:CliffHanger]]: [[spoiler:We never see what happened to the antagonist, or when the protagonists went to Celestia.]]
**[[spoiler:SequelHook]]
*ChekhovsGun: When fighting the antagonist, Donut and Star Whistle wonder where Breeze Rider is. She shows up later to snatch the villain's weapon.
*DarkAndTroubledPast: One of the De Noirs gives us an InfoDump about this.
*DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: "What happened here? Is anypony able to tell me what happened here?"
*DemotedToExtra: Iridescence and Doodlecute don't do much, despite being in an ensemble cast.
*DisappearedDad: The De Noir family's only son has one.
*EasilyForgiven: Star Whistle. This is lampshaded in a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nH4Jjz_AjZ8 commentary]]:
-->'''Mister Brave''': "We'll help you pay damages for all the ponies you killed!"
*EnsembleCast
*EvilTwin: The antagonist is one.
*ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Guess what Mister Brave's element is?
*{{Expy}}: Breeze Rider is this to Rainbow Dash.
*FiveManBand
**TheLeader: Donut.
**TheLancer: Star Whistle.
**TheBigGuy: Mister Brave.
**TheSmartGuy: Iridescence, sort of.
**TheChick: Doodlecute.
**SixthRanger: Breeze Rider.
*ForgotAboutHisPowers: Donut abandons most of his armor when invading the castle for no reason.
*FriendToAllLivingThings: Doodlecute.
*FunPersonified: What Breeze Rider tries to be.
*TheHeart: Interchangeable between Iridescence and Doodlecute.
*InfoDump: A few times from Breeze Rider, the evil twin and Donut.
*TheMedic: Iridescence.
*NiceJobBreakingItHero: Star Whistle caused a storm that ravaged Ponyville.
*OriginalCharacter
*TheStoic: Donut.
*VillainSong: The evil twin gets a long one, which doubles as an InfoDump.
*WatchOutForThatTree: Breeze Rider in the intro.
In the magical land of Equestria lives a shy neon yellow pony, depressed by the loss of his father. On his ninth birthday, he decides to burst into his family's library and discovers that his castle was created by dark powers and sorcery. Suddenly, the pony is [[MakesSenseInContext consumed by his]] EvilTwin. He causes a massive storm, which ravages Ponyville. A group of six ponies venture forth into the castle in hopes of stopping him.
Allegedly, the short was rushed to be the first fan-made ''My Little Pony'' episode, beating ''WebAnimation/DoubleRainboom'' to the title. As a result, ''Dusk's Dawn'' was widely criticized for its subpar animation, voice acting and plotting.
This isn't to be confused with ''FanFic/DuskAndDawn'', another ''My Little Pony'' fanfiction.
Project Interlude's website can be found [[http://interlude.thican.net/index.php here.]]
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!! This fanfic contains the following tropes:
*ActionHero: Mister Brave, and to an extent Donut.
*AliceAndBob: Donut is a name along side Iridescence and Star Whistle.
*AllThereInTheManual: Since some of the dialogue is unintelligible, most people wouldn't know what Iridescence's name is, or that the yellow pony's last name is De Noir. The former's shown on the website banner.
*AmbiguousGender: Unless you notice the difference in the males' and females' faces, it's unclear what Breeze Rider is (she's female).
*AmplifierArtifact: The ring on Star Whistle's hoof amplifies her magic, which causes the windstorm.
*AnAesop: Tries to shoehorn one in at the end about not thinking things through.
*ArtisticLicensePhysics: Mister Brave ''ducks under a tornado.''
*AuthorityInNameOnly: Donut really isn't a royal guard of Celestia.
*BigBad: The EvilTwin.
*TheCameo: Celestia, Nightmare Moon, Discord, and the Mane Six are shown on a door containing the Elements of Harmony.
*[[spoiler:CliffHanger]]: [[spoiler:We never see what happened to the antagonist, or when the protagonists went to Celestia.]]
**[[spoiler:SequelHook]]
*ChekhovsGun: When fighting the antagonist, Donut and Star Whistle wonder where Breeze Rider is. She shows up later to snatch the villain's weapon.
*DarkAndTroubledPast: One of the De Noirs gives us an InfoDump about this.
*DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: "What happened here? Is anypony able to tell me what happened here?"
*DemotedToExtra: Iridescence and Doodlecute don't do much, despite being in an ensemble cast.
*DisappearedDad: The De Noir family's only son has one.
*EasilyForgiven: Star Whistle. This is lampshaded in a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nH4Jjz_AjZ8 commentary]]:
-->'''Mister Brave''': "We'll help you pay damages for all the ponies you killed!"
*EnsembleCast
*EvilTwin: The antagonist is one.
*ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Guess what Mister Brave's element is?
*{{Expy}}: Breeze Rider is this to Rainbow Dash.
*FiveManBand
**TheLeader: Donut.
**TheLancer: Star Whistle.
**TheBigGuy: Mister Brave.
**TheSmartGuy: Iridescence, sort of.
**TheChick: Doodlecute.
**SixthRanger: Breeze Rider.
*ForgotAboutHisPowers: Donut abandons most of his armor when invading the castle for no reason.
*FriendToAllLivingThings: Doodlecute.
*FunPersonified: What Breeze Rider tries to be.
*TheHeart: Interchangeable between Iridescence and Doodlecute.
*InfoDump: A few times from Breeze Rider, the evil twin and Donut.
*TheMedic: Iridescence.
*NiceJobBreakingItHero: Star Whistle caused a storm that ravaged Ponyville.
*OriginalCharacter
*TheStoic: Donut.
*VillainSong: The evil twin gets a long one, which doubles as an InfoDump.
*WatchOutForThatTree: Breeze Rider in the intro.