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...he wouldn't haved disappeared, he would've found himself permanently assigned to a similar office assisting other "pilgrims" for eternity, decorated like his original earthly office at the time of the 2007 subprime meltdown (just like Isaac's at the time of the 1911 Triangle Shirtwaist Factory fire). The office may be a sort of purgatory for "pilgrims" like him, but it's an IronicHell for CorruptCorporateExecutives like himself.
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...he wouldn't haved disappeared, he would've found himself permanently assigned to a similar office assisting other "pilgrims" for eternity, decorated like his original earthly office at the time of the 2007 subprime meltdown (just like Isaac's at the time of the 1911 Triangle Shirtwaist Factory fire). The office may be a sort of purgatory for "pilgrims" like him, himself before going through the right door and living life over again, but it's an IronicHell for CorruptCorporateExecutives like himself.himself after going through the left door.
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...he wouldn't haved disappeared, he would've found himself permanently assigned to a similar office assisting other "pilgrims" for eternity. The office may be a sort of purgatory for "pilgrims" like him, but it's an IronicHell for CorruptCorporateExecutives like himself.
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...he wouldn't haved disappeared, he would've found himself permanently assigned to a similar office assisting other "pilgrims" for eternity.eternity, decorated like his original earthly office at the time of the 2007 subprime meltdown (just like Isaac's at the time of the 1911 Triangle Shirtwaist Factory fire). The office may be a sort of purgatory for "pilgrims" like him, but it's an IronicHell for CorruptCorporateExecutives like himself.
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'''WMG: In "Afterlife", if Bill had gone through the left door...'''
...he wouldn't disappear, he would find himself permanently assigned to a similar office assisting other "pilgrims". The office may be a sort of purgatory for "pilgrims" like him, but it's an IronicHell for CorruptCorporateExecutives like himself.
...he wouldn't disappear, he would find himself permanently assigned to a similar office assisting other "pilgrims". The office may be a sort of purgatory for "pilgrims" like him, but it's an IronicHell for CorruptCorporateExecutives like himself.
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'''WMG: In "Afterlife", if Bill had gone through the left door...'''
...he wouldn't disappear, he would find himself permanently assigned to a similar office assisting other "pilgrims". The office may be a sort of purgatory for "pilgrims" like him, but it's an IronicHell for CorruptCorporateExecutives like himself.
...he wouldn't disappear, he would find himself permanently assigned to a similar office assisting other "pilgrims". The office may be a sort of purgatory for "pilgrims" like him, but it's an IronicHell for CorruptCorporateExecutives like himself.
