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* ConversationalTroping: All the time since the characters are at least self-aware enough to realize their situation is pretty shonen mangaesque. Mayuki is particularly prone to it and dubs Akihito the protagonist since the "sword wielding heroine" is his childhood friend.
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* ConversationalTroping: All the time time, since the characters are at least self-aware enough to realize their situation is pretty shonen mangaesque.manga-esque. Mayuki is particularly prone to it and dubs Akihito the protagonist since the "sword wielding heroine" is his childhood friend.
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* EntitledToHaveYou: Mayuki's stalkers believe that because they're big fans of Yuki, they deserve to be acknowledged and allowed to move in with her so they can work together.
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* EntitledToHaveYou: Mayuki's stalkers believe that because they're big fans of Yuki, they deserve to be acknowledged and allowed to move in with her so they can work together.her.
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* QuestionableCasting: InUniverse, when Mayuki suggests having her friends voice character for the Acceptor novels she just draws names out of a hat, resulting in Kagome playing the shy rich girl, Benio playing TheHero and Haru as the shark monster. Those are the worst three, but the rest are little better.
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* WTHCastingAgency: InUniverse, when Mayuki suggests having her friends voice character for the Acceptor novels she just draws names out of a hat, resulting in Kagome playing the shy rich girl, Benio playing TheHero and Haru as the shark monster. Those are the worst three, but the rest are little better.
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* MrImagination: Mayuki’s second stalker, Kasuka, isn’t just a fangirl but also a chuunibyou. She talks like an anime character and uses [[OreOnna ore]] while claiming she normally doesn’t eat boring human food.
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* MrImagination: Mayuki’s second stalker, Kasuka, isn’t just a fangirl but also a chuunibyou. She talks like an anime character and uses [[OreOnna ore]] ore while claiming she normally doesn’t eat boring human food.
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* OreOnna: Kasuka the stalker likes to use ore, but in her case it’s not about being a tough hard drinking fighter girl but rather because she’s just a chuunibyou.
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* TotallyEighteen: Mayuki claims once that there are definitely no legal problems if she gets into a relationship. Akihito’s response would normally be met with “It’s a lie, of course” but this time Mayuki has to tell him not to cause waves and just go along with it.
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* TotallyEighteen: Totally18: Mayuki claims once that there are definitely no legal problems if she gets into a relationship. Akihito’s response would normally be met with “It’s a lie, of course” but this time Mayuki has to tell him not to cause waves and just go along with it.
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* ConversationalTroping: All the time since the characters are at least self-aware enough to realize their situation is pretty shonen mangaesque. Mayuki is particularly prone to it and dubs Akihito the protagonist since the “[[KnifeNut sword wielding heroine]]” is his childhood friend.
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* ConversationalTroping: All the time since the characters are at least self-aware enough to realize their situation is pretty shonen mangaesque. Mayuki is particularly prone to it and dubs Akihito the protagonist since the “[[KnifeNut sword “sword wielding heroine]]” heroine” is his childhood friend.
