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* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Eos is the Responsible Galatic Marshall as opposed to Pax who is the Foolish engineer who constantly getting into trouble.
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* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Eos is the Responsible Galatic Marshall as oppose to Pax who is the Foolish engineer who constantly getting into trouble.
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* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Eos is the Responsible Galatic Marshall as oppose opposed to Pax who is the Foolish engineer who constantly getting into trouble.
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* KnightTemplarBigBrother: Eos, who is usually diplomatic will do anything necessary to protect his siblings, including entering a bar fight or reroute himself into the Atlas to protect Nova from a civil war.
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** Chapter 22: [[spoiler:Nova's boss, Artemis, is revealed to be the Jura General.]]
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** Chapter 22: [[spoiler:Nova's boss, Artemis, is revealed to be the Jura General.General, and Sol is working for her.]]
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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler: Chapter 18: Prince Barlow is a member of The Void and kidnaps Eos, Deimos, and Zekei.]]
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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler: WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 18:Prince [[spoiler:Prince Barlow is a member of The Void and kidnaps Eos, Deimos, and Zekei.]]
** Chapter 22: [[spoiler:Nova's boss, Artemis, is revealed to be the Jura General.]]
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** Chapter 22: [[spoiler:Nova's boss, Artemis, is revealed to be the Jura General.]]
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Three siblings: two who are on opposite sides and one who is the new captain of a luxury ship try to keep the passengers safe in the middle of a civil war!! This romantic space opera is like nothing you've experienced!
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Three siblings: two who are on opposite sides and one who is the new captain of a luxury ship try to keep the passengers safe in the middle of a civil war!! war! This romantic space opera is like nothing you've experienced!
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* AlliterativeName: Eos Elara.
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* DarkSkinnedBlonde: Pax, who is tan skinned and has partly blonde hair. She better fits the DarkSkinnedRedhead archetype however, being a troublemaking {{Hackette}}.
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* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Eos is the Responsible Galatic Marshall as oppose to Pax who is the Foolish engineer who constantly getting into trouble.
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* FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling: Eos is Front13Back9: This doesn't usually happen in Choices stories, but ''Across The Void'' went on a several month long hiatus after Chapter 13 was released in late 2018, and the Responsible Galatic Marshall as oppose to Pax who is remaining nine chapters were released weekly from March 2019, making it the Foolish engineer who constantly getting into trouble.only example of this trope in a Choices book.
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[[caption-width-right:320:On the left, Nova and Sol.]]
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[[caption-width-right:320:On the left, Nova and Sol.]]
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Three siblings: two who are on opposite sides and one who is the new captain of a luxury ship try to keep the passengers safe in the middle of a civil war!! This romantic space opera is like nothing you've experienced!
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You're the new captain of a luxury space liner, and it's your job to make sure your passengers cross the galaxy safely -- in the middle of a galactic civil war!
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* HumanAlien: All of the characters in the story are supposed to be alien, but almost all of them are basically just humans with weird hair, face lines or (in the case of Sol) [[GemTissue gems in their body parts.]] The only exception is Artemis, who is a FishPeople.
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* HumanAlien: All of the characters in the story are supposed to be alien, but almost all of them are basically just humans with weird hair, face lines or (in the case of Sol) [[GemTissue gems in their body parts.]] The only exception is Artemis, exceptions are the Ocana, who is a are FishPeople.
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* SwitchingPOV: We get to see the perspectives of all three Elara siblings.
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* SiblingTriangle: Zekei can be pursued as a LoveInterest by Nova and Eos, if the player wants to.
