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** The events of the fic lead to a ForWantOfANail situation wherein Natalie loses faith in Gabriel much sooner, and allows him to be captured during Heroes Day, rather than saving him as Mayura.
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** The events of the fic lead to a ForWantOfANail for-want-of-a-nail situation wherein Natalie loses faith in Gabriel much sooner, and allows him to be captured during Heroes Day, rather than saving him as Mayura.
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* WordOfGod: The writer wasn't happy with King of the Skies' original design, motivation or powers, so all of them were changed for the story.
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* WordOfGod: WordOfGod:
** The writer wasn't happy with King of the Skies' original design, motivation or powers, so all of them were changed for thestory.story.
** The events of the fic lead to a ForWantOfANail situation wherein Natalie loses faith in Gabriel much sooner, and allows him to be captured during Heroes Day, rather than saving him as Mayura.
** The writer wasn't happy with King of the Skies' original design, motivation or powers, so all of them were changed for the
** The events of the fic lead to a ForWantOfANail situation wherein Natalie loses faith in Gabriel much sooner, and allows him to be captured during Heroes Day, rather than saving him as Mayura.
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About not liking working with the character in their work (only including them if forced), not what they think of them in the source work.
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* CreatorsPest: The writer wasn't happy with King of the Skies' original design, motivation or powers, so all of them were changed for the story.
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* CreatorsPest: WordOfGod: The writer wasn't happy with King of the Skies' original design, motivation or powers, so all of them were changed for the story.
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* CreatorsPest: The writer wasn’t happy with King of the Skies’ design, motivation or powers, so all of them were changed for the story.
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* CreatorsPest: The writer wasn’t wasn't happy with King of the Skies’ Skies' original design, motivation or powers, so all of them were changed for the story.story.
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* CreatorsPest: The writer wasn’t happy with King of the Skies’ design, motivation or powers, so all of them were changed for the story.
