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-->'''Gryf:''':... Should I?
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-->'''Gryf:''':... Should I?I?
* ''Literally everything about book 10.''
* ''Literally everything about book 10.''
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** On the flipside, Kel-Cha had to deal with their father's death in a more stoic fashion precisely ''because'' his more hot-blooded brother Gryf/Anoth couldn't accept it; the last thing Anoth said to his brother was "I hate you" before he ran away and disappeared in the mountains without a trace. Kel-Cha spent the next twelve years in mourning, thinking his twin brother was dead. In a worse-before-it-gets-better way, it transpires that Anoth is, in fact, alive, but ''he has no idea who Kel-Cha is''.
-->'''Kel-Cha:''' You... you don't remember me..?
-->'''Kel-Cha:''' You... you don't remember me..?
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** On the flipside, Kel-Cha had to deal with their father's death in a more stoic fashion precisely ''because'' his more hot-blooded brother Gryf/Anoth Gryf/Anoth-Cha couldn't accept it; the last thing Anoth said to his brother was "I hate you" before he ran away and disappeared in the mountains without a trace. Kel-Cha Kel spent the next twelve years in mourning, thinking his twin brother was dead. In a worse-before-it-gets-better way, it transpires that Anoth is, in fact, alive, but ''he has no idea who Kel-Cha is''.
-->'''Kel-Cha:'''Kel is or why they have the same face''.
-->'''Kel:''' You... you don't remember me..?
-->'''Kel-Cha:'''
-->'''Kel:''' You... you don't remember me..?
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** On the flipside, Kel-Cha had to deal with their father's death in a more stoic fashion precisely ''because'' his more hot-blooded brother Gryf/Anoth couldn't accept it; the very same night, Anoth disappeared, his parting word to Kel-Cha being "I hate you". Kel-Cha spent the next twelve years in mourning, thinking his twin brother was dead. In a worse-before-it-gets-better way, it transpires that Anoth is, in fact, alive, but ''he has no idea who Kel-Cha is''.
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** On the flipside, Kel-Cha had to deal with their father's death in a more stoic fashion precisely ''because'' his more hot-blooded brother Gryf/Anoth couldn't accept it; the very same night, last thing Anoth disappeared, said to his parting word to Kel-Cha being brother was "I hate you".you" before he ran away and disappeared in the mountains without a trace. Kel-Cha spent the next twelve years in mourning, thinking his twin brother was dead. In a worse-before-it-gets-better way, it transpires that Anoth is, in fact, alive, but ''he has no idea who Kel-Cha is''.
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* Gryf ran away from home as a kid because he couldn't accept that his father was dying and there was nothing the healers could do to save him; having never left Jaguarys in his life, he predictably got lost in the mountains and was captured by Monslave traders. He was just a kid, and all he wanted was to find a way for his dad to get better; what he got was twenty years of abuse at the hands of Menthos and being forced to fight other Monslaves to the death for "entertainment".
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* Gryf ran away from home as a kid because he couldn't accept that his father was dying and there was nothing the healers could do to save him; having never left Jaguarys in his life, he predictably got lost in the mountains and was captured by Monslave traders. He was just a kid, and all he wanted was to find a way for his dad to get better; what he got was twenty years of abuse at the hands of Menthos and being forced to fight other Monslaves to the death for "entertainment"."entertainment".
** On the flipside, Kel-Cha had to deal with their father's death in a more stoic fashion precisely ''because'' his more hot-blooded brother Gryf/Anoth couldn't accept it; the very same night, Anoth disappeared, his parting word to Kel-Cha being "I hate you". Kel-Cha spent the next twelve years in mourning, thinking his twin brother was dead. In a worse-before-it-gets-better way, it transpires that Anoth is, in fact, alive, but ''he has no idea who Kel-Cha is''.
-->'''Kel-Cha:''' You... you don't remember me..?
-->'''Gryf:''':... Should I?
** On the flipside, Kel-Cha had to deal with their father's death in a more stoic fashion precisely ''because'' his more hot-blooded brother Gryf/Anoth couldn't accept it; the very same night, Anoth disappeared, his parting word to Kel-Cha being "I hate you". Kel-Cha spent the next twelve years in mourning, thinking his twin brother was dead. In a worse-before-it-gets-better way, it transpires that Anoth is, in fact, alive, but ''he has no idea who Kel-Cha is''.
-->'''Kel-Cha:''' You... you don't remember me..?
-->'''Gryf:''':... Should I?
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* Shimy ordering Lionfeu to flee because she doesn't want him to die at the hands of the Zar-Ikos.
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* Shimy ordering Lionfeu to flee because she doesn't want him to die at the hands of the Zar-Ikos.Zar-Ikos.
* Gryf ran away from home as a kid because he couldn't accept that his father was dying and there was nothing the healers could do to save him; having never left Jaguarys in his life, he predictably got lost in the mountains and was captured by Monslave traders. He was just a kid, and all he wanted was to find a way for his dad to get better; what he got was twenty years of abuse at the hands of Menthos and being forced to fight other Monslaves to the death for "entertainment".
* Gryf ran away from home as a kid because he couldn't accept that his father was dying and there was nothing the healers could do to save him; having never left Jaguarys in his life, he predictably got lost in the mountains and was captured by Monslave traders. He was just a kid, and all he wanted was to find a way for his dad to get better; what he got was twenty years of abuse at the hands of Menthos and being forced to fight other Monslaves to the death for "entertainment".
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* In ''the Guardian'', Danaël breaks down upon finding out that his old comrades from the Silver Falcons either lost their lives trying to find the Divine Stones or reached their goal only to be transformed into hideous beasts, such as his older brother Ikaël.
* Shimy ordering Lionfeu to flee because she doesn't want him to die at the hands of the Zar-Ikos.
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You know for a comic book series aimed at children, this series can get pretty damn emotionally devastating.
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