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*** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up and turns away from her, brushing himself off and claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks stop abruptly]] when she reveals she knows he just [[WhamLine “gave [his] friends a bit of a fright”]]. Realizing there's no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form:
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*** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up and turns away from her, brushing himself off and claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks stop abruptly]] when she reveals she knows he just what happened by saying [[WhamLine “gave [his] “I think you gave your friends a bit of a fright”]]. Realizing there's no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form:
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*** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up and turns away from her, brushing himself off and claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks stop abruptly]] when she says he [[WhamLine gave his friends “a bit of a fright”]]. Realizing there's no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form:
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*** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up and turns away from her, brushing himself off and claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks stop abruptly]] when she says reveals she knows he just [[WhamLine gave his “gave [his] friends “a a bit of a fright”]]. Realizing there's no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form:
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*** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up and turns away from her, brushing himself off and claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only for her to say that she is thinks he [[WhamLine gave his friends “a bit of a fright”]], causing him to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks stop abruptly]]. Realizing there's no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form:
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*** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up and turns away from her, brushing himself off and claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only for her to say that [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks stop abruptly]] when she is thinks says he [[WhamLine gave his friends “a bit of a fright”]], causing him to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks stop abruptly]].fright”]]. Realizing there's no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form:
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*** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up and turns away from her, brushing himself off and claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] that is, until she voices her belief that he [[WhamLine “gave [his] friends a bit of a fright”]], causing him to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks stop abruptly]]. Realizing there's no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form:
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*** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up and turns away from her, brushing himself off and claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only for her to say that is, until she voices her belief that is thinks he [[WhamLine “gave [his] gave his friends a “a bit of a fright”]], causing him to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks stop abruptly]]. Realizing there's no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form:
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*** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up and turns away from her, brushing himself off and claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] that is, until she says [[WhamLine “I think you gave your friends a bit of a fright”]], causing him to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks stop abruptly]]. With no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form:
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*** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up and turns away from her, brushing himself off and claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] that is, until she says voices her belief that he [[WhamLine “I think you gave your “gave [his] friends a bit of a fright”]], causing him to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks stop abruptly]]. With Realizing there's no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form:
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*** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up and turns away from her, brushing himself off and claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks stop abruptly]] when she says [[WhamLine “I think you gave your friends a bit of a fright.”]] With no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form.
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** His day gets even ''worse'' when he accidentally scares the living daylights out of his mouse friends by poking his face through one of their holes when he hears them talking about him, causing them to flee.
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*** not Not only does Cinderella not realize who he is, she's so busy that he never gets a chance to tell her it's him.
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** And it all comes to a head when Jaq accidentally causes an elephant to start rampaging through the very festival he was trying to help Cinderella with. When he sees what he’s done, he cries that ItsAllMyFault and falls to his knees in despair, wishing that the Fairy Godmother was there.
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** Jaq’s wish to become human so he can better help Cinderella slowly backfires on him because DidntThinkThisThrough - not only does Cinderella not realize who he is, she's so busy that he never gets a chance to tell her it's him.
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***not only does Cinderella not realize who he is, she's so busy that he never gets a chance to tell her it's him.
***not only does Cinderella not realize who he is, she's so busy that he never gets a chance to tell her it's him.
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** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up, up and turns away from her and starts her, brushing himself off, off and claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks freeze]] stop abruptly]] when she says [[WhamLine says she thinks he “I think you gave his your friends “a a bit of a fright.”]] With no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form.
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** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up, turns away from her and starts brushing himself off, claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks freeze]] when she [[WhamLine reveals she already knows what he just did.]] With no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form.
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** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up, turns away from her and starts brushing himself off, claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks freeze]] when she [[WhamLine reveals says she already knows what thinks he just did.]] gave his friends “a bit of a fright.”]] With no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form.
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** Cinderella spends an entire day with Prudence in order to be the "proper" princess but it all ends up in disaster. With Cinderella humiliated. And with a stiff upper lip, she goes to her room and cries from the stress of trying to please everyone.
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** Cinderella spends an entire day with Prudence in order to learn how to be the a "proper" princess but it all ends up in disaster. With Cinderella humiliated. And with a stiff upper lip, she goes to her room and cries from the stress of trying to please everyone.
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** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up, turns away from her and starts brushing himself off, claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only to [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks freeze]] when she [[WhamLine reveals she already knows what he gave his friends “a bit of a fright”. just did.]] With no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form.
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** Jaq’s wish to become human so he can better help Cinderella slowly backfires on him because he did not think through DidntThinkThisThrough - not only does Cinderella not realize who he is, she's so busy that he never gets a chance to tell her it's him.
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** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up, turns away from her and starts brushing himself off, claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only for her to reveal she already knows what just happened by saying [[WhamLine “Well, I think you gave your friends a bit of a fright”.]] Upon hearing this, Jaq [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks freezes mid-brush]] before turning back and admitting the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form.
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** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up, turns away from her and starts brushing himself off, claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only for her to reveal she already knows what just happened by saying [[WhamLine “Well, I think you gave your friends a bit of a fright”.]] Upon hearing this, Jaq [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks freezes mid-brush]] before turning back freeze]] when she reveals she knows he gave his friends “a bit of a fright”. With no point in lying to her anymore, he turns around and admitting admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form.
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** Jaq’s wish to become human so he can better help Cinderella slowly backfires on him because he DidNotThinkThisThrough - not only does Cinderella not realize who he is, she's so busy that he never gets a chance to explain himself properly to her.
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** Jaq’s wish to become human so he can better help Cinderella slowly backfires on him because he DidNotThinkThisThrough did not think through - not only does Cinderella not realize who he is, she's so busy that he never gets a chance to explain himself properly to her.tell her it's him.
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** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up, turns away from her and starts brushing himself off, claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only for her to reveal she ''already knows'' already knows what just happened by saying [[WhamLine “Well, I think you gave your friends a bit of a fright”.]] Upon hearing this, Jaq [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks freezes mid-brush]] before turning back and admitting the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form.
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** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly springs up, turns away from her and starts brushing himself off, claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only for her to reveal she ''already knows'' what just happened by saying [[WhamLine “Well, I think you gave your friends a bit of a fright”.]] Upon hearing this, Jaq [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks freezes mid-brush,]] turns mid-brush]] before turning back and admits admitting the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form.
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** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly gets up, turns away from her and brushes himself off, claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only for her to reveal she already knows what just happened by saying [[WhamLine “Well, I think you gave your friends a bit of a fright”.]] Upon hearing this, Jaq [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks freezes mid-brush,]] turns back and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form.
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** When the Fairy Godmother appears right after this and asks if he's all right, he awkwardly gets springs up, turns away from her and brushes starts brushing himself off, claiming that [[BlatantLies everything’s great…]] only for her to reveal she already knows ''already knows'' what just happened by saying [[WhamLine “Well, I think you gave your friends a bit of a fright”.]] Upon hearing this, Jaq [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks freezes mid-brush,]] turns back and admits the truth, clearly heartbroken over his closest friends not recognizing him in his human form.
