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* ''[[https://web.archive.org/web/20120422100220/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6730492/1/My_Innocence My Innocence]]''. The title alone has convinced people that it's a ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''-inspired TrollFic, but it's hard to tell for sure because there aren't enough similarities between the fanfics. Still worth a read, if only to see the narrator insult lesbians and then apologize for his "pre-juice." Watch out for racism, sexual themes, and mind-searing idiocy. %%What series was this fic for?

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* The ''WesternAnimation/YoungJustice'' story ''[[https://web.archive.org/web/20120422100220/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6730492/1/My_Innocence My Innocence]]''. The title alone has convinced people that it's a ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''-inspired TrollFic, but it's hard to tell for sure because there aren't enough similarities between the fanfics. Still worth a read, if only to see the narrator insult lesbians and then apologize for his "pre-juice." Watch out for racism, sexual themes, and mind-searing idiocy. %%What series was this fic for?
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* "[[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O5qgF_V7Cvg Sex-ed.]]" (Video might be NSFW depending on how your work place looks at it.) A video where Mario, who spouts food puns at every opportunity, and Luigi, who is very much victim to NotEvenBotheringWithTheAccent, tell someone about safe sex. With images from the ''Mario'' series and sounds effects from ''Sonic'' games to assist, as well as StockFootage from ''WesternAnimation/CaptainNTheGameMaster''. It's about as weird as it sounds, and it's hopefully satire and not someone's attempt at making an actual sex-ed video with Mario. [[PoesLaw Hopefully.]]

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* "[[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O5qgF_V7Cvg Sex-ed.]]" (Video might be NSFW depending on how your work place looks at it.) A video where Mario, who spouts food puns at every opportunity, and Luigi, who is very much has fallen victim to NotEvenBotheringWithTheAccent, tell someone teach the viewer about safe sex. With images from the ''Mario'' series and sounds effects from ''Sonic'' games to assist, as well as StockFootage from ''WesternAnimation/CaptainNTheGameMaster''. It's about as weird as it sounds, and it's hopefully satire and not someone's attempt at making an actual sex-ed video with Mario. [[PoesLaw Hopefully.]]
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* ''The Girl Who Lived'' series, a half-rewrite (the other half is just ported directly from the actual books themselves with minor tweaks) of the books with a GenderFlip and a whole lot of other changes. Pretty much the biggest and most direct CanonDefilement possible, it starts out by arrogantly decrying J.K. Rowling for screwing up the series and goes about "fixing" it by removing every single one of Harry's flaws while also (intentionally or unintentionally) completely changing his personality to a [[SociopathicHero Sociopathic "Hero"]]. Instead of a ruthlessly oppressed kid living under the stairs that eventually becomes a mediocre wizard with heart, "Rose" is now the poster child of NewPowersAsThePlotDemands (with plenty of "hey, look at me, I'm cool!" stuff to go with it) while getting away with pretty much everything. Watch as the series completely paves over everything "bad" about the canon and introduces {{Plot Hole}}s by the truckload! Marvel as Rose torments her "friends" in ways that make Voldemort seem tolerable! Endure as the series goes to extreme lengths for AuthorAppeal while denying it every step of the way! One would suspect a troll like ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'', but if so, it's certainly an obsessive one.

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* ''The Girl Who Lived'' series, a half-rewrite (the other half is just ported directly from the actual books themselves with minor tweaks) of the books with a GenderFlip and a whole lot of other changes. Pretty much the biggest and most direct CanonDefilement possible, it starts out by arrogantly decrying J.K. Rowling for screwing up the series and goes about "fixing" it by removing every single one of Harry's flaws while also (intentionally or unintentionally) completely changing his personality to a [[SociopathicHero Sociopathic "Hero"]]. Instead of a ruthlessly oppressed kid living under the stairs that eventually becomes a mediocre wizard with heart, "Rose" is now the poster child of NewPowersAsThePlotDemands (with plenty of "hey, look at me, I'm cool!" stuff to go with it) while getting away with pretty much everything. Watch as the series completely paves over everything "bad" about the canon and introduces {{Plot Hole}}s by the truckload! Marvel as Rose torments her "friends" in ways that make Voldemort seem tolerable! Endure as the series goes to extreme lengths for AuthorAppeal while denying it every step of the way! One would suspect a troll like ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'', but if so, it's certainly an obsessive a dedicated one.

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* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~worthdice Worth Dice]]. He can be found on deviantART as well with his fanfictions. His fanfics are filled with heavily mangled grammar and [[invoked]]{{Marty Stu}}es. His ''Anime/{{Hamtaro}}'' fanfictions are located [[http://schoolfilmer.deviantart.com/favourites/38813124 here]]. These are about his [[VideoGame/FinalFantasy VIII Squall Leonheart]] rip off of a hamster character. Be sure to read at your own risk, though. These fanfics get a lot of praise.
** His early works have gone under CreatorBacklash recently, so he's trying to mold himself out of this.

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* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/~worthdice Worth Dice]]. He can be found on deviantART as well with his fanfictions. His fanfics are filled with heavily mangled grammar and [[invoked]]{{Marty Stu}}es. His ''Anime/{{Hamtaro}}'' fanfictions are located [[http://schoolfilmer.deviantart.com/favourites/38813124 here]]. These are about his [[VideoGame/FinalFantasy VIII Squall Leonheart]] rip off of a hamster character. Be sure to read at your own risk, though. These fanfics get a lot of praise.
** His early works have gone under CreatorBacklash recently, so he's
praise. He's been trying to mold himself out of this.become a better writer lately and now views his old works with [[CreatorBacklash embarrassment]].
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** WesternAnimation/{{SpongeBob|SquarePants}} ([[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4978602/23/Total_Cartoon_Island_Lordryu_edition here]]) and [[WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb Phineas]] (Seen mostly [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5135746/6/Total_Cartoon_Island_Return here]]), ''[[BewareTheNiceOnes of all people]]'', are jerks and the closest people to antagonists in the ''Total Cartoon'' series.

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** WesternAnimation/{{SpongeBob|SquarePants}} ([[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4978602/23/Total_Cartoon_Island_Lordryu_edition here]]) and [[WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb Phineas]] (Seen mostly [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5135746/6/Total_Cartoon_Island_Return here]]), ''[[BewareTheNiceOnes ''[[RonTheDeathEater of all people]]'', are jerks and the closest people to antagonists in the ''Total Cartoon'' series.
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** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to ''WesternAnimation/Ben10Omniverse''. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the ''Ben 10'' ones to the point where ''Ben 10''’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of [[spoiler: ''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Series/KamenRiderDecade'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'']] into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility and plagiarism in the story, some of which include: [[spoiler: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984'' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated'', chapter 6 steals the plot of the ''Animated'' episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s ''whole characterization and role in the story'' is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a ''Transformers: Prime''/''Ben 10'' crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. ''True Omniverse'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was temporarily canceled]] due to Power Master [[DearNegativeReader overreacting to constructive criticism]], but the series has since been uncanceled and can be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].

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** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to ''WesternAnimation/Ben10Omniverse''. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the ''Ben 10'' ones to the point where ''Ben 10''’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of [[spoiler: ''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Series/KamenRiderDecade'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'']] into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility and plagiarism in the story, some of which include: [[spoiler: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984'' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated'', chapter 6 steals the plot of the ''Animated'' episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s ''whole characterization and role in the story'' is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a ''Transformers: Prime''/''Ben 10'' crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. ''True Omniverse'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message net/s/14311437/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message-Reaction was temporarily canceled]] due to Power Master [[DearNegativeReader overreacting to constructive criticism]], but the series has since been uncanceled and can be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].
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* Here's a ''VideoGame/{{Roblox}}'' [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kn5z-HGhTPg Bullying Story]] that uses a Bacon Noob as a {{Cliche}} bullying victim, has him beaten up by some rich bullies [[BullyBrutality exaggeratedly]], gaining unrealistically many famous ''Roblox'' users to support him, and introduces a moral that while it's horrible to bully someone, it's totally fine to beat up and nearly kill the bully if they're not trying to kill you currently[[note]]Even the police were okay with it[[/note]]. In other words, {{Glurge}} as a Roblox animation.

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* Here's a ''VideoGame/{{Roblox}}'' ''Platform/{{Roblox}}'' [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kn5z-HGhTPg Bullying Story]] that uses a Bacon Noob as a {{Cliche}} bullying victim, has him beaten up by some rich bullies [[BullyBrutality exaggeratedly]], gaining unrealistically many famous ''Roblox'' users to support him, and introduces a moral that while it's horrible to bully someone, it's totally fine to beat up and nearly kill the bully if they're not trying to kill you currently[[note]]Even the police were okay with it[[/note]]. In other words, {{Glurge}} as a Roblox animation.
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** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to ''WesternAnimation/Ben10Omniverse''. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the ''Ben 10'' to the point where ''Ben 10''’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of [[spoiler: ''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Series/KamenRiderDecade'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'']] into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility in the story, some of which include: [[spoiler: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984'' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated'', chapter 6 steals the plot of the ''Animated'' episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s ''whole characterization and role in the story'' is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a ''Transformers: Prime''/''Ben 10'' crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. ''True Omniverse'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was temporarily canceled]] due to Power Master [[DearNegativeReader overreacting to constructive criticism]], but the series has since been uncanceled and can be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].

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** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to ''WesternAnimation/Ben10Omniverse''. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the ''Ben 10'' ones to the point where ''Ben 10''’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of [[spoiler: ''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Series/KamenRiderDecade'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'']] into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility and plagiarism in the story, some of which include: [[spoiler: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984'' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated'', chapter 6 steals the plot of the ''Animated'' episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s ''whole characterization and role in the story'' is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a ''Transformers: Prime''/''Ben 10'' crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. ''True Omniverse'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was temporarily canceled]] due to Power Master [[DearNegativeReader overreacting to constructive criticism]], but the series has since been uncanceled and can be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].
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* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1935568/Eogrus Eogrus]] is his name and writing [=ComicsNix=]-esque fanfics is his game. It should be noted that the man is Portuguese, but you probably wouldn't know it, judging from the [[SesquipedalianLoquaciousness pretentious language]] he uses. His fanfics also contain some [[{{Squick}} pretty disgusting]] material, but what saves his stuff from being DarthWiki/SoBadItsHorrible is the possibility that maybe, just maybe, he might be a troll. (Well, that, and the fact that his fanfics are surprisingly well-written, as far as grammar goes, as well as the fact that he has written [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9454305/1/Diary-of-an-Applaud more]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9654366/1/I-forsook-myself-Paulie reasonable]] fics.)

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* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1935568/Eogrus Eogrus]] is his name and writing [=ComicsNix=]-esque fanfics is his game. It should be noted that the man is Portuguese, but you probably wouldn't know it, judging from the [[SesquipedalianLoquaciousness pretentious language]] he uses. His fanfics also contain some [[{{Squick}} pretty disgusting]] material, but what saves his stuff from being DarthWiki/SoBadItsHorrible irredeemable is the possibility that maybe, just maybe, he might be a troll. (Well, that, and the fact that his fanfics are surprisingly well-written, as far as grammar goes, as well as the fact that he has written [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9454305/1/Diary-of-an-Applaud more]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9654366/1/I-forsook-myself-Paulie reasonable]] fics.)
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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5997438/1/The_Last_War The Last War]]'' would be terrible for the way it turns Ron into an [[DomesticAbuse abusive]] monster, Hermione [[{{Chickification}} into a]] DistressedDamsel, and later a murderer and bigamist who [[KarmaHoudini never faces any consequences]] and Ginny into the third [[ComicBook/{{Viz}} Fat Slag]]. However, the [[AngstDissonance overwrought angst]] drives it here instead. Even before they start dancing to "Always" by Music/{{Erasure}}, whose [[VideoGame/RobotUnicornAttack connotations]] seem to have escaped the author.

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* ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5997438/1/The_Last_War The Last War]]'' would be terrible for the way it turns Ron into an [[DomesticAbuse abusive]] monster, Hermione [[{{Chickification}} into a]] DistressedDamsel, DamselInDistress, and later a murderer and bigamist who [[KarmaHoudini never faces any consequences]] and Ginny into the third [[ComicBook/{{Viz}} Fat Slag]]. However, the [[AngstDissonance overwrought angst]] drives it here instead. Even before they start dancing to "Always" by Music/{{Erasure}}, whose [[VideoGame/RobotUnicornAttack connotations]] seem to have escaped the author.
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** One of his more infamous ''Friendship is Magic'' stories is [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/10911186/1/Spirit-of-Hearth-s-Warming-Eve-Shorts Spirit of Hearth’s Warming Eve Shorts]], a short fic focusing on the titular holiday. In it, there’s [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] with bad characterization, bad grammar that looks like something put through Google Translate 20 times, the canon characters are OOC and one-dimensional, the “plot” is threadbare and is composed of a bunch of [[RandomEventsPlot random events]], and the pacing is all over the place. The fanfic has been riffed by Fanfic/FanficTheater3015, with it not taking too long for all of the commentators to start snarking at the sheer ridiculousness of it.
** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to ''WesternAnimation/Ben10Omniverse''. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the ''Ben 10'' to the point where ''Ben 10''’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of [[spoiler: ''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Series/KamenRiderDecade'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'']] into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility in the story, some of which include: [[spoiler: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984'' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated'', chapter 6 steals the plot of the ''Animated'' episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s ''entire characterization and role in the narrative'' is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a Transformers: Prime/Ben 10 crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. ''True Omniverse'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was temporarily canceled]] due to Power Master [[DearNegativeReader overreacting to constructive criticism]], but the series has since been uncanceled and can be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].

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** One of his more infamous ''Friendship is Magic'' stories is [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/10911186/1/Spirit-of-Hearth-s-Warming-Eve-Shorts Spirit of Hearth’s Warming Eve Shorts]], a short fic focusing on the titular holiday. In it, there’s [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] with bad characterization, bad grammar that looks like something put through Google Translate 20 times, the canon characters are OOC and one-dimensional, the “plot” is threadbare and is composed of a bunch of [[RandomEventsPlot random events]], and the pacing is all over the place. The fanfic has been riffed by Fanfic/FanficTheater3015, by ''Fanfic/FanficTheater3015'', with it not taking too long for all of the commentators to start snarking at the sheer ridiculousness of it.
** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to ''WesternAnimation/Ben10Omniverse''. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the ''Ben 10'' to the point where ''Ben 10''’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of [[spoiler: ''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Series/KamenRiderDecade'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'']] into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility in the story, some of which include: [[spoiler: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984'' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated'', chapter 6 steals the plot of the ''Animated'' episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s ''entire ''whole characterization and role in the narrative'' story'' is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a Transformers: Prime/Ben 10 ''Transformers: Prime''/''Ben 10'' crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. ''True Omniverse'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was temporarily canceled]] due to Power Master [[DearNegativeReader overreacting to constructive criticism]], but the series has since been uncanceled and can be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].

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* Amelia_nekomimi's (now named GARGOULES) "[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6057884/ Fire Emblem: Ike's Journey]]" takes elements from both ''[[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheBlazingBlade Blazing Blade]]'', ''[[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheSacredStones Sacred Stones]]'' and [[VideoGame/FireEmblemPathOfRadiance the Tel]][[VideoGame/FireEmblemRadiantDawn lius games]], adds some Self-Insert and mixes it all with a delicious dose of Peter Chimaera-level writing to create an epic tale of love, sacrifice, [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers pink weapons from the future and magic rocket horses]]. It's filled with memorable quotes such as "I kill him with cuts and a catle fall on his head" and "ONLY MUCH WORST". While it seems to be a TrollFic, from the fact that the author edited the title due to advice from a reader, it's very hard to tell. Even if you're not a Fire Emblem fan, you'll laugh at how ridiculous it all is.

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* Amelia_nekomimi's (now named GARGOULES) "[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6057884/ Fire Emblem: Ike's Journey]]" takes elements from both ''[[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheBlazingBlade Blazing Blade]]'', ''[[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheSacredStones Sacred Stones]]'' and [[VideoGame/FireEmblemPathOfRadiance the Tel]][[VideoGame/FireEmblemRadiantDawn lius games]], adds some Self-Insert and mixes it all with a delicious dose of Peter Chimaera-level writing to create an epic tale of love, sacrifice, [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers pink weapons from the future and magic rocket horses]].horses. It's filled with memorable quotes such as "I kill him with cuts and a catle fall on his head" and "ONLY MUCH WORST". While it seems to be a TrollFic, from the fact that the author edited the title due to advice from a reader, it's very hard to tell. Even if you're not a Fire Emblem fan, you'll laugh at how ridiculous it all is.
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** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to ''WesternAnimation/Ben10Omniverse''. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the Ben 10 ones to the point where Ben 10’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of [[spoiler: ''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'']] into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility in the story, some of which include: [[spoiler: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984'' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated'', chapter 6 steals the plot of the ''Animated'' episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s ''entire characterization and role in the narrative'' is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a Transformers: Prime/Ben 10 crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. ''True Omniverse'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was cancelled]] due to Power Master [[DearNegativeReader overreacting to constructive criticism]], but the series can still be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].

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** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to ''WesternAnimation/Ben10Omniverse''. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the Ben 10 ones ''Ben 10'' to the point where Ben 10’s ''Ben 10''’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of [[spoiler: ''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Series/KamenRiderDecade'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'']] into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility in the story, some of which include: [[spoiler: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984'' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated'', chapter 6 steals the plot of the ''Animated'' episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s ''entire characterization and role in the narrative'' is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a Transformers: Prime/Ben 10 crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. ''True Omniverse'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was cancelled]] temporarily canceled]] due to Power Master [[DearNegativeReader overreacting to constructive criticism]], but the series has since been uncanceled and can still be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].
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* ''Fanfic/HouseOfGold'' is a Website/{{Wattpad}} RealPersonFic about a [[LoveTriangle Love Square]] between [=YouTubers=] WebVideo/DrewGooden, WebVideo/DannyGonzalez, and the [[Creator/LoganPaul Paul]] [[Creator/JakePaul brothers]]. See Danny and Drew themselves do a dramatic reading of it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hllf45NK-KA here]] in a video aptly titled "The Strangest Story on the Internet". Prepare for such [[RandomEventsPlot exciting things]] as:

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* ''Fanfic/HouseOfGold'' is a Website/{{Wattpad}} Platform/{{Wattpad}} RealPersonFic about a [[LoveTriangle Love Square]] between [=YouTubers=] WebVideo/DrewGooden, WebVideo/DannyGonzalez, and the [[Creator/LoganPaul Paul]] [[Creator/JakePaul brothers]]. See Danny and Drew themselves do a dramatic reading of it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hllf45NK-KA here]] in a video aptly titled "The Strangest Story on the Internet". Prepare for such [[RandomEventsPlot exciting things]] as:
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* Basically anything [[https://supernannyfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Supernanny_Fanon_Wiki on the]] ''Website/SupernannyFanonWiki''. It's all ''Series/{{Supernanny}}'' [[ScriptFic Script Fics]] written by young fans of the show, and between the ''Platform/[=GoAnimate=]''-tier writing, gratuitous AuthorAppeal, and outlandish elements like the dad of the day's parents having been killed by a ninja when he was younger in one episode, one recurring character being a {{Youkai}}, and one of the punishments favored by more abusive parents and nannies being to take their kids to a "Creepy Zoo" full of robotic animals with stupidly edgy names like "Bloodthirsty the Orca," "Nightmare the Hyena," "Hades the Snake," "Outrage (formerly [[AtrociousAlias OUCHCAUSER]]) the Otter," and "Sinner the Crocodile," it's impossible to take anything on there seriously.

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* Basically anything [[https://supernannyfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Supernanny_Fanon_Wiki on the]] ''Website/SupernannyFanonWiki''. It's all ''Series/{{Supernanny}}'' [[ScriptFic Script Fics]] written by young fans of the show, and between the ''Platform/[=GoAnimate=]''-tier ''Platform/GoAnimate''-tier writing, gratuitous AuthorAppeal, and outlandish elements like the dad of the day's parents having been killed by a ninja when he was younger in one episode, one recurring character being a {{Youkai}}, and one of the punishments favored by more abusive parents and nannies being to take their kids to a "Creepy Zoo" full of robotic animals with stupidly edgy names like "Bloodthirsty the Orca," "Nightmare the Hyena," "Hades the Snake," "Outrage (formerly [[AtrociousAlias OUCHCAUSER]]) the Otter," and "Sinner the Crocodile," it's impossible to take anything on there seriously.
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* Basically anything [[https://supernannyfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Supernanny_Fanon_Wiki on the]] ''Website/SupernannyFanonWiki''. It's all ''Series/{{Supernanny}}'' [[ScriptFic Script Fics]] written by young fans of the show, and between the ''Platform/[=GoAnimate=]''-tier writing, gratuitous AuthorAppeal, and outlandish elements like the dad of the day's parents having been killed by a ninja when he was younger in one episode, one recurring character being a {{Youkai}}, and one of the punishments favored by more abusive parents and nannies being to take their kids to a "Creepy Zoo" full of robotic animals with stupidly edgy names like "Bloodthirsty the Orca," "Nightmare the Hyena," "Hades the Snake," "Outrage (formerly [[AtrociousAlias OUCHCAUSER]]) the Otter," and "Sinner the Crocodile," it's impossible to take anything on there seriously.
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** The ''WesternAnimation/{{Teen Titans|2003}}'' {{Wangst}}fest that is ''Fanfic/TheEndOfEnds'' isn't far behind in terms of laughable badness. In a nutshell, Beast Boy [[FaceHeelTurn turns evil and adopts the identity of]] [[PaperThinDisguise Count Logan]] and ''gleefully commits murder and tries to destroy the universe...'' [[DisproportionateRetribution all because Terra broke up with him in canon.]] The twist can be seen coming almost instantly, as the author keeps reminding people that Beast Boy's name is Garfield ''Logan''. The author tries, but any attmept to evoke sympathy from him falls flat, and BB instead comes off as an over-the-top immature whiner. Count Logan is so [[GenericDoomsdayVillain one-dimensionally evil]] that reading his lines in Beast Boy's canon voice ruins any attempt to make him look a serious threat. The entire story exists because the author was so devastated by [[ShipSinking Beast Boy and Terra not hooking up in the finale]] that he ''[[SeriousBusiness has nightmares about it to this very day.]]'' If you didn't like the final episode of the show, this might make you fell better, but for all the wrong reasons.

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** The ''WesternAnimation/{{Teen Titans|2003}}'' {{Wangst}}fest that is ''Fanfic/TheEndOfEnds'' isn't far behind in terms of laughable badness. In a nutshell, Beast Boy [[FaceHeelTurn turns evil and adopts the identity of]] [[PaperThinDisguise Count Logan]] and ''gleefully commits murder and tries to destroy the universe...'' [[DisproportionateRetribution all because Terra broke up with him in canon.]] The twist can be seen coming almost instantly, as the author keeps reminding people that Beast Boy's name is Garfield ''Logan''. The author tries, but any attmept to evoke sympathy from him falls flat, and BB instead comes off as an over-the-top immature whiner. Count Logan is so [[GenericDoomsdayVillain one-dimensionally evil]] that reading his lines in Beast Boy's canon voice ruins any attempt to make him look a serious threat. The entire story exists because the author was so devastated by [[ShipSinking Beast Boy and Terra not hooking up in the finale]] that he ''[[SeriousBusiness has nightmares about it to this very day.]]'' If you didn't like the final episode of the show, this might make you fell better, but for all the wrong reasons. Oh, and the entire plot is a blatant ripoff of ''VideoGame/SuperPaperMario''.
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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6415842/1/WOlfenstien_comeback Wolfenstien comeback]]'', a senseless TrollFic in which the main character of ''VideoGame/{{Wolfenstein}}'' ([[IAmNotShazam referred to as Dr. Wolfenstein, even though Wolfenstein is the name of the castle]]) is trying to fight the "Natzees", then ends up in [[VideoGame/BioShock Rapture]] and is renamed "Bioshock", then he resurfaces and ends up in the world of ''VideoGame/{{Fallout}}'' for no reason. It has absolutely no story and makes no sense whatsoever, but it's freakin' hilarious.

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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6415842/1/WOlfenstien_comeback Wolfenstien comeback]]'', a senseless TrollFic in which the main character of ''VideoGame/{{Wolfenstein}}'' ([[IAmNotShazam referred to as Dr. Wolfenstein, even though Wolfenstein is the name of the castle]]) is trying to fight the "Natzees", then ends up in [[VideoGame/BioShock Rapture]] and is renamed "Bioshock", then he resurfaces and ends up in the world of ''VideoGame/{{Fallout}}'' ''Franchise/{{Fallout}}'' for no reason. It has absolutely no story and makes no sense whatsoever, but it's freakin' hilarious.
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* The stories created by ballistic dolphin, including ''Fanfic/SherlockSeason4'', ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10754651/1/Hnuger-Games-Hungry-For-Victry/ Hnuger Games Hungry For Victry]]'', and ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10756518/1/Turnbout-Spiderman/ Turnbout Spiderman]]''. They are all characterized by cheesy, [[WorldofHam over-the-top]] dialogue (like “'AAH MORIARY HAS RTURNED' Watson squeeled.”, frequent [[RougeAnglesofSatin misspellings/grammatical errors]], and ridiculous plots. His characters will often [[MrExposition narrate their own lives]] (“'I have solfed the mysetry' said Sherlock”) and he always adds an obligatory fight scene at the end of every story.

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* The stories created by ballistic dolphin, including ''Fanfic/SherlockSeason4'', ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10754651/1/Hnuger-Games-Hungry-For-Victry/ Hnuger Games Hungry For Victry]]'', and ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10756518/1/Turnbout-Spiderman/ Turnbout Spiderman]]''. They are all characterized by cheesy, [[WorldofHam over-the-top]] dialogue (like “'AAH MORIARY HAS RTURNED' Watson squeeled.”, ”, frequent [[RougeAnglesofSatin misspellings/grammatical errors]], and ridiculous plots. His characters will often [[MrExposition narrate their own lives]] (“'I have solfed the mysetry' said Sherlock”) and he always adds an obligatory fight scene at the end of every story.



* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2320111/Power-Master Power Master]] obtained notoriety for his hilariously bad ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime'' fics. All of his fics share the same traits: canon characters are [[FlatCharacter one-note versions of themselves]], he [[CharacterShilling shills characters he likes]] while dogging on characters he dislikes (mainly comic relief ones like Knock Out), over-bloated casts filled with bland characters, retcons that contradict canon, plagiarism, fight scenes that fail at using the RuleOfCool, and the [[IdiotBall heroes becoming idiots]] for the plot to progress. On the technical side, his stories have horrid spelling and grammar, a tendency to violate ShowDontTell, and plots that have a [[StrictlyFormula strictly formulaic structure]] and [[CaptainObviousReveal highly-telegraphed twists]].

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* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2320111/Power-Master Power Master]] obtained notoriety for his hilariously bad ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime'' fics. All of his fics share the same traits: canon characters are [[FlatCharacter one-note versions of themselves]], he [[CharacterShilling shills characters he likes]] while dogging on characters he dislikes (mainly comic relief ones like Knock Out), over-bloated casts filled with bland characters, retcons that contradict canon, poorly-explained retcons, plagiarism, fight scenes that fail at using the RuleOfCool, and the [[IdiotBall heroes becoming idiots]] for the plot to progress. On the technical side, his stories have horrid spelling and grammar, a tendency to violate ShowDontTell, and plots that have a [[StrictlyFormula strictly formulaic structure]] and [[CaptainObviousReveal highly-telegraphed twists]].



** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to Ben 10: Omniverse. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the heroes continue to hold the IdiotBall, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the Ben 10 ones to the point where Ben 10’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of [[spoiler: ''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'']] into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility in the story, some of which include: [[spoiler: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984'' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from Transformers Animated, chapter 6 steals the plot of the Animated episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s entire characterization and role in the narrative is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a Transformers: Prime/Ben 10 crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. ''True Omniverse'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was cancelled]] due to Power Master [[DearNegativeReader overreacting to constructive criticism]], but the series can still be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].

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** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to Ben 10: Omniverse.''WesternAnimation/Ben10Omniverse''. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the heroes continue to hold the IdiotBall, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the Ben 10 ones to the point where Ben 10’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of [[spoiler: ''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'']] into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility in the story, some of which include: [[spoiler: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984'' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from Transformers Animated, ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated'', chapter 6 steals the plot of the Animated ''Animated'' episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s entire ''entire characterization and role in the narrative narrative'' is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a Transformers: Prime/Ben 10 crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. ''True Omniverse'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was cancelled]] due to Power Master [[DearNegativeReader overreacting to constructive criticism]], but the series can still be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].
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** One of his more infamous ''Friendship is Magic'' stories is [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/10911186/1/Spirit-of-Hearth-s-Warming-Eve-Shorts Spirit of Hearth’s Warming Eve Shorts]], a one-shot fic focusing on the titular holiday. In it, there’s [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] with bad characterization, bad grammar that looks like something put through Google Translate 20 times, the canon characters are OOC and one-dimensional, the “plot” is threadbare and is composed of a bunch of [[RandomEventsPlot random events]], and the pacing is all over the place. The fanfic has been riffed by Fanfic/FanficTheater3015, with it not taking too long for all of the commentators to start snarking at the sheer ridiculousness of it.

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** One of his more infamous ''Friendship is Magic'' stories is [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/10911186/1/Spirit-of-Hearth-s-Warming-Eve-Shorts Spirit of Hearth’s Warming Eve Shorts]], a one-shot short fic focusing on the titular holiday. In it, there’s [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] with bad characterization, bad grammar that looks like something put through Google Translate 20 times, the canon characters are OOC and one-dimensional, the “plot” is threadbare and is composed of a bunch of [[RandomEventsPlot random events]], and the pacing is all over the place. The fanfic has been riffed by Fanfic/FanficTheater3015, with it not taking too long for all of the commentators to start snarking at the sheer ridiculousness of it.
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** One of his more infamous ''Friendship is Magic'' stories is Spirit of Hearth’s Warming Eve Shorts, a one-shot fic focusing on the titular holiday. In it, there’s [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] with bad characterization, bad grammar that looks like something put through Google Translate 20 times, the canon characters are OOC and one-dimensional, the “plot” is threadbare and is composed of a bunch of [[RandomEventsPlot random events]], and the pacing is all over the place. The fanfic has been riffed by Fanfic/FanficTheater3015, with it not taking too long for all of the commentators to start snarking at the sheer ridiculousness of it.

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** One of his more infamous ''Friendship is Magic'' stories is [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/10911186/1/Spirit-of-Hearth-s-Warming-Eve-Shorts Spirit of Hearth’s Warming Eve Shorts, Shorts]], a one-shot fic focusing on the titular holiday. In it, there’s [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] with bad characterization, bad grammar that looks like something put through Google Translate 20 times, the canon characters are OOC and one-dimensional, the “plot” is threadbare and is composed of a bunch of [[RandomEventsPlot random events]], and the pacing is all over the place. The fanfic has been riffed by Fanfic/FanficTheater3015, with it not taking too long for all of the commentators to start snarking at the sheer ridiculousness of it.
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* ''[[http://www.ditl.org/portalchap1-page.php?ListID=Recreation Portal]]'' is more or less just a ''Franchise/StarWars/Franchise/StarTrek'' WhoWouldWin debate with [[ExcusePlot the barest hints of badly written connective tissue to make it a story]]. What puts it here is that it's a really ''bad'' WhoWouldWin debate and has remained infamous for years on sites like Website/StarDestroyerDotNet. Highlights include every ''Star Wars'' weapon being useless because one time Picard said an enemy's lasers wouldn't get through the shields[[note]]aside from the fact that turbolasers, superlasers, and blasters are [[NonIndicativeName not actually lasers]] but instead plasma weapons[[/note]], the Death Star's power source being described as a nuclear fusion reactor to justify calling it primitive[[note]]This is taken from an RPG sourcebook which described it only as "fusion"; [[SciFiWritersHave/NoSenseOfEnergy a nuclear fusion reactor with the Death Star's output would be larger than the Death Star itself]][[/note]], Leia being amazed at the existence of Data when she was essentially raised by RidiculouslyHumanRobots, The Force inexplicably not working on ''Star Trek'' characters, and hyperdrive being slower than warp drive despite all canon evidence pointing to the contrary. What follows are several chapters of {{Curb Stomp Battle}}s (including the Enterprise-E wiping out entire fleets of Star Destroyers and [[DistressedDamsel Deanna Troi]] defeating [[BigBad Emperor Palpatine]]) so brazen that it sort of runs all the way around to being hilarious in how overpowered the Federation is made out to be.

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* ''[[http://www.ditl.org/portalchap1-page.php?ListID=Recreation Portal]]'' is more or less just a ''Franchise/StarWars/Franchise/StarTrek'' WhoWouldWin debate with [[ExcusePlot the barest hints of badly written connective tissue to make it a story]]. What puts it here is that it's a really ''bad'' WhoWouldWin debate and has remained infamous for years on sites like Website/StarDestroyerDotNet. Highlights include every ''Star Wars'' weapon being useless because one time Picard said an enemy's lasers wouldn't get through the shields[[note]]aside from the fact that turbolasers, superlasers, and blasters are [[NonIndicativeName not actually lasers]] but instead plasma weapons[[/note]], the Death Star's power source being described as a nuclear fusion reactor to justify calling it primitive[[note]]This is taken from an RPG sourcebook which described it only as "fusion"; [[SciFiWritersHave/NoSenseOfEnergy a nuclear fusion reactor with the Death Star's output would be larger than the Death Star itself]][[/note]], Leia being amazed at the existence of Data when she was essentially raised by RidiculouslyHumanRobots, The Force inexplicably not working on ''Star Trek'' characters, and hyperdrive being slower than warp drive despite all canon evidence pointing to the contrary. What follows are several chapters of {{Curb Stomp Battle}}s (including the Enterprise-E wiping out entire fleets of Star Destroyers and [[DistressedDamsel [[DamselInDistress Deanna Troi]] defeating [[BigBad Emperor Palpatine]]) so brazen that it sort of runs all the way around to being hilarious in how overpowered the Federation is made out to be.
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* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2320111/Power-Master Power Master]] obtained notoriety for his hilariously bad ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipisMagic and ''WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime'' fics. All of his fics share the same traits: canon characters are [[FlatCharacter one-note versions of themselves]], he [[CharacterShilling shills characters he likes]] while dogging on characters he dislikes (mainly comic relief ones like Knock Out), over-bloated casts filled with bland characters, retcons that contradict canon, plagiarism, fight scenes that fail at using the RuleOfCool, and the [[IdiotBall heroes becoming idiots]] for the plot to progress. On the technical side, his stories have horrid spelling and grammar, a tendency to violate ShowDontTell, and plots that have a [[StrictlyFormula strictly formulaic structure]] and [[CaptainObviousReveal highly-telegraphed twists]].

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* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2320111/Power-Master Power Master]] obtained notoriety for his hilariously bad ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipisMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime'' fics. All of his fics share the same traits: canon characters are [[FlatCharacter one-note versions of themselves]], he [[CharacterShilling shills characters he likes]] while dogging on characters he dislikes (mainly comic relief ones like Knock Out), over-bloated casts filled with bland characters, retcons that contradict canon, plagiarism, fight scenes that fail at using the RuleOfCool, and the [[IdiotBall heroes becoming idiots]] for the plot to progress. On the technical side, his stories have horrid spelling and grammar, a tendency to violate ShowDontTell, and plots that have a [[StrictlyFormula strictly formulaic structure]] and [[CaptainObviousReveal highly-telegraphed twists]].
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* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2320111/Power-Master Power Master]] obtained notoriety for his hilariously bad ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipisMagic and ''WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime'' fics. All of his fics share the same traits: canon characters are [[FlatCharacter one-note versions of themselves]], he [[CharacterShilling shills characters he likes]] while dogging on characters he dislikes (mainly comic relief ones like Knock Out), over-bloated casts filled with bland characters, retcons that contradict canon, plagiarism, fight scenes that fail at using the RuleOfCool, and the [[IdiotBall heroes becoming idiots]] for the plot to progress. On the technical side, his stories have horrid spelling and grammar, a tendency to violate ShowDontTell, and plots that have a [[StrictlyFormulaic strictly formulaic structure]] and [[CaptainObviousReveal highly-telegraphed twists]].

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* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2320111/Power-Master Power Master]] obtained notoriety for his hilariously bad ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipisMagic and ''WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime'' fics. All of his fics share the same traits: canon characters are [[FlatCharacter one-note versions of themselves]], he [[CharacterShilling shills characters he likes]] while dogging on characters he dislikes (mainly comic relief ones like Knock Out), over-bloated casts filled with bland characters, retcons that contradict canon, plagiarism, fight scenes that fail at using the RuleOfCool, and the [[IdiotBall heroes becoming idiots]] for the plot to progress. On the technical side, his stories have horrid spelling and grammar, a tendency to violate ShowDontTell, and plots that have a [[StrictlyFormulaic [[StrictlyFormula strictly formulaic structure]] and [[CaptainObviousReveal highly-telegraphed twists]].



** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to Ben 10: Omniverse. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the heroes continue to hold the IdiotBall, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the Ben 10 ones to the point where Ben 10’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of ''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility in the story, some of which include: [[spoilers: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from Transformers Animated, chapter 6 steals the plot of the Animated episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s entire characterization and role in the narrative is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a Transformers: Prime/Ben 10 crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. ''True Omniverse'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was cancelled]] due to Power Master [[DearNegativeReader overreacting to constructive criticism]], but the series can still be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].

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** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to Ben 10: Omniverse. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the heroes continue to hold the IdiotBall, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the Ben 10 ones to the point where Ben 10’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of [[spoiler: ''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'']] into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility in the story, some of which include: [[spoilers: [[spoiler: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984' ''Film/Ghostbusters1984'' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from Transformers Animated, chapter 6 steals the plot of the Animated episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s entire characterization and role in the narrative is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a Transformers: Prime/Ben 10 crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. ''True Omniverse'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was cancelled]] due to Power Master [[DearNegativeReader overreacting to constructive criticism]], but the series can still be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].
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** Aside from Sonic's Ultimate Harem, Fairy of Darkness is nothing sort of different. It's a crossover series between ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' and ''Anime/FairyTail'' [[spoiler: that interlopes elements (and sometimes characters) of ''Anime/DragonBallZ'', ''VideoGame/{{Diablo}}'', ''ComicBook/{{Spawn}}'', ''VideoGame/WorldOfWarcraft'', ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', ''VideoGame/LeagueOfLegends'', and ''VideoGame/{{Battleborn}}'' to boot, effectively making this a MassiveMultiplayerCrossover]]. There isn't that much to expect from it as well: the grammar is still abysmal, the characters are STILL out of character (with "Sonic" having a harem complete with the CrackPairing of him and Erza Scarlet, the fan-made villains (like Darkness) lack character depth, and the fact that it manages to turn the colorful cast of the anime into people whose lives revolve around "Sonic" is somewhat jarring to read. In addition to that, this series is NOTORIOUS for the ''Dragon Ball Z'' elements, some of which include: [[spoiler: "Sonic" transforming into a variety of Super Saiyan-esque forms and levels, him using a variety of similar attacks (like Super Sonic Beam being a version of the Kamehameha, Chaos Bomb being in the same vein as a Spirit Bomb), a character in the vein of ''Vegeta'' that acts like a "rival" to "Sonic" that dies later on, inducing the concept of Fusions a la Gogeta or Gotenks with Spiric and Shadic, and the overall PowerCreep wherein he can beat people to outer space, just like the vein of Dragon Ball]]. The influence of these assets is so abundant that it would've been better as a Dragon Ball Z / Fairy Tail crossover, but the fact that it's misplaced with Sonic the Hedgehog makes it all the more hilarious to read, in part with all the assets included. All of this amounts to a crossover that's only more or less "Sonic" featuring Fairy Tail to a lesser extent, with the incorporation of foreign elements to abuse the RuleOfCool to the extreme. [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10593411/1/Fairy-of-Darkness There]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10753141/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-2 are]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10976102/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-3-Age-of-Darkness five]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11587390/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-4-Tartaros main]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12495072/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-5 parts]], with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11721773/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-Nazo-Unbound several]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12012307/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-Aquatic-of-Disaster spinoffs]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12321171/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-Return-of-Blast added]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13058934/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-Wrath-of-Enerjak in]], with rehashes of the two [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13157719/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-Phoenix-Priestess mainline]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13157742/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-Dragon-Cry movies]] to boot.

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** Aside from Sonic's Ultimate Harem, Fairy ''Fairy of Darkness Darkness'' is nothing sort of different. It's a crossover series between ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' and ''Anime/FairyTail'' [[spoiler: that interlopes elements (and sometimes characters) of ''Anime/DragonBallZ'', ''VideoGame/{{Diablo}}'', ''ComicBook/{{Spawn}}'', ''VideoGame/WorldOfWarcraft'', ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', ''VideoGame/LeagueOfLegends'', and ''VideoGame/{{Battleborn}}'' to boot, effectively making this a MassiveMultiplayerCrossover]]. There isn't that much to expect from it as well: the grammar is still abysmal, the characters are STILL out of character (with "Sonic" having a harem complete with the CrackPairing of him and Erza Scarlet, the fan-made villains (like Darkness) lack character depth, and the fact that it manages to turn the colorful cast of the anime into people whose lives revolve around "Sonic" is somewhat jarring to read. In addition to that, this series is NOTORIOUS for the ''Dragon Ball Z'' elements, some of which include: [[spoiler: "Sonic" transforming into a variety of Super Saiyan-esque forms and levels, him using a variety of similar attacks (like Super Sonic Beam being a version of the Kamehameha, Chaos Bomb being in the same vein as a Spirit Bomb), a character in the vein of ''Vegeta'' that acts like a "rival" to "Sonic" that dies later on, inducing the concept of Fusions a la Gogeta or Gotenks with Spiric and Shadic, and the overall PowerCreep wherein he can beat people to outer space, just like the vein of Dragon Ball]]. The influence of these assets is so abundant that it would've been better as a Dragon Ball Z / Fairy Tail crossover, but the fact that it's misplaced with Sonic the Hedgehog makes it all the more hilarious to read, in part with all the assets included. All of this amounts to a crossover that's only more or less "Sonic" featuring Fairy Tail to a lesser extent, with the incorporation of foreign elements to abuse the RuleOfCool to the extreme. [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10593411/1/Fairy-of-Darkness There]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10753141/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-2 are]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10976102/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-3-Age-of-Darkness five]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11587390/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-4-Tartaros main]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12495072/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-5 parts]], with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11721773/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-Nazo-Unbound several]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12012307/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-Aquatic-of-Disaster spinoffs]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12321171/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-Return-of-Blast added]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13058934/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-Wrath-of-Enerjak in]], with rehashes of the two [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13157719/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-Phoenix-Priestess mainline]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13157742/1/Fairy-of-Darkness-Dragon-Cry movies]] to boot.



** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to Ben 10: Omniverse. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the heroes continue to hold the IdiotBall, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the Ben 10 ones to the point where Ben 10’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility in the story, some of which include: [[spoilers: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from Transformers Animated, chapter 6 steals the plot of the Animated episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s entire characterization and role in the narrative is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a Transformers: Prime/Ben 10 crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. True Omniverse [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was cancelled]] due to Power Master overreacting to constructive criticism, but the series can still be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].

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** He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to Ben 10: Omniverse. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the heroes continue to hold the IdiotBall, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the Ben 10 ones to the point where Ben 10’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', of ''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility in the story, some of which include: [[spoilers: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from Transformers Animated, chapter 6 steals the plot of the Animated episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s entire characterization and role in the narrative is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a Transformers: Prime/Ben 10 crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. True Omniverse ''True Omniverse'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was cancelled]] due to Power Master [[DearNegativeReader overreacting to constructive criticism, criticism]], but the series can still be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].
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*[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2320111/Power-Master Power Master]] obtained notoriety for his hilariously bad ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipisMagic and ''WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime'' fics. All of his fics share the same traits: canon characters are [[FlatCharacter one-note versions of themselves]], he [[CharacterShilling shills characters he likes]] while dogging on characters he dislikes (mainly comic relief ones like Knock Out), over-bloated casts filled with bland characters, retcons that contradict canon, plagiarism, fight scenes that fail at using the RuleOfCool, and the [[IdiotBall heroes becoming idiots]] for the plot to progress. On the technical side, his stories have horrid spelling and grammar, a tendency to violate ShowDontTell, and plots that have a [[StrictlyFormulaic strictly formulaic structure]] and [[CaptainObviousReveal highly-telegraphed twists]].
**One of his more infamous ''Friendship is Magic'' stories is Spirit of Hearth’s Warming Eve Shorts, a one-shot fic focusing on the titular holiday. In it, there’s [[OriginalCharacter OCs]] with bad characterization, bad grammar that looks like something put through Google Translate 20 times, the canon characters are OOC and one-dimensional, the “plot” is threadbare and is composed of a bunch of [[RandomEventsPlot random events]], and the pacing is all over the place. The fanfic has been riffed by Fanfic/FanficTheater3015, with it not taking too long for all of the commentators to start snarking at the sheer ridiculousness of it.
**He’s also known for writing ''Ben 10: True Omniverse'', a series of hate fics that serve as a rewrite to Ben 10: Omniverse. In particular, ''Ben 10: True Omniverse Season 4'' has obtained more infamy than its three prequels for being a poorly-written crossover between ''Ben 10'' and ''Transformers: Prime''. Don’t expect too much from the story: the grammar is still atrocious, the villains are [[GenericDoomsdayVillain cardboard cutouts who lack depth]] compared to their canon counterparts (especially the ones who had deeper character writing such as Megatron), the main heroes are still bland, the heroes continue to hold the IdiotBall, the plot is an IdiotPlot, and the ''Transformers: Prime'' elements of the story eclipse the Ben 10 ones to the point where Ben 10’s diverse cast is ''less'' relevant than ''Prime’s''. The story also shills Ben/Julie because Power Master is a [[DieForOurShip rabid shipper]] of them. Moreover, the story becomes more hilarious to read once it incorporates the characters and settings of''Series/KamenRiderKuuga'', ''Friendship is Magic'', ''Anime/DigimonAdventure2020'', and ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' into the plot, so the story effectively becomes a mega-crossover. In addition to that, there’s a ton of creative sterility in the story, some of which include: [[spoilers: shamelessly cribbing from the plot of ''Film/Ghostbusters1984' as the heroes try to catch Starscream’s ghost with machinery for chapter 12’s plot, Julie’s new backstory of being a half-Cybertronian hybrid being a copy of Sari’s backstory from Transformers Animated, chapter 6 steals the plot of the Animated episode “[[https://tfwiki.net/wiki/A_Fistful_of_Energon A Fistful of Energon,”]] and Switchblade’s entire characterization and role in the narrative is cribbed from Dreadwing’s]]. Lastly, there’s several retcons in the story that contradict canon, such as [[spoiler: Megatron not creating the Cybonic Plague]]. All of the factors result in a story that would’ve been better as a Transformers: Prime/Ben 10 crossover rather than the other way around, and a story where the plot is too cluttered. True Omniverse [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14283078/1/Ben-10-True-Omniverse-Message was cancelled]] due to Power Master overreacting to constructive criticism, but the series can still be [[https://www.deviantart.com/powermaster17/gallery/62586358/ben-10-true-omniverse experienced here]].

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** Hear it read [[http://benthesage.com/mft-until-the-end-of-time/ here]].

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** Hear it read [[http://benthesage.com/mft-until-the-end-of-time/ [[https://youtu.be/ABAtTP0_re0 here]].
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* A ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' fanfic, the creatively titled ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7324877/1/Homestuck_high Homestuck high]]'' (sic), has been posted on FF.net. It's almost reminiscent of ''My Immortal'' in some ways. It starts out as a HighSchoolAU of ''Homestuck'' before quickly going into some bizarre plot about Sollux (who is a demon for some reason) trying to impregnate Rose and Jade and use them to give birth to demon spawn. The fan fic is very much InNameOnly, in both ''Homestuck'' and [[ArtifactTitle in its title]], as it's more of a supernatural story than a high school one. It makes no sense and names of canon characters are used for other people. (Aradia is some sort of genie that helps out John, Eridan is John's transformation in order to duel with the demon Sollux, etc.) It also involves John having a vision after beinf possesed by dark magic ''from a [=McDonalds=] burger'' as an important plot point. And John had liked Rose ever since she... [[WhatDoesHeSeeInHer bit his arm and broke his glasses in the second grade.]] Probably a [[JustForPun Troll]] [[TrollFic Fic]], but still hilariously terrible. [[Fanfic/HomestuckHigh Now has its own page.]]

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* A ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' fanfic, the creatively titled ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7324877/1/Homestuck_high Homestuck high]]'' (sic), has been posted on FF.net. It's almost reminiscent of ''My Immortal'' in some ways. It starts out as a HighSchoolAU of ''Homestuck'' before quickly going into some bizarre plot about Sollux (who is a demon for some reason) trying to impregnate Rose and Jade and use them to give birth to demon spawn. The fan fic is very much InNameOnly, in both ''Homestuck'' and [[ArtifactTitle in its title]], as it's more of a supernatural story than a high school one. It makes no sense and names of canon characters are used for other people. (Aradia is some sort of genie that helps out John, Eridan is John's transformation in order to duel with the demon Sollux, etc.) It also involves John having a vision after beinf possesed by dark magic ''from a [=McDonalds=] burger'' as an important plot point. And John had liked Rose ever since she... [[WhatDoesHeSeeInHer bit his arm and broke his glasses in the second grade.]] Probably a [[JustForPun Troll]] [[TrollFic Fic]], TrollFic, but still hilariously terrible. [[Fanfic/HomestuckHigh Now has its own page.]]
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* ''The Last War'' would be terrible for the way it turns Ron into an [[DomesticAbuse abusive]] monster, Hermione [[{{Chickification}} into a]] DistressedDamsel, and later a murderer and bigamist who [[KarmaHoudini never faces any consequences]] and Ginny into the third [[ComicBook/{{Viz}} Fat Slag]]. However, the [[AngstDissonance overwrought angst]] drives it here instead. Even before they start dancing to "Always" by Music/{{Erasure}}, whose [[VideoGame/RobotUnicornAttack connotations]] seem to have escaped the author.

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* ''The ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5997438/1/The_Last_War The Last War'' War]]'' would be terrible for the way it turns Ron into an [[DomesticAbuse abusive]] monster, Hermione [[{{Chickification}} into a]] DistressedDamsel, and later a murderer and bigamist who [[KarmaHoudini never faces any consequences]] and Ginny into the third [[ComicBook/{{Viz}} Fat Slag]]. However, the [[AngstDissonance overwrought angst]] drives it here instead. Even before they start dancing to "Always" by Music/{{Erasure}}, whose [[VideoGame/RobotUnicornAttack connotations]] seem to have escaped the author.
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* ''Fanfic/TheLastWar'' ''would'' be terrible for the way it turns Ron into an [[DomesticAbuse abusive]] monster, Hermione [[{{Chickification}} into a]] DistressedDamsel, and later a murderer and bigamist who [[KarmaHoudini never faces any consequences]] and Ginny into the third [[ComicBook/{{Viz}} Fat Slag]]. However, the [[AngstDissonance overwrought angst]] drives it here instead. Even before they start dancing to "Always" by Music/{{Erasure}}, whose [[VideoGame/RobotUnicornAttack connotations]] seem to have escaped the author.

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* ''Fanfic/TheLastWar'' ''would'' ''The Last War'' would be terrible for the way it turns Ron into an [[DomesticAbuse abusive]] monster, Hermione [[{{Chickification}} into a]] DistressedDamsel, and later a murderer and bigamist who [[KarmaHoudini never faces any consequences]] and Ginny into the third [[ComicBook/{{Viz}} Fat Slag]]. However, the [[AngstDissonance overwrought angst]] drives it here instead. Even before they start dancing to "Always" by Music/{{Erasure}}, whose [[VideoGame/RobotUnicornAttack connotations]] seem to have escaped the author.

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