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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Nyx puts a bounty out on Dib, thinking that Zim will be pleased with her. Instead, he's pissed, since aside from the fact that he wants to kill Dib himself, she didn't even talk to him about it before doing it.
** Dib is not happy to see Dwicky again, as despite his good intentions he did still lie to and trick Dib the last time they met. It's only after their new adventure together that Dib decides to (mostly) forgive him.
** Nyx puts a bounty out on Dib, thinking that Zim will be pleased with her. Instead, he's pissed, since aside from the fact that he wants to kill Dib himself, she didn't even talk to him about it before doing it.
** Dib is not happy to see Dwicky again, as despite his good intentions he did still lie to and trick Dib the last time they met. It's only after their new adventure together that Dib decides to (mostly) forgive him.
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* WretchedHive: Slumia was already established as this, but here it’s additionally revealed that most of the planet is under control of the Green Claws.
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* WretchedHive: Slumia was already established as this, but here it’s additionally revealed that most of the planet is under control of the Green Claws.Claws.
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** Dwicky having [[TookALevelInBadass taken a level in badass]] while living in space is inspired by a similar subplot from ''Fanfic/BecomingATrueInvader''.
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* RealityEnsues:
** Nyx puts a bounty out on Dib, thinking that Zim will be pleased with her. Instead, he's pissed, since aside from the fact that he wants to kill Dib himself, she didn't even talk to him about it before doing it.
** Dib is not happy to see Dwicky again, as despite his good intentions he did still lie to and trick Dib the last time they met. It's only after their new adventure together that Dib decides to (mostly) forgive him.
** Nyx puts a bounty out on Dib, thinking that Zim will be pleased with her. Instead, he's pissed, since aside from the fact that he wants to kill Dib himself, she didn't even talk to him about it before doing it.
** Dib is not happy to see Dwicky again, as despite his good intentions he did still lie to and trick Dib the last time they met. It's only after their new adventure together that Dib decides to (mostly) forgive him.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Nyx puts a bounty out on Dib, thinking that Zim will be pleased with her. Instead, he's pissed, since aside from the fact that he wants to kill Dib himself, she didn't even talk to him about it before doing it.
** Dib is not happy to see Dwicky again, as despite his good intentions he did still lie to and trick Dib the last time they met. It's only after their new adventure together that Dib decides to (mostly) forgive him.
** Nyx puts a bounty out on Dib, thinking that Zim will be pleased with her. Instead, he's pissed, since aside from the fact that he wants to kill Dib himself, she didn't even talk to him about it before doing it.
** Dib is not happy to see Dwicky again, as despite his good intentions he did still lie to and trick Dib the last time they met. It's only after their new adventure together that Dib decides to (mostly) forgive him.
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* TheSyndicate: This chapter introduces Grissom’s organization, the Green Claw Syndicate.
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* TheSyndicate: This chapter introduces Grissom’s Grissom's organization, the Green Claw Syndicate.Syndicate.
* TookALevelInBadass: Dwicky has become a badass bounty hunter since Dib last saw him.
* TookALevelInBadass: Dwicky has become a badass bounty hunter since Dib last saw him.
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Intending to eliminate Dib for Zim, Nyx puts out a hit on him. Now Dib and his friends have to deal with bounty hunters from across the galaxy, and the arrival of a familiar face.
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*BigfootSasquatchAndYeti: Team Save Earth are on a stakeout looking for Bigfoot early on. They end up missing him due to the interference from the bounty hunter stalking Dib.
*BloodKnight: Havok is obsessed with finding a WorthyOpponent who can match him in a fight, and is ecstatic that Dib lives up to that.
*CarnivalOfKillers: Numerous bounty hunters come to Earth to hunt the price that Nyx puts on Dib's head.
*DidntThinkThisThrough: Nyx thought putting out a bounty on Dib without Zim's knowledge or consent would make him happy.
*TheDon: This chapter introduces us to Grissom, the leader of one of the largest crime syndicates in Irken space.
*EasilyForgiven: Averted. Dib does not automatically forgive Dwicky for what happened between them in canon, though by the end of their reunion lets his grudge mostly go.
*ExpectingSomeoneTaller: Inverted, as Havok says he expected Zim to be ''shorter'' based on what he's heard. Given Irkens' view of the link between height and competence, there's a couple of insults there.
*FlatWhat: Zim's reaction, along with TranquilFury, to learning that Nyx put a hit out on Dib without his permission.
*NoodleIncident: How, exactly, Dwicky managed to become a badass bounty hunter since going into space.
*NotQuiteDead: Havok is nearly killed during his fight with Dib, but Zim recovers his body and places it in stasis on life support indefinitely.
*OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Most of Team Save Earth and Dwicky's fight with the bounty hunter team TRL and Gabbrot in isn't depicted.
*TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: As usual, this is Zim's view on Dib. When he learns that Nyx put a hit out on Dib without his permission, he is ''furious'', to the point of physically attacking her.
*QuitYourWhining: Gaz says as much to Nyx at the start of the chapter, telling her to stop complaining about her grudge against Dib and doing something about it.
*RealityEnsues:
**Nyx puts a bounty out on Dib, thinking that Zim will be pleased with her. Instead, he's pissed, since aside from the fact that he wants to kill Dib himself, she didn't even talk to him about it before doing it.
**Dib is not happy to see Dwicky again, as despite his good intentions he did still lie to and trick Dib the last time they met. It's only after their new adventure together that Dib decides to (mostly) forgive him.
*SecretPolice: Havok's first scene also introduces the Consulars, the psychics who serve this role to the Irken Empire.
*SelfDisposingVillain: Arachnos, the first of the bounty hunters to come after Dib, accidentally blows herself up in the process of setting a trap for him.
*ShoutOut:
**Ma'lack, one of the bounty hunters that comes after Dib, is stated to be a Garatron, a minor alien species from one of the later ''Literature/{{Animorphs}}'' books.
**When Havok cuts communications with Grissom, he states "[[Film/ANewHope Boring conversation anyway]]".
*ShutUpHannibal: When Havok is ranting about how much of a WorthyOpponent he sees Dib as, Dib tells him to just shut up and attacks him, stating by comparison that when Zim rants, it's at least mildly entertaining, whereas Havok sounds like a cliche.
*TheSyndicate: This chapter introduces Grissom’s organization, the Green Claw Syndicate.
*WhatTheHellHero: Dib takes the time to call out Dwicky for what happened the last time they met.
*WretchedHive: Slumia was already established as this, but here it’s additionally revealed that most of the planet is under control of the Green Claws.
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*BigfootSasquatchAndYeti: Team Save Earth are on a stakeout looking for Bigfoot early on. They end up missing him due to the interference from the bounty hunter stalking Dib.
*BloodKnight: Havok is obsessed with finding a WorthyOpponent who can match him in a fight, and is ecstatic that Dib lives up to that.
*CarnivalOfKillers: Numerous bounty hunters come to Earth to hunt the price that Nyx puts on Dib's head.
*DidntThinkThisThrough: Nyx thought putting out a bounty on Dib without Zim's knowledge or consent would make him happy.
*TheDon: This chapter introduces us to Grissom, the leader of one of the largest crime syndicates in Irken space.
*EasilyForgiven: Averted. Dib does not automatically forgive Dwicky for what happened between them in canon, though by the end of their reunion lets his grudge mostly go.
*ExpectingSomeoneTaller: Inverted, as Havok says he expected Zim to be ''shorter'' based on what he's heard. Given Irkens' view of the link between height and competence, there's a couple of insults there.
*FlatWhat: Zim's reaction, along with TranquilFury, to learning that Nyx put a hit out on Dib without his permission.
*NoodleIncident: How, exactly, Dwicky managed to become a badass bounty hunter since going into space.
*NotQuiteDead: Havok is nearly killed during his fight with Dib, but Zim recovers his body and places it in stasis on life support indefinitely.
*OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Most of Team Save Earth and Dwicky's fight with the bounty hunter team TRL and Gabbrot in isn't depicted.
*TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: As usual, this is Zim's view on Dib. When he learns that Nyx put a hit out on Dib without his permission, he is ''furious'', to the point of physically attacking her.
*QuitYourWhining: Gaz says as much to Nyx at the start of the chapter, telling her to stop complaining about her grudge against Dib and doing something about it.
*RealityEnsues:
**Nyx puts a bounty out on Dib, thinking that Zim will be pleased with her. Instead, he's pissed, since aside from the fact that he wants to kill Dib himself, she didn't even talk to him about it before doing it.
**Dib is not happy to see Dwicky again, as despite his good intentions he did still lie to and trick Dib the last time they met. It's only after their new adventure together that Dib decides to (mostly) forgive him.
*SecretPolice: Havok's first scene also introduces the Consulars, the psychics who serve this role to the Irken Empire.
*SelfDisposingVillain: Arachnos, the first of the bounty hunters to come after Dib, accidentally blows herself up in the process of setting a trap for him.
*ShoutOut:
**Ma'lack, one of the bounty hunters that comes after Dib, is stated to be a Garatron, a minor alien species from one of the later ''Literature/{{Animorphs}}'' books.
**When Havok cuts communications with Grissom, he states "[[Film/ANewHope Boring conversation anyway]]".
*ShutUpHannibal: When Havok is ranting about how much of a WorthyOpponent he sees Dib as, Dib tells him to just shut up and attacks him, stating by comparison that when Zim rants, it's at least mildly entertaining, whereas Havok sounds like a cliche.
*TheSyndicate: This chapter introduces Grissom’s organization, the Green Claw Syndicate.
*WhatTheHellHero: Dib takes the time to call out Dwicky for what happened the last time they met.
*WretchedHive: Slumia was already established as this, but here it’s additionally revealed that most of the planet is under control of the Green Claws.
