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* AlwaysABiggerFish: Just like the canon series, the red mantis scared away the green mantis, who is much smaller in size.
* BaitAndSwitch: The first few paragraphs of the story plays out the same as the TV series when it cuts to Sprig being tackled by Sasha instead of a rope snare as the following events starts to play differently.
* BaitAndSwitch: The first few paragraphs of the story plays out the same as the TV series when it cuts to Sprig being tackled by Sasha instead of a rope snare as the following events starts to play differently.
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* AlwaysABiggerFish: Just like the canon series, the red mantis scared scares away the green mantis, who is much smaller in size.
* BaitAndSwitch: The first few paragraphs of the storyplays play out the same as the TV series when it cuts to Sprig being tackled by Sasha instead of a rope snare as the following events starts start to play differently.
* BaitAndSwitch: The first few paragraphs of the story
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* EstablishingSeriesMoment: The first few narration lines tells how Anne is trapped in Amphibia when it mentions Sasha's name, as the story established itself as a WhatIf with Sasha taking Anne's place.
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* EstablishingSeriesMoment: The first few narration lines tells tell how Anne is trapped in Amphibia when it mentions Sasha's name, as the story established itself as a WhatIf with Sasha taking Anne's place.
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Stuck in another world, Sasha finds herself with the Plantars family and befriends Sprig, who tries to prove himself as a friend to her.
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Stuck in another world, Sasha finds herself with the Plantars Plantar family and befriends Sprig, who tries to prove himself as a friend to her.
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* BaitAndSwitch: The first few paragraphs of the story plays out the same as the tv series when it cuts to Sprig being tackled by Sasha instead of a rope snare as the following events starts to play differently.
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* BaitAndSwitch: The first few paragraphs of the story plays out the same as the tv TV series when it cuts to Sprig being tackled by Sasha instead of a rope snare as the following events starts to play differently.
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--> '''Wally:'''Dobedido, dobedida, I sure hope nothing comes out from these thick bushes and eat me alive~! Haha~!
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--> '''Wally:'''Dobedido, '''Wally:''' Dobedido, dobedida, I sure hope nothing comes out from these thick bushes and eat me alive~! Haha~!
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Stuck in another world, Sasha finds herself with the Plantars family and befriends Sprig, who tries to prove himself as a friend to her.
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* AlwaysABiggerFish: Just like the canon series, the red mantis scared away the green mantis, who is much smaller in size.
* BaitAndSwitch: The first few paragraphs of the story plays out the same as the tv series when it cuts to Sprig being tackled by Sasha instead of a rope snare as the following events starts to play differently.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: While it all plays out the same, Sasha, who takes Anne's place, has a different take. In this story, Sasha is introduced to be surviving on her own in the wilderness all alone while questioning how she ended up in Amphibia in the first place.
* EstablishingSeriesMoment: The first few narration lines tells how Anne is trapped in Amphibia when it mentions Sasha's name, as the story established itself as a WhatIf with Sasha taking Anne's place.
* PrecisionFStrike: Sasha says the word, "Hell", while describing her current situation in Amphibia.
* TemptingFate: Wally does this in his debut.
--> '''Wally:'''Dobedido, dobedida, I sure hope nothing comes out from these thick bushes and eat me alive~! Haha~!
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* AlwaysABiggerFish: Just like the canon series, the red mantis scared away the green mantis, who is much smaller in size.
* BaitAndSwitch: The first few paragraphs of the story plays out the same as the tv series when it cuts to Sprig being tackled by Sasha instead of a rope snare as the following events starts to play differently.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: While it all plays out the same, Sasha, who takes Anne's place, has a different take. In this story, Sasha is introduced to be surviving on her own in the wilderness all alone while questioning how she ended up in Amphibia in the first place.
* EstablishingSeriesMoment: The first few narration lines tells how Anne is trapped in Amphibia when it mentions Sasha's name, as the story established itself as a WhatIf with Sasha taking Anne's place.
* PrecisionFStrike: Sasha says the word, "Hell", while describing her current situation in Amphibia.
* TemptingFate: Wally does this in his debut.
--> '''Wally:'''Dobedido, dobedida, I sure hope nothing comes out from these thick bushes and eat me alive~! Haha~!
