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* {{Flashback}}: We get one flashback showing fanfic Lynn sitting on chocolate, another showing the fanfic Louds getting hit by pranks, and a third showing how it was fanfic Lincoln who dropped the candy bar.

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* {{Flashback}}: We get one flashback showing fanfic Lynn sitting on chocolate, another showing the fanfic Louds getting hit by pranks, and a third showing how it was fanfic Lincoln who dropped the candy bar.chocolate Lynn sat on.
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* RunningGag: Lisa saying, "Questions end in question marks," with increasing frustration when the fanfic ends a question with a period. It gets to the point that she [[SerialEscalation grabs a bullhorn just to vent her irritation.]]
* SerialEscalation:
** [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] by name when Luan states her approval of a gag where fanfic Lynn is pranked at the fridge, which culminates in her being hit by a boxing glove from a can of soda.
** Lisa continuously gets more annoyed as the fanfic forgets to end questions with question marks, to the point that she's screaming through a bullhorn by the end.
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* ItIsDehumanizing: Luan complains that her fanfic counterpart is referred to as "it" at one point. Lincoln jokes that [[Literature/{{It}} it must be because she's a clown]], only for Luan to protest that she's not [[MonsterClown that type of clown]].
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** Fanfic Luan says to ynn about the chocolate bar, "You must've been a choco-lot to take in!", "Turn that brown upside-down", and "I guess I'll see you guys choco-later!".

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** Fanfic Luan says to ynn Lynn about the chocolate bar, "You must've been a choco-lot to take in!", "Turn that brown upside-down", and "I guess I'll see you guys choco-later!".
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** A minor one, but apparently, fanfic Luan is above poop pranks. The real Luan isn't.

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** A minor one, but apparently, fanfic Luan is above poop pranks. The real Luan isn't.isn't, as shown in "April Fools Rules."
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*PushoverParents: Rather than do anything to stop the prank war, fanfic Lynn Sr. and Rita get too scared of it to help.
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** When fanfic Lola calls Luan an "it", Lincoln (the real one) suggests that it's [[Film/{{It}} because she's a clown]].

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** When fanfic Lola calls Luan an "it", Lincoln (the real one) suggests that it's [[Film/{{It}} [[Film/It2017 because she's a clown]].
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We open on Fic!Lincoln with a lot of money he made with Fic!Clyde. Luan and Lynn start teasing each other and Lincoln by suggesting undignified ways they could've made that money. Then, Fic!Lynn enters, in a huff. Fic!Lincoln asks what's wrong, but Fic!Lynn doesn't want to talk about it. She reluctantly opens up and it's revealed that she was laughed at during a game for having sat on a bar of chocolate.

She suspects Fic!Lincoln, but he swears he didn't do it. Enter Fic!Luan who jokes about it. Fic!Lynn suspects that Fic!Luan did it on purpose as a prank and swears revenge (even though Fic!Lincoln doesn't want Fic!Lynn to be violent, and the real Louds point out that Fic!Luan had no way of knowing which seat Fic!Lynn would take). Fic!Lynn decides to prank Fic!Luan back.

The next morning, Fic!Luan has her hand stuck to her face. The real Luan makes a joke about the Scream painting but the only one who gets it is Lisa, who doesn't laugh. Everyone laughs at Fic!Luan, thinking it's one of her pranks, even Fic!Luna who tried to pull the hand off and found it was really stuck. Fic!Lynn comes in and reveals that she did it, making a hand pun that Luan (the real one) chastises for being too easy and starts listing phrases with "hand" in them to prove it.

This starts a prank war. Fic!Luan makes Fic!Lynn's food very spicy and she drinks all the liquid to cool down, ending in drinking out of Fic!Charles's bowl (after finding that the sink and the hose weren't working). Everyone laughs at Fic!Lynn and calls her a dog. So Fic!Lynn buries Fic!Luan's clothes. Fic!Luan borrows Fic!Luna's... dress? And everyone laughs at her.

Fic!Luan pies Fic!Lynn in the face, Fic!Lynn glues Fic!Luan to the floor, Fic!Luan makes Fic!Lynn walk into a deep puddle (that Fic!Lincoln somehow walked over). Fic!Lynn makes the toilet spray tar on Fic!Luan, Fic!Luan booby-traps the fridge with a boxing glove, Fic!Lynn pranks Fic!Luan with a mousetrap, so Fic!Luan pranks Fic!Lynn with ''lots'' of mousetraps. Finally, Fic!Luan does a third fridge prank involving ''three'' boxing gloves.

The next prank, however, ends up with Fic!Lincoln being pepper-sprayed instead of Fic!Luan. Then, he goes to the sink and gets sprayed with paint (meant for Fic!Lynn). Fic!Lucy has also bumped her head from one of the warring sisters waxing the stairs and Fic!Luna has been electrocuted from her door. It turns out that that wasn't the only collateral damage: Fic!Leni had been stuck to the ceiling with flypaper and a spring-loaded floor board, Fic!Lola had been smoke-bombed, Fic!Lori had had syrup and feathers dumped on her, and Fic!Lana had fallen through the floor into a pit of poison ivy.

They decide to put a stop to the war but it's out of control and the parents are too scared to help. The fanfic siblings smoke-bomb Fic!Luan and Fic!Lynn and tie them to chairs. They argue, then Fic!Lincoln brings them to their senses. They start arguing again and it's revealed that Fic!Luan didn't put the chocolate on Fic!Lynn's seat, so they both apologise and are made to clean up.

Then, it's revealed that it was actually Fic!Lincoln who dropped the candy bar, and he earned the money selling chocolate with Fic!Clyde. It ends with Fic!Lincoln being flung up to the ceiling next to Fic!Leni and them both falling down.

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We open on Fic!Lincoln story Lincoln with a lot of money he made with Fic!Clyde. Clyde. On the couch, Luan and Lynn start teasing each other and Lincoln by suggesting undignified ways they could've made that money. Then, Fic!Lynn back in the fanfic, Lynn enters, in a huff. Fic!Lincoln Lincoln asks what's wrong, but Fic!Lynn Lynn doesn't want to talk about it. She reluctantly opens up and it's revealed that she was laughed at during a game for having sat on a bar of chocolate.

She suspects Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, but he swears he didn't do it. Enter Fic!Luan Luan who jokes about it. Fic!Lynn Lynn suspects that Fic!Luan Luan did it on purpose as a prank and swears revenge (even though Fic!Lincoln Lincoln in the fanfic doesn't want Fic!Lynn Lynn to be violent, and the real Louds point out that Fic!Luan Luan had no way of knowing which seat Fic!Lynn Lynn would take). Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn decides to prank Fic!Luan Luan back.

The next morning, Fic!Luan fanfic Luan has her hand stuck to her face. The real Luan makes a joke about the Scream painting but the only one who gets it is Lisa, who doesn't laugh. Everyone laughs at Fic!Luan, fanfic Luan, thinking it's one of her pranks, even Fic!Luna Luna who tried to pull the hand off and found it was really stuck. Fic!Lynn Lynn comes in and reveals that she did it, making a hand pun that Luan (the real one) chastises for being too easy and starts listing phrases with "hand" in them to prove it.

This starts a prank war. Fic!Luan Fanfic Luan makes Fic!Lynn's Lynn's food very spicy and she drinks all the liquid to cool down, ending in drinking out of Fic!Charles's Charles's bowl (after finding that the sink and the hose weren't working). Everyone laughs at Fic!Lynn and calls her a dog. So Fic!Lynn fanfic Lynn buries Fic!Luan's Luan's clothes. Fic!Luan Luan borrows Fic!Luna's...Luna's... dress? And everyone laughs at her.

Fic!Luan Fanfic Luan pies Fic!Lynn Lynn in the face, Fic!Lynn Lynn glues Fic!Luan Luan to the floor, Fic!Luan Luan makes Fic!Lynn Lynn walk into a deep puddle (that Fic!Lincoln Lincoln somehow walked over). Fic!Lynn Lynn makes the toilet spray tar on Fic!Luan, Fic!Luan Luan, Luan booby-traps the fridge with a boxing glove, Fic!Lynn Lynn pranks Fic!Luan Luan with a mousetrap, so Fic!Luan Luan pranks Fic!Lynn Lynn with ''lots'' of mousetraps. Finally, Fic!Luan Luan does a third fridge prank involving ''three'' boxing gloves.

The next prank, however, ends up with Fic!Lincoln Lincoln being pepper-sprayed instead of Fic!Luan. Luan. Then, he goes to the sink and gets sprayed with paint (meant for Fic!Lynn). Fic!Lucy Lynn). Lucy has also bumped her head from one of the warring sisters waxing the stairs and Fic!Luna Luna has been electrocuted from her door. It turns out that that wasn't the only collateral damage: Fic!Leni Leni had been stuck to the ceiling with flypaper and a spring-loaded floor board, Fic!Lola Lola had been smoke-bombed, Fic!Lori Lori had had syrup and feathers dumped on her, and Fic!Lana Lana had fallen through the floor into a pit of poison ivy.

They decide to put a stop to the war but it's out of control and the parents are too scared to help. The fanfic siblings smoke-bomb Fic!Luan Luan and Fic!Lynn Lynn and tie them to chairs. They argue, then Fic!Lincoln Lincoln brings them to their senses. They start arguing again and it's revealed that Fic!Luan Luan didn't put the chocolate on Fic!Lynn's Lynn's seat, so they both apologise and are made to clean up.

Then, it's revealed that it was actually Fic!Lincoln Lincoln who dropped the candy bar, and he earned the money selling chocolate with Fic!Clyde. Clyde. It ends with Fic!Lincoln Lincoln being flung up to the ceiling next to Fic!Leni Leni and them both falling down.



* AdaptationalDumbass: Fic!Luna still thinks Fic!Luan is joking even after trying to pull her hand off her face unsuccessfully, thinks it was Fic!Luan who set up the electric doorknob even though she's ''her'' roommate so it was probably Fic!Lynn, and doesn't realise that Fic!Leni was on the ceiling because of the pranks.

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* AdaptationalDumbass: Fic!Luna Fanfic Luna still thinks Fic!Luan Luan is joking even after trying to pull her hand off her face unsuccessfully, thinks it was Fic!Luan Luan who set up the electric doorknob even though she's ''her'' roommate so it was probably Fic!Lynn, Lynn, and doesn't realise that Fic!Leni Leni was on the ceiling because of the pranks.



* BlowingARaspberry: Fic!Luan blows a raspberry at Fic!Lynn after the puddle prank.

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* BlowingARaspberry: Fic!Luan Fanfic Luan blows a raspberry at Fic!Lynn Lynn after the puddle prank.



* DeathGlare: Fic!Lynn gives Fic!Luan a "threatening glare" for joking about the situation with the chocolate.
* EyeScream: Fic!Lincoln gets pepper-sprayed (the actual target was Fic!Luan).
* {{Flashback}}: We get one flashback showing Fic!Lynn sitting on chocolate, another showing the fanfic Louds getting hit by pranks, and a third showing how it was Fic!Lincoln who dropped the candy bar.
* ImagineSpot: The Louds briefly imagine Lucy as a bodybuilder when wondering how Fic!Lynn got Fic!Luan's clothes out of the house without seeing, because Lucy is sneaky enough to do it but not strong enough.
* InexplicablyAwesome: Fic!Lincoln somehow walks over the puddle without sinking.
* NarrativeProfanityFilter: Luan "mutters profanities" to herself after Lynn decides ''she's'' the master of comedy since the only time Fic!Luan's family found her funny was because of something Fic!Lynn did.

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* DeathGlare: Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn gives Fic!Luan Luan a "threatening glare" for joking about the situation with the chocolate.
* EyeScream: Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln gets pepper-sprayed (the actual target was Fic!Luan).
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* {{Flashback}}: We get one flashback showing Fic!Lynn fanfic Lynn sitting on chocolate, another showing the fanfic Louds getting hit by pranks, and a third showing how it was Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln who dropped the candy bar.
* ImagineSpot: The Louds briefly imagine Lucy as a bodybuilder when wondering how Fic!Lynn fanfic Lynn got Fic!Luan's Luan's clothes out of the house without seeing, because Lucy is sneaky enough to do it but not strong enough.
* InexplicablyAwesome: Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln somehow walks over the puddle without sinking.
* NarrativeProfanityFilter: Luan "mutters profanities" to herself after Lynn decides ''she's'' the master of comedy since the only time Fic!Luan's fanfic Luan's family found her funny was because of something Fic!Lynn fanfic Lynn did.



** Fic!Luna doesn't seem to grasp the fact that Fic!Luan's hand is stuck even though she tried pulling it off and it didn't work. She also apparently wears a dress instead of a skirt and tank top.
** A minor one, but apparently, Fic!Luan is above poop pranks. The real Luan isn't.

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** Fic!Luna Fanfic Luna doesn't seem to grasp the fact that Fic!Luan's Luan's hand is stuck even though she tried pulling it off and it didn't work. She also apparently wears a dress instead of a skirt and tank top.
** A minor one, but apparently, Fic!Luan fanfic Luan is above poop pranks. The real Luan isn't.



** One of the pranks was Fic!Lynn getting a pie in the face from the fridge.
** Fic!Lynn fires pies with a ''bazooka''.
* PottyFailure: Subverted. It appears as though Fic!Lynn has pooped her pants, but really she'd sat on a chocolate bar.

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** One of the pranks was Fic!Lynn fanfic Lynn getting a pie in the face from the fridge.
** Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn fires pies with a ''bazooka''.
* PottyFailure: Subverted. It appears as though Fic!Lynn fanfic Lynn has pooped her pants, but really she'd sat on a chocolate bar.



** Fic!Luan says to Fic!Lynn about the chocolate bar, "You must've been a choco-lot to take in!", "Turn that brown upside-down", and "I guess I'll see you guys choco-later!".
** When Fic!Lynn glues Fic!Luan's hand to her face, she says, "I gotta hand it to ya!". Luan (the real one) critiques this because apparently hand puns are too easy.
** Fic!Luan says, "Water you doing?" when she finds Fic!Lynn drinking from Fic!Charles's bowl.
** When Fic!Luna and Fic!Lucy smoke-bomb Fic!Luan, the real Luan says that they were "blowing smoke".

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** Fic!Luan Fanfic Luan says to Fic!Lynn ynn about the chocolate bar, "You must've been a choco-lot to take in!", "Turn that brown upside-down", and "I guess I'll see you guys choco-later!".
** When Fic!Lynn fanfic Lynn glues Fic!Luan's Luan's hand to her face, she says, "I gotta hand it to ya!". Luan (the real one) critiques this because apparently hand puns are too easy.
** Fic!Luan Fanfic Luan says, "Water you doing?" when she finds Fic!Lynn Lynn drinking from Fic!Charles's Charles's bowl.
** When Fic!Luna the fanfic versions of Luna and Fic!Lucy Lucy smoke-bomb Fic!Luan, Luan, the real Luan says that they were "blowing smoke".



* RuleOfThree: Fic!Luan pranks Fic!Lynn with the fridge three times, and the third one had three boxing gloves hit Fic!Lynn. The real Luan approves of this.

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* RuleOfThree: Fic!Luan Fanfic Luan pranks Fic!Lynn Lynn with the fridge three times, and the third one had three boxing gloves hit Fic!Lynn.Lynn. The real Luan approves of this.



** When Fic!Lola calls Fic!Luan an "it", Lincoln suggests that it's [[Film/{{It}} because she's a clown]].

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** When Fic!Lola fanfic Lola calls Fic!Luan Luan an "it", Lincoln (the real one) suggests that it's [[Film/{{It}} because she's a clown]].



* TemptingFate: When Fic!Lincoln drops the chocolate during the flashback, he says, "What could go wrong?".
* ToiletHumour: Fic!Lynn sits on a chocolate bar to make it look like she's pooped her pants. The real Lynn boasts about how she has an "iron sphincter" and would never poop her pants.

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* TemptingFate: When Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln drops the chocolate during the flashback, he says, "What could go wrong?".
* ToiletHumour: Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn sits on a chocolate bar to make it look like she's pooped her pants. The real Lynn boasts about how she has an "iron sphincter" and would never poop her pants.
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She suspects Fic!Lincoln, but he swears he didn't do it. Enter Fic!Luan who jokes about it. Fic!Lynn suspects that Fic!Luan did it on purpose as a prank and swears revenge (even though Fic!Lincoln doesn't want Fic!Lynn to be violent, and the real Louds point out that Fic!Luan had no way of knowing which seat Fic!Lynn would take). Fic!Lynn decides to prank Fic!Lynn back.

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She suspects Fic!Lincoln, but he swears he didn't do it. Enter Fic!Luan who jokes about it. Fic!Lynn suspects that Fic!Luan did it on purpose as a prank and swears revenge (even though Fic!Lincoln doesn't want Fic!Lynn to be violent, and the real Louds point out that Fic!Luan had no way of knowing which seat Fic!Lynn would take). Fic!Lynn decides to prank Fic!Lynn Fic!Luan back.

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* RogueAnglesOfSatin: The narration at one point says, "being" instead of "begin". Lisa notes that it's odd to have an anagram as a typo.

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* RogueAnglesOfSatin: RougeAnglesOfSatin: The narration at one point says, "being" instead of "begin". Lisa notes that it's odd to have an anagram as a typo.
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Lincoln has brought Lisa, Luan, Lynn, and Lori with him and they'll be reading ''All's Fair in Pranks and War'' by an author who's apparently been given "a lot of buzz" lately-- [=TheMaximumMatt=].

We open on Fic!Lincoln with a lot of money he made with Fic!Clyde. Luan and Lynn start teasing each other and Lincoln by suggesting undignified ways they could've made that money. Then, Fic!Lynn enters, in a huff. Fic!Lincoln asks what's wrong, but Fic!Lynn doesn't want to talk about it. She reluctantly opens up and it's revealed that she was laughed at during a game for having sat on a bar of chocolate.

She suspects Fic!Lincoln, but he swears he didn't do it. Enter Fic!Luan who jokes about it. Fic!Lynn suspects that Fic!Luan did it on purpose as a prank and swears revenge (even though Fic!Lincoln doesn't want Fic!Lynn to be violent, and the real Louds point out that Fic!Luan had no way of knowing which seat Fic!Lynn would take). Fic!Lynn decides to prank Fic!Lynn back.

The next morning, Fic!Luan has her hand stuck to her face. The real Luan makes a joke about the Scream painting but the only one who gets it is Lisa, who doesn't laugh. Everyone laughs at Fic!Luan, thinking it's one of her pranks, even Fic!Luna who tried to pull the hand off and found it was really stuck. Fic!Lynn comes in and reveals that she did it, making a hand pun that Luan (the real one) chastises for being too easy and starts listing phrases with "hand" in them to prove it.

This starts a prank war. Fic!Luan makes Fic!Lynn's food very spicy and she drinks all the liquid to cool down, ending in drinking out of Fic!Charles's bowl (after finding that the sink and the hose weren't working). Everyone laughs at Fic!Lynn and calls her a dog. So Fic!Lynn buries Fic!Luan's clothes. Fic!Luan borrows Fic!Luna's... dress? And everyone laughs at her.

Fic!Luan pies Fic!Lynn in the face, Fic!Lynn glues Fic!Luan to the floor, Fic!Luan makes Fic!Lynn walk into a deep puddle (that Fic!Lincoln somehow walked over). Fic!Lynn makes the toilet spray tar on Fic!Luan, Fic!Luan booby-traps the fridge with a boxing glove, Fic!Lynn pranks Fic!Luan with a mousetrap, so Fic!Luan pranks Fic!Lynn with ''lots'' of mousetraps. Finally, Fic!Luan does a third fridge prank involving ''three'' boxing gloves.

The next prank, however, ends up with Fic!Lincoln being pepper-sprayed instead of Fic!Luan. Then, he goes to the sink and gets sprayed with paint (meant for Fic!Lynn). Fic!Lucy has also bumped her head from one of the warring sisters waxing the stairs and Fic!Luna has been electrocuted from her door. It turns out that that wasn't the only collateral damage: Fic!Leni had been stuck to the ceiling with flypaper and a spring-loaded floor board, Fic!Lola had been smoke-bombed, Fic!Lori had had syrup and feathers dumped on her, and Fic!Lana had fallen through the floor into a pit of poison ivy.

They decide to put a stop to the war but it's out of control and the parents are too scared to help. The fanfic siblings smoke-bomb Fic!Luan and Fic!Lynn and tie them to chairs. They argue, then Fic!Lincoln brings them to their senses. They start arguing again and it's revealed that Fic!Luan didn't put the chocolate on Fic!Lynn's seat, so they both apologise and are made to clean up.

Then, it's revealed that it was actually Fic!Lincoln who dropped the candy bar, and he earned the money selling chocolate with Fic!Clyde. It ends with Fic!Lincoln being flung up to the ceiling next to Fic!Leni and them both falling down.

With the story over, Lisa is glad that there were no tense changes, and everyone else thinks that it's actually a decent story.

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* AdaptationalDumbass: Fic!Luna still thinks Fic!Luan is joking even after trying to pull her hand off her face unsuccessfully, thinks it was Fic!Luan who set up the electric doorknob even though she's ''her'' roommate so it was probably Fic!Lynn, and doesn't realise that Fic!Leni was on the ceiling because of the pranks.
* AteItAll: Apparently, Lynn once ate a whole plate of buffalo wings that was meant for everyone.
* BaitAndSwitchSentiment: Luan tuts at Lynn for insulting Lincoln... then reveals it to be because she thinks it's a lame insult.
* BlowingARaspberry: Fic!Luan blows a raspberry at Fic!Lynn after the puddle prank.
* ContinuityNod:
** Lynn remembers Lori hitting her with bread, which happened in "Cheater by the Dozen".
** Lincoln remembers Lisa laughing at his Ace Savvy costume ("Sleuth or Consequences") and when he told her about his Girl Guru project ("Lincoln Loud: Girl Guru").
* CunningLikeAFox: Luan compares her intelligence to that of a fox.
* DeathGlare: Fic!Lynn gives Fic!Luan a "threatening glare" for joking about the situation with the chocolate.
* EyeScream: Fic!Lincoln gets pepper-sprayed (the actual target was Fic!Luan).
* {{Flashback}}: We get one flashback showing Fic!Lynn sitting on chocolate, another showing the fanfic Louds getting hit by pranks, and a third showing how it was Fic!Lincoln who dropped the candy bar.
* ImagineSpot: The Louds briefly imagine Lucy as a bodybuilder when wondering how Fic!Lynn got Fic!Luan's clothes out of the house without seeing, because Lucy is sneaky enough to do it but not strong enough.
* InexplicablyAwesome: Fic!Lincoln somehow walks over the puddle without sinking.
* NarrativeProfanityFilter: Luan "mutters profanities" to herself after Lynn decides ''she's'' the master of comedy since the only time Fic!Luan's family found her funny was because of something Fic!Lynn did.
* {{Neologism}}: Luan coins the word "pie-zooka" to refer to a bazooka that shoots pies.
* NoodleIncident: Apparently, on the Louds' first trip to Pop-Pop's cabin, Lynn did ''something'' that proved she can hold in her poop. This isn't revealed to the audience because a grossed-out Lori interrupted.
* OutOfCharacter:
** The real Lynn probably wouldn't be bothered by a sub with lots of hot sauce.
** Fic!Luna doesn't seem to grasp the fact that Fic!Luan's hand is stuck even though she tried pulling it off and it didn't work. She also apparently wears a dress instead of a skirt and tank top.
** A minor one, but apparently, Fic!Luan is above poop pranks. The real Luan isn't.
* PieInTheFace:
** One of the pranks was Fic!Lynn getting a pie in the face from the fridge.
** Fic!Lynn fires pies with a ''bazooka''.
* PottyFailure: Subverted. It appears as though Fic!Lynn has pooped her pants, but really she'd sat on a chocolate bar.
* {{Pun}}:
** Fic!Luan says to Fic!Lynn about the chocolate bar, "You must've been a choco-lot to take in!", "Turn that brown upside-down", and "I guess I'll see you guys choco-later!".
** When Fic!Lynn glues Fic!Luan's hand to her face, she says, "I gotta hand it to ya!". Luan (the real one) critiques this because apparently hand puns are too easy.
** Fic!Luan says, "Water you doing?" when she finds Fic!Lynn drinking from Fic!Charles's bowl.
** When Fic!Luna and Fic!Lucy smoke-bomb Fic!Luan, the real Luan says that they were "blowing smoke".
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: At one point, Lisa says, "QUESTIONS. END. IN. QUESTION. MARKS."
* RogueAnglesOfSatin: The narration at one point says, "being" instead of "begin". Lisa notes that it's odd to have an anagram as a typo.
* RuleOfThree: Fic!Luan pranks Fic!Lynn with the fridge three times, and the third one had three boxing gloves hit Fic!Lynn. The real Luan approves of this.
* ShoutOut:
** When Fic!Lola calls Fic!Luan an "it", Lincoln suggests that it's [[Film/{{It}} because she's a clown]].
** One of Luan's examples of a "hand" phrase is "I am not left-handed", which is a line from ''Film/ThePrincessBride''.
* StaircaseTumble: Several of the fanfic Louds fall downstairs after one of the warring sisters waxed them.
* TemptingFate: When Fic!Lincoln drops the chocolate during the flashback, he says, "What could go wrong?".
* ToiletHumour: Fic!Lynn sits on a chocolate bar to make it look like she's pooped her pants. The real Lynn boasts about how she has an "iron sphincter" and would never poop her pants.
* WhoopeeCushion: Apparently, the warring sisters used whoopee cushion ''mines''.
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