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* ICallItVera: Zephyr names his board "Gladys." By the end of the short, Rainbow is doing it too.
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* ICallItVera: Zephyr names his board "Gladys." By the end of the short, Rainbow is doing it too.too.
* PuppyDogEyes: Zephyr makes a pitiful face to try and convince Rainbow Dash to teach him how to surf. She relents.
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* PuppyDogEyes: Zephyr makes a pitiful face to try and convince Rainbow Dash to teach him how to surf. She relents.
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As Applejack and Rainbow Dash get ready to go surfing, Fluttershy's brother Zephyr Breeze shows up and offers to give them some tips, bragging that he's been doing it all his life. He cuts off Fluttershy's attempt to tell them otherwise, but he gets scared as Applejack and Rainbow hit the waves. The two girls prove skilled at surfing, while Zephyr wipes out in spectacular fashion and has to be rescued by a lifeguard. Applejack berates him for risking his safety on the waves without knowing how to surf, and he begs Rainbow to teach him. Rainbow agrees, but says that she's only doing it for his board Gladys and whispers to it that it doesn't deserve him.
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As Applejack and Rainbow Dash get ready to go surfing, Fluttershy's brother Zephyr Breeze shows up and offers to give them some tips, bragging that he's been doing it surfing all his life. He cuts off Fluttershy's attempt to tell them otherwise, but he gets scared as Applejack and Rainbow hit the waves. The two girls prove skilled at surfing, while Zephyr wipes out in spectacular fashion and has to be rescued by a lifeguard. Applejack berates him for risking his safety on the waves without knowing how to surf, and he begs Rainbow to teach him. Rainbow agrees, but says that she's only doing it for his board Gladys and whispers to it that it doesn't deserve him.
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* BlatantLies: Zephyr tries to claim he's been a long time surfer, even though Fluttershy is quick to contradict him. Rainbow Dash and Applejack decide to force his hand rather than just call him on it.
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* BlatantLies: Zephyr tries to claim he's been a long time surfer, even though Fluttershy is quick to contradict him. Rainbow Dash and Applejack decide to force his hand rather than just call him on it.it.
* ICallItVera: Zephyr names his board "Gladys." By the end of the short, Rainbow is doing it too.
* ICallItVera: Zephyr names his board "Gladys." By the end of the short, Rainbow is doing it too.
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As Applejack and Rainbow Dash get ready to go surfing, Fluttershy's brother Zephyr Breeze shows up and offers to give them some tips, bragging that he's been doing it all his life. He cuts off her attempt to tell them otherwise, but he gets scared as Applejack and Rainbow hit the waves. The two girls prove skilled at surfing, while Zephyr wipes out in spectacular fashion and has to be rescued by a lifeguard. Applejack berates him for risking his safety on the waves without knowing how to surf, and he begs Rainbow to teach him. Rainbow agrees, but says that she's only doing it for his board Gladys and whispers to it that it doesn't deserve him.
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As Applejack and Rainbow Dash get ready to go surfing, Fluttershy's brother Zephyr Breeze shows up and offers to give them some tips, bragging that he's been doing it all his life. He cuts off her Fluttershy's attempt to tell them otherwise, but he gets scared as Applejack and Rainbow hit the waves. The two girls prove skilled at surfing, while Zephyr wipes out in spectacular fashion and has to be rescued by a lifeguard. Applejack berates him for risking his safety on the waves without knowing how to surf, and he begs Rainbow to teach him. Rainbow agrees, but says that she's only doing it for his board Gladys and whispers to it that it doesn't deserve him.him.
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* BlatantLies: Zephyr tries to claim he's been a long time surfer, even though Fluttershy is quick to contradict him. Rainbow Dash and Applejack decide to force his hand rather than just call him on it.
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* BlatantLies: Zephyr tries to claim he's been a long time surfer, even though Fluttershy is quick to contradict him. Rainbow Dash and Applejack decide to force his hand rather than just call him on it.
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As Applejack and Rainbow Dash get ready to go surfing, Fluttershy's brother Zephyr Breeze shows up and offers to give them some tips, bragging that he's been doing it all his life. He cuts off her attempt to tell them otherwise, but he gets scared as Applejack and Rainbow hit the waves. The two girls prove skilled at surfing, while Zephyr wipes out in spectacular fashion and has to be rescued by a lifeguard. Applejack berates him for risking his safety on the waves without knowing how to surf, and he begs Rainbow to teach him. Rainbow agrees, but says that she's only doing it for his board Gladys and whispers to it that it doesn't deserve him.
