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* AssholeVictim: Lilith and Eda take immense pleasure in paying back Nicole without even knowing they did it together.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Keep the scene between Perry and Jenny in mind. It'll be important in Book 2.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** Keep the scene between Perry and Jenny in mind. It'll be important in Book2.2.
** When Grom takes the form of Belos, it targets Amity's heart.
** Keep the scene between Perry and Jenny in mind. It'll be important in Book
** When Grom takes the form of Belos, it targets Amity's heart.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Lilith and Eda take immense pleasure in paying back Nicole without even knowing they did it together.
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* SheCleansUpNicely: The Clawthorne kids (past and present), Amity, Willow and Skara exchange/recieve these compliments.
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* SheCleansUpNicely: The Clawthorne kids (past and present), Amity, Willow and Skara exchange/recieve exchange/receive these compliments.
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-->'''Puck:''' A storm is coming. This is just the calm.
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-->'''Puck:''' [[VaguenessIsComing A storm is coming. This is just the calm.]]
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* ForWantOfANail: As previously mentioned, Gwen and Dell are introduced near the end of Season 1 instead of early to mid-Season 2. Plus, Emira's narrowly saved from being stood up at Grom at the last second and Gus' mom appears as opposed to never being mentioned.
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* PointOfDivergence: As previously mentioned, Gwen and Dell are introduced near the end of Season 1 instead of early to mid-Season 2. Plus, Emira's narrowly saved from being stood up at Grom at the last second and Gus' mom appears as opposed to never being mentioned.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Despite attempting to face her fears, Amity is still too affected by the trauma to beat them and ends up collapsing to her knees when it becomes too much for her to handle.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot: All right, tough guy. ''[[PreAssKickingOneLiner Let's dance!]]'']]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot: Crash X Fusion: All right, tough guy. ''[[PreAssKickingOneLiner Let's dance!]]'']]
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* KeepingSecretsSucks: Amity is tired of being unable to tell Luz the truth regarding her deal with Lilith. If she knew she could now, she' clearly do it in a heartbeat.
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* KeepingSecretsSucks: Amity is tired of being unable to tell Luz the truth regarding her deal with Lilith. If she knew she could now, she' she'd clearly do it in a heartbeat.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Eda and Lilith's parents, Gwendolyn and Dell Clawthorne, debut in the flashback at the beginning before their appearances in Book 2.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Eda and Lilith's parents, Gwendolyn and Dell Clawthorne, debut in the flashback at the beginning before their appearances in Book Season 2.
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** Seeing Gus on a date with an older girl and hearing that Luz though he would've gone with a different girl, Eda says "You think you know a guy", like Hunter did back in Chapter 28.
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** Seeing Gus on a date with an older girl and hearing that Luz though thought he would've gone with a different girl, Eda says "You think you know a guy", like Hunter did back in Chapter 28.
