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'''Tenth Doctor Era'''\\
'''Series 4:''' [[Recap/DoctorWho2007CSVoyageOfTheDamned CS]] | '''1''' | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E2TheFiresOfPompeii 2]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E3PlanetOfTheOod 3]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E4TheSontaranStratagem 4]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E5ThePoisonSky 5]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E6TheDoctorsDaughter 6]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E7TheUnicornAndTheWasp 7]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E8SilenceInTheLibrary 8]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E9ForestOfTheDead 9]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E10Midnight 10]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E11TurnLeft 11]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E12TheStolenEarth 12]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E13JourneysEnd 13]]\\
'''[[Recap/DoctorWho2006CSTheRunawayBride <<< Series 3]]''' | '''[[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor 2009 Specials >>>]]''']]-]]]
!Partners in Crime
'''Tenth Doctor Era'''\\
'''Series 4:''' [[Recap/DoctorWho2007CSVoyageOfTheDamned CS]] | '''1''' | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E2TheFiresOfPompeii 2]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E3PlanetOfTheOod 3]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E4TheSontaranStratagem 4]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E5ThePoisonSky 5]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E6TheDoctorsDaughter 6]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E7TheUnicornAndTheWasp 7]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E8SilenceInTheLibrary 8]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E9ForestOfTheDead 9]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E10Midnight 10]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E11TurnLeft 11]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E12TheStolenEarth 12]] | [[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E13JourneysEnd 13]]\\
'''[[Recap/DoctorWho2006CSTheRunawayBride <<< Series 3]]''' | '''[[Recap/DoctorWhoS30E14TheNextDoctor 2009 Specials >>>]]''']]-]]]
!Partners in Crime
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->Written by Creator/RussellTDavies\\
Directed by James Strong\\
'''Production code:''' 4.1\\
'''Air date:''' 5 April 2008
Directed by James Strong\\
'''Production code:''' 4.1\\
'''Air date:''' 5 April 2008
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'''Original air date:''' April 5, 2008
'''Production code:''' 4.1
'''Production code:''' 4.1
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Written by Creator/RussellTDavies.
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* SheKnowsTooMuch: The Adipose's reason for killing Miss Foster; they are aware that breeding on a Level 5 Planet is against Galactic Law, so they need to get rid of their "accomplice."
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: As the Doctor says, once mom and dad have their babies, they don't need a nanny anymore, especially a nanny that's an accomplice to a crime. Cue Miss Foster's short but [[{{Pun}} impact-filled]] trip to the ground. Also counts as SheKnowsTooMuch since according to the Doctor, the Adipose are aware that breeding on a Level 5 Planet is against Galactic Law, so they need to get rid of their "accomplise."
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: As the Doctor says, once mom and dad have their babies, they don't need a nanny anymore, especially a nanny that's an accomplice to a crime. Cue Miss Foster's short but [[{{Pun}} impact-filled]] trip to the ground. Also counts as SheKnowsTooMuch since according to the Doctor, the Adipose are aware that breeding on a Level 5 Planet is against Galactic Law, so they need to get rid of their "accomplise."
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: As the Doctor says, once mom and dad have their babies, they don't need a nanny anymore, especially a nanny that's an accomplice to a crime. Cue Miss Foster's short but [[{{Pun}} impact-filled]] trip to the ground.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: As the Doctor says, once mom and dad have their babies, they don't need a nanny anymore, especially a nanny that's an accomplice to a crime. Cue Miss Foster's short but [[{{Pun}} impact-filled]] trip to the ground. Also counts as SheKnowsTooMuch since according to the Doctor, the Adipose are aware that breeding on a Level 5 Planet is against Galactic Law, so they need to get rid of their "accomplise."
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'''The Doctor:''' I just want a ''mate.''\\
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'''The Doctor:''' I just want a ''mate.''a mate.''\\
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'''Donna:''' You just want to ''mate?''\\
'''The Doctor:''' ''A'' mate! I just want '''a''' mate!\\
'''Donna:''' Well, you're not matin' with me, sunshine!
'''The Doctor:''' ''A'' mate! I just want '''a''' mate!\\
'''Donna:''' Well, you're not matin' with me, sunshine!
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'''Donna:''' You just want to ''mate?''\\
''to mate?''\\
'''The Doctor:''' I just want a ''mate.''\\
'''Donna:''' You're not matin' with me, sunshine!\\
'''The Doctor:''' ''A'' mate! Ijust want '''a''' mate!\\
'''Donna:''' Well, you're not matin' with me, sunshine!
''a'' mate!
'''The Doctor:''' I just want a ''mate.''\\
'''Donna:''' You're not matin' with me, sunshine!\\
'''The Doctor:''' ''A'' mate! I
'''Donna:''' Well, you're not matin' with me, sunshine!
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Donna ends up misinterpreting the Doctor's desire for a friend as something a little ''less'' platonic, leading to a brief back-and-forth before he properly clarifies what he meant.
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* KarmaHoudini: The Adiposian First Family completely gets away with illegally using Earth to breed their next generation by eliminating Miss Foster.
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* KarmaHoudini: The Adiposian First Family completely gets away with illegally using Earth to breed their next generation (which, if things had gone to plan, would likely have ended up killing ''millions'' of people as opposed to just poor Stacey) by eliminating Miss Foster.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Miss Foster is convinced that, as the "nanny" of the baby Adipose, she'll be welcomed with open arms by the First Family. There are two problems. One, once the children are back with the parents, they no longer need a nanny. Two, and more importantly, using a "level five" planet as a breeding ground is a strict violation of galactic law under the Shadow Proclamation... and Miss Foster is the only evidence that links the children to the Earth. Cue...
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Miss Foster is convinced that, as the "nanny" of the baby Adipose, she'll be welcomed with open arms by the First Family. There are two problems.problems with that. One, once the children are back with the parents, they no longer need a nanny. Two, and more importantly, using a "level five" planet as a breeding ground is a strict violation of galactic law under the Shadow Proclamation... and Miss Foster is the only evidence that links the children to the Earth. Cue...
* KarmaHoudini: The Adiposian First Family completely gets away with illegally using Earth to breed their next generation by eliminating Miss Foster.
* StealthPun: The Adiposian First Family levitates Miss Foster to the height of several stories -- and then turns off the levitation beam, leaving her to ''drop'' several stories, eliminating the only evidence of their illegal use of Earth. They literally made her take the fall for their crime.
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-->'''Miss Foster''': Oh, it's a beautifully ''fat'' country. And believe me, I've traveled a long way to find obesity on this scale.
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-->'''Miss Foster''': Oh, it's a beautifully ''fat'' country. And believe me, I've traveled travelled a long way to find obesity on this scale.
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'''The Doctor:''' Exactly! Mum and Dad have got the kids now, they don't need the nanny anymore!\\
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'''The Doctor:''' Exactly! Mum and Dad have got the kids now, they ''they don't need the nanny anymore!\\anymore''!\\
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--->'''The Doctor:''' Instructions from the Adiposian First Family… [Miss Foster]'s wired up the tower block to convert it into a levitation post. Oh. Oooooooh. We're not the ones in trouble now… ''she'' is!
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--->'''The Doctor:''' Instructions from the Adiposian First Family… [Miss Foster]'s wired up the tower block to convert it into a levitation post. Oh. Oooooooh.Oohhhhh. We're not the ones in trouble now… ''she'' is!
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: A variation as the Doctor races to warn Miss Foster of the message he just saw.
-->'''The Doctor:''' Listen, I saw the Adiposian instructions. They know it's a crime, breeding on Earth, so what's the one thing they want to get rid of? Their accomplice!\\
-->'''The Doctor:''' Listen, I saw the Adiposian instructions. They know it's a crime, breeding on Earth, so what's the one thing they want to get rid of? Their accomplice!\\
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: ExplainExplainOhCrap:
** A variation as the Doctor races to warn Miss Foster of the message he just saw.
-->'''The --->'''The Doctor:''' Listen, I saw the Adiposian instructions. They know it's a crime, breeding on Earth, so what's the one thing they want to get rid of? Their accomplice!\\
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--->'''The Doctor:''' Instructions from the Adiposian First Family… [Miss Foster]'s wired up the tower block to convert it into a levitation post. Oh. Oooooooh. We're not the ones in trouble now… ''she'' is!
--->'''The Doctor:''' Instructions from the Adiposian First Family… [Miss Foster]'s wired up the tower block to convert it into a levitation post. Oh. Oooooooh. We're not the ones in trouble now… ''she'' is!
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* TheBadGuyWins: Technically speaking the Adipose get more or less exactly what they wanted by the end of the episode: ten thousand new babies (admittedly a step down from the planned one million) and the only person who could implicate them dead. Of course the Doctor's intervention means that nobody actually ended up dying, which mitigates the "bad guy" part significantly, but the bottom line is that they were going to kill one million people and ended up getting what they wanted.
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She promptly starts hauling a ridiculous amount of luggage out of the car boot and shoving it into the Doctor's arms, saying she's been ready to go for ages. The Doctor warns that it is a hard life but accepts her, saying that he just wants a mate. She misunderstands this to mean that he wants "to mate", saying he's just a "long streak of nothing" and exclaiming, "Well, you're not mating with me, sunshine!" The misunderstanding mostly resolved, Donna then calls her mum to say she's put the car keys in a certain bin for her to collect before asking a blonde woman to tell her mother, "That bin there". While Donna returns to the TARDIS, the woman — a sad-looking Rose Tyler — walks off down the street and disappears into thin air...
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She promptly starts hauling a ridiculous amount of luggage out of the car boot and shoving it into the Doctor's arms, saying she's been ready to go for ages. The Doctor warns that it is a hard life but accepts her, saying that he just wants a mate. She misunderstands this to mean that he wants "to mate", saying he's just a "long streak of nothing" and exclaiming, "Well, you're not mating with me, sunshine!" The misunderstanding mostly resolved, Donna then calls her mum to say she's put the car keys in a certain bin for her to collect before asking a blonde woman to tell her mother, "That bin there". While Donna returns to the TARDIS, the woman — a sad-looking [[WhamShot Rose Tyler Tyler]] — walks off down the street and disappears into thin air...
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A child sees them as it ascends, waving at them. They wave back as the Doctor admits that as a weight loss plan, the Adipose birthing has its merits. They see Cofelia in another beam on her way up to the nursery ship. The Doctor pleads with her to get over to the roof; the Adiposian First Family is aware that their actions are illegal, which means they need to get rid of their accomplice. Cofelia dismisses the threat because she's the nanny — but the Doctor remains worried, exclaiming, "''Exactly!'' Mum and Dad have got the kids now — they don't need the nanny anymore!" At that moment, the levitation beam carrying Miss Foster is switched off, and gravity is a cruel mistress as the Doctor comforts a horrified Donna. Immediately afterwards, the nursery ship leaves Earth.
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A child sees them as it ascends, waving at them. They wave back as the Doctor admits that as a weight loss plan, the Adipose birthing has its merits. They see Cofelia in another beam on her way up to the nursery ship. The Doctor pleads with her to get over to the roof; the Adiposian First Family is aware that their actions are illegal, which means they need to get rid of their accomplice. Cofelia dismisses the threat because she's the nanny — but the Doctor remains worried, exclaiming, "''Exactly!'' Mum and Dad have got the kids now — they don't need the nanny anymore!" At that moment, the levitation beam carrying Miss Foster is switched off, and gravity is a cruel mistress GravityIsAHarshMistress as the Doctor comforts a horrified Donna. Immediately afterwards, the nursery ship leaves Earth.
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** Miss Foster showing her presentation for the pills on a film projector seems like her severely overestimating how primitive Earth is. In draft scripts, the use of film was because digital signals were used to create the Adipose.
** Stacey Campbell is credited as “Stacey Harris”, the character’s name in the draft scripts.
* ArtisticLicenseLaw: The two office workers who give away client lists to the Doctor and Donna are violating the Data Protection Act, a fine worth over 500 grand.
** Miss Foster showing her presentation for the pills on a film projector seems like her severely overestimating how primitive Earth is. In draft scripts, the use of film was because digital signals were used to create the Adipose.
** Stacey Campbell is credited as “Stacey Harris”, the character’s name in the draft scripts.
* ArtisticLicenseLaw: The two office workers who give away client lists to the Doctor and Donna are violating the Data Protection Act, a fine worth over 500 grand.