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* QuackDoctor: a woman posing as a doctor uses unverified folk remedies to milk her patients of their life savings, and when all their money is gone, she accepts jewelry as payment. The wife of a man with a rare blood disease is finally driven over the edge after the leech treatments the "doctor" uses on the husband repeatedly fail to work, and shoots her in an alley.
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* QuackDoctor: a A woman posing as a doctor uses unverified folk remedies to milk her patients of their life savings, and when all their money is gone, she accepts jewelry as payment. The wife of a man with a rare blood disease is finally driven over the edge after the leech treatments the "doctor" uses on the husband repeatedly fail to work, and shoots her in an alley.
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* QuackDoctor: a woman posing as a doctor uses unverified folk remedies to milk her patients of their life savings, and when all their money is gone, she accepts jewelry as payment. The wife of a man with a rare blood disease is finally driven over the edge after the leech treatments the "doctor" uses on the husband repeatedly fail to work, and shoots her in an alley.
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* TakingTheHeat: The patient is trying to prevent his wife from going to prison, knowing he only has a short while to live anyway.
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* TakingTheHeat: The patient is trying confesses to his wife's crime in an effort to prevent his wife her from going to prison, knowing he only has a short while to live anyway.
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* FashionShow: Models are wearing *literally* painted-on swimwear. One dies on the runway because the heat from the lights activates drugs that were mixed into the paint, which was used by accident, and another is bludgeoned to death backstage when she catches the drug dealer trying to steal back the cans of the paint that were mistakenly delivered there.
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* BodyPaint: The models' outfits were painted on.
* FalseConfession: The patient confessed even though it was his wife who killed the doctor.
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* FalseConfession: The patient confessed even though it was his wife who killed the doctor.
* TakingTheHeat: The patient was trying to prevent his wife from going to prison, knowing he only had a short while to live anyway.
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* BodyPaint: The models' outfits were are painted on.
on by their designer.
* FalseConfession: The patientconfessed confesses even though it was is his wife who killed the doctor.
* TakingTheHeat: The patientwas is trying to prevent his wife from going to prison, knowing he only had has a short while to live anyway.
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* TakingTheHeat: The patient
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* AsHimself: ''Entertainment Tonight'' reporter Mark Steines, who is there to cover the fashion show.
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* AsHimself: ''Entertainment Tonight'' ''Series/EntertainmentTonight'' reporter Mark Steines, who is there to cover the fashion show.
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* FalseConfession / TakingTheHeat: The patient confessed even though [[spoiler: it was his wife who killed the doctor. Knowing he only had a short while to live, he was trying to prevent her from going to prison.]]
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* FalseConfession / TakingTheHeat: FalseConfession: The patient confessed even though [[spoiler: it was his wife who killed the doctor. Knowing doctor.
* TakingTheHeat: The patient was trying to prevent his wife from going to prison, knowing he only had a short while tolive, he was trying to prevent her from going to prison.]]live anyway.
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* FalseConfession / TakingTheHeat: The patient confessed even though [[spoiler: it was his wife who killed the doctor. Knowing he only had a short while to live, he was trying to prevent her from going to prison.]]
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* FalseConfession / TakingTheHeat: The patient confessed even though [[spoiler: it was his wife who killed the doctor. Knowing he only had a short while to live, he was trying to prevent her from going to prison.]]]]
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"'''Wasted'''" is the 12th episode of Season 2, and the 35th one overall.
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"'''Wasted'''" is the 12th episode of Season 2, and the 35th one overall. It originally aired January 18, 2006.
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"'''Wasted'''" is the 12th episode of Season 2, and the 35th one overall.
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"'''Wasted'''" is the 12th episode of Season 2, and the 35th one overall.
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Directed by Creator/JeffTThomas
Written by Creator/AnthonyEZuiker, Creator/AnnDonahue, Creator/CarolMendelsohn, Creator/Pam Veasey & Creator/BillHaynes
A model collapses and dies on the runway during a show; then a second is found bludgeoned to death. Meanwhile, a terminally ill patient confesses to shooting his doctor.
!Tropes for the episode:
* BodyPaint: The models' outfits were painted on.
* FalseConfession / TakingTheHeat: The patient confessed even though [[spoiler: it was his wife who killed the doctor. Knowing he only had a short while to live, he was trying to prevent her from going to prison.]]
Written by Creator/AnthonyEZuiker, Creator/AnnDonahue, Creator/CarolMendelsohn, Creator/Pam Veasey & Creator/BillHaynes
A model collapses and dies on the runway during a show; then a second is found bludgeoned to death. Meanwhile, a terminally ill patient confesses to shooting his doctor.
!Tropes for the episode:
* BodyPaint: The models' outfits were painted on.
* FalseConfession / TakingTheHeat: The patient confessed even though [[spoiler: it was his wife who killed the doctor. Knowing he only had a short while to live, he was trying to prevent her from going to prison.]]
